Red String of Fate (RagSan) – Chapter 8


Thanks for all your comments. I hope you continue to find this interesting. This is the next part of the series. Thanks – Azure


Sanskar woke up the next day with a terrible headache. “Ahhh!” he let out as he tried to get up before falling back into the bed.

Ragini who had just gotten ready, rushed over to him “Are you okay?” she asked concerned

“No” he moaned in pain “My head hurts!”

Ragini touched his head gently for a second, before trying to help him sit up a bit “Here, drink this. It will make you feel better” she said as she brought a glass close to his lips

“What is it?” he said in a pained voice

“Just drink it” Ragini told him softly, helping tip the liquid into his mouth

“What was that?” Sanskar said, moving his head away clutching it, after a few sips had been forced down his mouth

“Lemon water with lot of salt in it” Ragini explained calmly

“Eww!” Sanskar said still not opening his eyes and leaning on her.

“Come on” Ragini said helping him stand, with great difficultly. He was too heavy for him to support but she tried to still stumble towards the destination

“Don’t feel good” Sanskar complained almost like a child

“I know” Ragini said softly trying not to make him feel worse than he already was by talking loudly

After dragging him into the shower, she made him rest against the wall a bit before turning on cold water shower and jumping out of the shower area.

“Ahhh!!!” Sanskar screamed the moment the cold water rained on him. “Ragini!” he screamed as he rushed out of the shower

Ragini was just on her way out of the washroom when he stepped out “What the hell was that?” he exclaimed, widen eyed and angry

“That was cold water shower to help with the hangover” Ragini said innocently

“Have you gone crazy!” Sanskar shot at her, while looking down at himself. He and his clothes were all drenched. He was wearing his normal comfortable night clothes “What am I wearing?” he asked looking at his clothes

“Your night clothes” Ragini said, a bit confused by the question

“I can see that! How did I get into them? Who changed my clothes?” Sanskar asked

“Who do you think?” Ragini asked innocently, her lips curling up just a bit

“You??” Sanskar asked confused

“May be” Ragini said with a shrug of her shoulder

“What!! So you took advantage of me when I was not in my senses?” Sanskar asked surprised

“Yup” Ragini said, emphasizing the ‘p’

Sanskar’s jaw clenched and he lunged at her hand, holding it tightly and dragging her into the shower in a matter of seconds

“Sanskar!” Ragini let out a surprised scream and before she knew it, she was standing under cold water shower “Ahhhhh!!” she screamed in shock, trying to rush out there right after the water hit her. But Sanskar held her hands behind her and trapped her in the shower “Sanskar! Let go of me” she screamed at him

“So you changed my clothes?” Sanskar asked her over the sound of the water

“Sanskar! It is cold” Ragini complained, trying to free herself from his grip.

“Good! You know how I felt then” Sanskar told her

“Sanskar, that was for your hangover. I was trying to help” Ragini protested

“Who does that for hangover?” Sanskar asked her sarcastically

“Sanskar let me go” Ragini pleaded

“Did you change my clothes?” Sanskar asked her, not let his grip loosen

“No. Adarsh bhaiyaa did” Ragini told him

Sanskar released his grip on her and turned off the water “See, that wasn’t so hard, was it?”

Ragini glared at him “You drenched me!” he exclaimed

Sanskar cleared his throat “Did you forget what you did to me?” he asked

“I was trying to help with the hangover” Ragini said genuinely

“Who told you this great solution?” Sanskar asked

“My friends at the uni. That is what we did when they had hangover as well” Ragini told him innocently

Sanskar shook his head hearing this but had a smile on his face looking at her innocence. Ragini started to shiver a bit because of the cold shower. Sanskar saw this and pulled her under the shower again.

“What are you doing?” she asked through chattering teeth.

Sanskar did not speak but turned on the shower again but this time with warm water. “Feeling better?” he asked her softly

Ragini glared at him, looking at herself again “Look at what you have done?” she told him. She had been drenched to the bone

“Don’t blame me for this” Sanskar said “This is all because of your comment” he told her pushing her out of the shower area “Leave me now and let me shower. Unless you really are thinking of taking advantage of me” Sanskar teased her, lifting his eyebrows suggestively at her

Ragini’s eyes widened and she rushed out of the washroom.

Sanskar chuckled seeing her run out “Crazy!” he muttered to himself before getting on with his shower.

Sanskar finished his shower and tried to open the washroom door only to realize that it was locked from outside. He banged the door “Ragini!” he called out loudly

“What?” she called out from outside

“Open the door!” he ordered her

“I am changing my clothes. Wait for a few minutes” she called out

“Open the door Ragini!” he said banging the door again “You can change the clothes in here. I am not going to stand here like this in the washroom until you finish changing” he told her feeling a bit annoyed

“Close your eyes” Ragini told him. He voice a lot closer now, just outside the door

“What!” Sanskar questioned her

“Close your eyes. I am not completely dressed.” Ragini told him again “I will open the door and let you out and change in the washroom instead” she explained from the other side of the door.

“Fine” Sanskar said standing akimbo with a towel wrapped around his waist

“Sanskar!” Ragini screamed

“What?” Sanskar asked startled, worried as to what had made he scream. He was about to open his eyes when she let out a quick “Don’t open your eyes!”

“What happened?” Sanskar asked again, still feeling worried, but keeping his eyes closed

“Why aren’t you wearing any clothes?” Ragini asked him. She had turned around, her back facing him now as she bundled the still undraped saree in her hands.

“Hello! What do you call this towel that I am wearing?” Sanskar shot at her “And you are the one to blame for this”

“How is this my fault?” Ragini asked him

“You were the one who threw me in the shower without any change of clothes” Sanskar answered her “How long am I going to have to stand like this?” Sanskar asked her “I am going to open my eyes now” he muttered, throwing his hands in the air.

“Don’t!” came her panicked response before she rushed over and shoved him out of the washroom closing the door.

It was pretty late by the time Ragini was all dressed up and ready. Sanskar seemed to have already left the room by the time she came out of the washroom. It still took her a bit of time to drape the saree. True they had done some shopping for new clothes already last evening, but they had not yet been washed and cleaned for them to be ready for use.

Ragini rushed downstairs and quickly prayed at the temple before walking towards the kitchen. Just then Sanskar called out from behind her “You are really late” he told her as he leaned against the pillar by the temple

“It is not a good thing for the new bahu of the family to do” he said giving her a serious expression.

Ragini glared at him “You are the reason why I am late” before turning to leave

“Badi Maa and Mom were asking about you” Sanskar told her. Ragini paused for a second but didn’t turn “Don’t worry I spoke to them”

Ragini turned around narrowing her eyes “What exactly did you tell them?”

“Only the truth” Sanskar said innocently “Did you want me to lie to them?” he asked raising his eyebrow

Ragini was about to speak but she heard Pari Bhabhi called out to her “Ragini, you are here?” she said

Ragini nodded and rushed to the kitchen to help them, giving a glance to Sanskar as she went in, wondering what exactly he had said to them.

“Maa, Mom, I am really sorry” Ragini told them sincerely as she rushed around to help them “I wont be late again, I promise” she assured them

“Don’t worry” Badi Maa said even as Sujata let out a giggle “It happens”

Ragini looked at them, her heart missing a beat

Sujata added teasingly “Just don’t come in late every day”

Ragini nodded, a bit concerned about what was going on here

“Sujata, she won’t be late every day. Will you Ragini?” AP asked her teasingly. Ragini shook her head but didn’t say anything else “This was her first time bathing and getting her husband ready after all” she said letting out a giggle

Ragini’s eyes widened as she gasped “What?” she squeaked

“We are all married women here. You don’t need to be shy about this” AP told her gently taking pity on her

“But Maa” Ragini tried to say just as Sanskar walked in there

“Mom!” Sanskar said walking in carrying a button “The button on my shirt came off”

“So? Just change the shirt” Sujata told him, throwing a teasing smile at Ragini

“But I want to wear this shirt today!” Sanskar cribbed. Ragini glared at him.

“Sujata, you don’t understand, he wants to wear this shirt only” AP told Sujata with a teasing smile

“Don’t look at me” Sujata said with a teasing smile “After marriage it is the wife’s responsibility to look after all this. Ask your wife” he told him

“Absolutely correct Sujata. Go help him Ragini” AP said with a teasing smile

“Maa there is a lot of work to be done here” Ragini said making an excuse

“Don’t worry, we will manage the work” Pari cut in

“But” Ragini tried to say

“No more buts!” Sujata told her “Go help him”

Ragini sighed and walked towards him, glaring at him. He thrust the button towards her, making an innocent face as he followed her out of the kitchen. As they walked out, they heard loud giggles from the kitchen. Ragini glared more at him as she strode towards their room

“This is all your doing!” she shot at him, indicating the giggle

“What! What did I do? My button came off” he said innocently

Ragini glared at him “It did come off! You pulled it off! How could you do that?”

“Cold shower!” he said coughing

“hawwh! And what about the cold shower you threw me under?” Ragini shot at him “And I was just trying to help you with hangover. This is what I get for helping you”

“Cold shower isn’t the solution for hangover” Sanskar explained

“How was I supposed to know that? That is what my friends did” Ragini said softly “And you! How could you say all those things to Maa and Mom? How could you lie to them?”

“What?” Sanskar said throwing his arms in the air, even as they continued to walk up the stairs “There was not even a single word in there that was untrue. Now I cannot help how they interpret it” Sanskar asked with a teasing smile on his face

“You knew how they would interpret it!” Ragini glared at him “How could you do that?”

“Did you forget the ‘I changed your clothes’ shunt” Sanskar asked her

“I was just kidding” Ragini explained “I have no interest in taking your virtue”

“You are sure, right?” Sanskar said pulling his jacket close to him as if covering himself “I am not sure about your intent now”

Ragini rolled her eyes at his antic “Your virtue is complete safe” she told him

“Pheww!” he said as if making to wipe sweat from his forehead

Ragini hit him on the arm

“What! I was really worried” Sanskar said acting afforted

“Very funny!” Ragini said with a smile of her own, just as they reached their room, shaking at her head at his behavior.

Ragini went off to get some needle and thread

“Don’t bother with the button” Sanskar told her “I will change the shirt”

“Don’t” Ragini told him “I am already going to get teased for this. I don’t know what will happen when you do that”

“Ohh! They will think you wanted to take advantage of me and destroyed my shirt” Sanskar said teasingly

“Shut up” Ragini said glaring at him for the comment “Take off your shirt”

“What?” Sanskar asked “You are after my virtue!” he said with a chuckle

Ragini hit him on the arm “Keep the shirt on. It will be better”

Ragini started to sew the button on his shirt when he spoke “You aren’t going to prick me with this right?” he said pointing to the needle

“It would serve you right if I did” Ragini told him

“You do know how to sew a button, right?” Sanskar said giving her a mock skeptical look

“I have been doing this since I was 5. I run a tailoring shop” Ragini said sarcastically”

“How did you get to be so sarcastic?” Sanskar asked her

“Irritating friends” Ragini told him with a raised eyebrow

Sanskar poked her on the side of the waist for the comment, making Ragini’s hand move and prick him.

“Oww!! You pricked me!” Sanskar complained

“Serve you right for poking me” Ragini said, even as a smile broke across her lips looking at his sulking expression “Sorry” she told him softly

“hmmmm” he said looking away

“Sanskar!” Ragini said with a smile on her face

“What!” Sanskar asked her still looking upset

“I said sorry” Ragini told him

“Sorry for what?” Sanskar asked her with a raised eyebrow

“For poking you with the needle” Ragini told him with a smile

“And?” Sanksar asked her

“And for the cold shower” Ragini said making an innocent face

“And?” Sanskar asked

“And what?” Ragini asked confused

“What about the teasing over my virtue?” Sanskar asked her

Ragini let out a snort before schooling her expression and adding “Okay. For that as well” Sanskar nodded looking satisfied “Now what about you?”

“What about me?” Sanskar asked

“Don’t you have anything to say sorry about?” Ragini asked him as she continued to sew the button

“Do I?” Sanskar said looking confused. Ragini gave him a look. Sanskar sobered and gave her a soft smile “Okay I am sorry too!”

“For?” Ragini asked him

“For teasing you” Sanskar said. Seeing Ragini’s raised eyebrow he added “And for what I told Maa and Mom” before adding “And for that cold shower”

Ragini nodded “I am just going to get scissor to cut the thread. Don’t move” she instructed Sanskar as she walked away.

Sanskar tried to cut the thread himself and got himself pricked with the needle “Oww!”

Ragini rushed over. She took her finger and sucked on it for a minute before letting it go “You are really impatient. I was just getting the scissor. Why couldn’t you wait for a few seconds?” she asked him.

Sanskar threw an innocent look at her. She shook her head and cut the thread with her teeth. She buttoned the shirt, running her hand over it before giving Sanskar a gentle smile and going over to put the needle away.

She came back towards him with a glass of water and a pill “For your headache” she told him gently

“Thanks” he told her quickly gulping the pill down

Ragini was about the leave, when he said “And thanks for taking care of me when I had the hangover”

Ragini walked back towards him and gave him a gentle smile “That is what friends do”

Sanskar nodded

Ragini paused for a bit before asking “Why did you drink so much if you aren’t used to drinking?”

“I am used to drinking” Sanskar countered “It is just that I usually drink wine or champagne and not whiskey”

“Why did you drink if then?” Ragini asked concerned “Is everything okay? Did something happen” she asked concerned

Sanskar looked at her. Her face showing the concern for him and reflecting her innocence. He looked away. How could he meet her eyes after what happened yesterday? How could he tell her what happened? Especially when he had let her down. He hadn’t stood up for her.

“It was nothing” Sanskar told her softly, finally looking at her

“Really?” Ragini asked, sensing that that wasn’t it, but she wanted to let Sanskar talk to her in his own time.

“It is nothing. Just a silly fight with someone. Don’t worry about it” Sanskar told her finally

Ragini looked at him critically for a moment, not convinced about the answer. But she nodded at him finally, deciding to give him some time “I better get back to the kitchen” she told him “I am going to get a lot of teasing from them” Ragini told him, trying to change the subject “You have to do something nice for me, to make it up to me” she said with a warm smile

“I will make up to you for it” Sanskar said, with a warm smile breaking on his face as well.

Ragini went away

“Thanks for being such a wonderful friend” Sanskar said softly after she left “I don’t think I have been as good a friend to you though”

Precap – Dosti ki hai, nibhaani toh padegi

Link to previous chapters

Credit to: Azure

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  1. Lovely ( FF Broken heart)

    Love it love it Thank you for this amazing update azure 🙂

    1. thanks soo so much lovely….:) 😉 v v happy that u loved it 🙂

    1. Thanks so much kriya 🙂

    1. thanks so much mamu 🙂

  2. Awesome

    1. thanks so much swati 🙂

  3. The hardest of things fr a writer to communicate is the extraordinary ordinariness of most human happiness.. a few bring it off and yu is one of them..

    1. I cmpltly agree wid u
      trst me azure jst few of ur epis hv mde me a big big fan of ur writing
      u r jst superb!!!!!!!

      1. thanks so much sweety! you are really wonderful for saying this 🙂

    2. thanks so much for saying this….it means a lot to me… are quite the literary genius yourself with a way with the words 🙂 🙂 🙂

  4. i addicted to this ff…. just love it… superb episode

    1. thanks so much kirti 🙂 🙂 you made me really happy reading that u like it so much …big hug!

    1. thanks so much dhara 🙂

  5. Its awesome…. totally in love with ur story ??

    1. thanks so much ridhi 🙂 🙂 …in love with your comment 😉

    1. thanks so much naimi 🙂

    1. thanks so much ammy 🙂 🙂 🙂

  6. Amazing update.. ragsan scenes r awesome…

    1. thanks so much taiana …..really glad u liked their scenes 🙂 🙂

  7. Superb lyk alwayz!!!
    I luv ur writing skills it seems so natural n ordinary bt its extraordinary fr me i luv it d way u r describing dem
    Their feelings
    from strangers to friends to best friends n nw waiting fr d luvrs prt
    bt honestly i m vry mch in luv wid ur ff
    thnku fr d superb story
    Jst luv ur ff
    Plz upload d nxt prt soon
    Waiting fr it!!!!!!! Seriously!!!!!!!!
    a big hug frm my syd fr u <3 😀

    1. you are really so sweet ahaha! love you for saying this! i am so glad i could bring out their emotions the right way and make a smooth transition for them from strangers to best friends…and yes i hope that when they fall in will like how they are 😉 …some more time to go for that though…a few more things to come before. ….i am so glad u love this ff. it makes it worth the effort….trust me. big big hug from my side too!

  8. Excellent epi……I liked it very much…..your ff is something special …….my fav ff is this and my fav writer is u……ragsan moments are awesome………I am eagerly waiting for u next update………

    1. thanks so so much fira…..your comment is special to me too….thanks for saying this. it means a lot to me. i am really glad this had become your favourite and that you loved the ragsan scenes …big big hug dear 🙂 🙂

  9. Amazing?

    1. thanks so much lila…really glad u loved it 🙂

  10. Uff!! I am so so sorry for not commenting. *puppy eyes*.
    Dear, I totally admire your writing. Its such a flawless and cute story. I add this in my special story list. I loved each and everything of RagSanfriendship. A very beautiful bond without any awkwardness. Wow!! Girl I wont say much today as I am terribly busy over something. Just keep writing. I already ranted. See!! 🙂 😀

    1. it is no problem, bisha…please no sorries 🙂 you are really sweet for saying that it is flawless….i hope i don’t let you don’t with any of future updates 🙂 ….thanks for adding it to your special list. v v happy that u found their bond to be wonderful. i wanted it come across as very natural and very organic. it is so them that it is right for them in their heart in every way…..for not in its friendship form. big hug!

  11. Hi dear…ok before writing anything m warning u that m going to write a long comment so please bear and don’t throw rotten tomatoes?
    What can I say about this epi…Terrific(no no already used it), Amazing(no must have used it a thousand times here), Superb(definitely a big NO!!!)…so u see no more words left for ur extraordinary writing…i can only say- AWESOMENESS OVERLOADED???How do you manage to write such beautiful and lovable epi is still a mystery to me…even bigger than ur already mysterious and thrilling storyline…i definitely don’t comment much though i read a lot of ffs here but urs is very special, as if my fingers are under a trance and they won’t leave this page without complimenting u for beautiful efforts for putting out a story so engrossing…literary I have become ur JABRA FAN( sorry for being too much nautanki…but can’t control?)…today’s episode was full of Ragsan and I was more than happy, it not only gave me a much needed break from my hilarious preparation for the horrific entrance exams that m going to give but also made me laugh heartily looking at this cute couple’s childish antics…A big thank you again for this ff…

    And now this is a little personal but i hope no pray that you don’t mind and forgive me thinking me as ur small sis(i don’t know if u ll consider it)
    So dear di what are u doing as in studying or working?where are u from?did u write any other ff, if so can u tell me how to read them?
    In last epi going through comments i saw Sree di’s comment, she mentioned about you writing in India forums so I would love to read them too but I don’t know how?so please clear my confusion….Di ur real name is Sapna na…and it suits u aptly as u r making ur readers live in a dream with ur writing as I m completely transported to another world,and it looks like such intriguing novel in which you expect things to happen in a particular course but lo and behold you have another twist ready…seriously you should write and publish your novels and I want to become the 1st buyer of ur fantastic book?…And I like ur pen name Azure too as u r like the clear blue sky of October who spreads smiles with ur work and words….

    Ok ok…enough of my bakwas…u ll be very bored…so sorry to waste ur time but whatever I said I truly meant it each and every word…and if your annoyed by those personal queries then don’t answer didn’t mean to intrude your privacy in any manner…ok bye for now as I have to again drown into my pile of books and I ll eagerly wait for your next chapter with bated breath….Lastly a big big teddy bear hug for you?????

    1. I am Jabra fan of your comments adu dear… got my name correct…it is sapna. i am from mumbai. i work in finance field…u know stocks/shares etc. so as u can guess nothing to do with literature. this is my hobby. i write on india forums mostly. this is my first story here. my username there is foresight. if you go there and check for my posts you should find the link to my stories in my signature. you need to login there to read any of my stories or chapters though. they are members only. they are all swasan though….so if you are okay to read their stories go ahead. i have written 4 stories and 1 one shot there. i was a swasan fan earlier as a jodi and ragini as a character… before swara turned adarsh bahu and made me lose interest in the swasan….now i only like and read ragsan stories. about writing book…thanks so much for saying that. lets see if it is fated may be some day it will happen.

      you study well and crack your entrance exams….what field are you getting into? best luck for the exams dear. i am glad today’s epi gave you some much needed respite from studies.. 🙂 🙂 big big teddy bear hug to you from me too!

      1. Thank u so much di for the wishes and sharing about ur life a little bit…I am from bhubaneswar,odisha…I recently completed my 12th nd m interested in medical but have also given JEE MAINS just in case…u see m a very confused idiot…My nickname is Adu..But my real name is a pathetic one so I’ll tell that some other day when ur mood is off and I can make u smile by listening my funny name…just like u I too love to read and write mostly read though…but I might write an ff after my exams and I really want ur valuable suggestions towards the story at that time…

        Well I like both SwaSan and RagSan but I love RagSan more but no problem for ur stupendous story writing skills I ll definitely read them too…and I shall pray that all ur wishes come true in ur life and u remain jolly and jovial forever:):):)

      2. i will wait for you to tell me the name some day:) medical is a nice field….tough one….but if done with the right intent it is very noble. best luck with studies…i know it is very very tough and you need to get into the right college to have access to the best teachers and equipment and patients. u should post something that u have written…it would be nice to read it. i would love to at least. thanks so much for your wishes dear….so so sweet of you. may all ur wishes come true too! lots of happiness to you! and i hope u get into your choice of college. big hug!

  12. I’M a silent reader i read all Ragsan ff But i’M in love with ur ff i just love it it’s awesome story

    1. thanks so much kiran… is really nice to see someone who was silent reader come out and comment for a story. it feels door. thanks so much dear. i am v happy that i love it 🙂 🙂

    1. thanks so much dear 🙂 🙂

  13. Amazing chapter. U know ur especialty u describe typical romantic scenes with so much ease making ur ff different from others.????

    1. Thanks so much Amna….i am really glad that they came across as easy flowing. that is what i worry sometimes…if they are too cheesy and too typical. thanks for making me feel good that all is well. v good to read that.big big thanks! 🙂 🙂

      1. Hahaha all must hv showed with numerous eye locks nd lovely bckgrnd music but in reality v cnot hold r eyelids fr that much time nor there is any bg song .

        Dear l hv also written a swaragini ff Yeh aa gaye hm. PlsDo read it nd give me feedback.?

      2. of course amna….will will read u ff and comment. thanks for giving me the name. 🙂

  14. Super se upar really good pls make it even longer I really love your ff

    1. Thanks dear…really sweet of u. I will try. 🙂 🙂

  15. It’s niceee pls give me tr previous links pls

    1. Thanks dear……the links to previous chapters are at the end of the precap.

  16. awesome

    1. thanks so much lovely 🙂

  17. Wat a funny n teasing epi yaar buddy……lovd d way both did 2 get d hangovr katham….n d teasing of elders……n d button scene too…lovd d epi….
    How r u azure….lots of love n hugs….

    1. thanks so much dev….glad u liked all the teasing and found it funny. i am all okay. thanks for asking. and thanks for loving the epi. how r u? 🙂 🙂

  18. Such a beautiful story.. Unlyk other fictions u ddn rush to romance.. Like the way you showing their growing bonding. Really love this ragsan friendship.. Juz keep going.. Don’t end this soon. We AL juz wait for this update.

    1. thanks so much liz…..i am really happy that you like the way i am building their bond. i wanted it to be solid and organic. really glad u are liking their friendship. big big thanks for waiting for the updates 🙂 🙂

  19. Amazing fantastic i loved ur ff alotttttttt dear

    1. thanks so much venni…..thanks os much for loving it 🙂 🙂 i was v happy to read this

  20. Awesome epi…..pls start the love story btwn them

    1. thanks so much sherin……their love story will also start…just give them some more time. 😉

  21. Awsm dear..loved the bond btw ragsan..

    1. thanks so much rakhi…..v happy u loved their bond 🙂

  22. Wow amazing sanky and ragini are just mindblowing dosti mein he itna cute hai to pyar ho gaya to kitna cute hoga I m waiting for that and di that’s so sweet epi I just loved it especially that sanky’s teasing part was just mind blowing u nailed it ☺☺☺

    1. thanks so so much priya…..glad u liked their friendship and found it cute….about their love 😉 u have to tell me how u find it once it starts 😉 i am v happy u liked the teasing part…..sanky wanted to get her teased by his moms so he pulled the button himself…silly guy…but ragini is starting to make him smile.

      1. Oh I thought that the butten came of itself it was done by him intentionally hmm good naughty sanky?? ya di I m eagerly waiting for their love story to start….

      2. yes naughty sanky alright. ragini knew it was his stunt alright that is why she told him he pulled it.

  23. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz)

    Aw my girl (sissy)!!! Why are you so amazing for?? You’re very awesome and impressive…
    I just loved this episode so much.
    Love you Hun~Nusz

    1. thanksssssssssssssss sooooooooooo much. you are making me blush with all ur compliments. so so sweet….am v v happy u loved it. lots of love right back at ya! big big hug!

  24. very nice…..good friendship bond b\w Ragsan
    ….i like it…….
    update soon?

    1. thanks so much sinzo……really happy u liked their friendship bond…..will try to update soon. i will be starting to write the next part soon tonite

  25. absolutely wonderful…Real nice ragsan

    1. thanks so much Yaz,…..glad u liked it 🙂

  26. Awesome awesome awesome di you are a superb writer…I am really addicted to your ff…….I have a writing your profession…if not u definitely have scope …u may be feeling I am exaggerating but it is my genuine opinion…u are just brilliant in expressing emotions…and one more thing which I only experiencing in your ff is that….when I complete reading I feel it is so short but then I again scroll to read once again then I find that it is actually so long u write in such a way that I think I can see all that infront of me…but don’t think that I am telling u to update longer because I hate typing and therefore I don’t want to be greedy….typing is really boring I always wonder how u type so much May be u like typing…thank u so much for this wonderful ff…lastly sorry for such a long comment I only don’t know how I typed this much . …update next part soon

    1. big big big hug sweety! 🙂 🙂 thanks for saying such sweet things about my writing. hahaha writing in not my profession. it is my hobby. i work in finance. so as u can guess it is poles apart. i hope some day i can do some proper writing on side while i work. lets see. thanks for sharing ur observation on the reading length……i am glad u feel that….i am happy that it is interesting enough that it doesnt feel so long. but you are writing typing is boring. i sometimes have to push myself to and these end up to be 7-9 pages of typing usually. so take a few hours. but i am so glad that you can visualise the story because of it. it makes the effort worth it. lots of love dear

  27. di u r awesome… 🙂

    1. thanks so much sarika dear 🙂 🙂 bug hug

  28. Superb. Awesum keep it up…. As I said ur a good writter and once again NYC story <3

    1. thanks so much Ina…..:) 🙂 really happy u have been liking it so far. and thanks so much for saying i am good writer….means a lot 🙂 🙂

  29. Azure! I read all the parts of ur ff @ once! Oh God!?First time am so much in love with RagSan?Am basically a Raglak fan,but…But seriously ur story had made me crazy enough to set aside my books and complete reading it fully!?I loved it so much! The most hilarious thing was when Sanskar tells the mischievous kid that he’s chick magnet! N the most terrible thing was his explanation??I was visualizing a magnet with baby chickens on it??

    1. Ramya…..thanks so so much for your sweet comment…..i am really glad that despite being a raglak love, this story made u like ragsan in this one……so so glad to read that. haha…sanskar got the first taste of going against a kid and saying somethings that u shouldn’t. ashu has been giving him lots of shocks that way…..but ashu has been a cupid in disguise for ragsan as well. good that this story has been giving u some respite and entertainment break from books. hope it didnt disrupt your studies too much…take care and best luck with exams

  30. Di I thought to share this thing with u actually I m n my native place now and I m very anger at my bro for not letting Me to watch skr by saying that if u go alone u l see ghost I m really afraid of ghosts ( my native is a village) so that i stayed back and we all ten children came home 10:00 pm as I said I m angry at my bro I started to rear this chap once again to make my mood good andi literally started to laugh my bro ask y r u laughing alone like a mad when I said him to read this part he said that I think she completed literature as ur eng is fluent when I said about u he said that she is really a knowledgeable person….. Saying me mad he also started to laugh….. He said that he can’t understand some of the words too but it sounds good he said hats off to u… He completed 11th now..He said after this improve ur eng too…I thought to share it sry if I have bored u actually when my bro said this I thought that if I said this to u how happy u l be I m really proud to be reader of this ff….. Sry for my bakwas di I m sry for wasting ur tym actually I couldn’t stop my self from telling this to u my dear dii…..sry if I made u feel bored…..

    1. Di he said to improve my English by reading ur ff…..

    2. priya dear….u are really sweet and u didnt bore me at all. please don’t worry about it. it was really sweet of you to tell me this….thanks to u and your bro to for the compliment. i have don’t any phd….i don’t think i could survive studying that long 🙂 …i have been reading a lot of english books since i was really very small and that was the main reason my english improved. i have also studied out of india for some time. the best way to improve english that i have learnt is to stop being worried that it isn’t good. that is the only thing that holds u back. when i was worried if what i am saying is correct, i held back. when i said it still even making a mistake, i learnt and improved. big big big hug to you and please don’t even think u are boring me! 🙂 🙂 hope u are having fun in native place…:)

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