A Story of Four Lovers (SNS+YHM) Part:1

Hi Guys! Shakaib here. Ive write many fan fictions on Saath Nibhana Saathiya But its my first ff on Yeh Hai Mohabbatein. I should dedicated it to Jasmine di who wants me to write a ff on Hindi film,Zameer. So, some storylines may be taken from Zameer movie. So,let’s start.

The Episode starts with a woman entering a room. A man is seen. He calls lady. Lady comes to him and says Tej. Her face(Mrinal Deshraj) is shown. Tej says Make me wear the tie. The woman says you’ll never change. Tej says Jhanvi, you know, I like to get closer to you. I’m just in search of chance to get closer to you. Tej’s face(Manish Khanna) is shown. Jhanvi smiles. Jhanvi makes wear tie. Both Hus. They go downstairs.

They sit on sofa. A servant serves them cups of tea.

A boy comes downstairs. He touches Tej and Jhanvi’s feet. Jhanvi says Be happy. Tej says I pray to god to give you things which you deserve. Boy says Thanks Mom and Dad.

Tej says Ahem, its your right to take aashirwaad and its our too that we you aashirwaad.
Ahem’s face(Mohammad Nazim) is shown. Ahem thinks today is my last day in college and don’t know where this dumb Raman has left..??

Jhanvi says and yes, I forget to tell you that Raman had left sfor college. Ahem is surprised. He leaves.

Screen shifts to college. All are taking selfie and talking. A girl comes to boy. She says Hey Raman! Boy’s face(Karan patel) is shown. Raman moves his hand to greet girl. Girl’s face(Divyanka Tripathi) is shown. Raman says Hi Ishita! Ishita says well, where is ahem….???? Raman says he must be on the way.

Ahem is on the way. A girl moves her hand for lift. Ahem sees girl and says Wow! she is Gopi. Maybe she have some problem That’s why she is asking for lift. He stops car near Gopi. Gopi’s face(Devoleena Bhattacharjee) is shown. She sits on car. Gopi says Actually,my car’s fuel was finished. Thank you for helping me. Ahem says its OK! Today is last day. Gopi nods and says yeah!

Gopi and Ahem reach car. Ahem parks the car. Gopi and ahem come out of car.

Ahem and Gopi comes to Ishita and Raman. Ishita says Ahem! I was been waiting for you. Raman says Ahem and Gopi! Let’s come we too enjoy, its our last day as well. Ishita says last for others but we four will be…. Ishita thinks more than friends. Raman says what next..?? Ishita says after college too. Gopi says come. They four take a selfie. Suddenly, Ahem looks at Gopi. Gopi also looks at ahem. Gopi sees at ahem. Both share a eye lock.

O jaana
Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana..

Ishq hai aansu ishq hai naghma
Ishq sukoon hai raahat hai
Ishq hai sehra ishq hai dariya
Ishq junoon hai zahmat hai

Gopi thinks why I shy to tell ahem about my feelings about him..??

Ishq hai aansu ishq hai naghma
Ishq sukoon hai raahat hai
Ishq hai sehra ishq hai dariya
Ishq junoon hai zahmat hai

Tanha adhoora sa
Khaamosh lamha sa
Tehra hua hai dil yahaan
Mehsoos kar le tu
Jazbaat ki khushbu
Khud se karun kya mai bayaan

Ahem thinks I love you Gopi a lot, but can not tell you, I don’t know about my feelings.

Dard hai jo halka sa
Khaab khaab chalka sa
Tu muskuraaye har jagah
O jaana..

Gopi thinks ahem thought as me his best friend. If he will get to know about it.

Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana..

Kis pe karun zaahir
Hain dard kya aakhir
Kyon sukoon mujh se khafa
Betaab lamhon mein
Benaam aashqon mein
Yeh aaks kis ka ban gaya
Ghum ko aazmaane de
Dil ko chot khaane de
Kya h chale kuch to pata

Ahem thinks do not know, she breaks this friend ship too.

O jaana
Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana.. O jaana o jaana..

Some college boys come to them and ask four of them to enjoy. Raman says Why not..?? All enjoys.

Result time….

All are waiting. Announcer announces that you all know any we all gather here, its for conclusion of those students who study day and night to achieve their goal. Now we start. Rohit Mehra is on 3rd number. Please Rohit Mehra come on stage and get your award.
Rohit come on stage. He gets his award. All claps.

Announcer announces that Priya Sharma is on 2nd number. She comes on stage and get her award.

Announcer announces that 1st position goes to…. Ishita, Raman,Gopi and Ahem prays for themselves. Announcer announces that not only one, not two, not three also,1st position goes to four four students. All claps.

Announced announces that they are Raman….,Ahem….,Gopi….and…. Ishita prays for herself. Announcer announces and Ishita. They four go on stage and get their award. All claps and cheers up.

Screen freezes on Ishra and Gohem.

Precap: Ishita thinks you will say and I refuse, how can this happen, I love you a lot. You’re my prince charming, Even I’ve to die for you, I’ll.

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  1. nice intro

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you sowmy.

  2. Jasminerahul

    Thanku 4 writing a ff similar to Zameer.Ishra n gohem ff.its a surprise treat.Tej jhanvi…middleaged romance was cool.usually no one writes romantic scenes 4 middle aged couples.Ishra gohem r college students.last day in college.Loved gohem eye lock n the way u wrote their pov.beautiful song 4 gohem.i had’nt heard of this song b4.so i googled it n realized that its Ishqbaaz song n i heard d song.Ishra gohem win 1st prize too.waiting 4 d next part.waiting 2 know who all play Ajay Mahima Amisha’s characters in this ff

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you jasmine di! Middle-age romance was for starting but happy you like it. Gohem VM for o janna, is too available.

      1. Jasminerahul

        congrats 4 making gohem vm on o janna.it was lovely.waiting 4 lots of gohem romantic scenes in ur ff which we never saw on SNS

    2. Shakaib

      Thank you.

  3. Nandhini

    Good intro with ishqbaaz song of gohem.??

    1. Shakaib

      Thank u nandhini di.

  4. Mansi

    Amazing update lovd it ? n d song selectn ws too gd keep it up ?waitng 4 more update soon?

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you mansi.

  5. Kumud

    Awesome starting point

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you kumud.

  6. Really good start. Gohem cute scene was cute with shivika song, whom, Ishita love,Raman. Are you going to introduce love triangle?? Please upload next part as soon as you can.

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you Sara.

  7. Really its a mindblowing start….Gohem n Ishra with O jaana song of ishqbaaz really cool….

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you Rainaa di.

  8. nice story pls continue soon

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you jyoti.

  9. Ankitha

    Superb I think u are an ib fan , well awesome , plz continue

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you ankitha.

  10. Wow(^.^)you are fan of yhm too. Please continue it.

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you ragini.

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