Rectify : Manmarziyan part 20

Now Shanti Devi and Ardhika are at the same hospital, she is coming at the left side and Ardhika at the right side, they are almost coming closer and closer….

Niki: “Shanti Devi.”

Shanti turns her face toward Niki, while Nesam and Teji warn Ardhika about Shanti Devi being here.

Nesam: “Lets go Shanti Devi is here.”

Teji: “You guys go, we will talk about the next target at my house, I will check on Nani, I don’t trust that Shanti Devi one bit. Nani is taking a big risk saving you guys.”

Neil: “I think I should stay with you just in case she harms Niki.”

Teji: “No Neil she’ll get suspicious, I’ll keep an eye on her.”

Radhika: “Teji keep an eye on my mother, if she see Shanti Devi, she might get a heart attack again.”

Teji: “Don’t worry Radhika I’ll watch auntie too. You guys leave before she sees you.”

Sam: “We’ll go, but call us if anything happens.”

Teji: “Okay, now go.”

Ardhika and Nesam left the hospital. But outside they saw a crowd hitting Dinesh.

Neil: “Radhika, is that Dinesh all cover with tattoo.”

Sam: “It looks like he’s been beaten.”

Radhika: “Well he deserves it, now he will learn how a woman feel when men abuse women’s body.”

Arjun: “Why do I feel that you setup Dinesh.”

Radhika: “Your right Arjun, I did set him up, I got all the girls that he had harm, to take there revenge. Must say they’ve done a good job.”

Sam: “What’s your next plan.”

Radhika: “Let Niki and Teji come, then we will discuss our next target…

Next scene inside the hospital Niki and Shanti Devi

Shanti Devi: “My, my Niki Pandey, your still alive too bad you can’t walk.”

Niki Pandey with her anger face.

Niki: “Because of you, I am helpless, I can’t run and save my daughter.”

Shanti Devi: “I assume you have your daughter now.”

Niki lies to Shanti, because she wants to protect her daughter from her.

Niki: “And how can I have my daughter, when I can’t even walk.”

Shanti Devi: “Well if you don’t, she was useless, who ever has her could do what ever with her.”

Niki: “Watch what ever you say, what goes around comes around.”

Shanti Devi: “What do you mean.”

Niki: “You should watch over your son, what ever happen to Dinesh, could also happen to Suraj too, I mean there are lot of girls who are angry at him for raping them, who knows what they’ll do to Suraj.”

First time Niki saw fear in Shanti Devi’s eyes, Niki wonder what would happen if she saw Ardhika. She would go insane, and that’s what Niki wanted Shanti to go to mental hospital.

Shanti: “Whatever happen to Dinesh, it will not happen to my son. I will hire a best security guard for him.”

Niki: “You try your best in keeping your son safe from the rectifier.”

Shanti: “You know the rectifier, who is it?”

Niki: “Yes I know who the rectifier is, why don’t you come to my party, I will be celebrating my daughter’s birthday.”

Shanti: “But you don’t have your daughter with you.”

Niki: “She is always in my heart, beside don’t you want to meet the rectifier.”

Shanti: “And why should I believe you.”

Niki: ” It is up to you if you want to come or not, but the rectifier will be there.”

Niki turns her wheelchair to leave but stop to say..

Niki: “Your son is invited, make sure he gets a best security guard, never know what the rectifier will do.”

Niki leaves the hospital and gets outside to see the people hitting Dinesh with rocks, then she gets in the car while Teji gets in the car too.

Niki: “How is Mala.”

Teji: “Ankush took her home, she didn’t see Shanti, thank god for that. The rectifier are at our house to discuss our next target Suraj.”

Niki: “Yes, and I have a plan, and only talking to the rectifier will this planl work.”

Next scene Dinesh, Dilip and Riddhima.

When the people were done hitting him with the rock, he was in so much pain but death was not coming for him, he hated being humiliated like this, he saw Dilip and Riddhima, he went close to them, he goes down to Riddhima’s feet…

Dinesh: “Please Riddhima forgive me, please take this curse away from me.”

Riddhima: “Did you ever think about the girls that you raped, your crime is big only those girls that you hurt, you need to ask forgiveness.”

Dinesh: “But there too many.”

Dilip: “You did the crime, now you need to fix it.”

Riddhima: Lets go papa, why waste time on him, he needs to go through the pain the way those girls went through.”

Dilip and Riddhima leave while Dinesh has tears in his eyes…

Next scene all the 4 rectifier at Niki and Teji’s home…

The rectifier were already at Niki’s house, they were waiting for Niki and Teji to arrive, they need to talk about there next target Suraj. When Niki and Teji finally arrive.

Niki: “Good your all here, I want to discuss my plan…

Precap: Shanti will finally see Ardhika. Suraj is going to get torture. Final chapter

Hi guys, and happy Diwali, I will be ending rectify so that I can start my next ff on Mother’s Diary, hope you will like this one too…

Thank you guys who comment, silent reader, I would love to hear from you, you give me energy so do comment..

Bye now ta ta and happy Diwali once again….

33 comments

  1. heena

    did any one know the auther of mmz love for eternity plz tell her to update yar missing that ff
    and buddy ur ff so is so sprb i like it buddy pls update soon yar

    • Brin

      |Author

      Thank you so much arti viswanathan, and happy Diwali to you and your family, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ˜€

  2. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    Nice update brin. Eager to know how they will punish santi and Suraj.. Update next soon….
    Wish u happy Diwali 😊

  3. S.v

    |Registered Member

    what ?? so how when i man oh my god so many questions well dinesh its just a sample of what he did…… shanthi devi and Ardhika encounter she will die in shock and then last chapter now i will get attack yaar this is terribly amazing as so much is gonna happen soon god my head is spinning happy diwali brin love u tons and do say my wishes to ur cute lil princess…..

    • Brin

      |Author

      Thank you so much S.v, you didn’t read part 19 and I forgot to message you, I am very sorry, you can on my site to read part 19, I will update soon and happy Diwali to you and your family, stay blessed. πŸ˜€πŸ€—

  4. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Brin darling this is one of the awesome ff on aradhika…what next will be last one.. I can’t digest this yarr..suraj n shanti should get worst punishment than Dinesh got…so needs for chapter for tht na..plz extend it na….n today’s epi was super.. Good answer by ridhi….i m eager to see suraj getting punish…happy diwali dear..love u loads..tc

  5. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    Ending…sooo sooon…m happy about Dinesh torture and punishment….this shows how society stop strong against evil…we wanted that…waiting for Suraj to nail down…shanti Devi reaction must be hilarious…waiting for that…update mother’s diary too

  6. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Brin di,that was superb update.. πŸ™‚ I loved it.. πŸ˜€ Waiting for the last shot and the new story too.. πŸ˜€ Love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

  7. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Happy Diwali Brin…. nice update…eager 4 Ardhika shanti devi meet… last shot..!! Waiting 4 next shot….wanna know wat punishment u have for culprits…pls update soon…TC n loads of love

  8. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Di soo sorry for being late… I was bzy in one os… Diwali os competition… Beautiful epi di… Wonderful I just loved it… Thank you soo much for posting keep writing… Keep simleing… Happy Diwali

  9. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Brin… Brin… Brin… M soooooo sorry dear for commenting late…. And yeah happy Diwali dear..how is the celebration from ur side. And yeah this episode is totally thrilled…. I can’t control my nerves to encounter ardhika n Shanti devi family r off. So next is the end… Grt. N yeah very exited for mothers diary….al d best dear

  10. Jnana

    |Registered Member

    hey!!!!! sorry for being late….. awesome chappy dear…… eagerly waiting to see how suraj would get totured. update soon…. and happy diwali…..

  11. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Awesome chapter Brin….loved it ….finally Shanti Devi will be nailed….want her to plead πŸ™‚ loved it and sorry for being late dont know hw i missed:) love u

    • Brin

      |Author

      Thank you so much Gauri, I will update soon, you did say, you were going to be busy, so I understand, update your ff, when you have time, I’ll be waiting to read it, always stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  12. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous episode. …loved it to the coreeeee. …good punishment for dinesh…he deserved it….precap is very interesting. …love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug πŸ™‚

  13. Meen

    |Registered Member

    Hey brin……sorry for being late…..but u said next one will b d last one…….no…..don’t end this so soon…..add some twist or something… But don’t end this early……coming to d update….it was fabulous… I loved it to d core….loads of kisses…muuuuha

    • Brin

      |Author

      Thank you so much Meen, I have started another ff it’s called mother’s diary, I have written the prologue two weeks ago and ch 1 I have just post it, please give that one a chance too. And for rectify I will think about it, a big bear hug and stay blessed. πŸ™‚

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