SWASAN- A hate story (13)

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Next morning
Sanskar got up early in a excited mood. He turned and saw swara sleeping which irritated him. He went to washroom and came out after few minutes. He lost his temper seeing her sleeping peacefully . His hate is dominating all the other emotions. He tiptoed to her and leaned to her ears. He then screamed her name.
Sanskar: swara!!!
Swara sat on the bed in one stroke and looked around in confusion. She saw sanskar smiling mischievously and under stood the situation
Swara: how mean sanskar! Don’t you have minimum common sense to not to disturb one’s sleep!
Sanskar: I cannot see you sleeping peacefully.. Regarding commonsense, I have it more than you
Swara stamped her foot against the floor and went to washroom while sanskar went to balcony and started reading news paper.
Sanskar:( shouts) swara!! Swara!!
Swara came to balcony wearing a traditional suit..
Swara: what do you want now?
Sanskar : a cup of tea.
He said without taking his eyes from news paper.
Swara: what do you think of me..a servant.
Sanskar looked at her

Sanskar: my personal servant ! You are my wife right!
Swara: so you have started using using husbandary rights on me. You don’t know about me sanskar. I will…
Her words were interrupted by sanskar’s hand on her waist. He pulled her so close to her and wishpered in her ears.
Sanskar: you don’t know about me swara.. I am a man and you are a woman….he tighten his grip… I think you understood what I can do.
He left her and sat on the couch.
Sanskar: now get a cup of tea for me
Swara left the room in rage and came after five minutes with a cup of tea. She forwarded her hand.
Swara: here is your tea.
Sanskar forward his hand but swara intentionally spilled it on sanskar’s shirt. The boiling tea harmed his chest region.
Sanskar: swara!!
Swara rolled her eyes.
Swara: sorry..it spilled by mistake
Sanskar went inside the washroom while swara smirked.
Swara: it is not so easy to ditch swara MAHESWARI.
Sanskar was cleaning the burnt part with cold water but it pained a lot as it was a sensitive area. He took bath again and went to the bathroom mirror.
Sanskar: how bad she is. I have tried to lessen her pain when her hands burned but she gave me pain by spilling tea. Yes..Being selfish is not wrong. Thank-you swara for teaching this lesson.
He tried to compose himself but his heart is paining for the mistake of concern he showed to her till date.
Sanskar came out of the washroom and got ready. He then left the Manison not even caring to look at swara.

Sanskar: vaishu!! Where are you?
Vaishu: almost reached dear.
Sanskar: come fast!
Vaishu: I am coming sanskar. I came like a thief from my house and you are scolding me.
Sanskar: I am waiting for you.
He disconnected the call.
Swara came to some place and called varun.
Swara: where are you varun?
Varun: I am near the icecream parlor .
She started walking towards the parlor and searched for a person talking on mobile.
Swara: where are you varun?
Varun: I am standing just infront of the parlor.
Swara: please wave your hand.
Swara saw someone waving the hand but couldn’t see his face because of the crowd. She moved forward for two steps and was hell shocked seeing the person.
Swara: what is the color of your shirt?
Varun: yellow.
Swara started breathing heavily as it was none other than sanskar..
She immediately disconnected the call and ran to one of the magazine store nearby and purchased the one having varun’s fiction. She turned the pages in hurry and her eyes widened seeing the name at the bottom.
Swara: sanskar maheswari!!!
She remembered varun saying that he will disclose his name in the last episode. She turned back and saw sanskar coming forward and hide herself behind a pillar. Her eyes were filled with tears. Her mobile vibrated flashing varun’s name. She composed herself and attended the call.
Sanskar: where are you vaishu

Swara: I …I ..actually I got a phone from my mother indicating that…her health is not good…so.
Sanskar: its okay vaishu. take care of your mother. We will meet next time and don’t forget to see my original name in today’s episode.
Sanskar left the place. Swara reached the home lifeless. She collapsed as soon as she entered their bedroom.
Swara: betrayal..worst betrayal by destiny
She started weeping bitterly.
Swara: why me God why me?? First of all you snatched my only friend then married me to a beast and now you ditched me giving the same beast with different name.
She remembered words of varun and their friendship.
Swara: varun was so pure and mature. I just loved his charecter but he turned to be my husband sanskar who hates me a lot. What is this God..please save me..
Sanskar applied ointment in the burnt area. He then leaned in his office chair and started thinking about vaishali..

Writing was his passion and he used to write short stories from his schooling itself. But he started writing a full length story just before four months. He received many appreciation letters but vaishali’s letter attracted him the most. The language and the words she used were of high maturity. He thought of replying to her but didn’t take any move in it. It was then his friend adviced him to publish his mobile number in one of his episodes to get that girl. He immediately brought a new sim and published that number. As expected, many called him and finally he found vaishali and saved her number in his other sim.

He came out if the thoughts when his attender served him hot tea that he missed during breakfast.
Swara was lying of the floor thinking about varun..she finally got his number but didn’t want to disclose herself and so she made a story saying that she was a college student studying engineering third year but she never expected that this lies will ruin her dreams.
Swara was in room all the day except that she went down stairs for lunch. She looked at the wall clock for the tenth time and it struck twelve. Sanskar came inside the room by slightly pushing the door. His unsteady walks revealed that he came home drunk. He turned and looked at swara who was fuming in anger as he was drunken. She didn’t want him to spoil like this and knew that it was his first time.
Sanskar: down your eyes swara.. I don’t like your gaze falling on my shadow even.
Swara: why did you drink sanskar. What if bade papa comes to know.
Sanskar folded his hands.
Sanskar: I am sorry Madam. Please forgive me and bade papa won’t say anything because he knows the pain that I am going through.
Swara: pain..which pain sanskar. Have you ever tried to feel mine?
Sanskar: shh swara..please don’t act. You have hurted me till date. I really thought that you are a good girl and it was me who behaved rudely with you but your behaviour today proved it wrong
Saying this, he slowly rubbed the burnt part of his chest and then came near swara standing near the bed.
Sanskar: tell me one thing swara..did I ever try to hurt you physically? No..but you did it.
She felt bad for her behaviour.

Swara: sorry sanskar. I really..
Sanskar: please swara. I am fed up with your behaviour. Leave me and my life.
Swara: sanskar!!
He tried to move back but twisted his leg and fell on swara which resulted her falling on bed with him on top. Sanskar’s lips were so close to her’s.
Sanskar: why do you hate me swara? Why?
Swara stopped breathing for a while just not to inhale the alcohol smell. Sanskar moved a bit back but was still on her.

Sanskar: it is not that I won’t like you or love you but I hate your attitude towards me..that pride you got because of your wealth, beauty. I just hate them swara.
Swara: you are taking me wrong sanskar.
Her eyes welled up with tears listening his reason for hatred which she thought would be some other thing
Sanskar smiled sadly.
Sanskar: wrong..uhh. No swara. I was wrong till now thinking that you have a good heart.. I hate you

Saying this, he fell in her nape. A tear rolled on her left cheek. She quickly wiped it with her left hand and slowly tossed the sanskar to his side on the bed. She then got up and removed his shoes. His words are echoing in her ears. She saw him suffocating and removed his shirt.
Her eyes welled up but this time with guilt seeing the burnt parts. She sat beside him crying.
Swara: I thought that you hate me because I never payed any attention to you but….. See me sanskar..do you find any signs of proud or ego on my face…I have never had a thought of being proud of dad’s wealth..

Time passed, the night became silent. Only her emotions were making noise but they failed to reach sanskar’s heart.

To be continued..

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  1. Wat a twist Ms limitless love??
    Fantastic its really nyc ur plot story expression fabbb
    Great going go ahead……. Waiting for next like hell!!!

    1. Thank-you shradda. I have read your previous comment on my episode and really felt happy reading it and the way you call me ms.Limitless love is just awesome..I mean I loved it dear.

  2. Wow harini..Wow…..Superb…Finally swara knows y he hates her so much….Now swara stop hating him….and see the real sanskar…I loved this epi….

    1. Yes but not to full extent. You will see a different swara from the next episode.

  3. awesome…upload soon

  4. It was awesome

    1. Thank-you angel.

  5. Rina Sivaguru

    Wow……. Awesome twist….. I really hope u can post another update today…..

    1. I will update it dear. Probably by night.

  6. Awesome didn’t expected such a big twist wow can’t believe it’s just wonderful Lve u update the next part soon can’t wait at all plzz update fst ????????????????

    1. Seriously…but it was expected by many and is completely predictable. I am glad that you loved it Khan.the next part will be at 9:30

  7. Awesome yaar…please update next part soon…

  8. SUPERB!!!!! wow yar they are each others phone friends !!!!! soooooooo cool………..love it……..post hurriedly and longer just acnt wait….i m being greedy but seriously my interest is killing me and yeah will u plz read swaragini hate to love musical emotions as i have started writing my 3rd ff of swaragini plz plz

    link is


    1. I read it dear but didn’t had time to comment because of my exams and they were phone friends. I don’t consider that you are greedy dear.will upload the At night

  9. Wow sweetheart I know u have so much talent but this varun and vaishali twist was really unexpected ….awesome Dr luv u loads ..aww waiting for love to thrash their hate in its legs …:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Thank-you dear but I am not talented as you think.

  10. wonderful

  11. twist is awesome…

  12. u r awsomee hariniii nicee updatee

    1. Thank-you anuhya,ns and nav for commenting.

  13. frankly speaking…… i m really disappointed wid u…….
    ur writing skill is awesome…. no doubt……
    but varun and vaishali ek dusre se phone se baat karte the……k…….

    swara aur sanskar ne bhi phone pe baat ki hogi……
    dnt tell me dt wo dono aawaj badal kar baat kar rahe the ek dusre se…………

    wo done ek dusre ki aawaj pehchan nahi paye???????????????????

    drunken state………….

    sorry….i really dnt want to hurt u……..but try to understand dear….how it is possible…….?????

    1. swara ne varun se aur varun ne vaishu se kabhi apne partner k bareme jikr nahi kiya?????????????????????
      k…………….shayad kabhi nahi kkk…………

      1. I thought that someone will raise this question while writing and you did it. Actually swara and sanskar didn’t talk to each other on phone much and I tried to convey this. If you observe my episodes, swasan mobile talk was only once but varun and vaishu weren’t like that. I hope you got your answer. Sorry if it not convincing and forgive me even. Swara never mentioned anything about marriage to varun but sanskar thought of saying but again denined. I have mentioned it in previous episodes.

    2. ur ans is not convincing dear……..
      u did not get my point exactly……..
      swara ne varun se aur sanskar ne vaishu se baat ki hai phn pe…….

      aur swara and sanskar ne sirf 1 bar….

      fark kya padta hai swara ne sanskar se kitni bar baat ki hai……. point yeh hai ki ek baar me hi usko aisa nahi laga ki yeh aawaj pehle suni huyi hai…… jis tarah unki friendship hai(swara-varun,san-vaishu) matlb vaishu ko khane me kya pasand hai yeh bhi shayad sanskar ko malun hai…..means they r good friend….. aawaj ko to pehchante honge……

      to swara ya sanskar ko ek bar bhi nahi laga ki yeh aawaj familiar hai?????

      i dnt wannaaa hurt u….but ur ans……..

      leave it……….


      1. I accept with you dear…according to my pov, swara and sanskar didn’t had many mobile conversations and I bet that one’s voice gets changed on phone. Because they were not used to talk more than they didn’t recognise the difference. Sorry to hurt you dear. Really sorry.

  14. Varun n vaishali are our beloved swasan? Very awesome as usual, hope everything goes well with them, thanx for the ff sree thank u thank u.

    1. Don’t say thanks dear because I am going to upload another part even.

  15. Sree update nxt prt soon.
    Limitless love & now hatd story awsome journey

    1. Thank-you jaf. Will upload in half an hour.

  16. It was fabulous dear…i mean wow…what a great twist ….varun is our sanskaar and vaishali swara… Srsly great….hope so soon they understand their love for each other….mind-blowing…when will sanky know the reason for swara’s hatred??

    1. Twist..It was an open secret dear. They will understand their love towards each other but you need to read further.

  17. it was super extraordinary dear I just love that 2 day super plz update next soon within 2 day plz dear I love swasan

  18. It was awesome…..nect update soon

  19. Awesome episode sree but why swara is nt disclosing the fact that she is vaishu

    really hope swasan unite soon

  20. when will you reveal swara’s reason of hatred?

    1. Thank-you Maya,shanaya(2) and xxxx for commenting.

  21. Wow amazing twist

  22. Then wat about the meeting of Swara n varun, when sanskaar in landon

    1. You will get your answers in further episodes.

      1. Thank u for reply and the awesom hate story

  23. Super not better but best dear

  24. Hey i am a silent reader of ur ff.i read ur limitless love ff.it was ??????.i read this ff today only.it was awesome.pls post d next part soooon.

    1. Thank-you Priya and vins. I am glad to know that you were regular reader of my previous fiction and I am happy that you found my fiction today.

  25. Superb…keep it up…:-)

  26. I had diz doubt in starting epi’s bt later i thought dhey are differnt becoz u mentioned them that they are needed here… so atlast u revealed that they are same… omg mind blowing marvellous epi sree.. loved it.. bt whn both wil undrstnd each othr feelng.. nd sanky is always taunting swara… it makes me feel sad for swara…. ok bye.. plz post nxt epi fast… tc

    1. Sorry for late reply dear. Yes varun and vaishali charecters are important but they dominate swasan. I have just created them for confusion.

  27. Loved it Dr..awesome..but I expected this twist.. vaishali and varun are swara and sanskar.sorry to say some films and stories have read same concept. But u narrate it in a different .. loved it
    I have some confusion bz swara and sanskar r childhood enemies, I mean every time they have fight, they can easily identify their voice over phone..?
    If its a chat then OK.but..
    Wen I read previous chapters about vaishali and varun , swara and sanskar hoga…got hint from gheer preparation of vaishali and swara.At the same time am again confused bz dey can identity thier voice wen dey talk each other.
    But honestly says loved ur Ff..each line its mindblowing. Don’t feel bad as I mensioned these things.

    1. Actually I wrote this on basis that swara and sanskar had very less mobile conservation and so they are not that familiar with mobile voices and secondly when we talk to some stranger that too with excitement of talking to them for the first time, we won’t pay attention to their voice but I am really sorry that it hurted my readers. I think I have used se foolish idea dear. I am.sorry

  28. I can’t believe this !!!! It was a big shock when u revealed varun and vaishalli ‘s true identity , I seriously thought that swara was having a crush or attraction towards varun and sanskar and vashalli were in a relationship ………amazing twist . Just waiting for that part when sanskar will get it know that his vaishu is only swara . Badly want to see his reaction as I felt that sanskar was in love with vaishu . I are just amazing LOVE U AND URE FF .plsss reply after reading this .??

    1. Sorry for the late reply IRA. Actually I had a problem with my network yesterday. I thought that everyone expected this twisy but not.. Sanskar will also come to know about it but to know his reaction, you need to wait for further episodes. Love you too.

  29. sree dear u r awesome… love u dear…ur both stories r tooooo goood….

    1. Thank-you aditi Singh.

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