Rishto ki Dastan (Part 17)

Hello people…I’m back with another new chapter…so lets go for this one…

The episode starts with Radhika is working in the office….its late..everyone has left except for Laksh….and also Radhika…Laksh is leaving..just then he sees Radhika working..
Laksh:Hey miss…u should be going home…
Radhika:Sir…i will….let me complete my work…Sanskar sir wants it by tomorrow…
Laksh:U can complete it tomorrow…i’ll talk to bhai…he won’t say u anything..
Radhika:Okay sir…
Radhika leaves from there…She is walking in the road….trying to find an auto..
Just then she sees Laksh’s car…She starts walking fast….Laksh stops his car and opens his window…
Laksh:Hey u….u sit in my car..meh tumhe ghar chod dunga…
Radhika:No sir..I’ll manage..
Laksh:Okay..so how will u?
Radhika:Ummm..
Laksh:U see any vehicle here other than my car?
Radhika looks at him innocently and sits in the car….
Radhika asks him to stop when he comes near baadi..
Laksh;U live here?
Radhika:Ha…thank you sir…
Radhika goes inside..and Laksh drives to MM…
It’s the next day…
Vidhi is seen following Ragini…in the road…
Vidhi:Hey Ragini..
She goes near her and hugs her….

Ragini is surprised…:Vidhi…..after what u did……u r hugging me?
Ragini is about to leave..
Vidhi;What happened Ragini?Did I do anything?
Rags:Don’t act like u don’t know anything…
Vidhi:Ragini…plz tell me my fault…
Rags:U….u lied to Swara…u said that Neil…..he is Siya’s father..u knew this very well right that I love Laksh?
Vidhi:What r u saying Ragini?I never lied to Swara….i told her that Laksh is the person u love…she thought to take revenge….she made both Sanskar and Laksh fall for her…i ddn’t know anything about it…but I told her the truth only…..
Rags:What?Swara was about to marry Laksh…but she didn’t marry him…
Vidhi: She never intended to take a revenge….she always snatched everything from u..and now your Laksh too….she told me that she wanted to get married in the Maheshwari family..she doesn’t care about who she has to marry..She wanted a luxurious life…and that’s why she did it..
Rags;Then why did she back out from marriage?
Vidhi:At first when Swara and Sanskar’s marriage was fixed….Swara found Sanskar very tough man…..Laksh loved her madly…..so she wanted to use him to get the property…so she planned of marrying Laksh…at her wedding day..i told her that the power of attorney is in Sanskar’s name..and then she lied to Sanskar and made him marry her…..saying that she is doing everything to unite u and Laksh…
Rags cries and goes home…
Vidhi;Oh god…its so easy to fool these sisters….now they will hate each other…..and that’s what I want…Swara…u love you di a lot right?Mene toh tumhe unke samne hi gira diya….

People..I’m adding something in my story..Parish have a baby boy named Krish…He is just 2 months old…
Sujata,Ap and Pari r in temple..Niti is at her friend’s place and others r in the office…Swara is at home..with Krish…..
Scene:At office…
Mr Khanna comes to sign the second contract with the Maheshwaris….so after the meeting…
Sanskar;So Mr Khanna…we have signed the second contract..
Khanna;Yeah….i came from Mumbai speacially for this deal…
Sanskar:Oh….
Mrs Khanna(Let me name her Riddhi) comes there…
Sanskar;Hello Mrs Khanna….
Riddhi;Oh…Sanskar Maheshwari..who attended our anniversary…
Sanskar;Ji….
Riddhi:We will be living for the airport within an hour….so I came here itself…
Riddhi sees Laksh..
Riddhi;Oh Laksh…how is your wife?
Laksh in mind;Ooh shit..yeh toh wahi loog hai jinki mene aur Swara neh…..ab?
Laksh;She..she …she is fine…
Riddhi:I would love to meet her….but….we need to leave…
(All these r happening in Sanskar’s cabin)
Now..comes the best part…when Swara enters with Krish in her hands…Sanlak look at each other..
Sanskar;Abb toh haam gaye…kamse..
Riddhi;Arehhh Swara?I was talking about u….. wanted to meet u…
Swara:Oh…good to see u again…
Laksh whispers to Sanky:Who called Swara here?
Sanky:I asked her to bring a file…..no one was at home..so she had to bring it…and I thought they would leave before she comes….i did not know that they love us so much…and god even listened to them…they wanted to meet Swara..looo…mil gaye…
Riddhi comes towards Swara..and sees Krish..
Riddhi;Awww….is he your child?
Swara is about to say no…when Riddhi again speaks:Ha…he must be your child na…we saw u 2 months before…u were 8r months pregnant….
Swara in mind:I don’t even remember what I told to this lady..but this lady remembers everything…ahhhh
Riddhi;He is very cute….what is his name?
Swara;Krish…
Riddhi;He has gone on his dad…i think…
Swara in mind:Lo deklo….loog yeh tumhara beta tumpe gaya hai..yeh sabkuch aise hii kehedete hai..aj prove bhi mil gaya……nautanki….
Riddhi:And his eyes…they r exactly like u..
Swara in mind:Jhuti kahiki…

Ragini comes there….
Swara in mind:Di is already misunderstanding me….and now if..
Riddhi:I must say u both make a perfect couple…Swara and Laksh…
Ragini looks shocked…
Riddhi;And your son Krish makes your family perfect…
Ragini in mind:Who is Krish?(She doesn’t know that Parish have a son)
Ragini leaves from there angrily…followed by Sanskar…
Rags is crying….Sanskar comes there…
Sanky;Rags…
Rags;Neil…what was all that?Who is Krish?
Sanky;He ia Adarsh Bhaiya’s son….
Sanky tells her everything…
Rags:U know…..Swara…Swara did everything intentionally…
Sanky:Matlab?
Rags;Matlab ki….she never came for revenge….Vidhi told her the truth only…Swara knew about Laksh and me…she wants your money only….thats why she married u…..she wanted to marry Laksh so that she gets all his property…..and Laksh..he loves her madly….he would had given everything to her…..but then she got to know that power of attorney is in your name..so she lied to u and married u…..she is so selfish…and characterless…

Just then Ragini felt a tight slap on her face…She looked on shocked…it was none other than our Swara’s hubby Sanskar….
Ragini;Neil….
Sanskar;Call me Sanskar…Ragini…
Rags was shocked….as Sanskar always called her Rags..
Rags:Neil…what r..
Sanskar:Shut up….kesi behen ho tum?Jis ladki neh tumhare liye sab kuch dao par laga diya……tum uss ladki ke bareme aisa kehrahiho?Vo bhi kiski baat sunke?Vidhi ki?
Rags:Oh….chaand din pehle ayi ladki tumhare best friend se barke hogayi tumhare liye?
Sanskar;Exactly Ragini…i know her for some months only…and I understood her…but u…being her elder sister…..u could not understand her…
Rags:Why r u supporting that girl?
Sanskar:Maybe because that girl is my wife… or because I love her a lot…
Rags;Neil…
Sanskar;Get this straight…u r an idiot..that u believe Vidhi….but I’m not an idiot like u… u can trust your so called friend Vidhi but not your sister..so why can’t I support my wife?I know Swara very well….and yeah Ragini….plz don’t try to say anything to Laksh…he doesn’t remember u…so if u say anything against her then….to Laksh then he will even hate u…..
Rags:So u hate me?
Sanskar:No actually..i just pity your thinking sense…
Sanskar leaves from there…(As always Swara heard the whole convo)
Swara goes near Ragini..
Ragini:Seee Swara..u snatched everything from me..
Swara smiles:Di..I’m not snatching anything from u..u r sending everything..everyone away from yourself..di….u said na..i know this Laksh more than anyone else does?So..I’m telling u….change your mindset..warna pyar toh chodo..nafrat karega woh apse….

Swara leaves from there…..She is crying in her room(She is sitting on the floor)….Sanskar comes there and sees her crying..He understands that its because of Ragini…Sanskar sits beside her…
Sankar;Kya hua?
Swara;Pyar..
Sanskar;Kya?
Swara;Kyu mujse itni pyar karte ho tum?
Sanskar:What r u saying?
Swara hugs her and cries….
Swara;U r the most idiot person I have ever met…..u…u love me..so why didn’t u tell me?
Sanskar:No…i don’t love u…
Swara:U don’t?
Sanskar stands and is about to go from there..Swaa holds his hand..
Swara;U don’t?
Sanskar:No….
Swara:U don’t?(Swara comes very close to Sanskar….they r looking into eachother’s eyes…Now Sanskar is unable to answer….
Swara:I love u….
Sanskar is still standing speechless…
Swara;Areeehhhhh…i said I love u..now if u say that u don’t love me then trust me…i will…umm I will….meh rooh dungi…sacchiiii
Sanskar hugs her:I will never let u cry…………i can’t see tears in your eyes…i want to see a smile on your face only…u r my first love..true love and also my last love…..
Swara:U supported me…..u said all those things to di…who is your best friend….only for me…because of me..all your relations r….
Sanskar:Swara….my relation with u is the most important thing..for me…i was angry on Ragini.. because she said all that about u…. she believed Vidhi and not u…i can’t tolerate anyone speaking bad about Ragini cause she is my bestie….and same thing goes in your case….i can’t hear anything bad against u…..even Ragini can’t say anything against u…….
Swara:Sanskar…Vidhi provoked her…its not her fault..
San:Vidhi misguided u too…and Ragini misunderstood u…but u..u r supporting her….Raginiis your elder sister..but u r more matured and understanding…..

Precap:Not decided yet…..

Credit to: Eva

61 comments

  1. kavya

    yrrrr.I lov rag
    buttt u continue making her part worst
    sry if I hurt
    but in all ur ff tilll now. I love rag but in this I can’t go well
    sry again

    • Eva

      No prob dear..u just shared your opinion…Ragini will soon get to see Vidhi’s truth….and they will be Swaragini once again…

  2. Priya

    Why are you making rags bad. Please unite Swaragini. I love your ff but don’t make rags evil,plzzzzz. Sorry if I hurt you

  3. Swe3ty

    Swara the mahan…I am fan helly…but making ragini worst is not a gud thing….I hope should be somewhat matured for u r thinking towards her

  4. survi

    Good epi eva dear…l have read all ur ffs but never commented…especially ur two seasons of samjhota and l hate u too…so lovely they r and when u announced that u r coming with samjhota season 3, l couldn’t control my excitement and commented here…really come back soon after ur exams with ur ffs…also all the best for ur exams…just l request please in ur next ff can u give a little importance to Ragini too just like in l hate u too as l read only ur ffs hence requesting u…l requested it as m a Ragini fan and l also like the pair Ragsan but if u don’t do it too, no problem l ll still read ur ff…as u r the writer u know the best about ur story…and if l have hurt u by this request l m sorry it wasn’t my intention, keep writing and entertaining us?

    • Eva

      Awwww…thank u for the best wishes for my exams..i really need them..and I will give importance to Ragini as well..

  5. Guys.. Chill .., she is not making ragini evil.. She is just misunderstood just like swara in the beginning.. Let Eva continue her storyline.. Let her do what she wants.. Pls .. Pls.. Don’t tell her to make variations.. Support her and help her.. Appreciate her and not doubt her

    Eva .. Today’s episode was awesome .. Kiddo don’t change ur storyline for anyone or anything.. I just love thee way u write and tge way UR story goes .. Listen to ur heart and rock .. I’ll be there for u ..

    Badly ..badly .. Waiting for samjhota 3 .. Come back with the next epi of Rishto ki Dastan soon but don’t hamper ur studies.. Tell me something about it school life.. Probably u r in 9th.. So lemme tell u .. Enjoy class 9th.. It’s the best phase of school life.. U won’t know when this time will end.. Class 9 th is really the best ever class.. And u will get to know it only when this school life will end.. Enjoy to the fullest .. Love ur life and live it with zeal… ?

    • Eva

      Riya…u understand me so well…i will be in class 9 within a month…and I’m enjoying my school life…koi kasar nehi chodti hu mein..we friends teasing each other and doing mimicry of our teachers..all that…my friends bring phones at school..we click pics…THE AMAZING PART IS WE CLICK PICS WITH OUR TEACHER AS WELL…i have lots of memories…most were bitter…but class 8 was life changing for me..it bought full happiness…now I’m like jile apni zindegi…so enjoying my school life..

      • Good .. Enjoy.. Oops in ur case it’s class 8.. In my case it was class 7… I was really a shy girl and all those comments which I used to recieve were really bitter but then my jolly friends changed the whole atmosphere… Oops they are my first crushes and lovers.. Can’t help praising them ??

  6. Piya

    Yar story is good… but its true tht u give less importance to ragini character…. from last few last episodes u strt showing her negative nd eventually u don’t show much scene between ragini, laksh,siya…. its just a humble request tht plzz don’t make ragini character negative…. otherwise its ur story, u have all the rights to decide abt story line…

    • Eva

      Yap…my bad..i could not give same importance to Ragini…Ragini is not negative…all the problems will be solved soon….thank for this opinion…i will think about giving some Siya and Raglak’s scenes…

  7. Gayu

    When vidhi misguided swara, she made her jiju fall for her but she is mahaan. Bcoz of vidhi if Ragini spoke bad things about swara then she is worst. Why this partiality yar? I am Ragini fan but I like swara too. But not the Mahan swara I like detective one.

    • Revti

      Well..u can’t just compare Swara and Ragini’s situation…Swara was misguided by Vidhi…fine..she trusted her as Vidhi is Ragii’s friend…now u tell me…on this whole universe…which girl will believe a friend and not her own sister?Swara did everything for Ragini..and Ragini is speaking against her…Sanky…he did not trust the things which were said to Ragini by Vidhi..because he knew Vidhi’s revenge on him and all that….Swara is always mahan….Ragini told so many things….and called her sister characterless…that sister who has put everything on stake because of her….Ragini is not negative…and yap..she did not make her jiju fall for her…she made Sanky fall for her….as according to her Sanky was Ragini’s culprit…Laksh fell for her..and at last she thought to take revenge on Sanky by marrying Laksh….

      • Vishakha

        Yap…i agree with Revti….Swaragini’s culprit is same but not situations…so judging them on that basis won’t be a fair job….

  8. Mugdha

    Evu….it was fabulous….and people….Ragini is not negative here…..she has just misunderstood relations..and that’s why its name is also rishto ke dasta…haina?
    Eva..dear plz go with your storyline….cause….u write perfect stories….no need to change anything seeing the comments…

  9. Niharika

    Eva….so sorry…i couldn’t comment on your previous episodes….i read all of them today…u know what….in your previous episode…u gave everyone’s pov…their pov were so correct for that situation…Ragini’s insecurity…that’s justified…and Swara’s behavior too……this insecurity is so true….what we see in serials…..r something because of which we call them serials…like heroins doing mahan sacrifices….and thinking positive about each and every character…u showed reality…keep writing dear..

  10. Vibha

    Yippiii..i was waiting for swasan confession…my question is r u pairing Radhika and Laksh?If yes…then i would be very happy…cause i don’t like Ragini…hate Ragsan and Raglak…

    • Eva

      Plz dear don’t say that u hate Ragini…she is now positive in the serial…btw thank u…and Radhika and Laksh?Lets see…

  11. Niti

    Hey sis…this was another awesome episode…u nailed it as always….i hope Ragini sudharjaye….uske ankho peh jo patti badhi huyi hai woh utar jaye…waiting for the next episode…

  12. Jhanvi

    I am okay with swasan and its your story you can do wavy we you wish bahut just wanted to know that if you wanted to do swasan then why you kept poll?

  13. Riddhi

    When i read about Mr and Mrs Khanna…i remembered your first few episodes of rishto ki dastan…..awwwwww..my swalak….their nok jhok and that couple drama….I’m a swalak fan…but i’m your fan too Eva…so…i’m reading it…i can ignore the couples only for your ff…..love u…

  14. Omg eva i jus love ur ff..superb ragini deserves dis i want such scene in real serial bt its ok at least in ur ff it fulfil..awesum waiting fr nxt

  15. Bisha

    Hey Eva!! I am dying to know what Ragini thinks of Swara when Sanskar made her understand the true situation. This grey Ragini is awesome. It more wonderfully portrayed than grey Swara, I tell you. Let me see where do her misunderstandings take her!!

    as alwys u are beyond awesome. I don’t really have a good vocabulary to compliment you. So dear, keep writing.. and its an awesomme epi!! Vidhi is an wonderfully portrayed negative chacracter.. WOHOO!!!

    To Ragini,
    Dear, you could have payed heed to your sister rather than a friend, may be she is your best friend dear. Tumne ye thik nahi kiya. Aspas k log tumhari is kamjori ka kaisa faida uthane ka mauka mil gaya. Sudhar jao. Dekho, Swara v sudhar gayi. R tumio shudhre jabe. Eva acche na!! 😉 🙂 ;-D..
    To My Cutie Sis Eva,
    Tumi khub bhalo. Ebhabei kore likhe jao. r ebhabei ananodo dite thako.!! 🙂

    • Eva

      Bishaa…❤?? sis..and u have a good vocabulary..and Vidhi…yeah…she is the first villain..i never included a villain in my ff…but this time I did..and she became such a cruel villain…who created all the probs and misunderstandings..any ways thank u….btw I’m reading your ff too..and I will try to comment on that..i don’t get enough time to comment..but I’m a regular reader of your ff…u r an awesome writer…i love your ffs..

  16. Anjali

    Superb epi eva!!!!

    Sorry right now… I can’t tell more… but u abs loved it!!! ??

    And love you too…???

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