Promise of love- Episode 2

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Hi friends. I m here with another part of my FF. I hope you are liking it. And if you are not please do say me so that i can try my level best to improve it.

All those who have commented on my FF thank you soo much. It means a lot to me. Here is the link for the previous part
Episode 1

Recap- Shivay’s plan to take revenge from Anika…….. Boys torture Anika ……… shivay saves her………. shivika hug……. shivay thinks not to say anything to Anika…….. Anika throwing water on shivay……… and here goes after it.

Splash
Shivay- How dare you throw water on me?
Anika- Dont react like you dont know anything
(Anika was fuming with anger)

Shivay- Actually Anika……. it was all a mistake……..
Anika- Mistake? What mistake? You did it all intentionally just beacause i pranked on you??

Shivay- Anika i didnt want to hurt you. I just asked them to prank with you and nothing else. I dont know how all that happened. I m really sorry for it. (Shivay was in full guilt)

Anika starts laughing. So does rahul.
Shivay was totally confused.

Anika(seeing him)(laughing all through the conversation)- Let me make you understand shivay. It was just an another prank by me. Just the difference is that you friend, rahul was also involved in it. And yeah i only told those boys to torture me. Actually na shivay i heard that you have never said sorry to anyone. So i just played this prank to hear sorry from your mouth. You look really cute saying that shivay. I think you should always say that..(laughing)

Shivay was now fuming with anger. He gave a deadly stare to first Anika and then rahul, who was continuously laughing

Rahul- I didnt do anything shivay(laughing)

Shivay leaves from there in anger. He went to the garden and sat on a bench.
Talking to himself- What does she think of herself. That she can do anything. And i, i said sorry to her. Why? Even though it was not my fault. I will not leave her this time. And this Rahul. I will not leave him too. He made me say sorry to her. That mad, crazy girl, Anika. What does they think of themselves. I m also Shivay.

A voice from behind- The great SRK….

Shivay turns around to see a laughing Anika.
Shivay- Youuuuuuu!!
Anika- Yeah me. Even tough all this happened. You are still behind me. To trouble me. By the ways you are really very sweet. You didnt say anything to me in front of all of them.

Shivay(turning his face)- Its nothing like that. I was just angry soo……
Anika- Ohhhh so you were angry on me. Ummmm….. can i ask you one thing?

Shivay keeps his face doesn’t reply.
Anika- Please….
Shivay doesn’t reply.
Anika- Ok i m sorry
Shivay doesn’t reply.
Anika(cutely)- Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Shivay(his face still turned and smiling cutely)- Ok.
Anika- Can we be friends. I m sorry for all i did. Can we be friends?

Shivay turns his face towards her to se a cute face expectedly looking at him.
Shivay(turning his face)- No. (O god he is too much egoistic)
Anika- Please. See i am new in this college and i dont have much friends. Pleaseeeeeee

Shivay(smiling to himself cutely)- Ok, fine.
Anika- Fine?
Shivay- Yes.
Anika makes a wicked face and say- Means i can now freely prank you(winking)
Shivay- Youuuu

Anika laughs. Shivay too laughs.
Anika- Can i ask you one more thing?
Shivay- Hmm
Anika pointing him to come closer.
Anika(in his ears)- From where did you get these cat-like kanji eyes?
Shivay(stares at her angrily)- I will tell you from where i got. Wait a min.
Anika looks at him expectedly.
Shivay goes.
5 mins later
Anika- He said me to wait for a min. It had been 5 mins. Where the hell did he go?

Suddenly
Anika- What the f**k!!
Shivay laughs out loud.
Shivay- You are looking beautiful.
Anika- Youuuuuu!! How dare you pour water on me. And that a bucket full of water.
Shivay(laughing)- We are friends? Right? I can prank on you. Isn’t it?

Anika first stares at him. But seeing him laughing soo cutely she too starts laughing.

After an year
Shivay and anika had been quite good friends. They were bff’s and the whole college knew that. They kept fighting with each, obviously Anika starting first and shivay ending it in his own way. Anika considered him just a friend. But shivay had a crush on her, which changed into some unknown feelings. He thought that Anika too had a crush on him. She just didnt showed it. So he kept a gf named tia to make her fell jealous. Dont know of Anika but all other girls in the college felt quite jealous of it.

Shivay- Anika, what do you think about tia.
Anika- Ohh that lady baba?
Shivay- Lady baba?
Anika- Yeah, your gf lady baba. Ms. Tia Kapoor. What i think about her? Hmm. She is good and beautiful But yeah quite cheap. Always yelling out ‘shivay baby, shivay baby’.
Shivay(in mind)- Why the hell Anika have no effect by tia? Or is she just acting like that. O how to make her jealous.

Shivay- Yeahh she is quite beautiful. Atleast more than you. And she loves me thats why she says me shivay baby. What will you know about love.
Anika- Yeah, yeah. What will i know about love? The whole knowledge about love is filled in you and your ms. Gf only na. Thats why you are always running away from her.

Shivay- I am running away from her? I always wish to come close to her.
Anika- See god fulfilled your wish. Here comes your lady baba. Now talk with her your talks of love.
Shivay sees tia coming towards them

Shivay(in mind)- O god. She had come at time only? Now what to do. How to run.
Tia- Hi shivay baby. (Arrogantly) Hi Anika.
Shivay- Hi tia.
Anika- Hi tia. You know what shivay was talking about you only a few seconds before.

Tia- Awww shivay baby. What were you saying baby?
Anika- He was saying that he always wants to with you.
Tia- Aww baby, really?

Shivay(in mind)- Phail gaya raita. And this Anika, is it necessary for her say her everything.
Shivay gives a deadly stare to Anika.

Shivay(to tia)- Yeah tia.
Tia- Aww baby. I too want to stay with you only. Ok. So today we will go for shopping. How about it.

Anika laughs behind them.
Anika- Great idea tia. Right shivay.
Shivay- Yeah, very great idea. But i have some classes to attend.
Anika- But shivay you said you have no classes today. Right?
Shivay(giving her a deadly stare)- Yeah. Actually i forgot.

Tia- No problem. I m soo happy to go with you to shopping.
Shivay gives her a false smile and gives Anika a “please save me” look.

Anika laughs and says- You both talk i should leave now i think.
Tia- Sure Anika.
Shivay gives her a deadly look for going leaving him alone with this lady baba.

But Anika simply laughs and goes.
Now there are only tia ans shivay present.
Tia- Shivay baby you are soo good. You know i will buy…….(she lists up all stupid things she wants to buy)
Shivay(in mind)- When will her list get over. O god how will i spend a whole day shopping with her. And this Anika. I just praised tia and she left me with this lady baba alone. What a friend i have got. Why am i blaming her? O goddd please save me.

Suddenly he hears a scream.
Shivay- This is Anika’s voice. Lets go and see.

He goes out to see Anika sitting on the floor screaming with pain.
Shivay ran towards her and asks with care- What happened Anika?
Anika- Ahhh! Shivay i think i have got a fracture in my legs.
Shivay(with atmost care)- How did this happen??
Anika- I sliped.
Shivay(scolding)- Cant you walk properly?
Anika moves her mouth near shivay’s ear and whispers- Shivay dont shout at me. I m just doing acting to save you from this lady baba.

Shivay stares at her and laughs. Anika gives him a wink.

Shivay(to tia)- Tia i think we should go on shopping some other day. See Anika is hurt. I should take care of her too na.
Tia- Its ok, baby. Anika you take care.
And goes from there.
Shivika laugh out loud.

Precap- End of some years before.

Guys i really tried to make it big. I almost forgot about it. And so i have just wrote it after coming from school and so i was unabke to make it as big as i thought. I hope it was big enough for the last was i think quite small. And i will try to make the next part bigger. Next episode will be the end of some years before. And i will try to make it big. For i want to complete this some years before fast, because i think i am extending it too much, so the next episode will the last one. But i will bring nok jhok after that too. For shivika are incomplete without it. And as i have written this episode in hurry- burry please ignore the grammatical mistakes.

IB and DBO:-
Today in both IB and it will be an Awesome episode. O good that naintara track is ending soon. I tought that it would also be long for IB was draging tracks from so many days. And i dont get why shivika are behind each others past? Fine let it be. But i didnt thought IB to be a saas- bahu drama. O this pinky is irritating me very much. And again they brought kamini’s track. But its fine for we can see priveer now.

And in DBO the most awaited moment is going to come. Finally, finally swetlana-om marriage track will end. And finally om will accept gauri has her wife. Now we can see gaurika scenes. But still i want rudra story in DBO. For it is looking like DBO is there only for gaurika.

And i am really really really very happy that IB and DBO won 8 awards in total in SPA. And IB swept away most of awards. And shivika got the fav international jodi award??. I am happy for everyone who won in SPA but i am specially happy for my fav couple shivika.

I hope you liked the episode. If you did please do comment. Please do comment. And if there is any silent please please do comment.

Love you all
Deepika.

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59 Comments
  1. T was a awesome episode plz update next part soon.

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii. I will post next one soon

  2. Haridhra

    Hey Deepu I was waiting 4 ur ff yaar n finally u posted … It was an awsm epi I loved Shivika nok-jhok… I’m sad becoz Ani isn’t reciprocating Shiv’s feeling so let’s hope for the best … Keep writing n entertaining us like this yaar..N this is 4 u ???❤❤❤

    1. Deepika12

      Thank you shoo much dii. It means a lot to me. And saying that u were waiting for my ff means the world to me. Thank u soo much. Ani does love shiv but as a frnd. And i will begin there love stry soon. And this is for u di????????????????????????????

      1. Haridhra

        Waiting 4 that to start n yaar wlcm …
        Keep going n all the best for it ..

  3. awesome

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much di

  4. Niriha

    Awesome

    1. Deepika12

      thank u shoo much dii

  5. Awesome episode deepika ? ?….
    Their prank scene was fun…?
    And really loved the way anika ask shivay to be friends with her… Sho cuuuteee….?
    Shivika’s prank on that lady baba was too good ???
    Post soon… ?

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii. I m happy that u liked it. I will post soon

  6. Awesome update di.

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dwet

  7. Arthi

    Hey Deepu dr…..this one was superb and lady baba was really cute and Shivay nailed it and ur ff also rocked….

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much di. I m happy u liked it. And lady baba is really cutee…

  8. u rocked it again deepika u r a great writter no words to say humesha bak bak karne wali ladki ko chup kar diya
    loved it

    1. Deepika12

      Awww shoo shweet of u di. Thank u shoooo muchhh. Aur yeh aapki hi badaolat h. Bhak bahk kam likhna jyada. Btw thank u shoo much

  9. i personally think u have to take gul khans place pls do it

    1. Deepika12

      Awwwwww….. but what abt my Schl????. BTW thanks for the compliment. *i am blushing*

  10. pls give me u r autograph u future is gonna rock

    1. Deepika12

      *i am blushing hardly*. Awwwww di……. it is shoooo shweeetttt. I cant imagine such a comment. Thank u shooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhh

  11. i thought candy write good but u write better than her

    1. Deepika12

      Di does write god. And i think she writes much better than me. But thanks for the compliment. Thank u shoo much

  12. sorry if i am late to comment
    actually today i am really tired and stressed and u r ff was stress booster
    thnx for it

    1. Deepika12

      No di not at all. And i shld be thnkfull to u for both reading my f and praising it in such a beautiful way. Thank u shoo muchh di

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii

    2. hi alex nuvu comment chesava

  13. again u rocked

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much di

  14. shivika prank was the best part loved it

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii

  15. u r bahk bhak became less

    1. Deepika12

      Pichli baar episode kam tha. Iss baar bak bak kam. Ummmm… agli baar dono ko barabar kar dungi. BTW thanks for commenting

  16. Dhar

    Was waiting for your next episode, awesomeness plus cuteness overloaded ??

    1. Deepika12

      Awwww.. shoo shweet of u dii. Thank u shoo much dii

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii

  17. Kanfi

    Hey deepu….
    Again dhinchak episods,,,darwaza tod concept,,,,
    Liked it sooooo muchh’,,,
    Must say u r a an ammmmazzzingggg writr,,.,,
    I m in love with ur ff,,,soo many funny scenes…
    U did a splendid job,,,

    *i m also happy they’ll end nainthara scene soon….bt i dont want kamini back,,,,n i hope they dont pair prinku with ranveer,,,,i dont like him…

    *in DBO ,,it’ll be ammazing to watch omri scenes,.,,bt will miss chulbul”,bt i m not understanding,,when will they end svetlana track,,,she is in the show since beginning,,.,its going to be almost one year..!!

    N congo to u too for IB nDBO achievemnt,,,,n for our shivika

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shooooooooooooo muchhhhhhh diiiiiiiii. It means a lotttttt to me.
      I shld agree that ranveer is not good. For he unlike mahi is following kamini knwing that her intentions r bad. Lets see what gul mam have decided for it.

      For DBO i m quite happy. I hope thay wil not let a year pass with swetlana. I dont want that. And they r not letting out swetlana truth too. Ahh!! Idk when they will do that.

      Btw thank u shoo much di

      1. Kanfi

        Lovee uuu….
        On insta deepikac6789 is u n???

  18. Superb….shivika and tia scene was the best….will u accept me as ur little sis deepu di , can I call you that ?

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much. And yeah sure but can i knw ur age. Bcz i think i m smaller to u. I m just 14.

      1. I am 13 deepu di…i guess finally u got someone who will call u di…

    2. Deepika12

      yup. U can call me deepu di now. But i think deepu would have worked

      1. kiu deepu ise di hi bulana

  19. Excellent update dear….. Totally luv it…

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u shoo much dii

  20. Superb update…

    1. Deepika12

      thank u shoo muchh

  21. Chandini

    Awesome I love it how cute to see shivika as frnds????and annika is really a drama queen like you ofcourse??just kidding but this was awesome….waiting for the next my drama queen?

    1. Deepika12

      ???atleast kisi chiz mein toh queen bani????. Thank u shoo much dii

  22. ab me kya batau mere frnds ne toh sab kuch chin liya mere words copy kiye mere paas kuch nahi he dene ke liye

    1. Deepika12

      Awww.. thank u shoo much di. Aur aapne kuch na deker bhi bahut kuch de diya

  23. Awesome dear sorry I couldn’t comment on your previous epi bt it was also awesome.Hey can we b friends?

    1. Deepika12

      thank u shoo much di. And no problem. i happy that u liked it. and yeah for sure. i would love to be ur frnd

  24. Jerry_36

    Hey Deepika its an awesome part. Sorry for the late comment, but you nailed it. Post soon?

    1. Deepika12

      Thank u soo much

  25. Neha_Pheonix

    Hey deepu…I am totally amazed that it was Anika’s plan to turn goons on her. Omg! Such a brave girl. You have maintained the integrity of Anika’s character..I Totally like the way she is in your story.
    She always backfires Shivaay’s plan…haha
    Great, Fantastic….love it!!

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