swasan ff : punar vivah by kaynat khan episode 59

So guys punar vivah seems to have got lot of fanbase of urs… am happy that youll have given so much love to this story…….

I wont mind for decreasing comments coz i have been tired of making silent readers understand…….

But guys seriously first have got lots of comments so it hurts to see lesser comment now and morever no messages regarding this ff and despite many commentars commenting on other stories except mine…….

I dont know what fault i have done but have left all those thoughts now if this behaviour continues my interest will also go in posting ffs……

I really dont wanna hurt my regular ones for them am writing all this…..

So if you want comment and not then dont comment and hurt me as much you’ll want will not tell anyone to comment from now on promise……

Episode starts………

Its been 1 month of anjali and karan’s marraige……

Anjali have started her small boutique now and she has been working on it with the help of karan…..
Karan’s gadodia empire have done patnership with maheshwari industries now both are partners and are working together……

Dp and shekhar have retired from business and now only sanskaar adi and karan are looking in business…….

Now swara was three month pregnant now sanskaar was acting extra protective towards her……he use to come home soon and use to take care of her……
In his team jhanvi aarav and khushi were also involved they also took care of her and didnt do any naughty things to tease her……..

And adi have cracked one deal which was pending from years and now the business was going wonderful……

Things were going as smooth and happily……..
But it was the happiness which was celebrated before the storm……..

The storm was on gate which was knocking on maheshwari’s mansion door……..

It was day time swara finally took a glance of her room it was now full of baby pictures and new craddle of baby…..

Swara seems to be very happy now…

This one month was a very good time for everyone……

Then at that moment pankhuri tapped her shoulder……

Pankhuri : have done admiring your own room…..

Swara : oh these….. i was just wondering after so many months this house is so much happy…… i am just overwhelmed…..

Pankhuri : calm down devrani jii….. there aree lots more to come….. specially when your child will be born it will be most happiest moment for both of you…… i just hope the happiness in this house doesnt fade away…..

Swara : yeah bhabhi…….

Pankhuri : acha now come your son is calling you from when…..

Swara : oh aarav he came from school acha lets go bhabhi…….

They both headed out….

Pankhuri got dowwn from stairs and swara was getting down when her sari fumbled with her leg and she just stumbled on the first stair…… then she lost her grip from railing and her hand slipped and she just fall down shouting pankhuri’s name………

One stair badly hitted on her head and last stair hitted on her belly……

And she fall down clutching her stomach………

Swara : aaahhhh saannsskkaarrr!!!!!!!!

Pankhuri turned around to find this horrifying thing has happened……

Ragini and anupporna came out of kitchen while dp with kids came to the area and was shocked to see the scene…

Swara was shouting continously……..

Swara : aahh maa my bacha sanskaarrrrrrr aahhh……

Pankhuri and aarav khushi ran to her…..

Pankhuri : swara!!!! are you ok….

Aarav : mumma mumma what happened…..

Khushi started crying : mumma what happened???

Pankhuri : maa please take care of aarav khushi jhanvi…. ragini will take her to the hospital come…..

Ragini runs to her and both headed picked her up….. while swara was continuously shouting sanskaar’s name……

Pankhuri : maa papa you both dont worry nothing will happen to her just be with kids…..

Dp : yes beta but please take care of swara..

Anu : yeah and do inform us allright……..

With this ragini starts driving while pankhuri was making swara normal……

Swara : aahh bhabhi its paining….. sanskaarrrr!!!!

Pankhuri : swara just few minutes will reach hospital now……nothing will happen…..

Pankhuri have kept handkerchief over swara’s head bleeding……..

Ragini : bhabhi should i call sanskaaar bhai….

Pankhuri : first let us reach hospital ragini then will inform them…..

Ragini drove fast to the hospital…..

They both reached and doctors took swara inside……

Pankhuri informed doctors that she is three months pregnant……

Pankhuri : please save child and mother both doctor…..

Doctor : will try our best dear……

Saying this he too went inside…….

Ragini gave phone to pankhuri…..

Ragini : i cant bhabhi!!!!

She said with tears……

While pankhuri took phone with shivering hands and dialed sanskaar’s phone number…..

While sanskaar was with adi discussing some project work when his mobile rang……

Sanskaar picks it up……

Sanskaar ; hello bhabhi!!!

Pankhuri’s vouce started choking……

Pankhuri : heellooo sanskaar…..

Sanskaar : bhabhi are you ok everything’s fine????

Adi who was smiling changed his ecpressions into worry and told sanskaar to put it on speaker…..

Adi : hello pankhu what happened????

Pankhuri : adi please you and sanskaar come to city hospital….. swara fell down from stairs…… pease come soon……

At the last sentences pankhuri started crying while ragini was consoling her…….

While phone slipped from sanskaar’s hands…….

He cannot believe what he heard……

He was stumbling….. Adi supported him…

Sanskaar : bhai…. swara!!!!

Tears started forming in his eyes……

Adi : sanskaar nothing will happen to her come fast she needs you…….

Saying this he drags sanskaar to the car and drove fast……

Adi and sanskaar to receptionist……

Sanskaar ; can you tell me the room of swara sanskaar maheshwari……

Reception : yeah she is no. 404

Sanskaar : thanks…..

They both ran to that room and found ragini and pankhuri standing out…….
While laksh has too joined pankhuri and ragini……. till now

Sanskaar ran to pankhuri : bhabhi how’s

Pankhuri in tears : doctors are examing her……

Adi ; but how it all happened????

Pankhuri narrated the whole story to them……..

Sanskaar sat down with a thud…..

Sanskaar : its all because of me…. i wasnt there to take care pf her…….

Adi and laksh goes to him……

Adi : no sanskaar it isn’t your fault……
Laksh : bhai please if you will break like this who will see to bhabhi…… for her be strong……

Sanskaar was in so much surprised…..
In morning only they were so happy and now……

Doctor arrived from the room……

Doctor : she is fine now…… jer head cut was not so deep thanks to God!!!!

They all sighed…..

Doctor : but as she was in her three month pregnancy we cannot save her child…… we are extremely sorry for that!!!!!

While sanskaar who was finally out of shock got another shock of his life……

The moment which he and swara were waiting is no more…….

He fell on his knees…….

Sanskaar : noooo!!!!!

Saying this he cried out……

While all other present also had tears because they have too started planning for the upcoming kid………

Sanskaar : how will i tell all this things to swara nooo…….

Doctor to adi : well she is in her senses now youll can meet her but see to it she is extremely weak…….dont stress her much and i will give you a advice if possible do tell her truth soon….. because shee may be in shock later……. now please excuse me……

While laks goes to sanskaar
Laksh : bhai you cannot break like this!!!!
You have to tell bhabhi about this for her be strong……. she needs your support bhai please…….

Sanskaar : but how will i face her????

Laksh : bhai just go she needs to know the truth…..

Sanskaar finally gathered some courage and went inside only to find she laying down on bed with big bandage on her head eyes closed…….

He goes to her and carress her face…..

To which she opens her eyes…….

Sanakaar immediately hugged her…….
She too hugged him back….

Swara : sanskaar hows baby….. you know my stomach was badly paining when i fall from stairs….. did he told you anything……

Sanskaar gripped her more and cried she got serioualy worried…….

Sanskaar : swara our baby is no more…….

For swara it was like someone stabbed knife…..

The life which she was carrying is no more…….
She tries to break the hug

Swara : sanskaar please you know i dont like jokes in this matter and how can you joke on your own baby…….

While sanskaar gripped more
Sanskaar : its truth swara we lost our baby swara accept it…….

While she was breaking the hug but he was tightening it……

Swara : noo its all lie i wont trust it……

Sansskaar : trust me swara we have lost it……

Swara finally stop breaking the hug and sat there emotionlessly…….

Sanskaar was fearing for this only…..
She may not take it

Swara looked at him with blank expression…

Swara : its all because of me….. i didnt watched while moving down i killed my child……

Sanskaar : no swara what are you saying????

Swara started to blabber…..

Swara : i killed my child… i killed my child…..

While sanskaar shaked her body tightly……

Sanskaar : swara no you didnt it was an accident please see to me swaraa!!!!!!

He shouted her name…..

While she came in senses and hugged him cryingly……..

Swara : our baby sanskaar……

While sanskaar consoled her with tears in his eyes…….

There on the sahil’s side he got a call……

Sahil : what swara and miscarraige….. are you sure……

While sahil kept the phone and laughed out……

Sahil : wow i havent did anything and swara’s fate have started to betray her…… now what will happen when i will play my game…….

Saying this he laughs out loud……

Precap : sanskaar bringing out swara from dillema…… swara seeing sahil and her fears started to form again…….

Am sorry if many are hurted of this episode…… but its need for story but do trust me and about sahil track just buckle your seats coz he will be last villain of this story…….but dangerous…..

So till then bye…..

And tu readers last warning to all to comment and yeah do read my other ff incomplete journey have posted prolouhe and episode……

39 comments

  1. Janisha

    Janisha

    |Registered Member

    Are you writing all this only for comments?
    Stop threatening that you will end this story blah blah. A reader has full right to choose if he/she wants to comment or not. Stop being desperate. I would have commented for sure but I don’t like to entertain hungry writers like you. I understand that every writer wants comments but instead of thanking the one who comment you are blaming the one who don’t. I have no idea of reading this FF in future not because the story isn’t good but because of your own nature. So bye

    P.S You wanted a message right? Here you go.

    • Kaynatk01

      Kaynatk01

      |Author

      janisha hold on…. i am not desperate for comments i just wanna know who are reading my ffs and who dont…… and secondly its nt crime go ask to comment right….. and third i didnt told anyone that will end punar vivah in this part allright…..
      amd before judging my character you should write a story and when the story collects huge round of comments and then slowly starts decreasing you will understand what i feel…..

      and i surely dont need a reader who judges me like this……

      • Janisha

        Janisha

        |Registered Member

        That’s fine if you want to know who are reading and who aren’t. I know who are hurt by my comment, even I would’ve been but this is what I think is true. This attitude towards readers is not at all correct. Please, I know you need comments, but take a moment and appreciate who comment rather than forcing the one who don’t comment, to comment.

        As reader, I am not at all sorry for this comment as I have full right to express what I feel. Lastly I never judged you

      • Kaynatk01

        Kaynatk01

        |Author

        chalo why r we getting into a fight after all the thing which u said now was correct but your way wasn’t and i was hurt by you….
        but yeah i do understood your point and everyone has right to comment janisha its not like that but i also do ge hurt na
        why all think that i am rude and actually am not!!!
        chalo never mind you have ur own pov and thats good but do understand me too i have never been rude to anyone and i love my all readers…..

        Thanks!!!!

    • Sus

      Sus

      |Registered Member

      I just want to say dear plzz upload your ff on watspad becoz atleast there you can get to know how well you are writing and there atleast either comments or vote you will definitely get. Its just day by day tu start getting irritating.

  2. sri

    nice..n one more thing..first u got so many readers n now they r not commenting to u means…some r not liking ur stories and all have their own life…not only u dear…every authour write ffs giving their time to us…one more thing i would like to say is people should write for their self satisfaction…not for comments…i know for writer comments r must to encourage but pls dont be rude to ur readers n ex-readers…thank u

    • Kaynatk01

      Kaynatk01

      |Author

      i am not being rude to anyone sri dear…..
      its just that i was frustrated of less comments and i have said from now on will not tell anyone to comment….
      its true that i write for my satisfaction bit its also true that i wanted to know how many peoe are reading despite being silent on this story……

      if this much felt bad to anyone am heartly sorry

  3. Seebu_s

    Seebu_s

    |Registered Member

    Hmmm a free suggestion to u my dear…DONT THREATEN READERS…IF THEY LIKE THEY DO COMMENT ORELSE NO…IF PEOPLE R COMMENTING ON UR STORY LIKE “IT IS NOT NICE” OR CRITICIZING UR FF…SOME R THINKING THAT READER IS BASHING AUTHOUR…SO SOME R REMAINING SILENT RATHER THAN COMMENTING LIKE THAT…bcs we readers dont want tag of basher..write for ur satisfaction dear…even i’m writing something…if they like they do comment orelse simply ignore or will say what is lagging in my story…we r no one to warn or threaten readers…i know i hurted u so much…i apologize for that…but ur this attitude is not correct to readers…u may loose ur regular readers also..

  4. anu

    awesome emotinal part cant see swasan like this hope she comes out from her truma soon now sanskaar and kids mainly bring her back amd family also
    have a doubt who called sahil and told swara had miscarriage this is my biggest question who called him?
    update next part soon

  5. Rockleon

    Rockleon

    |Registered Member

    Sooo amazing dear!!!!
    emotional part !!!
    And plzzzz don’t need to explain urself to anyone u know that u r right!!!
    Then why are.u explaining them who don’t have any other work except 4r bashing
    U seems to be quiet exhausted !!!!
    Take a break api!!!!!

      • Kaynatk01

        Kaynatk01

        |Author

        exactly yr….but u dont support me neither they will shout on u that when they bashed me……
        i really dont wanna drag u in this matter…….
        i really love yuh and it only matters to me that u and my real readers are with me thats all i want 😘😘😘😘

  6. Nisha

    Wowwww.. You updated this super awesome story ya.. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ».. keep waiting for this one.. Finally u have updated it.. ❀️.. but it was such a sad update… πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜’πŸ˜’.. Why did u take away their child.. nooooo… 😒😒.. poor Swasan.. they were so happy with this upcoming child.. y all the sadness before Sahil’s track.. 😒.. Don’t make them sad for too long pleaseeee.. Swara doesn’t deserve any of this after what all she has seen.. pleaseeee keep her safe and with Sanskaar all the time.. pleaseeee.. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ».. Would love to see some emotional scenes of the family with Swara thou.. pleaseeee.. and would love to also see a protective family for Swara in Sahil’s case.. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ».. that would be super fun and super cute.. pleaseeee.. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ».. Loved the update.. the emotions were just perfect… ❀️❀️.. Thank you for this amazing part.. ❀️😍

  7. Shifa96

    Shifa96

    |Registered Member

    I am not getting time to read these days and read 3-4 parts now only so I wasn’t able to comment on that.
    I know for writers, comments are needed for encouragement but readers can’t be forced to comment so write for your passion and for your regular readers and I am going offline from TU and will be back only in June so better luck for further updates and don’t get disheartened and keep writing.

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