Hi friends. I just want to pay my gratitude to you for your support and love. Thank so much. Feby my sweet sis sorry this is not dedicated to you. I couldn’t write. But i promisr you next chap will be for you. I wanted it to be happy wala as it would be my farewell gift to you. So wait for it.
So now the main reason for this note is. Some person has commented that i should never write in my lifetime and she hates my writing. It is the worst story she has ever read and this story is an insult to manmarziyan. Well i sincerely apologize if it has given you such distress.
But answer my question. How did you find patience to read 11 chapters of this worst story. If i would have been in your place I would have never read it at all. But then i want reviews from all my readers on this story. How do you feel about this.
Anu, i want to clear one thing. I am not a writer in the first place. I am just a story teller. so if you know the meaning of both terms you could understand. And i tell the story by presenting it in form of words. I am not planning for best writer award with this story if that is what you are afraid of.
Well jokes apart. I will not say i’m not hurted with your words. Its not the words , it is the wrong timing. I’m seriously in my low phase. And when i saw your comment i felt horrible. But. Here is the bigg but. I’m not stopping it no matter what. This is my story, it is how i want to see arjun, neil , sam and radz in some good roles. I love manmarziyan with my heart. I’m a loyal fan of the show, who left watching t.v after show ended. So keep your harsh words to yourself.
Yes if you want to tell any negatives which are present in the story. You could have just said that. I always ask for comments to know my flaws in writing. I know i’m not good at english. But I am a good learner. I would hav taken your suggestion and tried to change. But no, you had the guts to say that i should never write. Whoaaa that was unexpected.
And plot…. Really???!!! What the hell do you know about the plot of this story. Do you even know why radz is there with yug. And who yug is in real. Why he is keeping radz as captive. What relation does nick and arjun have? How did nick and sanju’s wedding happen. Why didnt neil and sam get married till now? Do you know one answer to any of the questions. If yes, then i’m honoured to listen what the plot is from you. Kindly share it. All the readers want to know it. I have been keeping them in suspense from long time. They will so happy to know the real plot.
Thank you shree, supu, dipika, roma dii, feby, nitu, rose, hari , gia, abha, sathya, ritu. Thank you for supporting me. I will never forget this. Thank you all my readers and those who comment to support me.
Sorry for my bantering. Dont worry i have written story. But it was only a small one. Forgive me for that. As i said these days i’m in my low state. But i will update next chap soon. Love you all.
Enjoy reading ***********
Ash ran along with Raj to the channel’s office. It was a dead end. No one was ready to answer them. Everyone kept denying that the program. Gradually Ash was loosing her cool with all the happenings.
She paced the hallway wildly. Raj was trying hard to get some info on the show. But it was next to impossible. It seemed all the staff were given clear orders not to reveal any information. This only added extra doubt.
Raj on the other hand, was busy conversing with the lady staff using his charms in hope to get anything related. He trusted her. There was no reason for her to lie.
Ash was in her deep thoughts after listening to all ” I can’t believe what is happening here. First i see radhika and she is here. It was hard to believe that she is alive and now these people are saying its my imagination. The heck is my imagination.” Her thoughts were disturbed by Raj who wore a confused face with concerned eyes.
Raj shook his head and that is all it took ash to break down. It was impossible that not even a single person is helping. They are clearly denying it. The reporter is not in office. The show was never aired today. Ash ” I dont know what they are going to think of me.? What if they think i was playing prank on them?? But it was real. I myself am terrified at the fact that radhika is alive. ” sobbing hysterically.
Raj took her in embrace holding tight, rubbing her back. It was hard to see the confident person breaking down. He had never dreamed that he would see ash in this state. He knew in that instant the matter is very serious and sensitive. He pulled away wiping her tears and moved out of the office with her strolling behind.
They are now in a cafe sipping their coffee. Neil and sid has been calling her since an hour or more. Mark has immediately activated all her bank accounts and sim card. Pulling the mobile which was ringing non stop, she saw the caller id. It was mark.
She touched the green button accepting the call , placed the phone near her ear. ” Princess are you fine?? ” was the first sentence mark asked. When he got no reply mark continued ” Ash. I heard something about radhika. Is it true? Neil is asking why aren’t you picking up his calls? Is everything alright princess?”
” I’m fine. But nothing is right here. It was a dead end. I cannot find her. But trust me uncle i have seen her.” Ash answered in a groggy voice.
Mark questioned in a stern voice ” What actually happened? Tell clearly. ” Ash filled him with all the details of the incidents happened.
Mark ” May be they were right. It was just your imagination. She is dead and it has been 2 years approx. now.”
Ash ” I know uncle it is hard to trust. But believe me. It was not a fragment of my imagination. She was there. I have seen with my eyes. ”
Mark sighed ” Ok then. I will do something. Wait for my next call. ” and hung the call. He knew ash since her childhood. If she believed something there was no way she will back off. He dialed to various numbers, talking with many people.
Radhika stood in the kitchen and was talking with Alison. Alison was a good girl, she became friends with radz instantly. Ali gave all the information and events happening outside the mansion.
” So how was your short tour yesterday ?” Ali questioned her with a sly smile on her face.
Radz answered excitedly ” Yes it the best. We roamed all the busy streets of Rome. It was a sight to see. I enjoyed it heartily. But the problem came in form of yug. That idiot knew i was out and ended my little tour in snap of fingers.” She snapped her fingers demonstratingly ” Just like that.”
Ali ” Oh poor radz.” Radz ” Yaa. Poor me. That condescending jerk even gave me lecture on not going out again. ”
Ali laughed lightly shaking her head ” Well the outing worth it. Dont you agree.”
Radz gave a sheepish smile ” It was more than worthy.”
Their happy banter was disturbed when a voice came from the t.v set present in the corner of kitchen. Radz turned her head clearly knowing the owner of the voice.
” There was an interview of arjun airing. It was taken when arjun received the businessman year award. Slowly tears filled in radz eyes by the sight of her love. Unknowingly her finger rounded the ring present on the left hand ringfinger. She fiddled with the ring whilst hearing him.
Interviewer::: So Mr.Arjun Mehra apart from business, we have heard you have personal life which not many people know enough. Why is that Mrs. Mehra is not visible publicly. She is always missing. Why dont you bring her with you.
Arjun : Actually she is kind of shy person. She doesnt like unwanted attention. And me being her husband has to be sure of her happiness. So she is not publicly seen.
Interviewer ::: So can we where she is. In newyork or any other place?
Arjun with a loving smile on his face, put his hand on his left side above heart and answered ” Here ”
Interviewer ::: Well that was the cheesy reply i have ever heard.
Ali muted the remaining part of the interview, turned around to see radz. Radz was staring the screen intently without a blink of eye. She closed her eyes and the tears made their way from her black eyelashes and travelled through both the cheeks.
Ali put her hand on radz shoulder, radz wiped away the tears with the back of her hand. Smiling turned to ali. Ali knew how difficult it was for radz. She pulled her into a tight hug providing comfort.
They jerked away when a sound bloomed. Both rolled their eyes. It was a daily entertainment for them to see yug lashing out his anger on his men.
Ali asked ” What do you think the reason is?”
Radz shrugged her shoulders but answered ” May be zara. ”
And soon sounds errupted throughout the hallway, clearly telling yug was angry and he was showing his anger on luke and others.
Radz ” Yug. I can never understand him. One minute he is the devil and next minute he becomes angel. Now see how he is shouting on luke as he took zara for questioning.”
Ali ” Yaa. Its true. But this side of yug can only be seen if zara is concerned. ”
Radz ” Hmmm. True. Who will not feel protective for zara. She is such a good girl with innocent heart. ”
Ali ” yes. I dont understand how she came into his life. ”
Radz ” Well. Nobody knows what happened. Zara says he saved her. But whenever i try to get into details. That irritating man becomes third-wheel. ”
Yug ” If you can just stop your mouth for one second and let the maids do their work. Im getting late and i want my breakfast ” said to radz mockingly from the kitchen door.
Ali ” Yes sir. Right away “. Her face clearly showing fear. Radz rolled her eyes at yug, moved out of room with plate filled with pancakes.
Yug stopped her and asked where she is going. Radz ” As you can see pancakes. Im going to eat my breakfast” answered sarcastically.
Yug ” I know that. But why are you going to zara’s room. I’m warning you…..”
He trailed off when radz shook her head and said ” Well. Who told you i will listen to you. You are a jerk. And i dont care about you. I’m just giving her breakfast. So can I”
Before yug can say anything, a voice said ” Yes radhika. You can go. ”
Radz smirked at yug, gave a smile to ethan and said ” Thank you ethan. Have a good day. ”
Whilst going upstairs she could see yug glaring at ethan.
So that was short one. I really want your opinions on the story. Please feel free to share your suggestions. I will be waiting for your comments.
P.s::: TU plzzz post this chap as it is. Please. This is my sincere request.