MMZ – Kaisi Yeh Manmarziyan (Shot 11)

Hello sweeties… Here is the next chapter…

Dedicated to My Angel  Abha ?

“O……Ooops!!!!” Arjun was the first to respond. He had thought it was his mistake. Within a second, he shut his door.

It was all very hilarious and embarrassing. He opened and then shut the door as if in a comic movie sequence, while I stood there doing nothing ….not even hiding myself…

When I realized that I was still standing there, probably looking like a fool, I quickly shut my door as well.

I wasn’t sure who between us was more embarrassed

Outside, Sam had got back ” Are you still in there?” she asked

” Give me a minute…” I said as softly as possible so that Arjun wouldn’t overhear me…

” Oh Ho!! What is taking you so long?? Anyway, I want to try a few of them too…so let me get my size…” she said and left..

I now understood that I had mistaken Arjun to be Sam. Shit!! I cursed myself…Remembering what had just happened made me cover my face with my hands with shame….

It took me while to feel better..i I slid my hands down slowly to look shyly into the mirror in front of me. I could feel myself blush.

He saw me…Arjun saw me…Like this!!

What followed in the next few moments was something I had never experienced before…the very moment of embarrassment some time ago, made a way for hidden longing…it was strange experienced and I may not able to explain it fully…

It sometimes happens that you are so moved by an unexpected incident that you react differently than you should. It leads you to an unknown emotional territory where you feel good about the fact that it happened….even though it was only by chance…

The thought tickled me… I took a good look at my body, focusing on my curves. There was a shine in my eyes.. I felt an excitement as if I was a part of some adventure…And even though whatever happened was just a mere coincidence, there was a sinful satisfaction to it…

My mind was racing and I was hyper aware of Arjun’s presence in the changing room in front of me….

Did he find me attractive?? Did he want to see me again?? Maybe, secretly ?? Right now, in this instant , is he too, just like me, leaning against the door and thinking about this incident ? what’s going on in his mind??

As I thought all that I also recalled how he had reacted at that time…he got embarrassed he had shut his door is he regretting his reaction??

I guess I knew a few answers. There was something different and special between Arjun and me. That was for sure. He wouldn’t have reacted in this way if it had been with other women he trained..he would not have shut the door had it been Sam in my place…But there was hesitation between the two of us that made things special in their own way….this sense that certain boundaries .

And yet at times, with the double meaning words and glances, we tested these boundaries…Constant debate between my mind and heart ..where the good girl within me, the traditional expectations of me, always won..

But with time, the long suppressed heart began to rebel…it wanted to claim its freedom..and each passing day, it wanted to take charge of things..Things that mind had lebelled as sin, were now appearing tempting…

In the mirror, I stared at myself…I saw my well shaped figure…My curves….i ran my hand over my flat stomach…I saw tiny moist cave of my naval…I wanted to feel Arjun’s touch on myself…did I appeared s*xy and desirable to him??/

As I was busy staring myself, my phone beeped . for a moment my fantasy was broken..i looked at the message..

” I didn’t see anything….” It was from Arjun.

It took me a while to come in reality…I blush hard and smiled when I read that innocent sentence..

The SMS games had begun!! This secret chat again started..i took a bit of time to decide what to write back..and then I did…

” if you didn’t then why did you shut the door on my face?”

Godddd!! I was a indeed a different woman- unashamed, unabashed and intimidating a man in the trial room opposite mine…why had all this turned me on so much??

” okay…just a little…Not even half second..”

“OHH!! Your loss…” I typed it quickly and sent and after that I bit my lip as I sensed what I sent..God…what the hell happening to me…

“Wish me better luck next time…” came the reply

Next time?? Would there be next time??

The accident of a few minutes led to our bantering and flirting. I wondered what to write back. Then again I don’t want to go overboard…I could feel butterflies in my stomach and small smile playing on my lips..

Where was this going??

It was if Arjun and I had found different language. A language of our own…didn’t having any particular name….it was free and seductive…

I heard the opening of door sound from opposite side of my trail room..Arjun walked out of it..

I was brave enough to flirt with him over the phone but I found difficult to step out and face him.

I wanted some time..i changed into my cloths…Sam again came to knock on the door and she wanted my opinion on her outfit..which helped me to came from trail room..i searched around… but Arjun wasn’t there..

“Where is he??” I asked Sam

” At the billing counter…” she answered and got busy showing what she had chosen.

We settled for different prints for same combination for ourselves and walked to the counter..all this while my mind was occupied with thoughts of facing Arjun…

From distance I had seen him conversing with cashier..he turned to look towards us..

I immediately turn my gaze towards Sam and picked up random conversation with her, pretending I didn’t notice him yet.

We placed our stuff on the counter..i felt Arjun too was reluctant to talk to me..

Arjun began conversation with Sam ” For you??” he asked

” One for me..and one for her…” she replied

And That’s when our Eyes met.

I couldn’t help but to smile..Indeed an awkward smile ..he too smiled at me..

Sam stared at both of us and wondered what happened to us.

” Guys, what’s wrong?? Did I missed something??” she asked

” just like that…” Arjun replied

” Nothing…” the moment she looked at me with raised brow and confused expression..

I guess she thought it was my initial hesitation about buying sports bra in front of Arjun..which was placed on counter and Arjun was supposed to pay for it..

She turned to Arjun ” just because I too brought something , doesn’t mean you will cancel the’s still on, right??”

Arjun nodded and tapped Sam’s shoulder ” As much as you can eat…”

Sam was happy..she loved her trainer. I too loved my trainer…

Arjun swiped his card and we thanked him..he looked at me and said ” thank you!!”

Sam again sensed something between us and asked quickly ” why are you thanking her…??”

He immediately looked at her and added ” And to you too…for achieving your goal..and making me a proud teacher…”

He handled the situation well!!

We walked out of the store with our gifts and of course a little secret betwwn Arjun and me..

Our little secret!!
How’s it guys… Tell me… Pls guys comments na.. Ur words encourage me.. Pls don’t be silent readers…
Love u lots ? ? ? ? ? ?

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  1. Dipika…awesome.. Loved it… Waiting for next….

    1. Dipika

      Saran darling thank you sooooo much ? ?

  2. Its too good.waiting for the next and pls not small like this.and thanks for this best and new story.

    1. Dipika

      Angel dear thank you sooooo much.. Yeah will try to give longer.. Love u lots ? ?

  3. Brin

    Outstanding, I want to Know what in Arjun’s mind when he’s in the changing room with Radhika, next one a POV of Arjun, Dipika you nail it, well done, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Dipika

      Aww. Brin darling thank you sooooo much.. Arjun pov i kept as secret.. Reserved for spl episode.. Will post soon.. Love u lots ?

  4. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Dipika

      Thank you Kavina darling ? ?

  5. Thanks for the update ……….and thanks to you also that you changed the display pic back to the cool pic…… hoped it will longer but it was good.But update soon next time post a longer one pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee………ok.bye.

    1. Dipika

      Tappi darling thank you sooooo much for lovely words.. Love u lots ? ?

  6. I am a big fan of this series of fanfiction please do put next chapter of it soon…

    1. Dipika

      Yamini darling thank you sooooo much ? ? ?

  7. Jewel

    Deepz, chapter is amazing…. That I didn’t see anything msg made me remember scene in mmz serial…. There is small progress in their relationship…. Messages and this little secret…. Loved the chapter deepz, I also wants to know arjun’s thoughts, plz give arjun’s pov at the end of the story….. This story always make me smile….. Waiting for next chapter….. A long chapter….. Plz…. Post soon…

    1. Dipika

      Jewel darling thank you sooooo much for lovely words.. Yess i hav reserved arjun pov for last.. I will come soon.. Love u lots ? ? ?

  8. It was another amazing one…going so good. I just love this ff…

    1. Dipika

      Thank you so much darling ? ? ?

  9. arti viswanathan

    Dipika dipika darling superb,excellent,outstanding,fantastic,marvelous,awesome,nice episode….. I loved it to the core….. I liked all scenes…. I liked arjun and radhika felt shy…. And arjun shut the door of his changing room…. And sms games has began between them…..

    1. Dipika

      ? ? ? ? arti i too enjoyed it while writing.. Thank u sooooo much for supporting me n loving me.. Love u lots ? ?

  10. Awesome dear

    1. Dipika

      Devika darling thank you sooooo
      ? ? ?

  11. Beautifully penned….even i wanted to know what arjun was thinking then…..maine kuch nahi dekha…was very aptly adopted…..their smses was very cute….do write the next one faster please……

    1. Dipika

      Kalyani darling thank you sooooo much for lovely words.. Love u lots ? ?

  12. Gianna

    Beautiful update Dipu, I love their little secret. And the message conversation made me drop my jaw, I was like is this the conservative Radhika I know? Too good, Sam did notice something odd, am just loving this story more n more everyday.

    But I have one complaint, this is too short I want a longer one next time.

    Love you ????????

    1. Dipika

      Awww giu darling i won’t giv u any chance to complaint nxt time.. Qill. Post longer one.. Thank u sooooo much for admiring my efforts always dear.. Love u lots ? ?

  13. Sulbi

    Darling darling…. awsme…. you making me crazy for this Trainer Arjun…. am falling for him…. he is damn cute man…awww… i was smiling wide while reading this…. fantabulous… outstanding… “wish me better luck next time” this was the best and i loved it to the core… i was enjoying dear… so curious to read nxt chapter… update ASAP… love you aloads and tons of kisses for this lovely and awsme episode…. tc darling… stay happy 🙂

    1. Dipika

      Sulbi darling thank you sooooo much much. Inwas always excited to read ftom u.. U always boosted me by ur sweet words.. Thank u sooooo much ? ? ? ? ?

  14. Dipu di.this was amazing.our arjun is a complete gentle man.radhika sometimes naughty but cute.this sam not only in series but in also ff she is always a bone in our ardhika you di take care

    1. Dipika

      Chashni darling thank you sooooo much for supporting me n loving me. Love u lots ? ?

  15. The Little Secret was awesome. ….n the conversation was amazing. …loved it dipuuu. …

    1. Dipika

      Likli darling thank you sooooo much ? ? ? ?

  16. Jnana

    Hey dips darling… It’s amazing…. Arjun. Is so cute….. Waiting for the next…. Post soon….

    1. Dipika

      Jhana darling thank you sooooo much for supporting me n loving me

  17. Nikuds

    Cool he handled the situation soo will. Please update soon this one was amazing. Love you take care.

    1. Dipika

      Thank you so much darling ? ? ? ? ?

  18. goshh..lovely update ..i was laughing abd smiling throughout

    1. Dipika

      Neetz darling thank you sooooo much ? ? ?

  19. Anu-Annie

    god this was one hella update.. rollercoaster ride of emotions it had.. Radz still debating about her self. She likes him, thats apparent but she doesn’t realize that.

    and Arjun toh, he’s a shy guy for Radz.

    and u know that line ‘i didn’t see anything’ reminded me of mmz. how radz said that to him.. i miss mmz. but with writers as fantabulous as you and others, it feels good.

    they have their own secret now but sam will extract it from radz..

    waiting for Neil…

    take care… love ya….

    1. Dipika

      Awee annie darling thank you sooooo much for supporting me n loving me.. I too remember tht incident n make it opposite herr.. Lol.. Love u lots ? ?

  20. Roma

    Awwwwww…Dipssssss…it was soooooooo awesoooooome, beautiful and adorable. ….so cute n splendid. …how can you write this amazing. …I’m sooooo luckyyy to read this unique amazing awesoooooome story. …..arjun n rads little secret…the trail room incident n their secretive msging……wowwww. ..I’m running out of words here to praise your amazingly awesoooooome talent my sweeeeeetheart darling sissyyyy. ….muaaaaahhhhhh. ..I just wanna give u tiiiight Bear hugssss. …kudos my sweeetheart. nailed it my honeyyy as always. filled this lovely story with your simplicity n naturally beautiful pure emotions. …..the way you narrating everything…it’s really superbbbb. ..keep it up honeyyy. . Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hugssss ♡♡♡♡♡♡ ;* 😉

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