My Heart Beats For You part-3

Hi friends this is Loga and Megan.sorry for late post.so we are posting two episodes today here is the first one

Link for the previous episodes:
Prologue

Part 1

Part 2

Suman’s POV:

Suman smiled, thinking about that memory and continued packing her clothes. Suddenly, someone came and hugged me from behind. It was Shravan. I smiled and told him, “You came early as you said”. He said “Mmmmm” huskily and stretched his hand and pulled my hair to the other side. He ran his nose down the length down the length of my neck as I turned my head to the other side. He found the nape of my neck and kissed it gently. “Shravan, I have to pack”, I whispered. In response, he hugged me tighter from behind. “Shravan, I have to pack. Please let me”, I whispered gently again and turned around to face him. He smiled gently, the warmth of his eyes melting me. “Shravan, I still have to pack your stuff”,I said and rested his head on his shoulder. “Hmmm, OK. We’ll do it”, he said thoughtfully. I looked at him when, suddenly he lifted me by the waist and placed my feet on his feet. I blushed. Even though I was standing on his feet, I was just up to his chin. Hugging me, he started walking. We walked and came to his cupboard. I stood on my tiptoes and kissed him on the cheek. He smiled as I turned and took his shirts. He didn’t leave me and was hugging me from behind. He rested his chin on my head as I took the shirts. Then, he walked me back to the room to continue packing.

Some time, I completed the packing and both of us were dressed and ready to go. We went downstairs, hand in hand. The whole family, mine and his had gathered to bid us goodbye. I said my goodbyes to both the mamajis, Kamini Mami, Varun, Vandy, Pushkar, Preeti and Mrina. Rachna Maasi, Mami, Mama and everybody stood there tearyeyed. I said my goodbyes to them. Shravan said his goodbyes. Pushkar and Mrina were smiling wickedly. I didn’t understand why they were smiling like that. We got into the car and rolled down the window. The car started to move when Pushkar and Mrina yelled, “Have fun, kids. Enjoy. Don’t break anything. Bring our brother back safely, Suman bhabhi”. My head whipped in their direction. The car started moving faster. I blushed as I heard the whole family, snickering. Fortunately or unfortunately, the car had moved farther before I could yell anything. I turned and saw Shravan looking outside, a faint smile dancing on his lips. I pouted and leaned on his shoulder. Soon, I fell asleep.

Shravan’s POV:

She rested her head on my shoulder. Automatically, I moved so that my hand was around her. Soon, she was fast asleep. I looked at her. A lock of her hair fell down across her eye as she slept. I smiled and tucked her hair behind her ear. I brushed my long fingers across her cheek. Despite her sleep, her mouth curved into a tiny smile. I smiled as I thought of the memory.

A year ago, at Diya’s and Shiv’s function:

After the sangeet, I searched for more ways to meet her. I told Mrina that I would take her hereafter to the functions. As a result, I went to every function of Diya’s and Shiv’s marriage. Soon, we grew a bit closer. Before the shaadi, the family had arranged a trip to Goa to celebrate the wedding. I didn’t really want to go but I came because of Suman. A day before the trip, I asked Mrina if Suman was coming. “No, bhaiyya. She has some work, it seems.Everybody wants her to come, but she can’t”, Mrina replied sadly. I was dumbstruck. Not to give up, I promised her that I would talk to Suman and went to talk to her.

Suman’s POV:

I saw him, as he came to see me. On seeing him, I knew that he had come to ask me to come to the trip. “I have to say no. Suman, No, Suman No.”, I whispered to myself as he came. “Suman”, he started. “Please come to the trip. Everybody wants for you to come. “, he said pleadingly. “I want you to come”, he added lightly. On hearing this, my heart quickened. I opened my mouth to refuse and lifted my head to tell him. Immediately, I struck by his eyes. The light brown eyes complemented his brown jacket, as he stood in front of me. Despite myself and nodded. Before I could stop myself, “ Your eyes are so beautiful”,I blurted out. I stood, horrorstruck looking at him. Instead, he smiled and went away.”I’ll be waiting”, he turned and told me and went. I stood looking at him. I smacked my head with the palm of my hand “Why did you do that, Suman?”, I asked angrily to myself. I couldn’t think properly when he was near me. Something was wrong with me. I sighed. “I have to go tomorrow. I promised him”, I thought.

See the next post
Pls do comment criticism is welcomed
We find it tough to write romantic sequence so sorry if we didn’t capture their emotions perfectly pls forgive us if we didn’t do justice

9 comments

  1. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey liga and Megan…
    I m frankly speaking…I love it totally…nd look according to me..u portrayed love beautifully…I mean how she stared in his eyes….eyes always reflect emotions….nd u just showed that part beautifully…
    Its just so deep..if u see…that small gesture…it tells so much….
    Anyway loved it…
    Nd love u..
    Take care..
    Post soon..
    😊😊😊😊😊

  2. sona

    Hello..
    Loga…
    And hello megana..
    It was really romantic..this is first time I’m commenting on ur ff…
    I really liked it…
    Ur way of presenting..the ff was really unique..😍😍
    Irmt was like reading someone’s diary..
    I meant its like crystal clear..😍😍
    Enjoyed a lot..😊😊
    And from now..I will do a regular reply for this ff too😍😍😍😜😜😛😛😊😊

  3. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Aww such a cute epi. Most likely the next epi is up too. I’ll better read tht 1st nd comment on both. Btw this one was soooo romantic. The way he helped her packing. Awwww.

  4. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Wait.. You guys were not able to pick up the emotions? Please..!! It was damn cute..
    Loved it..
    And the next part’s up.. So I’ll go check there..

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