Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake – Chapter 30 (Part 2)

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Chapter 30 (Part – 2)

She faintly opened her eyes,but smiled blinking twice,as she got to see him as her first view for the day,sitting before her…on that couch..leisurely..with his left arm spread over head rest.,looking her…Stretching her arms,she got up,but pulled the sheets to cover herself,when she realised her position….she searched for her t shirt..and there it was next to him on that couch…

“How was the night…”,he asked throaty and she managed to throw a pillow holding the sheets with one hand….

She nodded negative,when he opened his arms wide,gesturing her to come….She did the same in return….

“Why…??.. won’t you come?”,he asked…

“Aru…please…I want to ask you Some thing..”,she said…

“Aru…?!!”,he cocked a brow,walking towards her…..”Tricks..!! You make me listen to you”,he stood before her…

“Hmmm….how did you find…when I dint tell a word about it..”,she asked hesitant…

“About what,”,he knelt a leg over the bed…

“Ummmm…..you should say..” ,she thinned her lips…He smiled and hugged her close.,she pulled him to the bed…

“Hmm…I know…”,he saw her to look him expected…”ok…!! Of all the time you had to,why did you chose that moment to confront me…!! …When I was about to make love with you…Radhika….!! ..The moment I got off, reality hit you…isnt!..and you cried thinking that…hmmm….I noticed…its not me…the touch.,that bothered you…..that made you to speak those words ‘lust’…”,he saw her to listen him…

“I don’t know why….but I regret later…when you move away from me…”,she said feeble…

“It’s because you still remember those moments,after Preeti met us.,listening things afresh.,you were affected…this is why..,they say you should share your pain…..tell me…what shall we do to those fingers,that troubled you..”,he asked….

” I wanna chop it into pieces….and that Faizal…should whiplash him…and then pour…”

“My girl..is back..”,he cheered engulfing her into a hug and rolled down with her over him….

“Thank you…!”,she sing sang…” And only that senior???,”she asked..

“No..my Naughty junior…!! When you were sure that I won’t touch you,you played rolling and kissing me…enjoying to the extent you could …I observed your smile then…So lively you were…!! …Which I missed when I came near you…!! As a husband,I don’t want my wife to flinch with my touch.,or love me fearing for something…!!”,he smiled a little pulling her nose…

“They scared me lot Arjun….whenever your fingers rolled over my arm,I got only flashes of….that fellow,removing his shirt,inside that car… and when you came atop of me…,”

“Ssh…ok…that’s ok….!! But…your Arjun is yours isn’t….!! If you keep saying about him…”

“I wasn’t able to enjoy the moments with peace…lots of problems…and this too… you won’t believe…earlier I used to cringe even if Neil holds my shoulder..”,she widened her eyes affected…

“Hmmm…..You were ok in your Rover baby..isn’t..now…after yesterday…!”he winked… “You got to know….”.,he dragged and she blushed crimson red hiding her face in crook of his neck…

“You learned Ph.d in this I guess….”,she giggled….

“Only when you give yourself wholeheartedly it’s worth to consider….Remember….A filthy touch is not worth to scare you…!! Got it!! How can you turn weak Jerry..!! It will mean Faizal has won at some point”,he sounded serious…

“2 guys Arjun…they….had their fingers wild on my back and arm,while the other one tried to open my shirt,and that fellow.,he removed his dress before me…that moment…I thought only to escape…but later…at times….it kept haunting….I couldn’t sleep at night…I felt awkward to share with you….how to…Faiz…Faizal is a sadist…to let 3 persons to molest a girl…..I should have listened you in first place…..I befriended with him for my own worse…”,she sounded dejected.,sullen…

“Lets punish him like a sadist then..”,he said patting her back…

“Yes…he should fear to think about s*x …just like I had….”,she immediately bit her tongue.,after blurting…

“It was good that, I knew you from college times….I know what my Radhika will do..,will not…and Radhika Mehra…Can’t!..”…

She raised her head,to see him…

“Am right isnt….My radhika can never avoid me…who preferred my fingers to play on her cheeks.,now smiled a fake one,when I did the same…do you remember…you whined when I kept my palm on your back…I had no clue then..but last 2 days..when you said..you don’t want to see those photos of our college times….and the way you saw me when am away…like you lost me!!..God…!! Baby..why dint you open up…!!! Am I that bad…that I won’t understand…!!”,he lifted her chin to face him….

“It’s Sensitive!! I know!…but..Along with other problems,you worried for this too.,..I understand….. after all a Men’s touch..!! the more you think of it.,you will lose your peace..Last week.,you had no thoughts about it,when you were with me.,then why now…You decided to endure your mental trauma and was ready to love me…Why?? I ain’t that desperate to ignore your feelings…”,he voiced his disappointment….

“No…I was not sure on myself…but yesterday…”,she paused…

“You thought if you share…I will refrain myself from you..,No !!..I do have my own ways.,to make you think only about me.,when I touch you…kiss you…and every other time…”,he pecked her nose….”and..Yesterday…Mrs..Mehra…was on a kissing spree..”

“What??? No…”,she retorted…

“Yes…around 2 o clock…I was awake..what did you do to this poor husband of yours…”,his brows raised for his mischievous smirk…

“No…you laid like a statue…I was awake..but I dint do anything..”,she nodded her head vehemently…..

He laughed…”Shall I give a action replay,then?”,he asked seductively…..”hmm…where did you start…”,he pretended to think and she covered herself close…
“All dry kisses..why….”

“You are a cheater….Pretended to sleep”,she tried to avert her gaze…

“Yess…!! I did…!! I heard your love confession….and enjoyed your showers of kisses…baby…that was awesome…which you gave here..” he pointed his jaw line…and she covered her face…

“Move…I need to get ready..”,she pushed his shoulders…

“Where is my Morning kiss…you kept rubbing yourself over me…what if I dint respond…..Am I not a human!! ..Merciless wife you are..!! Played with my feelings…”,he fake glared her..

“Punishment!!”,she giggled..

“That was my trick”,he winked..”but was equally punished”,he sighed….

She laughed at his annoyed reaction,and he rolled her down under him,locking her hands over her head,..the chill sensation beneath her neck,indicated about that sheet,barely covering her….His predatory gaze scanning every inch of her form,made her to squirm a little….”If you move an inch.,it will slid down,then don’t blame me,”,he said to her face…

“Arj…plss.”she whined in pleasure.,when his lips covered her face with his feathery kisses.,as he left his hold on her hand,she pulled sheets till her neck.,..Uncaring of her attempts to cover herself,he placed slow soft kisses over her features..,and paused reaching her lips…

Her lower lip curled a little inside,and got bit by her teeth as she smiled….,he saw her eyes to look him….his eyes….”Baby…don’t bite your lips”,he said husky.,adjusting himself comfortable.,she moaned,when his weight rubbed her right….Shifting himself to her right,he slid his left,and gathered her whole towards his left,only to claim her lips completely,sucking it deep..,she let his tongue play,and his left pushed her more into him…,her right squeezed his white tees as he deepened his kiss…he parted his,when breath was their need….

“Good morning ma chΓ©rie…and it’s sweet..”,he said panting a little,rubbing her shoulder….She nuzzled her nose.,and placed her right cheek over his shoulder breathing heavy…It’s been since their college days.,she indirectly asked him to call his dearest so.,and he being in his naughty self addressed her as Jerry….till now,its just 2 times he had addressed her the way she asked….

“It’s Jerry senior”.,she mocked but gasped when he drew patterns on her bare back.,pulling the sheet a little away….Her whole quivered as his fingers leisurely traced towards her waist..,clutching her bare.,close,he whispered..,”No office” and placed a wet kiss on crook of her neck…She stayed silent….”I can’t”,she murmured and hugged him back,out of the blue pressing herself more into him…”Am sorry..I..”….

“Shh…pls…I could understand…”,he quickly withdrew himself.,and pushed that pale blue sheet over her back,she lied unmoving over him….”2 minutes pls”,she pleaded with her head on his right shoulder.,to have a clear view of his face…

“Shall we go back to our flat…”,he asked and she nodded positive…..”Hmm..I will pack things..and ask someone to pick ’em from here later….then….”..

“I will come home soon….hmm..4 o clock..”,she held his cheek to face her..”So..be…ready….”,she smiled biting her lip a little…

He raised his brows amused… “I see..”,he smiled…

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“Have your breakfast”,he said again when she rushed in between their packed luggage to get her watch…..

“It’s almost past 9…Am late”,she murmured….He pulled her to his lap.,and pushed a piece of cheese fluffy omelette inside her mouth….she munched aloud…

“Manners..”,he chuckled…

“Its you..no issue..”she chewed and settled comfortably on his lap,winding an arm around his shoulder…He enjoyed her every move.,being herself.,with him..!! He always had expected harmonious relationship with her….

“Did you eat….Aru..Darlingggg..”,she sing sang….He gestured his plate and she quickly brought to him…”Tasty sandwich”,she took another bite from his plate… “Kaka cooks so nice….”….Greeted back with silence.,she stopped munching.,and saw him to smile..”You did it!!”,she exclaimed…..”Ok..Ok…I should have guessed….I thought you helped Neil..”,she said when he mock glared her…Pulling his legs every now and then,she fed him..,had herself..and he just preferred to be silent…”You had too little..I ate almost half of yours”,she said as she got up….

“I already had down there”,he said extending a glass of milkshake….

“You thought me to be a garbage??”,she asked aloud….

“Dry fruit milk shake..Isn’t your fav.?”,he made her to hold the glass…. “You can drink till you reach your office..So..take your time”,he moved to clear things…
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She felt bad looking the dent on his vehicle.,had not she forced him to use it.,they would have got it done by then… “Arjun…Come in Lexus!”,she sipped her milk shake from that tall glass.,standing left side of the porch…

He pulled back the key he was about to insert,and threw his hands in air,exhausted…”You said…”,he chuckled wide…. “Don’t miss a single chance..”,(he walked around to her)..”My guards would enjoy watching me like this..”,he murmured,as he walked past and got to his room….

“Atif…the other one”,he pointed as he was about get into his Lexus…,and Atif got into another car to follow him….

He threw head controlling his laughter,when she placed her glass over dashboard, to buckle her belts… “What are you actually doing Jerry…Its just 375 ml…,and can’t you drink it in a go”,he asked as he drove…

“Lexus is also good..!”,she mumbled looking behind…

“Also good?????!!”,he asked surprised…

She bit her lips..”Ok!..But..Rover suits you.!!…”,she slid to his side,and laid her head over dashboard facing him….

“My spell..”,he winked…

“Aru baby.!!.”,she called him seductive and clicked her tongue….He rolled his eyes.,laughed amused…She continued…he glared her gesturing not to….”You are blushing.!!”,she exclaimed when he bit his lips as he drove fast…

“Stop speaking like that..”,he said inbetween his laugh….

“ummm…I told you not to wear Choco brown shirt….you look yummy….”,she giggled and quickly withdrew her head before he could hold her ear with his left…

“Next click form your tongue.! you will be in our bed…”,he said with his eyes on road… “Finish the milk shake..”,he said after a moment….
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“Bye…I will call you …”,she mumbled fiddling her mobile….. “Umm..that omelette.,sandwich..its heavy…I coul..”,she looked the glass before her..

“Anything wrong Jerry?”,he cupped her right cheek…she din’t speak a word,and was completely withdrawn in that past 20 mins travel to Birdsong..

She shook her head in negative….

“did you…..Ok…Baby…check your bag!”,he turned to face her.,and she opened her laptop bag.,her eyes froze looking the pistol inside…she saw him confused…

“It’s mine..!! Licensed..Use..if situation persists..!!”,he smiled…

Her back sagged into the seat.,”I won’t”,she faintly mumbled….Unbuckling her seat belt.,he turned her to face him..”No harm in that…Just have…you did ask for 5 mm caliber”,he saw her helpless…”Tch..What happened to you suddenly…any help..”..

She hugged him..”Nothing..Don’t come until I call you..and….and…never step in BS..pls dont get..”

“I won’t..I won’t…Relax..Shall I ask Neil to come..”,he pecked her forehead… “I will go inperson and bring him..”

“No..You don’t worry..not”,she tried to convince him…

“I will call you…”,he said when she got down the vehicle..
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Neil’s residence…

“Aunty..Is Neil at home?,he dint…”,he saw Neil tucking in his shirt…. “Why din’t you pick my call…Come with me to Birdsong”,he said….

Neil moved nonchalant..,while Prena glared him…”Radhika is keeping things away from me..Pls…”,Arjun looked him defeated…

“Why do you plead Aru..You…”,Prena was cut in middle when Neil spoke…”He can’t..and he won’t…’cause Radzzie won’t prefer it…”

“Why..?? Aru ..you listen me…”

“No Arjun..don’t…! Especially…To My mom!”,Neil said hastily…

“Neil..!”

“Will you both…”,Arjun yelled..and pressed his lips…”Please…”

Prena glared him…

“She isn’t allowing me…Wonder what’s the problem…wh….”….

“So…you will stay back…?She is scared….Fearing something…!! Its your responsibility to pull her out from her fear…”,Prena moved aside…

“And what if he gets targeted..”,Neil asked.. “You want us to run behind a headless assumption.,hiring guards for every single person…and..”

“But why do you discuss all this now?”,Arjun asked irritated…

“Because..She knows..Something….No…Everything!! Let Samrat uncle come..!! Iam not gonna spare him..”,Neil gritted his teeth…

Arjun saw Prena clueless….”Aru..don’t leave her alone..Go..”

“He won’t..!! We can’t risk his life…Radzzie fears….be it a stupid one….I will be by her side…and..Mom..tell me one thing…will you suggest the same if it was me…”,he looked her angrily and Arjun tried to pacify him holding his shoulders….

“Mind your words Neil..! Don’t make me to regret later..”,she raised her finger….”Aru..Go..Find whats bothering her..instead of wasting your time with Neil…”..she moved to her room…

“I had been asking this from yesterday night..did you say anything…..”,Neil murmured…”Will you let Sammy to suffer like this”,Neil asked high to her retreating back..,and Arjun got alerted when she stopped on her tracks….

“Neil….You said Samaira will be resuming to her job today..did you call her?”,Arjun asked after few minutes,when Prena got her bag to leave and Neil stood adjusting his tie….

“Have you started?”,Neil asked to the phone lying on his dining table as he buckled his watch….

“10 mins….You know….Mom herself asked me to continue in your company…”,Sam said like a news….

“Our company!”,Neil corrected her… Arjun snapped his look to Prena and saw her to smile a little…

“Ok..and.”…

“Hey Sam..how are you…”,Arjun quickly cut in her words…

“Am..fine….an”,she stuttered…

“Then…”,Arjun raised his palm to Neil gesturing not to intervene… “So…What’s that you are keeping yourself away from us…?”,he asked point blank…

“One day or other you should face the truth…..Do it now….and see what happens…”,he said like a riddle confusing Prena..and Neil pulled the chair next to him to listen intent….

She sighed before asking.,”Only truth!! Are you our Rival?”,she asked….

Prena sighed.,but the guys smiled wide…”Even am in search of that answer..,along with my wife !”,he relaxed back in his chair…Neil patted an inaudible one on Arjun’s shoulder….

“Okay..now…I need you in Birdsong…Will you come today?..”,he asked shocking Neil and Prena…

“If di says..”,sam clipped…

“She won’t….until she solves the so called…”

“We have Neil too”,she cut him in…

“But its your company…When Radhika isn’t ready to let him in….Why do you suggest that….and…If you don’t step in…I may need to..!!…So,think well !…and…I planned to take Radhika for a drive today…”,he spoke soft…

Neil and Prena saw each other…

“I will call you when I start…Jiju…”,she said before disconnecting the call…

He saw Neil to stare him…”You traitor….you made me call..and yaar…She had some purpose in having Sam away from BS…”,his mobile rang disturbing them….

“What?”,Neil asked shocking…

“Where’s is Mathews?”,Arjun got up tensed at the same moment..,attending a call in his mobile….They both saw each other and stepped away to continue their talk…..Prena stood grasping the situation from their replies and antics…

“Ah..Well..There was a unexpected…I mean..they say 2 men lost their lives as they slipped from the iron ladder…”,Arjun informed in common… “Renovation works!! That Resort!!”,he clarified when she looked him confused….

She averted her gaze to Neil,who stood tapping his mobile on his thighs…

“Will you spit it or not?”,Prena asked high surprising Arjun….

“Mom..Its..Its..Narcotics…Raid…in..Royal..”,

“What??”,she exclaimed aloud…

“Relax Aunty…..we will handle it..”,Arjun said as he attended another call…

“Okay..Okay..Am on the way”,he swiped his phone and turned around..

“Wait..”,Prena called them…and looked Neil…

“Mom..Trust me..I did every possible thing..I’am damn sure…there is no chance for such thing to step inside…You know our…”,he paused when she sat on the chair next to them…

The guys grew anxious at that…,they chorused every possible statements to convince her….

“Call Radhu..”,she said…Neil sighed before dialing…The call went unattended….Arjun repeated the same….”She might be busy..”,Arjun tried to reason out….

“Neil…Go to Birdsong…I will handle the Narcotics Raid….And call Sarat…Well..Aru.!.Who is that Mathews?..”,she looked him…They stood astounded at this sudden change in her behavior..,they thought she crashed into the chair in anxiety.,panicked.,but she had been contemplating the incidents…

“The one who handle..”

“Means…Ratan Bhai…wants you not to reveal the ownership or whatever…Its Mathews who should handle on your behalf..”,she asked to Arjun’s face…

“Yes..Like am In London..and he…”..

“Got it…Call him….If unable to reach…..Go by yourself….but don’t step inside the resort…I feel it to be a trap…Take another way…and….”,her voice vocalized the significance of being shrewd at that moment..,indirectly emphasizing hers in this field….

“I will handle with my boys in that case.”,Arjun nodded…

“But..”,Neil pleaded through looks when Prena was firm in her decision…”How will you handle..”he knelt down to her level…

“Who handled before you”,she counter asked..

“Then..You should be in touch..I will leave my..”,Arjun held her hand…

“I myself have a Person..Sidhesh…! You would have seen him in your reception..”.Prena spoke like a machine.,with her thoughts glued on something…She saw the guys sharing glances…

“What..!! Don’t try anything stupid….Aru..once you clear your issue….call me….Neil !!…Radhu..will never ignore my calls…So…”..

“Where are you?”,he yelled when she attended his call…Prena turned to face him….

“In office….I will call you later”,she hung the call,before Arjun could hand it to Prena…

“Maaa..”,Arjun saw her frustrated with the situation…

“Trust me Aru…Only you could handle it…First go to that resort.,then come to BS”,Prena held his hand and gestured Neil to carry on…

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The guys stood watching the lady in late forties to walk like a heiress.,followed by their guards…Neil gulped his tension., “Mom never steps in.,until the situation is worse….”he murmured…

She turned before stepping in her vehicle.,and gestured them to move…

“You mean somethin…”.

“Arjun…we need to speak with Samrat uncle…what the hell have they concealed…I need to know…”

“Neil…I will finish mine and join Aunty…You go to Birdsong…..we will discuss this later”,Arjun patted his shoulder…

“Arjun..why Sam?”,Neil asked…

“I could even ask the other way…Why my Radhika?”,Arjun pulled his door open…. “She is a Mehra now….Why to bear Khannas’ burden..?”,he looked Neil sharp…

“I won’t say that’s wrong….Pull her out of this mess if you can….I will be the first person to rejoice..standing next to you…”,Neil smiled…

“You are one best friend..to treasure for life..”,Arjun gave a thumbs up before getting inside his car….

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So…how was this…..Do share your precious words…..your reviews help me a lot….Boost chahiyee..!!! Pls ignore my Typos and grammatical errors….I so love your reviews…so don’t keep me away from it…..Missing you Vipu….Jaldi se aana….!! Love you all loads…Take care….Stay happy….

49 comments

  1. Brin

    Brin

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    Outstanding episode, love it, Arjun made Radhika to confess her nightmare, eagerly waiting for the next update, Jessie you nail it, well done. πŸ™‚

  2. moni

    Awesome. Wow prena’s attitude is superb. Each and every scene is fabulous. Worth waiting long. πŸ™‚

  3. Meenakshi

    Well done superb episode Jessie eagerly waiting for next update. Update soon 😍😍😍😍

  4. Bhargavi

    I like this story too much Jessie. But it’s too much for me to absorb. Please try to post it regular

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hey Bhargavi…glad to you liked it…I wish to post regularly…I did also..before I had laptop issues…anyways…will try to dear…thanks for liking it and dropping in…TC…stay happy

  5. Sangee

    Sangee

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    Hey j awesome yar…. 😘 now story is gaining a new speed… Atlast radika opened up…. Arjun guessed the reason for her behavior in prior itself… That’s y I say he is the best hubby… Rads tarnuma it’s normal for every girl who goes through such tortures… Arjun is one caring understanding hubby 😘 milkshake… 😘… Narcotics ride… Something fishy Today I saw pernas different avatar… All together superb one yar love you loads 😘😘😘 next one soon… Sry for the short comment Pongal ku veedu sutham pannu nu enna roundu katti adikiranga poor me 😒 bye bye love you 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘

  6. Saran

    Jessie mindblowing…. Loved it… Ardhika Car scene awesome…. Superb…. Am addicted to ur ffs…. Waiting for next… Pls update next soon… Take care… Stay happy….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Saran…thanks a lot yaar…thanks for sharing your fav…and addicted.!! that means a lot…wish to post soon..honestly…TC….Stay happy…love your support yaar…

  7. Sulbi

    Sulbi

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    Jazz kutty… awsme… Arjun made Radhika to confess in a beautiful way.. cherie… aww… so cute and lovely… Naughty Arjun… so Narcotics raid.. wats gonna happen next… so curious baby… anticipating for next one dear… love you and tc… πŸ™‚

  8. Chashni

    Jessie chellam this is marvellous.arjun’s dialogues and his support for rads was superb.he is the king of your story.arneil bond was also nice.especially that thumbs up scene.keep on rocking dear.love you take care

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Chashu….thanks a ton dear….thanks for sharing your likes….yes..king than….thumbs up scene…haiya..adhu super…thanks again…love you tons…take care

  9. Jewel

    Jewel

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    prerana, she is superb, what a women…. ardhika, rads, she went through a lot and keep everything inside her, arjun, he is the best husband, he understand her every problems and cares her a lot…. ardhika part was really superb….. i liked that confession part a lot…neil, he is a good friend he stands for rads always…. samarj part also, he know how to deal with everyone… he is awesome… jez as always this chapter also superb… waiting for next….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Shonaaa…thanks a lot dear….confession..yay!! thanks…I so loved your review….samarj…was small..still you got the note…am happy dear….each and every point you had shared….am bowled over…Ardhika bond!.yes….Arjun..! yes..yes….thanks for you support and super review girl….Loads of love…TC

  10. Gauri

    Gauri

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    What an amazing piece for work…..finally I completed all pending ones….god I want Faizal dead or else I will chop him with my own hands😑 and Arjun ….Oh…could you hear the mad beating of my heart πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’— ..this what a man should be like… respecting a woman…even if she is your wife…Jess million hugs for you Radhika-Arjun were the show stealer and you are a rockstar🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸 loads of love and million hugs😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Gauri…thanks a lot dear….wow..!! don;t chop..you are a good girl…mad beating!!!! Gauri..am on top of the world…yay!! Neil ki diwani ke dil ab Arjun ke liye madly beating..wah…Wah…ARjun…!! Thanks dear…that meant a lot…so happy I am….yes..yes…you said it correct…am dancing…yay!! wow..!!Teddy hugs to you my magician….wow…guitar…loads of love dear…am so so so happy reading your words…

  11. Rossy

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    Jazzzy….u know one thing….i am always in a spree to punch Arjun but ur Arjun…this msm Arjun…god…he I totally different and awesome….fists of all though he is Richie rich he I sober, despite violent he is cool….and finally I admit I like this shade of him….totally intriguing yet phenomenal and perfect man for any woman….and that Faisal 😈😈😈 kill him that hospital itself….aaargh….😠😠 he was already on my nerves…huh….finally radz opened up but Arjun…when did he will open up…and what kind of danger coming….i know they can handle it still….prerana. .one lovely lady always….that resort history…unwind that…ohk…relax rossy😍

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      wow….wow…Rosie….am so so happy…you like this shade of Arjun…wah..!! Jessie pats herself…perfect man!!! am smiling wide..and you don’t want to punch…am happy with that..he is safe…Faisal..he has more…punishment….he already had opened up….the misunderstandings between them is solved…danger…!! lets see…prena..thanks ya…ok..done…thanks a ton Rosie…love you loads

  12. arti viswanathan

    Jessie darling superb,fantastic,excellent,outstanding episode…. I loved it to the core….. I liked all scenes…. Tc and loads of love…..

  13. Gianna

    Gianna

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    Sweetheart, what an amazing chapter just loved it, didn’t want it to end. We should clone this Arjun for every woman needs a man like him, he stole my heart today. Somebody please kill Faisal before I do it myself, someone needs to chop his balls. Really loved Prena’s avatar today, I always love to see women in power. Resort, narcotics, BS so many problems, waiting to see how you will make them solve them.

    Stay blessed my Sweetheart 😘😘

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Sweetheart…Thanks a ton…now what will I say….clone him..hahha..,,Swthrt..already in our group we are behind Arjun versions..lol..now cloning..! I will keep this as secret..am selfish you see…lol…glad to have your words….chop his balls…!! shock…giu..shanthi..pls…prena..thanks yaa…ok..I will wait for your reviews on those chaps…coz..I wanna know did I make it look well or not…Love you tons….bear hugs…Stay happpy dear

  14. Amore

    Amore

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    Confession! Confession!! Confession!!! As it is said… START WITH A BANG… and as it moved ahead the chappy made me deaf as i was unable to hear my friends calling me…

    Do I need to tell again that how much I’ve started adoring Arjun’s character??? I mean his UNCONDITIONAL LOVELY UNDERSTANDING AND PERFECT PARTNER (for Radhika of course) character???

    The way he made her accept and express her fear.. The way he confessed that knew her playful act… The way he said that showed how much he trusts her trust upon him… “THE TRUST HE HAS FOR RADHIKA’S TRUST FOR HIMSELF” He not only trust her but also have a firm belief upon her acts… His talks shows us the TRUST SHE HAS ON HIS ACTS as well… He made her overcome her fear of touch and then he questioned “How can you turn weak Jerry..!! It will mean Faizal has won at some point” showed us that he not only wanna make her come out of the fear of touch but also make her strong MENTALLY which she still is not… Jess your this line gave a clear picture that how deeply Arjun knows Radhika… She never uttered a single word him but he was wide awake while talking on her conditions… and and and… the way he said “Let’s punish then”… this was so like THE ARJUN MEHRA πŸ˜‰

    KISSING SPREE!!!! SERIOUSLY???? DAmn girl you just changed the serious situation so amazingly with Mischievous Arjun made me smile like an elastic…

    Awesome!!!

    The way she said… ”No issue, Its you” made me feel light as a balloon watching her comfort…

    He will run behind her and will find what is troubling her so much… I Know that he is not the one who will let her alone in any situation…

    Gotta go for now but will comment completely again as I have still Much to say…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Amore!! Am just fascinated with the way you brought the essence of the character ‘ARJUN’…am honestly proud and satisfied of framing this character..like really…!! excellently brought..his belief on her trust on his acts…* claps* take a bow…this is such unforgettable moment as well as a comment for me…!! The Arjun Mehra..wish someone like this to exist…haha..you got it right…felt like balloon..wow..!! you express so welll…yes..he will..but wont run behind her..but he will….yes..you got his character correctly…am so happy…thanks for being such a wonderful person..that you shared your reviews inturn boosting my energy…All I wish is….there should be no hurdles in my way until I finish this story…honestly…I daily feel that…I got so very good readers here…I wanna type daily a update and post it fast…lappy luck chahiye…

  15. Amore

    Amore

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    Hey! Back again… Sorry had to go due to a work…

    But when I’m here I have an important thing to say… PRENA WAS AWESOME-LY, FABULOUSLY, ENTHRALL-Y “A BOSS”… Of course SHREWD without a doubt… We still have so much to drink but your story has made us tipsy already…

    β€œI won’t say that’s wrong….Pull her out of this mess if you can….I will be the first person to rejoice..standing next to you…” showed the bond RaNeil share. This line showed what Arjun is in the eyes of Neil when it comes to HIS CHASNI…

    “You are one best friend..to treasure for life..” shows how much Arjun adore their bond; showing how much respect Arjun has for Neil in his heart…

    To be true Prena stole the limelight today… She made my eyes go wide as if I’ve used machines to open my eyes… A TRUE HEIRESS… What an answer to the boys… She has blown The boys brain and my mind was blowing whistle as if i was a train…

    Sam and Radhika are so damn good… obviously THE KHANNA bloods have hidden something big… Either INDIVIDUALLY OR TOGETHER…

    Time for revelation of VILLAINS AND VAMPS is near… Its knocking the door… And by the way Jess… lemme warn you a thing… You better open the knocking door and reveal them soon.. in-fact… before I knock your head with my questions… hehehe

    Mind blowing and heart flying chappy… Keep it up…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Hey…yes…Prena is so…am glad it got the reach….tipsy..haha..good ya…you make me smile freq as I read your comment….yes…You really in writer’s shoes…I should say…what Arjun is in Neil’s eyes..fantastic catch….

      exactly…I thought it might be unnoticed…you are seriously one gifted person…I should admit….u got all three angles I aimed for….haha,,khanna blood…yep…am glad with your view..especially on all bonds portrayed here…and prena and sam…wow…yes near…hahah..I love to open…do pray for my laptop’s health….Like real honestly…now a days I feel only that…am happy..dear..so happy..spellbound with your amazing review…

      Even years after…that words you mentioned for Ardhika bond will stay with me…coz…that part was my fav…and I did wonder how far it will reach beyond the limit of Arjun is a good husband…am glad.am so happy….I repeat these again…God bless you Amore!! Stay happy forever my friend!!

  16. Aasthu

    Aasthu

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    Hey Jess!!!!!!!! Missed me????? Sorry for not commenting…I thought to take it slow but you decided to move fast……I’ll tell you a happy news….

    I loved the prev chappy’s too…..u have improved in romance a lot…I’ll speak abt it later……I didn’t understand this one completely……Rads explanation as to why she told Arjun’s touch to be filled with lust cleared my doubt….happy that everything solved between them….what did they say about that Faizal???? didn’t understand that……..ardhika is too hot…..which isn’t surprising since u r handling ut….oh sry again diverted from the topic…..but its the truth yar…….the next part totally confused me….what was it about Sam??? Arjun and Neil convo didn’t make any sense…..then Prerna auty’s part…I didn’t understand that part…where was the raid going on??? what has Arjun’s presence in Mumbai got to do with that???? Why did he call Rads???? what was Prerna aunty gonna do????????

    Now that I have asked all that I wanted to, I’ll tell you the happy news……when you started writing this ff, you were average in Romance. After so many updates of this and a couple of OS’s…..your position has risen……now you are in the third position !!!!!!!!!!! congrats !!!!!!!!

    Ranking in Romance….
    1) Thena ( no one can defeat her)
    2) Sathya di, Shree, Farha
    3) you, Giu di, Gauri di, Meen chechi

    Ammu chechi and me are not even averages Jess…..we both are innocent kids……

    Hope you’ll reply soon and give me a gift by updating any of the promised updates…..love u….tc……….muaaaaaaahhhhhhh………..

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Chinnu…am already too slow….missed you…yes…thanks a ton for being here…sam is safe..Raid in Neil’s hotel…then…Ardhika..faisal…..here too..he tried to kidnap and let ppl misbehave with her…the rest..already said..u were lost in hot..lol..you dint read it…Ranking..oh gosh…!! thanks anyway!! hahahh..girl..wat to say…innocent.you…Ammu is…I will accept..but you…* cocking my brow*oh really…hahah…you write one romantic os…pouring all your thoughts…promised ones…you know my difficulties to get laptop..lemme finish all the ongoing ones…will do …sanam re..I remember…love you too…TC

  17. Aadya

    Aadya

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    It was so amazing Jessie di like I really really loved it. Such an amazing bonding between ArNiel. Cute romance between ArDhika was absolute amazing.

  18. Saran

    Jessie… Where r u…. When did you update ur ffs… Am eagerly waiting for u… Missed u and ur ffs… Pls post soon…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Saran..Saran…thanks yaa…am actually happy.to read this…seriously…as a reader I had wrote such to many authors..now am receiving it…Thanks yaar….am trying my level best to post atleast one daily….stay happy

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