Swaragini – Story of the sisters (Chap 8) last chapter

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Hey guys
Truth to be told I am very upset seeing the comments if you guys not happy with the story then please tell me…… it’s really hard to write after a tiring day at office still I try to be regular and this is also a reason for the short updates…. I was happy after getting nice response but this much comments is discouraging me……That’s why I am ending this…..

Next morning

Sanskar wakes up and holds her head and seeing his surroundings he gets confused but then remembered about his marriage with Swara and also raglak marriage….. His eyes go down and he see that he’s half naked and Swara was also naked….their clothes were lying on floor bed was messed up….he gets shocked and thinks to ask Swara…..
Sanskar : Swara Swara wake up….wake up Swara…..
Swara (yawning) : Good morning sanskar… what happened ?? Why you woke me up you want something ??
Sanskar : Swara what’s all this?? Why clothes were lying on floor
Swara : Don’t you remember we made love last night…..
Sanskar : What the hell…..this can’t be possible … God I can’t remember anything also…
Swara : Leave all that chalo let’s get freshen up and then we will go down….
Sanskar was confused and went to change whereas Swara was thinking
Flashback

After making sanskar lye she removed his and her clothes and messed up the bed and slept as sanskar was drugged he didn’t know what happened
Flashback ends

Swara : Sorry sanskar for lying but this was necessary now you will forget ragini and move on with me…..

Downstairs

Ragini was kneeling down and crying badly seeing ragini crying Laksh and sanskar who just came down were feeling worse……

Sanskar : Laksh what happened why ragini is crying??
Laksh : Sanskar woh….

Flashback
Ragini woke up and saw that all her things are thrown out of the house…. She was shocked when she asked Jhanki she got a slap and Jhanki told her the truth…Ragini was hurt beyond anything….But still she had a doubt so she went to Jhanki and asked her why they kept her alive…..Then Jhanki said sharmistha whole property was in ragini’s name and the property could be transferred after ragini’s marriage only
Flashback ends

Hearing this sanskar was angry but ragini made a promise to him that he will give Swara all the love and right of a wife and went with Laksh….. Swara was happy as ragini went out of her life but she was feeling like she has lost some thing very precious…..

Four years later

In this four years swara and Gadodiya family realized their mistakes they thought to find ragini and apologize…..In a award winning function they saw ragini and Laksh…..Gadodiya with swasan went to them asked apology… First laksh was thinking that they are again playing with ragini so laksh asked them to stay away but after lot of pleadings raglak forgave them and now they live happily with swasan twins ayush and Arab and raglak daughter ragya…They treat ragya as a Princess and also trying to fill ragini’s life with that love and care for which ragini craved……

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16 Comments
  1. A.xx

    why did u end xx

    1. SammieR

      Coz of low response

  2. Lovely7

    I like this story at start but shekar cheating her daughter is unbearable

    Please start ragsan or raglak ff please please

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  3. I liked the ending…..but it is incomplete dear…..cn u plzz rewrite it including
    1) swara seeking Sanskar’s forgiveness
    2) some incident that made gogodias regret what they did to Ragini
    3) laksh helping Ragini to come out of the trauma
    4) both the pairs moving on in their life(swara after getting his forgiveness)
    5) raglak forgiving swara n gogodias

    I appreciate your dedication to this ff….it would be definitely difficult to come home and write this after the tiring work…..if possible please rewrite this chapter or please start another which gives equal importance to swasan and raglak like this one….

    1. SammieR

      Yup I will start a new chapter and I posted it’s prologue….its completely swasan ff…it’s link is here
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/new-swasan-ff-prologue/

      1. SammieR

        Thank you and don’t worry it didn’t hurted me and if you are upset then check out my new story’s prologue……hope you will like it
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/new-swasan-ff-prologue/

      2. Aasthu

        It’s interesting dear…..but I don’t read swasan ff’s coz there a lot of it and I’ll forget the names. I’m just reading SR ff’s for time pass….I don’t have any real interest……

  4. Asra

    am feeling sad yar….y u end it soon…..i want to see godiya family suffer….but u end it…..anyways waiting for u….plz write another one dear….tkcr dear….

    1. SammieR

      Yup I will start a new chapter and I posted it’s prologue….its completely swasan ff…it’s link is here
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/new-swasan-ff-prologue/

  5. IQRA222

    Awesome ending
    But i am sorry to say that i had not expected ending this soon and low responce is not a appropriate reason to end such a good ff soory if i hurt you but i am a little upset
    Sorry again if i hurt u

    1. SammieR

      Thank you and don’t worry it didn’t hurted me and if you are upset then check out my new story’s prologue
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/new-swasan-ff-prologue/

  6. Jazzy

    superh

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

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