Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake – Chapter 28 (Part 2)

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Hello….Everyone…Its Jessie again..well…this one was done as I said..So am posting it today..Other two..I will try to post soon…got busy with few things..Else I would have wrote it today…Ok…I din’t reply for your comments in prev chap….Super sorry for that..!! means..apologizing in a super style..whats that..Radz and Arjun dishyoom katham hone wala hai..iss chappy se shuru….

Chapter 28 ( Part 2)

He drove tensed..listening Arjun’s guards to say she is still in home and Raghav to parrot the same…He called the house landline…none received…

He called to Sam again..the same response…His eyes narrowed on the mansion before.,Piyali’s scornful looks and his mom’s concerned words,to never step into Khanna Mansion flashed in his mind… Sam’s denial to help him,pulled him ahead of.,of all other things…his vehicle screech halted expressing his thoughts…His brows furrowed looking no one there…Raghav came running to him…Neil got down and walked towards the steps..

“Madam ji went out an hour back”,Raghav informed…

Neil ran inside,but halted looking the telephone on the table…The connection has been disrupted….He hurried to Sam’s room,but saw her mobile lying in the bed.,and her favorite cartoon Tom & Jerry to play in high volume….He searched into Radhika’s room and found her starring outside the window…

“How are you?”, she jerked a little listening his voice..

“Neill..here?…how.?..”,she came rushing to his side and pulled him to her room…She was silent looking him to glare her…

“So..you are angry on me..isn’t…”,he asked her…

“You spoke…”,she was cut in…

“Even you accused me to be a money leecher..”,he said..

“No!! I din’t mean so…”,she retorted…”I wanted you to know.,how you sounded…”,she said to his face…

“Ok..then why din’t you come to work”,he asked..

“I am not doing well”,she stuttered and moved to her bed….”Neil…Sorry to say..but leave…pls..go away before mom comes..she may scold you”,she said..”She will come for lunch now”,she looked the clock…

He slid his hands into his pockets and narrowed his eyes…”Let her”,he said and her eyes enlarged a little at that…Before she could speak any further they heard Piyali’s car to be parked…

Sam tried to usher.,but No!…Neil stood calm watching her plight….

“Why are you here..Don’t you”,Piyali’s words were cut in.

“Am her boss!she works in my event management company…”,he said..

“Will you visit your every emplo…”

“Of course..Yes..To find if they are really unwell or not…”,he snapped back…

“Neil..”,Piyali hissed…

“Mr.Neil Malhotra..!! and with all due respect,I think you haven’t got the meaning of what I said”,he said sacchraine sweet…

Sam felt,to get dizziness listening him…She had never witnessed this dismissive side of Neil..

Piyali threw a annoyed look at him….”So,you got to know isn’t…now Leave!”,she gestured the stairs…

Neil smirked a unseen one.,squeezing his mouth nonchalantly,he turned to Sam….”Sam….what’s wrong with your health!?”,his brows quirked up mocking….

Sam blinked amused at his attitude…”ah..umm…Fev..fever”,she stuttered with her gaze locked with his….

He glanced sideways at Piyali,”when will you….”,

“Well…Neil…she won’t work in your company anymore…And…she doesn’t need to….”,Piyali said arrogantly…

Neil peeked a look at Sam immediately,only to see her,to fiddle the edge of her t shirt,thinking a way to handle the situation…

“How could that happen.AUNTY…!!”,he asked saccharine sweet…”Guess…Sam dint inform you.,she has signed a year contract…”,he slid his left palm into pant pocket…

Piyali looked Sam for a answer…

“Ah..yes….A contract..”,Sam said feeble…

Piyali’s eyes rolled in anger and surprise….why to make a employee contract when there was a tie up between their companies…

“She isn’t any normal employee…she is..”,

“Aunty…Aunty…!!!”,he sing sang,smiled….”The contract!..the agreement is done…hope you know the terms and conditions…So…Sam…Friday..! Friday you should report sharp at 10am”,his eyes narrowed at her…

Sam looked Piyali…

“Neil…we will pay the compensation amount for terminating in the….”

“Uff….what is this sam..! Only if you had told it clearly,Aunty would not be speaking like this…childish!”,he smiled wide…”Aunty…there is no such option at all…she has to work..!!..Must to…!! Under any circumstances..! Else…Legal action!”,he finished saying in bits and pieces on a authoritative note…

“What nonsense…! Who makes such..”

“Mom…that’s the truth…I signed it.”,Sam intervened..

“No more questions Aunty…and Sam…Remember Friday..you have to..well..if you are still unwell..come for paper works alone..but…Friday!”,he gesture asked her…..”And the calls…work calls are important..!!”….turning to Piyali..,he said,”2 days is enough to recover..I guess!”,he remarked sharp.,and “I mean…from fever!”…he smirked…

“I need to talk with my staff regarding a work…so…will you please excuse us..”,he smiled to Piyali..

“Why…speak here”,piyali said like a order…

“I can’t discuss before strangers…”,his sharp remark was enough to raise Piyali’s subtle temper…

“Neil”,sam called meekly..

“Oh..Sam.!!..I meant…Aunty is nowhere related to Event Zone isn’t..I said on that note..”,he glared sharp at Piyali…

“Mom…I will be back now..Neil…pls come down..”,sam walked before him to stairs…Neil snapped his look to Sam who stood in stairs,..

“See you Aunty”,he quickly descended the stairs….

The words Aunty did irritate her,and when everytime he stressed the word.,she only held back her urge to yell,because of the so called contract he meant….she stood watching them to move towards the door way…

“Neil…”,Sam was cut in…

“I dint intend to…! But…anyways…Sam…if you keep staying back at home…I will be forced to come here..,so its your choice..”he saw the garden around with a smile… “same Rose garden!”,he murmured with a smile…

Sam smiled…”yes…its years you came home..isn’t !!…It went through few alterations…hmm..But di…strictly asked it to be back”,she moved next to him,and held his hand,”I am sorry Neil.”,she said looking his face…

His gaze caught her guilt written orbs…

“I never thought you would come home…!”,she said with a humorless smile..

He shook his shoulders nonchalantly…”I just…I..”,he sighed defeated…”I was scared.!! Promise me..you will attend my calls”,he asked worried…

“Sorry..!! I will come on Friday…!!.”,she nodded .

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She checked her watch impatiently…its been 9pm and still he dint come to pick her…

-On the way Ma’am -, Atif’s msg read…

The moment,he parked his vehicle,she came rushing down…He starred her,leisurely walking form before him…..The drive continued in complete silence,expecting each other to initiate a talk…

She saw him quizzical reaching Neil’s hotel…He got down without a look…

“Ma’am….this way for buffet”,Amar came from nowhere to help her…

“Amar,You still remember,I chose buffet one”,she enquired casually following him…

The guy returned a smile saying,”Ma’am…Neil sir is also there.”

Arjun filled his plate and moved to a table,while she had a treat of glancing the delicacies,widely arranged….

He saw Amar to extend a bowl and she giggled tasting it…

“Radhika!!…”he called loud enough, to get Neil’s and everyone’s attention on them….he regretted for calling aloud.,snapping his look all around…

“You are so tired Ma’am”,a young girl said when she came with her food to their table…

“Yea…seems your boss is too busy”,she mocked…

“Yes….he just now came to caterers unit…he is back after some 2 weeks…that’s y”,the young girl dismissed herself after explaining…

“It’s because of me..! He was for cheer beats when I came here…its really tough isnt to manage three…”,Radhika paused at his silence…

He chewed his food glaring her…She ate in silence after that….they observed Neil to be busy speaking with one or other staffs….and when he steps to them,Someone would call him…

“Am sorry…I couldn’t…”,Neil came fast walking to them…

“That’s ok man…we could see isn’t…”,Arjun stood patting his arm…”We finished…thought to have a word before leaving”..

Listening that,she stood from her place…Neil saw her dull face…”Radzzie….how was the desserts…did Amar give you all the 5 varieties ??”,he side hugged her ..

“Yea”,she nodded…Arjun saw her surprised.. he walked away with his mobile…

“You sounded like weeping..why.??”,Neil asked and she realized the reason for Arjun’s surprised look….May be,meeting her friend,she herself lost the control to hold them back…

“Neil..am..am…scared for Arjun…he had death threat when he studied with us…”,she whispered…

“He said the other day,when we met Preeti..btw…who told you this”,he asked…

“Arjun said…today…Sarat uncle too…”,she explained the day events to him…

Arjun smiled looking Amar’s antics…He moved around Neil,holding the staffs back,from discussing with Neil…One guy almost came to Neil,and Amar pulled his arm pushing a guest down…unaware of all this,Neil listened keenly to Radhika.,who spoke having a recently given,dessert!!..

“Good job Amar!!”,Arjun said when Amar crossed him…

Amar followed his gaze and smiled…”Ma’am is here after 4 years…she never disturbs sir unless something is important”,he raised his brows explaining his stance..

“Go…your husband is waiting..”,Neil said

She turned and saw Arjun to look her..”20 mins!! My god…Neil..Am surprised with his patience level..”,she giggled before wishing him for night…

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She stopped on her tracks,when Nandhini called Arjun…

“Aru….I called you twice..why you dint attend the call..”,Nandhini asked…

Radhika turned around..

“Hmm…I left my mobile in silent as we were in meeting”,he climbed the stairs…”Good night di..”,he said looking Radhika,who stood on his way…

Nandhini saw Radhika.,while she looked Arjun,who had his back to Nandhini….

“Good night di.”,Radhika smiled to Nandhini..

“You lock our room?”,she asked when Arjun unlocked that door..

“Our????”,he smirked mocking…


She sat upright irritated…she saw his lying form…He lied on his left with his back to her,and for the past half an hour,she had been bombarding numerous questions and incidents only to his back….

She tried recalling the day’s events…which went wrong…he indeed scolded her while dropping her at BS that noon…how long she sat like that,she wasn’t aware,but random thoughts kept her oblivion..she was totally immersed in the images she reminisced…blinking back her tears.,she saw him,still lying with his back facing her..

“Arjun…”,she sounded depressed….

“Senior…!! I feel like crying!! Why!?”,she yelled a little loud and saw him to turn his head to her…he saw her a moment and turned completely,lying on his back…

Before he could speak something,she sprang over him,covering his torso…

“You wont speak with me isn’t..?”,she asked with tears…

“Have you turned dumb..?”,she asked again, when he remained silent…

His thumb wiped her tears…”sleep”,he replied..

“I wont”..

“Get off…”,he pressed her shoulders pushing her…

“I wont”,she moved more comfortably over him,looping her hands around his neck…

He saw her,to lie across the bed,her upper half on him,and rest on bed…He closed his eyes…

“let me sleep…stop behaving desperate..”,he said hoarsely..

She raised her head and saw him intently…

“What..”,she asked…

“I said…take off your hands.,this lusty touch…and…”,he paused seeing her to smirk…

“Thats a low blow dear Mr.Mehra!!…”,she rubbed his nose with hers…

“I mean it..An”..

She pecked his lips…

“Say.,whatever you want…”,she continued pecking his cheeks and lied like before…

“I know…am being paid back by Mr.Mehra….it will hurt…but…I can endure it”,she said in low voice…

She saw his hands to lay still,instead of hugging or comforting her…

“Are you behaving like this,….to…get back your properties..”,he gritted his teeth…

“Scores equaled !!”,she immediately replied..and he unconsciously smiled …He inhaled a sharp breath to control himself from responding to her witty nature…

“Why so stubborn?”,she saw his face..and he turned his gaze on her worried features…

“Why so furious?”,he asked back,and her forehead creased a little…

“You want every thing to happen in a day…No second thoughts…you even threaten me…”

“You dint listen me”,she retorted back…

“So.???…your furious nature will pull more troubles…”,he glared her.

She rested back on his chest..”you are there isn’t…”,…she jerked her head off.. “And…and…I have…Atif”,she winked at him…

He rolled his eyes,biting his cheek, only to control his laugh…

“Smile…smile..”,she poked his lips…

His mobile beeped with a msg…she handed it,without a glance…

He saw her…”you don’t want to know who messages me at this hour?”,

She nodded negative…

He saw her to drew patterns on the pillow lying next…she had been always like this…She never interfered in his privacy…never suspects on his aloof nature…never bothered about his status or anything…only him…all she cared was only him…

He kept his mobile aside…

“Jerry..!!”,his left comforted her back,she jerked at that…

“What?”,she asked without looking him..

“I love you!”,he crooked his neck to see her face..

“I know that!”,she replied..and he laughed after a sec.,holding her close to him..

He tried to remember the guy in pic.,later his eyes widened in surprise…That was Faizal..Lying in a hospital bed.,injured with bandages on his left arm and leg.,and in his forehead too..but how….Prakash has send his pic and a text saying “Remember this idiot?”

He quickly called him.,”How you got this..I mean..”,

“Arjun…I went to Hyderabad for a meeting…a small injury.,and in that hospital.,I got to see this fellow in this heart warming pose…can’t resist you see..So I clicked a pic”,Prakash remarked sarcastically…

“But who?”,he asked..

“No idea..May be a accident..I thought it could be you?”,Prakash remarked ..

“No..no..got busy with some other things.”,he replied and hung the call..

He saw her to lay awake.,after hesitating for a while,he called.,”Jerry..see what Prakash has sent?”…

She moved from his right to his left lying over him.,

“Stop rolling….Get down Jerry..”,he said…

“Iam trying to cover my husband..”,she replied and he slapped her cheek playfully with a smile…

“Faizal..!!”,she exclaimed in shock…

“Yes…Our love!!”,he stiffled his smile…

“why PK din’t send me..”,she pulled his mobile close…

“Leave it..What’s wrong with Faizal’s eye…I was unable to identify him..”,he asked..

“Oh that…I told isn’t…Acid..! that time.,Preeti came,small push and pull between us..so few drops kissed his cheeks”,she smirked… “In a hurry,Preeti dashed over him.,and when he pushed her on me,we both tried to duck.,I did.,she didn’t..so she got hurt..that time.,he too got injured..”

“And you?”,he asked back…

“For me,near thighs..Luckily nothing much… no injuries…”,she said in a sullen voice…

“Then thighs..If not injured why you say..”.

“It wasn’t Jean..so..the dress absorbed acid fast,so slightly…actually..I din’t feel it to burn at all..unless we checked reaching the hospital…It was only Faizal who got mostly injured..
His burn was worse before a year…Serves better”..she nodded her head and gave back his mobile..

“Show me”,he said..

“I gave it..”

“I dint say about mobile…Show your injuries”,he said and tried to pull her pyjamas down..

“What…Its not there now…”,she held his hand and looked him… “Its not even a wound..”,she said irritated..

“But..”

“Aaahhh…Arjun…Plsssss….”,she screamed in his ears…

“What happened..you are so cool today…My Jerry is back!”,he pulled her nose..

“that’s a secret…you need to give me a promise to know that”,she said hugging him…

“Hmm…You need to apologize for your words..to get my promise”,he looked her face intent…

“You too gave back..No apologize..nothing..”,she shook her head…

“Then get down..Stop grinding with your…”,she closed his mouth…

“Senior…Good night”,she pecked his cheek…

“Arjun…did you ask about that legal issue and…”

“I will…stop worrying…”,he patted her back…

“You want me to get down”,she giggled a minute later…

“Its almost past 12..Sleep..”,he pulled her close…

He jerked when he felt something to pull his tees suddenly.,he scrutinized his vision in darkness.,and saw her to sit..rubbing her forehead.,tears…she turned to him..slid down on their bed.,caressed his hair,and placed a dry kiss on his forehead…she gulped water hastily.. and turned to the other side..

She lied to her right.,recalling her nightmare….feeling something heavy to engulf her suddenly,she was pulled away from her reverie….she tried to push him.,but stopped when he
nuzzled his nose under her neck.,with a sleepy moan…caressing his cheek,she pulled his arm close over her middle,and she drifted off to sleep…..

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Good nightt…..Sweet dreams…..Jessie to drifts off to sleep…hehe..its 12…..Happy Monday! Great week ahead guys!!

So…how was this?…Well…about my laptop..the service guy said.,he couldn’t get the hardware needed…Lappy model issue….Wonder what to do?…Okay…Do share your reviews yaar…I love to read ur reviews….Loads of love to you all…Take care…

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58 Comments
  1. Sangee

    am i first?

    1. Jessie

      Yes…Geet chellam…neenga than first…. 😉

      1. Sangee

        hey j here goes my thirai vimarsam for u 🙂 … no emojis as iam typing in my lappy… so before starting i dedicate all cute cute emojis in ur keypad to you….unconnected land line..mobile in bed…TV still on omg WTH i thought something bad had happend to sam.. uff but there she he found… en ma j ippadi panriye ma …u r raising my bp…ennaku edavdu achu na nee pala per ku badil solla vendiyadu irrukum pathu ko (wink) …mom may come…let her come… engaluku enna baya ma unga ammku enna komba molachi irruku he he he piyali and neils convo was really a treat to read… sema nose cut.. fever..velaiku vara mattala nalla bong ah la irruku …neil gave back correctly….AUNTYYYYYYY AUNTYYYYYYYYY lol …contract…2 days enough to recover neil u nailed it 😛 😛 😛 …piyali …stranger… this is ht of insult ….Sam…if you keep staying back at home…I will be forced to come here..,so its your choice ….bravo boy…nee varala na nan varuven eppudi …rose garden…i was scared … me too neil… so neil have feelings for sam super super…another love story yet to bloom 🙂 🙂 … rads restlessness ..atif msg… super ….neils hotel…buffet..delicacies….arjun un wife ahve iruthalum konjam kupudum podu medu va dan kupudanum ok …(vadively style)..boss is too busy…ama ippa dan sam ah pathu tu vantharu 😛 😛 … 5 varieties of ice creams oh gosh …. i too need a frnd like neil 😛 rads scared abt arjuns life threats…. Good job amar..raneil bod was super….surprised of his patience …all because of u rads…dear nandini di he was busy so he didnt attend your ok …our room ha ha ha iam gigling here …enpa arjun ava ivlo neram ah pesara response panna dan enna …senior… adu ippa tirumbi dane aganu…Have you turned dumb..?” sleep… ava enna kelvi keta nee enna badil solra …rads i think he is deaf not dumb 😛 …now the game starts…stop being desparate…lusty touch…rads tasting her own medicine…Say.,whatever you want i will do my work he he he ….Are you behaving like this,….to…get back your properties…..adra adra arjun…Scores equal…one point goes to rads…Why so stubborn?…….Why so furious?……i was like sabash sariyana potti…nee irrukum podu nothing can happen to me…i have atif tooo he he he rads superb appdi dan off panna num …sirichidu sirichi du…. i loved ardika scens to the core dear…i remainded of arjuns dialog …my radika will understand …. what a understanding couple…wen rads scolded him he was quite… wen arjun ponited out her venomous words she didnt get offended… Most understanding couple of the year goes to Mr and Mrs .ARM …give a big round of applause to them….arjuns POV <3 <3 …jerry i love u…i know that …<3 <3 <3 faizal heart warming pose… ha ha ha pk unnaku nigar nee dan da…arjun ke adayalam theriyala ya super..accident yar aduku karanam …nadanthadu enna…pk thought that its arjun ha ha ha avan duty ingaye over time ah irruku idula faizal veraya…oru vela avan dan cycle gap la senjitano …iam thinking…stop rolling…trying to cover my husband …. what happend to our radu ya…she is in full form … didnt sent to u….pk injury nu sonna ne ada pathi yaravadu keteengala da…unnaku photo annupala nu kekara…poor pk … acid attack to faizal wow wow ….yes served better…show me… i gave it…radu u r buddhu… injuries…aaahan (vadivelu style)…appologize ha ha ha yarkita…scores settled baby he he he ..stop worrying radu arjun is here he will take care of all issues 🙂 🙂 You want me to get down … radu is also becomming naughty nowadays….almost past 12 na thoonga num ah solla ve illa he he he … nightmare ah omg…hey bagwan nothing bad shud happen to our ardikka …iam praying here….i loved it to the core j hugs and kisses….take care love you loads….

    2. Jessie

      Geet chellam…appada ippo than nimadhi.,…BP a lol…. palaperuku…solliruvom… hehe…komba molcahiruku..hahah..adhana..nangellam yaaru..!! 2 days to recover…yay!! correct a point a pidichteenga…claps….hahah….yep..yet to bloom…sam pathathu noon le…ippo ni8 ma…nee.vera neil a otadha…avan nejalume busy…heheh….arjun calls RAdz…rofl…Possessive ya… Neil jaise friend..ok…ungaluku Arjune kuduthachu…ena me ippadi panreengale ma….hheheh…Yep…Patience..aama…sema vimarsanam ponga…!! inch inch a rasichu ardhika vachu senjuteenga…sema pa…I just read thrice your comments..usually I used to comment lengthy…ena asara vachutenga…thanks a ton…love you loads….Ardhika..deaf…lol…aama…atif..hehe…ardhika dialogue…vidunga ji..idhellam sagajam….yep..you noticed it correctly…thats what I conveyed there…understanding…they listen each other… pk photo…!! adhu than hint..why he dint send to radhu…ting…yosinga…because everyone suspects its RAdhu…..injuries..nalla note panreengama…adhu akarai…ara keerai nu sollidateenga…lol…yep..past 12 na thoonganum chat panna koodathu,,,rofl…hahah….love you tons Geet…this was fantastic..yepadi en santhosatha solla nu theriyala….meendum thirai vimarsanthai sandika aaval… thanks a lot my friend…..TC…bear hugs…am gonna read this chappy again…all because of your comment…

  2. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Jessie

      Hey Kavina…thanks a lot dear…TC

  3. Awesome dear

    1. Jessie

      Hey Devika…Thanks a lot yaar….TC

  4. Brin

    Awesome episode, the best part is Faizal getting injured serves him right for throwing acid on Preeti, I hope he suffers, Jessie you nail it, well done, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Brinzzeeee……thanks a lot….yea…Faizal is injured…but he still needs more…he will yaar…thanks again….TC and loads of love…

  5. Zoya

    nice jessie

    1. Jessie

      Hey Zoya…thanks a lot dear….TC…do keep supporting….

  6. Awesome Jessie
    I am just waiting for the whole story as still this story seems to reveal much.

    1. Jessie

      Hi Bhargavi…. Thank you so much dear…glad to get reviews from you like before… will be from 30th chap…Its almost revealed till now….Love you loads…TC

  7. Amazing

    1. Jessie

      Hi Aayushi…Thanks a lot yaar…TC and stay smiling…

  8. arti viswanathan

    Jessie darling u are awesome episode …. I loved it.. Arjun asks radhika to show her burns which faizal throw acid on preeti and faizal has a lot of burns on his cheeks… I felt satisfied for ardhika’s love… And sam when will she realise that her radhika di loves arjun her senior…. Tc loads of love for u from me…. So excellent, Outstanding and marvelous episode will be waiting for next episode… And i am happy the misunderstanding is cleared btn arjun and radhika and neil and sam also should support them…

    1. Jessie

      Arti…arti…Am so so happy get your views dear…. glad to know your likes…sam..dear.she trusts Arjun..two chaps back.,there was a dialogue..she infact says to Neil itself…she knew it…Thanks a ton Arti…My constant support your are…will try to post soon…Ardhika yes…Nesam will….thanks again…TC and loads of love

  9. Jessie loved it…. Mind blowing part… Ardhika scene awesome…. Wait for next… Pls update next soon…. Take care…

    1. Jessie

      Hi Saran… 🙂 Thanks a lot yaar…. Ardhika…ok…thanks for mentioning….glad to know u liked the chap…will do it yaar…TC and stay smiling

  10. wow nice epi

    1. Jessie

      Hey…Arnav… thank you so much….TC and stay happy..

  11. wow nice epi

    1. Jessie

      Hi Sne…Thank you dear…TC

  12. Amore

    Faizal in hospital… is Sam responsible for him?? The way u shape the characters is awesome…

    1. Jessie

      Hey Amore….Yes..in hospital..no she isnt responsible….thanks a ton dear…thats a compliment for my plot…woo….am just over joyed…Bear hugs…you know what…am happy you mentioned ‘characters’…TC and stay happy…

  13. Twinjfan01

    Loved it yaar …. radhika nd arjuns romance bck😍😍😍😍
    Upload d nxt soon

    1. Jessie

      Hey Twinjfan…chalo..you still keep your name under that thick blanket…!! I indeed loved it..your love for fav show..!! will do it…and thanks..thanks a ton dear…romance back! haha..yea…Arjun hai…to kya kare…!! TC and stay happy

      1. Twinjfan01

        Hi jessi !!!
        I dint knew wen u asked for my real name …
        so here d curtains unfolds …
        my name is Devanshi
        I belong from chnadigarh , India
        I m a student of biochem hons first year in punjab university chandigarh

        I will b very happy if u tell me somthng abut u as well 😘😘😘😘😘😘

    2. Jessie

      Hey Devanshi…!! I thought I asked you…! Ok …that’s because..I do address everyone with their name isn’t…that’s y…

      Ok…punjabi..!!! A flash of punjabi dance crosses my mind…jab we met…Nagada..!! Woo…ok..ok…I belong to TN…have completed my UG some time back…ri8 now…am sincerely hardworking in troubling ppl around me. Hehe…nothing much…a simple girl…All the very best for ur career..!! TC and stay happy….

  14. Radhika was hell naughty.Superb Jessie waiting for next.

    1. Jessie

      Chashniiiiiiiii…….hell naughty..hehehe…yea…thanks a ton dear…will post soon…love you loads…TC

  15. Gauri

    Jess …THE Super Girl…hats off girl..you are giving back to back updates..really commendable …and they with each update you raise the bar HIGH…Loved Neil today…the way he answered Piyali….Sam is a kinda of cute…or Shanti doot… 😀 radhika- Arjun what to say…one line can’t live with each other …and can’t live without each other… they are kind of hot and cold treatment …which sooths the pain..similarly your updates relaxes my brian… I will write crap if I write more 🙂 loved it …love u

    1. Jessie

      Gauriiiiiii……Super girl! am smiling wide…thanks dear…your words about my work boosts me like anything…So understanding yaar…love you….Am feeling to be hit with immense happiness…Thanks a ton my Fragipani fairy…I got you on right time…shanti doot.. hehe…Neilllllll…..woooo….Thank you…..Neil has a different shade of good boy here…I so loved when I framed his character…Ardhika ke liye…Take a bow…!!! thats it…you revealed the secret..Teddy bear hugs….The characters have reached it..!!am so happy…. am so happy the writeup does that..wooo…Gauri…you cant find me on earth now…!! EEeeee…am so happy my friend….crap…Naa…I love to hear more 😉 ye dil maange more..!! love you loads…see…I have replied like a essay..heheh…TC…Stay happy…Bear hugs…Thanks again…Muaahhh

  16. Vasuraj

    Super cool update Jessie
    Enjoyed a Lot
    Atlast tom and jerry s back
    Hehe

    1. Jessie

      Hey ya Vasuraj….Thanks a ton yaar…happy that you enjoyed….tom and jerry…hahah…yep…
      TC ….stay happy yaar….

  17. Sree_deeksha

    hey angel…ur rocking it yaar…seriously…it was awsome……loved ardhikas part….and faizal…omg….waiting for the next part…till then luv u….babye….sorry for being late….

    1. Jessie

      Hey mere Judwa angel….Kaise ho….Thanks a ton dear….love you loads…glad with your likes…will post soon…TC and stay smiling….no sorry pls…bear hugs…

  18. Hey super girl…
    I loved this episode… dear…
    First Niel ‘s stances for Sam and his annoying reactions to Piyali….
    Arjun n Radhika scenes were rocking awesome…
    Once again you rocked ..

    1. Jessie

      Hey Sunshine….love this name 😉 glad you loved this…your likes…Aaahaaa..!! Thank you…Rocking awesome… am too happy.love your support and love….Stay happy …TC

  19. Rossy

    Faisal…😈😈 that man..aaargh…superb jazzzxy ardhika cleared…what this piyali is??? M soo much irritated with her…god…save me….she is irritating…what will happen next….why no precap??? Amar atif such adorable persons…

    1. Jessie

      Lal…..thanks a lot dear…..don’t be irritated….lets irritate her back…glad that u liked that characters…..love u loads… precap..one more revelation…! TC

  20. Sulbi

    My jazz kutty… today am so happy after reading this chapter.. Now Radz is back… And Arjun so cool… Radz is naughty today and i loved that… Best couple… Faizal gt accdnt… thats cool… but how?? NeSam super… Neil care for Sam alot.. And piyali got super nose cut.. i enjoyed that… Amar done good job… total episode was awsme… i loved it darling… tc and loads of love my baby… <3 :-*

    1. Jessie

      Sulbi jaan…..am glad you are happy dear….naughty Rads. Haha…thanks…Faizal accident ..next chap…hehe…u enjoyed piyali…thank u…..am so happy dear..u pointed it super cute…thanks again jaan. .love u loads…stay happy

  21. Amore

    Piyali is so mysterious… i feel something is wrong with her… you know what i admire most in this story right??? and the second most admirable thing is Ardhika’s bond… the way they are for each others is marvelous… third one is the level of trust… remember??? preeti’s case??? everyone told that she is preeti even preeti herself proved but arjun still doubted but the moment radhika called her preeto arjun’s confusions vanished in the air and he froze believing the girl to be preeti the very second he heard radhika… Another one was during that pics case when arjun said the person with radz was him although he was not… and talking about radz. today’s chappy showed her trust on him… Remember??? she asked arjun after knowing about him being ARM although she was confirmed after fooling PK. The way she doubted Nandini was also one of the example and most importantly the way she is protecting him is out of the box even though she herself don’t know why he faked his identity she told sharat that it was their secret made us clear how much she trust him… I agree she demanded divorce as she felt betrayed…but the way they handle each other is the most admirable thing… They can make each other do something which no other can… Both have ego and their attitude is something which no one can touch…yet… they never let it come between them… Arjun is actually shown as an EPITOME OF A TRUE LIFE PARTNER…

    I don’t know why but i really like to analyse and especially your story Jessie… dunno why but whenever i read your story words starts to perform tango and salsa on my head which turns to contemporary when it comes to others…
    By the way is Sam responsible for Faisal’s hospitality… in your words… heart warming pose??? (curious*)

    1. Jessie

      Amore…!!!!! Am sorry for this late reply….clearing my debits you see ..haha…yep…piyali is…..Ardhika bond!! Thanks in tons my dear Reader..!!! Level of trust…!! I honestly tell you…you surprised me saying abt preeti….wow..!! U know what..!! First I dint add preeti explanation for Arjun’s reactions…then I thought it will confuse readers…so I added it…but still…. somewhere I felt it dint have a reach….god…now am super happy…just stay with me till it ends….

      Exactly my friend….so right…that ‘secret’ word..girl…you are one keen reader…Amore….teddy bear hug…!! I am reading that point of their bond again and again…!! ARJUN!! Yea…he is…!!! You made me so happy. With ur words…thanks for analysing dear…!! The way u did was some thing which satisfies the author mode inside me….tango and salsa…Am smiling wide…you made my day…heart warming..haah…Sam isn’t responsible…!! Sam doesn’t know abt Preeti at all….!! Love u tons…stay happy…..I just loved ur comment….gosh..!! Arjun…ardhika bond….And I say…the characters and the bond got its reach…!! Thanks again!

  22. Oh my god. Am so addicted to this ff. I almost missed my flight just to read this. Hehe. Amazing work

    1. Jessie

      Hey Mona….addicted…!! Wow…yaar. that’s a wonderful compliment….thanks a ton…almost missed!!gosh..Mona…glad that u dint…varna…am like…Mona would have scolded me….love u tons yaa…thanks for supporting me….and thanks you share it views being too busy….stay happy and smiling forever

  23. Meen

    Haiiiii Jess…..u know what I’m changing party….like really who is gonna leave this Neil alone……matlb……haiiiii…..aise hi m fida hu uspe….& now ur update r making me fall for him……what u wrote was damn awesome…..d way my Neil responded to piyali……haiiii…..yhi h hero boss….thn those stances Sam……Sam ko to m chodungi nhi…..hehehe…….loved it…..every single bit of it…….& aradhika…..well they were rocking……radhika is bck…..there moments…..they r truly made for each other…..lovely…..d way he cares for…..she must have been fallen in love with him again……
    For today keep ur Neil somewhere safe ….u know I’m planning to steal him away……he is so charming……hmmmm…..gotta think a plan now……
    U rock girl….how do u write amazing updates one after d other……r u a robot or something????…. Don’t worry even if u r….I’m not gonna leave u….hehehe…bbye

    1. Jessie

      Tesoro Mio…changing party?? Bad habit..but what…Arjun is safe..!! wowo!! then its a very good habit…pls follow it 😉 😉 your Neil??!!!!! *Eyes twinkle* coz My Arjun is safe…lol…Thanks a lot dear…My writeup saved my Arjun from being kidnapped by Meen.,the mafioso re’s master brain 😉 🙂 k..now fun apart…am so happy dear..the way you brought out abt Neil here..ye..sam ko ni chodungi..yep..no chance..only to fall for him more…..glad with your points abt Ardhika..am jumping…!! steal him?? acha planning..!! I know you plan too good…Neil….baagooo….!!! thank you! aap logonke boost ke wajah se…well…comments help a lot….Am not a robot..coz I feel for comments na…Robots doesn’t…mujhe bi nahi chodegi…ye tesoro mio…!! am lucky…dont leave me please..for..you know my love for your Mafia king..hahahah…well this will work the this way better… 😉 😉 TC loads of love…byeeeeeeeee…tons of thanks for this happiness…

  24. Jessssieee… what an update.. I am loving it more and more…
    My fav..Radz convincing Arjun..just wow.!!! both of them very evenly settled scores…Arjun also gave her same dialogues as she threw on him… giving her ..hers medicine….their love kabhi kam naa ho…
    Faisal on hospital bed..??? shocking..??.. how??
    You brought Radz pain bit by bit with soothing Arjun ‘s love…great..
    Today Neil stole all the limelight… Neil Piyali bombing each other…he doesn’t let her speak…his saccharine sweet tone… aunty song…his bossy attitude…wowww !!!!…Arjun ki company ka asar aa gaya…..😂😂😂😂😂….
    Love you loads dear…update soon.. anxiously waiting…😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Jessie

      Hey ya Aasthaaaa…Thanks a ton for those words..more and more..!!means a lot…Thanks for sharing your fav…settled scores…!! you noticed…!! yipee!!so right about Ardhika…Faizal is…Accident yaar…next chap has details…Aastha..now how to express my happiness for the next line you said…Keen reader..!! love you… Neil..hhahahah…So nice na….aunty aunty..song..I did imagine his voice while writing…he sayss..sammy..sammy in mmz na…lol….Arjun ka asar…heheh..may be…but he already was like that…will bring in chaps…love you loads..and itna lively words..feeling super cool…thanks again in tons…will post dear…TC

  25. Aadya

    Why don’t you leave us words to comment here.I am again speechless reading it.You are really awesome

    1. Jessie

      Aadya…For a sec..I did blink girl..heheh…am so happy…Thanks a lot my friend…you need more words?..you already did it with one sentence…Jessie learns this from you…!! thank you dear…Love you loads…TC….

  26. Sathya

    Jaaaazzzziiiiii baby, what u r upto now? wow it is fantabulous update girl.

    Firstly i will tell my most favourite is obviously always Ardhika. Sanda potaalum senthu irupom nanga..apdi oru pair..so cute they are….ennala unkooda irukka mudiyathu…(rads), Seri po (Arju)…ennala unna vittutu poga mudiyathu (Rads)…apo pogatha (Arjun)..but enaku unna pidikala (Rads) ada enna ma venum unaku (Arjun)….Nee than venum (Rads)…apo vaa vanthu katiko (Arjun)….lololololol….

    Enaku ithu matum than mind la oodite iruku….one of the the best pairs in MMZ FFs i read…..you done a great job by making them like two bodies one soul. They are so perfect for each other.

    Only Rads can control Arjun and vice versa. NO third person intereference..apdi irunthuchu avlo than sethan sekar ndra maathiri ayidum.

    Aprama namma chutty paiyan Neil kutty..semma blast and nose cut for Piyali..thevaiya antha lady ku…innum ethavathu pesi iruntha..neil avala thooki potu mithichirupan…Sam en ipdi behave pandra athu matum enaku konjam confuse ah iruku…

    Over all i love this update completely. Love you dear 🙂 tight hugs from me…:P don’t worry nasukka maaten

    1. Jessie

      Satzzzz…thanks a ton dear…hahah..cute ya….lol sethan sekar..hahha love you pointing everything in precise…nose cut aama perusu…lol… hahah thooki potu..lol…Sam is clear dear…no issue from her side….thanks again..love you loads….BEar hugs…love that part for Ardhika..ena ma venum…Arjun asks…aama…avan thanga Arjun…!! lol nasuka maten nu promise…chal jhooti..you will..I know…. 😉

  27. Jnana

    Awesome…… Now what next? Post soon…. And yes…. Ardhika so cute…..

    1. Jessie

      Thanks a lot Jnana dear…will post soon…thank ya…Ardhika k liye….Love you loads…TC

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