One Month Agreement – Episode 5

Thank u guyz for giving me ur suggestions.
I loved ANu’s suggestion.
So credit of this topic goes to ANu.

Recap- sanskar is jealous . pillow fight between swara and sankar.

Previous episode link-
*3rd day of agreement*

Cloudy morning . (it’s cloudy morning becoz there will be clouds of misunderstanding between swara and sanskar)
Sanskar wakes up and didn’t find swara on bed. He calls her, “swara whr r u?”
But be didn’t get any reply. He searches her everywhere. But she is not at home.
He calls her. Her phn is switched off. He tries again and again , but its switched off.
He thinks that she is busy in her assignments that’s why she kept phn switch off.
And he fumes wid anger .
He recalls the things why he hated her 2 much.
It’s rainy days.
Sanskar is heading towards home. He is driving car fastly to see swara but suddenly the truck coming from opposite side hits his car.mistake from both..sanskar is badly injured .
Some people helps them. And takes sanskar to hospital.
He was in coma for 1 week due to heavy blood loss. When he opened his eyes, he was expecting to see swara but….
Kavita was der wid him. She is taking care of him.
He asked about swara to his colleagues and he knows that from d day of accident they tried to call swara but she didn’t responded to any of the call. Her phn is switched off. So some colleagues go to sanskar’s home to inform swara but der was lock to house.
When sanskar got discharge ,
He finds swara in home. When he asked abt why her phn was switched off and where was she. She just replied that, ” u knw na sanskar dis assignment is necessary for me. So while working on this assignment I switched off my phn to avoid disturbance and I was at my office for all those days. Leave that hows u now?”

Sanskar is angry coz of her reply. He thinks m I disturbance for her. And she is asking me only abt how r u? She is not showing little concern for me. And she is saying that her assignments are important for her. But they are more important than me.?
And kavita I knw she loves me. One sided love. But she was with me when I needed swara most.
He just replied ,” I hate u swara.”
He sees that this words r not affecting on swara.
Flashback ends .
Sanskar becomes ready. He prepares coffee for him and he goes to the office. Again hatred for swara in his mind..
He calls her again.. But again phn is switched off. He is restless now.
He recalls the moment from clg days. How her absence in clg affected him.
Sanskar was waiting for swara to come to clg. Coz he wanna trouble her but she dont come.
He is thinking ,’ why she is absent? She left her clg coz of my trouble, didn’t she? No she can’t ! If she will leave the clg then to whom I will trouble. Or something is happened to her. No! Nothing can happen to her. Plz swara come!’
Full day He is restless .
His frnds tease him , ” oh sanskar! Its ur wish na she hv to leave the clg as a punishment. Den y r u restless? ”

Sanskar (angrily )- “shut up guyz ! How can she leave me without informing me?”
All frnds (in chorus)-” wht”
Sanskar(composes words) – ” I mean how can she leave the clg without informing me?”
One frnd- ” oh so she hv to take ur permission to leave the clg?”
Sanskar – “yes” (in determined voice)
And goes to search her…
Flashback ends.
Kavita comes into his cabin.
Both greets each other.
Sanskar asks her ,” so kavita u wanna go for dinner na? Let’s go today ” (he is angry on swara dats y he accepts kavita’s dinner plan)
Kavita (happily )- ” really sanskar?
Sanskar -” yes kavita! We will go directly after office . ok”
Kavita hugs him in the excitement. And gives peck on his cheek.
He is angry with swara. But still he felt that he is not doing right. And moves away from her.
Kavita asks him(coz of his weird behavior) – “r u ok sanskar?”
Sanskar -” yes I m fine! Plz leave me alone for some time. And dnt forget abt the dinner”
Kavita smiles and goes to do her work.
Here sanskar again calls swara. But her phn is switched off.
Whole day He is restless.
@ evening kavita comes to him

And both headed towards fancy restaurant.
Kavita says ,” yeah I m 2 much happy . at last u r giving divorce to her”.
Sanskar (trying to be happy)- ‘
” yes! I m 2 happy kavita”
Kavita feels that he is not happy -” den y I feel that u r not happy as much as I.”
Sanskar -” coz u r thinking like that!”
They both finished der dinner.
Sanskar comes to home.
And finds swara is sleeping on couch and der r 2 coffee mugs on table.
Sanskar (thinks ) oh god she is waiting for me from evening. And drinks that coffee even though it’s cold. And he talks to her ,” u r waiting for me now. Den y u r not with me when I was in coma. Y swara?” Tears r flowing through his eyes.
He takes swara in bridal style and places her on the bed. And covers blanket on her.. And he sleeps on couch.

Precap- 4th day of agreement. And flashback .

So guyz do comment wht u wanna see between swara and sanskar on 4th day of there agreement..
Do comment.
And I will give the credit to that person whose suggestion is best(according to me)
Love u all.

Credit to: ANu


  1. Anjali

    Intense anger from Sanskar towards Swara followed by a passionate, heart rending romance scene…also kavita’s name shouldn’t even appear!!

  2. I wud like t give one suggestion
    Make sure tht swara is stuck in sum serious prblm( wich is related t sanskar)wen sanskar is in hosp n she hide it by saying this assignment excuse
    Later sanskar shud get t knw te reasn n start t feel again lik bfre fr swara

  3. Rina Sivaguru

    Even its hurt sanskar….. I dunno I get happy when I read about sanskar’s concern toward swara…… I think swara is the one take care of sanskar
    In hospital but kavitha lie to him…..

    • ambika

      no yar. kavita was der wid him.. swara was not der.. kavita is not that much bad in my fanfiction.. but I also hate kavita.. πŸ˜‰

  4. Sasha

    Gud epi. There should be some cute fight between swasan, n then sanskaar shud struggle fr patch up.n shud do various things to please swara, n this accidently kavita shud gt knw, misunderstanding between kavsan, n sanskar shud struggle between swara n kavita, it will be gum,
    P.s dont frgt to add some swasan romance,
    Updt soon.waiting.

    • ambika

      really nice suggestion Sasha.. swasan romance will be always der in each episode.. coz I also love dem :-p

  5. Hate nd love… in 4th epi… first hate swara did nt pick up the call.. nxt she may have sone genuine reasin.. agn patch up… jst my hope.. k let c wt u have for us… btnw today ws nice.. cn u make it bit long..

  6. simran

    a reason fr disappearance of swara
    although nt to sanky bt to someone who troubled her during the tym
    i know dis is vry boring bt still

  7. Well, u can keep lyk in past swara’s mom or dad falling ill nd she is taking care of them nd being responsible well dis responsible behaviour is liked by sanskaar …nd present sanskaar thinking that there may b sum solid reason 4 swara not being at hospital …lyk 4 sum family member of sanskaar …..

  8. Kavita

    I hope Swara us fine…. Plz don’t let anything happen to them…. I m sure Swara has a reason…. Is kavita blackmailing her… Plz…. Hope for some more swasan moments… Some explanation on y Swara does not answer her call… I think swara is I’ll… Plz

  9. Aashi

    It was awesome dear…uhh rocked Anu..splendid work… Incredible job….how lovely u described yrr.. Fantastic.. It was so nice. But just wanna ask dear will swasan unite or separate coz I also have a plot in my mind which is till now similar to uhh. And I would start it after my boards.. So plzz tell me…if it is similar so I will drop my idea… N you are really superb… Love uhh dear…

  10. Roja

    when sanskar in coma… Swara may have in sm trouble, she dnt want to tell the reason that cause misunderstanding…

  11. Sree harini

    Had read the five episodes in one go dear. Good plot. A small suggestion from my side..please don’t add too many flash backs in a single episode because there are two is that it becomes messy and second is you cannot hook up your readers. I really didn’t mean to offend you but sorry if it conveyed in that way.
    And in fourth day,…it depends on your choice dear cause you know the plot better than us. We all will be always here to support you and your ideas. Fingers crossed for next episode. All the best.

  12. ambika

    all these comments are motivating me to write the next part now only..but
    but dnt wry guyz i will try to post next part in morning.. love u all.. πŸ™‚
    good night

  13. Neha

    Hiii ambika…I am a silent reader…I like your ff very much…but today I have a problem….I am sharing it with you…please don’t use the suggestion of others every time…u have great creative mind…please use your suggestions…sorry if I hurt you ..

  14. ANu

    So mch thanks dear ambika that u consider my idea or give me credit I have just give the suggestion like that only nd by the way you were wrong the credit doesn’t go to me it only go to you nd rally i love your ff a lot

  15. aditi syam

    Awesome yaar i am a big fan of ur ff my suggestion is some forest scenes somehow trapped in jungle like in the serials u know forest is the centre of romance just try it i will be waiting for ur next update

  16. Dhara

    Now I remember I have read similar story somewhere. In that story girl is suffering from some medical condition and at the end she dies. And boy regrets for his behavior till now with her. I will try to remember the name and will post it here.

  17. Dhara

    Guys search for a loving request for divorce. You will get to know be story. And I hope in this story swasan will unite.

    • ambika

      I don’t knw abt dis book dhara. if story is same den I will stop writing dis fanfiction. and swara is not going to die in dis book.

      • Dhara

        Sorry Ambika. It is not same story but similar concept where wife demands one month agreement for divorce. I love your FF. But when I read 1st episode it reminded me the same story. It is very touching story. And regarding Swara not being with Sanskar at the time comma you can show that her dad or mom were not fine and she went to abroad before Sanskar’s accident and that’s why her mobile was switched off. When she came back she saw that Kavita was taking care of Sanskar and that’s why she didn’t came in between them. It is just my thinking. You are free to choose any idea suggested by any reader or you can come with your own plot.

  18. shabrin

    Amazing….u can show some intense romance between them…is somebody blackmailing her coz why didn’t she show some concern to sanskar after coming from the hospital?

  19. Hai sree nice to see u here on this page,missing u n ur fictions?if u plan to write next fiction, inform me first,I am a big fan of urs ,hey ambika when do we get ur fictions next part? I can’t await to read,update asap plz.

  20. awesome i have one idea..swara didnt meet sanskar when he was in coma coz she worked on an assignment..that assignment was her late dad’s or mom’s dream which sanskar didnt know…tq for bearing this idea.plz post soon..

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