If That Mistake Didn’t happened! {Two shot} (Prologue) ~ Komal

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Hey guys!
I’m here with two shots on Twinj!
This is specially written for Anam, coz her birthday is near the date!
Love you chudail!
It is a birthday gift for you in advance!
This is just a prologue and the 1st shot would be posted after 16 Dec coz I’m too busy writing exams!

If That Mistake Didn’t Happened!

TWINKLE’S POV

β€œLove is unconditional. It is a spiritual state, not an emotion. It’s not a choice you pick at a fork in the road….it exists forever.” Is this just an ideal we strive for but can never attain or is it possible for a human to actually love someone unconditionally, love them even if they do something we hate or they decide to leave us!
But is it the same in my case!

Some MISTAKES,
Some Mistakes are not that big and can be forgiven!
But have you guys ever thought what if A mistake is so big that you can’t even regret it!
Same was the case with me, if I would have not done that mistake, he would be alive!
If I would not have done that mistake, I would have lived happily with my LOVE!
If I would have not trusted him, I would never had done that MISTAKE!
BUT only IF is what is left!
I cheated on him, I loved him still I cheated him!

I can’t bring him back!
I can’t ask forgiveness for the mistake I did!
I betrayed him, I betrayed the LOVE of my life!
I lost him forever and its impossible to get him back now!
It was only coz of my MISTAKE!
If I would have not gone away like that, He would have been here!
Between us, with me!
We would have been happy!
We.. Would.. Have.. Been.. Happy!

But now we are not,
Coz he is DEAD!

So what is the MISTAKE?
Whom did Twinkle trusted that led to such mistake?
Who is Dead?
To know all this stay tuned to If that mistake didn’t happened!

So guys I’m giving a try on this two shots!
Tell me through your comments should I continue or not?
I would love to hear from you guys!

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18 Comments
  1. Aamu

    Komal….!
    Its seems different…n amazing….
    M ery eager…
    Do cont sooon
    N wen is anam’s bday

  2. SidMin23

    Wonderful and full of suspense. And Wandering what kind of mistake did twinkle did. waiting for next update.

  3. Ramya

    Hey komal awesome prologue loved it
    Plss do continue
    Loved it

  4. Anam_sidhant

    Oh shitt r u serious?😱,this is so sweet of u komalee😍😘
    U know what? I was just thinking abt this shots, the way u were hinting me and making me curious by telling 2 lines and leaving it on the suspenseπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Btw y twinkle ditch him,when she loves him more then her life?πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    coming to u❀ I’m blessed to have u komal❀❀ u r the most cuttest and funniest girl I have talked withπŸ’‹ I just love irritating you😁 (even u r irritatingπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚) now I am just wishing to meet u❀❀

    I Iove u so much small kid (i loved the way ur sister called u small kidπŸ˜‚)πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

    1. Komal123

      You are still irritating dont think that tag will change!
      And I’m no more a small kid!
      I’m grown up
      I love you too 😘

  5. Angita

    Great
    Looking forward 😘

  6. Chiku

    Holla komu😍😍😍😍its awesome
    Lovely. Its soo sweet. I wish the dead person in so kunj. Hope soo. Finger crossed.
    Komu i know u dont know my bday date. My bday is on 6 December. Can u post ur ff or any os on my bday also if u r free plzzzzzz
    Love uπŸ’šπŸ’œβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•

  7. Awesome.. seems interesting.. looking forward to read the first part ❀

  8. Sohi

    Plot is very interesting but soo long time means after one month please try to post soon and I think twinkle is telling about her unborn baby and about trust she is telling about kunj

  9. Adya

    Komal di
    Hiiii
    Hayeeeee
    Sooo cute…..
    Loved it yrrr di…. continue the soonest…..woah….
    Post fast sry soon….
    Love u

  10. SidMin

    Loved it the plot looks so interesting I just can’t wait πŸ™‚ Try Posting soon πŸ™‚ Love you πŸ™‚

  11. Kritika14

    HI Komal (once again πŸ˜‚),
    This was so interesting! I mean, what could that one mistake be? Why did that lead to his or shall I say kunj’s death? And that intro, dayum! You are a brilliant writer. I love your work! But the shittiest part is, you’ll post after 16th December? Are you kidding me? Such a long time! I hope you can write sooner …. Anyway, will be waiting for it, though!

    Lovess! xx πŸ’•

    1. Komal123

      Sorry but I’ve to write exams till 16!
      So i would be very busy to write my stories

  12. Rashiverma2199

    Wow….lovely prologue…..waiting to read further…..

  13. Roshini125

    Hey komal I do read ur ff bt it seems different yaar do continue bt do be frank I am hell jealous of u abt cmnts 70 ohmg…. I am really jealous of u yaar do continue ur ff I am waiting fr twinj union

    1. Komal123

      Thanks for commenting girl!
      Your ff is amazing and too believe me and do post soon!

  14. Sara28

    Wow. U gave us such a tempting an d amazing intro then just leave it at that? 😭 But I can’t wait until dec 16 comes, not cause its my birthday…but because the first part will be uploaded. Good luck on ur exams!

  15. dreamer..arundhati

    Komal….plz do ctd soon
    Lovely start
    All the best

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