hi, guys, my birthday is tomorrow!!!!!!! Yeah November 18. there’s a confusion of time because of i pretty sure that mist of you are in India and I am from Canada and I live here. (my parents are from Punjab). I know that it been some time since ièv posted so I hope you didnèt forget this TS. Let’s get started with the story. This might be short because I again have an exam tomorrow morning. But that’s why I will make 2 parts of the first shot. part a and part b.
heres the link for intro:
Please note:
In this story, Nikhil has not proposed Ragini for marriage.

Ragini runs from the market. she runs as fast as she could while crying. she bumps into someone. its swara.
Swara: Ragini tum ko kya huyaé Sanskar jaldi aao!!!!
sanskar comes.
Sanskar: Ragini tum ko kya huya, Swara hum ghar chalte hain, baadi.
Ragini just sobs on Swaraès shoulder.
Swara: Ragini tum please rona band karo, tumari tabiyat khraab ho jaye gi.
They reach baadi.
Shekar: Ragini, kya huaÉ
Sharmishta: Ragini ko kamre me le chalte hain.
Ragini is still crying on the fact that Laksh is alive and he didnèt tell anybody but more because he has a daughter. she was very confused.
Swara: yeh pani lo aur batao ragini ke kya hua.
Ragini drinks the water.
Ragini: Laksh!!! Maine unko dekha aaj market main!!
Sanskar: kya tumnhe laksh to dekhaÉ
Ragini: Haan, voh ek bachi thi aur voh apne papa ko doondh rahi thi, aur phir maine Laksh ki aawas suni, phir maine dekha ki voh ladki laksh ko papa bula rahi thi.
She said all of this while crying.
Everyone was shocked and were trying to console Ragini. She finally falls asleep.

Sanskaar: Swara ruko
Swara: Haan Sanskaar bolo
Sanskar: Ièm very sorry Swara mujhe ab samajh me ayi ye baat ke tum ghar chodke ragini ke saath kyn gayi, voh laksh se itna pyaar karti he ki, voh nahi bardaash karti, I am very sorry Swara, tum mujhe maaf kar sakti ho aur hum phirse dubara ek ho sakte hain, meri wajah se ragini ka iss haal huya hain
Swara: (crying and hugs him) haan sanskar please main issi din ka intazaar kar rahi thi aur haan tumarhi galti nahi hai
Sanksar: I love you Swara
Swara: I love you too Sanksar
Sanskar: Ab hume Ragini ka saath dena hoga
Swara: Haan Sanskar aur hum kal dhoondne jaye gain

Next day:
Ragini looks at herself in the mirror. she see’s those dark eyes because of sleepless nights in the memories of Laksh.
All those memories rewind.
(Guys please read the whole song its called breakup mashup and it has a lot of feel in it which completly suits Raglak and this track)
Bite lamhe

Tum ho…

O re khuda ye tune kya kiya ghum de diya

Kise puchu hai aisa kyun bezuba sa ye jahan hai, khusi k pal kahan dhundhu
When Laksh filled her maang with sindoor
Har pal har lamha, Main kaise jeeta hoon
She remembers their suhaagraat ?

kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Laksh saying aww mera bachaaa to her

Tum hi ho, chain bhi mera dard bhi
She remembers when he gave her a gift on karvachaut

Saajnaa …
Tum hi ho.
Meharbani nahi tumhara pyar manga hai
When he supported her against the family when she faked pregnancy

Gaye tum gaye kyun, raat baki hai…
How he hugs her when he sleeps

Tumhe majoor hai, tabhi to yaar manga hai…
Laksh feeding her sweets

Kabhi jo badal barse
How he fought off the goons when they were about to touch Ragini

Zindgi ne zindgi bhar gham diye, jitne mausam diye, sab nam diye.Mast maula mast
Then it all comes back to six months when he wasn’t found

kalandar, tu hawa ka ek bawandar, bhuj ke under kyu rahega…

Teri meri meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil.
She cries and remembers his voice, his touch and the little girl’s voice “Papa!!!!!!” Ragini screams Laksh!!!!!!!! And everything goes black.
Kolkata City Hospital

Swara: Ragini teekh toh ho jaye ghi na
Doctor: Yes Swara ji woh sirf itna stress ki waja se huya he, aur jo pehli sleeping pills ki jo duwai hamne di thi mere khyaal se woh khatam ho gayi hain so aap aur lai aaye please
Sanskar: Thank you doctor
Swara: (crying) Sanskar, Ragini ko itna kyon sehna peta hai sirf pyaar ki layi, laksh ke pyar kiliye

P.O.V. of someone:
Kya Ragini ko itna sehna parta hai mere liye.
Main abhi Ajay ko phone karta hoon aur usse pata lagata hoon ke kya huya hai Ragini ki zindagi main iss 6 mahino main.
(does ragini really have to suffer that much, I will call Ajay right now so I can find out what happend in Ragini’s life in these 6 months)
His tears roll down and he goes away to make the call.

Swara: Aaj hi hame laksh ko doondhna hoga (we have to look for Laksh today)
Sanskar: haan swara tum teekh keh rahi ho abhi chalo ( yes u are right lets go right now)
Swara: Maa aur baba Ragini ka dhyaan Rakhiye please ( please take care of Ragini)
Shekar and Sharmishta: haan tum log jao (yes you go)

And that’s a wrap for today. Wish me happy birthday!!!!!!!! And maybe this is the full 1st shot of this TS.
Bye guys! And guess who the other person is!!!!
This is Krystal signing off

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  1. Happy birthday dear, nice part

  2. superb dr update soon. wish u vry vry happy birthday

  3. Sindhura

    Happy birthday dear

  4. awesome . Happy birthday dear god bless u

  5. Sreevijayan

    Awesome update dear nd a very happy birthday to uuu

  6. Outstanding one
    Poor ragini
    She suffered alot
    Eagerly waiting to read more

  7. Eba

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY KRYSTAL <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 ur TS

  8. Ragz_teju

    Happy birthday crystal ????… the chappy was amazing… poor ragini she is suffering so much I think the person is Laksh and nikil is ajay just a guess…. all the best for ur exams… will be waiting for next one… stay blessed dear

    1. Ragz_teju

      sorry spelling mistake Krystal*

  9. Zai

    Happy birthday dear
    It was really nice

  10. happyyyy birthday kristal plz update next part soon

  11. Fats

    Great update. Aww I feel so bad for Ragini, she’s suffering so much ?. Can’t wait to read more.
    P.S: Happy birthday. I hope you have a lovely day and an even better year ahead of you ?

  12. happy birthday krystal

  13. Awesome and happy birthday dear .

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  15. Rafia

    plssssssss continue soon

  16. Nice one…Happy birthday dear

  17. Awesome… and wish you many more happy returns of the day Krystal

  18. Fairy

    Awww!!!!its ur brthday…wohoooo!!! A veryyyyyyyyyy happpppy brthday dear…wish u all d happinesss in lyf… 🙂 🙂 🙂
    Update ws soooo awesome dr…i loved it….ragini’s pain is unbearable!!! 🙁 🙁 she had suffered a lot!!!hmmm atleast swasan gets united..i lyked dat part 🙂 ..n d song really suited rags condition!!!i think dat man is laksh!!waitng eagerly for nxt part..keep rockng n stay blesssed dr 😉 😉 😉

  19. Happy birthday dear,May god bless u n have a wonderful day……n ya very nice episode

  20. Jazzy

    happy birthday dear enjoy a lot todays part was amazing dear

  21. Awesome. happy b’day dr

  22. Many many many happy returns of the day dear. Interesting episode and eagerly waiting for next

  23. Asra

    awesome dear…waiting for nxt one…
    and Happy birthday dear….may God give all happiness and blessings to u dear….be happy….tkcr dear…

  24. awesome part dr

  25. Belated happy birthday di. Superb

  26. Superb

  27. A.xx

    fab happy belated birthday and loved it and i think the other person is abhi or nikhil.xx
    post soon.xx

  28. Hemalattha

    belated happy birthday KRYSTAL dear.amazing.

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