Manmarziyan- A Lot Like Love (Chapter 17)


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This update I’m dedicating to SATHYA aka our lovely SATZZ….She is really beautiful girl inside out…Thanks buddy for proof reading of this chapter and making me believe that it is good to get uploaded..Thank you so much for supporting and encouraging me…

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Chapter 17

“Be ready to DIE” Jai said smilingly in triumph

Arjun rushes towards them
“ STOP “ Jai roared “ Stop where r u more step I will blow her head “ He said pressing gun point on her head.

Arjun freeze at the word.

“ Jai why are you doing this?? We are family….” Arjun screams in helpness

“Family “ Jai scream back with sarcasm and laughed “ NO…we are not Family…..” Jai said

“You are killers behind the name of my family….Because of you my so called brother….. I lost my father, Remember? “ Jai said acidly

“Jai that’s not the truth..Sahil uncle kidnapped me and did frauds in dad’s company…It was his punishment for his bad deeds…” Arjun said

“ Stop this shit….I badly want you to see dead..but I don’t want you to die in suspense….so wanna meet my real family….” Jai said mockingly

“Please Heartily welcome Dad ” Jai said with shining happiness.
Then man entered from another room due to darkness they can’t see his face. Slowly slowly he was entering by his walking any one can predict that he has problem in left leg..He was walking with the help of crutches.

As he came in that big room, light flashes on his face and Arjun got stunned seeing SAHIL SHARMA.

“ Yo…you are alive?” Arjun said recovering from his shock

“YES..Arjun Beta….i think you are not happy seeing me alive…” Sahil said sarcastically

“ When by your over smartness you stole my phone and told your where abouts…Police chased me..but as they said they encountered me..its half true…When I got shoot on my left foot I managed to jump in river and hide myself by holding my breath..they shoot in water and thought they killed me…but no I got saved myself. After searching for so many years I got my son back too….” Sahil said

“Why you betrayed to Dad?? He used to trust you more than anything ” Arjun asked

“ Trust “ HE said and laughed “ Trust can’t feed your stomach…I wanted his money and power not his trust….”

Arjun mouth left hung. Radhika was struggling to get away from Jai

“ Because you are MY ARJUN BHAI….i missed being with my father..Now you are wondering why I do this just to you…then listen..I HATE you more than anything in this world…but you thought I am your loving caring younger brother and made me sole nominee in your will….” Jai said

“ How stupid of you….and that’s why I want you to be inherit all your property…” He laughed

Arjun’s face lost his all colors..He looking like hell…his face turned pale having no reaction…

Radhika was shell shocked she never imagined that the jovial , friendly and happy go lucky Jai turned out to be devil…
“How can a brother do this to another brother….You didn’t think once before doing this…He loves you than Neil and always consider you more than his real brother..” Radhika said in anger

“Brother..My foot..I always feels jealous about his success and his power..and dad give me the reason to snatch this all from him…” jai said poisonously and slammed her hard on ground which makes her hit the ground..A slight cut happened to her head and blood started dripping from it..

As Arjun saw her blood and he couldn’t take it anymore…

“You can’t be my brother..he was naïve and good are devil…I lost my brother at the same time you joined this evil father of yours….” Arjun grunts

“ Not a single word against my father..else I won’t think twice to shoot this little princess of yours..” Jai holds Radhika by her hair and make her stand. She screams in pain

“Jai..Damn it..shoot me if you have to but not her” Arjun call out

“ I will kill you too Bro..What’s so hurry..but first of all listen..I never lost my memory..and I did my fake accident to trap you to kill you..but you make my goons roam from one place to other…then I thought of harming Radhika she is indeed your life,right? So I attacked her and tried to kill her twice…remember I am the only person to whom you share about PRITI”s proposal to you..i used that thing to kill you both..but damn stubborn survived from that deadly attack..i paid them for that fake story..” He smirks
“ All are pretty good actors..ohh sorry not only actors they were professional murder..I never got broken legs..i paid to doctors to tell the lie….But then you both did that fake break up almost make me believe on it..but then I thought you were “ made for each other “ and suddenly a little mistake made you guys broke up..thats not the thing to get digest easily….so I thought to try your fake break up by pulling radhika here..and I’m right..You came behind her to save her….Now who will save both you….” He laughed hard devilishly.

Radhika’s phone was continuously vibrating in her jeans pocket and she wanted badly to answer it and call someone to their help.

“Ohhh m so feels pity on have to die because of all world you have to fall for him…Now you have to pay for it…” jai said

“Is money that much important into one’s life? Why you are willing to kill Arjun..just for sake of money..The brother who would have put his own life to protect You. Arjun would have have happily handed over all his hard earned money and property if You asked for it.. “ Radhika said in anger and disgust

“I am not begger to beg him…and its much fun in snatching than begging…” Jai laughed throwing mocking laughter at them.

Arjun symbol radhika to get down on knees as Jai is busy in talking…she did as he said and kicked to jai’s hand which make Gun to fall on the ground and picked it quickly.

Jai laughs “ You can’t shoot me..i know you will never shoot me…” jai turned and grabbed another gun from his pick pocket and pointed towards radhika

“ your one mistake I will shoot her…” jai said “ Now drop that blo*dy gun…my dear bro….”

Arjun loosen his grip on gun and started to bend to drop it on floor but then he quickly stand straight and tighten his grip on gun by lifting it up…jai figure out that Arjun might actually shoot him

Soon their gun points to each other and bang goes.

A loud sound echoed in the room..Its takes some time to realize who got shot..

Radhika ran towards Arjun who was falling on ground and blood oozing from his left shoulder.Bullet slightly went kissing his skin.His shirt got stain in red color..

They turned to find jai who was lying in pain..He got shoot at hand and on leg…who shoot him on leg?

Then they saw Neil rushing towards them and cop arresting Jai and his Father.

“Hey Bro are you okay….” Neil said worriedly

“actually bullets too want to kiss me that’s y she pecked me my arm….and having girlfriend who got stabbed and shot too many got me viral…and vaise bhi MARD ko DARD nahi hota…” Arjun punches some dialougues…which made Neil and Radhika to laugh hard

“ BTW Bro how you got know about this place? Are you ANATARYAMI Neil Baba…” Arjun said again to make them laugh

Neil gave him glare

“ You should thanks me saving your ass…and you mocking at me….BTW remember I gifted you both wrist watches which contain GPS tracker…I had doubt on Jai as I got call from rehab center that he was missing his leg massage sessions and then I observed him I always saw a difference in his walking from the previous one..It’s hard to act fake sometimes,right? When I called you and Radhika many times and none of you pick up my calls then I tracked you guys and called police along with..” Neil raised his caller

“ Ohhh you are such good at saving people….” Radhika hugged Neil

“If you guys done..can someone take me to the hospital….” Arjun said pouting his face.

Neil and radhika laughed and picked Arjun to took him to hospital.

After Six months…..

Things started to get back to normal as they were previously. But at heart all are sad by losing Jai. Sonali and Raj where got shocked my their son’s act..They never thought Jai would forget their upbringing like this and lost himself and ended in Jail. Jai got prisoned till death in attempt of murder.Sahil Sharma to got jailed for frauds and distracting police.

Sometimes greediness and jealousy snatches our loved ones..

Radhika’s father passed away few days ago.She forgiven him for hurting her mother and her.She didn’t want die her father in disappointment. Now she and mala leaving in Mumbai.

Arjun and Radhika didn’t spend time together. Radhika joined office again..Arjun made himself busy in work to forget about Jai.He enloped himself in making deals and money. Radhika was missing Arjun and spending time with him.

One day

When Radhika went straight to meet Arjun in his office to spend some time with him.

“I didn’t say come in to you..” Arjun said still busy working on his laptop

“I don’t care..i want to spend sometime with you” Radhika said

“You are running around like you are the boss just because you are my girl friend…I wants my personal life and business stay separate.You are my employee here..” He said rudely

Radhika’s mouth hung in shocked

“Then better you date your business instead of me…” she got up from chair to marched to get outside in anger.

“Stop” he said…she thought he realized his mistake and now want to pacify her but what he said further which added fuel to her anger

“ Be ready at 7 pm..We have business party here…As you are My PA you need to look impressive…I will make sure you will get your cloths and accessories in your cabin…Be ready on know I hate being late..Don’t want you to be clumsy take care of it..” He said arrogantly

“ Whatever…” she said and marched to her cabin hitting the floor in anger. He smirked.

At evening

Radhika put on her dress as she got delivery box of her dress and other acceseirirs. The blue strapless dress hugging her body tight and resting on her perfect curves. Inside silk material making her comfortable. She put on the matching stilettos and applied some make up. She was looking beautiful like always she did…But she is mad at Arjun.

She went to his cabin as its strike 7 in the watch. Radhika opened the door and gritted empty cabin and her phone beeped.

“ Come at terrace…Forget to informed you that I am here already..” messaged read which came from Arjun.

Radhika got confused and got more angry on him for making her run everywhere.Though she was wondering why the other employee in the office were unaware og this business party and Arjun too informed her in short notice…

“Aghhh..This guy is really gone mad….” Radhika gowned in irritation.

She got into elevator and pressed top most button for the terrace.

As the elevator door got open she left shocked.surprised.dumfounded.

A private helicopter is waiting on the terrace’s helipad and Arjun was standing at the near to the chopper in tuxedo..He was looking damn handsome and difficult to resist. A s*xy smirk playing on his greek god face and deadly dimples of his making

Radhika’s cheeks turned pink in happiness..She couldn’t think that Arjun was teasing her by avoiding.

“ May i…” He offered his hand to her when she step outside the elevator….like a perfect gentlemen

“ohhhMy god..I can’t belive…” radhika said placing her palms on her mouth

He smiled. He let her get in into the chopper and put on the seat belt…

“Where are we going ?” She asked still couldn’t able to beilve

“ Its surprise for you..” He whispers in her ear as he placed he sweet kisses on her bare shoulder to make her shiver.

Arjun ignited the engine of that big chopper and soon the big wings of that helicopter rumbles to life and soon they are in air flying..

Radhika grabbes the Arjun shoulder in fear.He squeezed her hand and gave her smile of assurance.

As they get higher on Mumbai’s sky Radhika started cheering and squealing like a kid.

They said Mumbai looks beautiful in day but looks like stunning queen who are embedded with shining diamonds. The view is really spectacular, shining yellow lights at the marine lines making to its name “ Queen’s Necklace”.the street light making the road look like string of pearl and illusion of Necklace. The view is breathtaking.

Arjun smiles at radhika as he sees her smiling continuously and giggling in happiness.

“ I love you…” He said

“ Its amazing Arjun..Honestly.Thank you.” She said cheerfully.

“ Hold your words..a lot more to come!!” Arjun smiles as he navigates the chopper to the isolated area of city.

After few more minutes of flying he rested the chopper on the open ground which seems quite far from the city and soon the chopper lost his liveliness as he turn off the engine.

He made her get down and tie a blindfold on her eyes.She got shocked about what are he upto.

“ Arjun are you going to tell me what is this ?? “ Radhika said trying to untie the blindfold.

“ Stop..Don’t remove it…surprise is coming babe” He said playfully.

Arjun made her walk on the path.

“ Beware..take small steps on it..” He guided her as they taking some steps upwards.

“Can you going to remove curtains from the suspense? “ She said desperately

“ Shshssss radhika wait….” He siad

As they reached Arjun removed the blindfold and radhika’s jaw dropped open in surprised. She was awestruck.
They are on beautifully boat’s top which was equipped with red-white cushions, curtains and sun beds on the upper right corner of the ship having the best sound system .the ship is surrounded by cool and peaceful water. All the deck floor is decorated with rose petals. A divine full moon is shining with his twingling stars on the top of head.

Radhika was mesmerized by the arrangements she couldn’t stop herself and hugged Arjun tight.

Arjun laid her to the dining table which was decorated with candle and delicious food with ice bucket of champagne bottle. Arjun pulled chair for Radhika and make her sit.They enjoyed their dinner.

“ May I asked for dance to My Love” Arjun got up from the chair and offered his hand.

“ Sure My love” Radhika nodded and slide her hand in to his.

A romantic track got started on sound system.

Kissi sham ki tarah
Tera rang hai khila
Main raat ek tanha
Tu chand sa milla

Haan tujhe dekhta raha
Kissi khwab ki tarah
Jo ab samne hai tu
Ho kaise yakeen bhala

Toota jo kabhi tara
Sajna ve
Tujhe rab se maanga
Rab se jo maanga
Mileya ve

Tu mileya toh
Jaane na doonga main

Haan maine suni hai
Pariyon ki kahani
Waisa hi noor tera
Chehra hai tera roohani

Aa tujhko main apni
Aaja meri
Baahon mein chupa loon
Haan apni iss zameen ko
Kar doon main aasmani

Zindagi rok doon main
Ab tere samne
Pal do pal jo ruke
Tu mere sath main

Toota jo kabhi tara
Sajna ve
Tujhe rab se maanga
Rab se jo maanga mileya ve

Tu mileya toh
Jaane na doonga main

He spanned her and looped his Arm around, as song ended she was resting on his arm and get lost in his deep black eyes.

Then the next moment Arjun made Radhika stand and hold her from back and lifted her chin upward so that she can look towards the dark stary sky. The real surprise is waiting for her!

Arjun had hired a firecrackers. And in fraction of minute sky got lit with so many firecrackers and illuminate so bright.

Soon with the crackers words started forming.
As she looked up , she can see the words


Once the words form another fire cracker bust designing the heart shaped on the sky.
Radhika couldn’t resist but had tears in her eyes by grand gesture of Arjun’s love.His proposal.
Radhika turned her head to find Arjun but he was not by her.She turned more and found Arjun on his knees and holding a diamond ring.

Radhika was extremely happy.

“I can’t imagine anyone else as perfect for me as you are. I want you to know, that I never been so sure about anything in my life unless and until you stepped into it.I love you more than I could ever love anyone. My life starts with you and ends with you….and I don’t want my life if you are not in it..So will all due respect Miss Radhika Mishra will you marry me? “ Arjun said poring his heart out..

Radhika nodded in happiness “ YES Arjun you are best thing ever happen to me..I can’t thank god enough for making you came into my life…You made me belive on myself and turn my nervousness into confidence…I don’t want costly gifts or luxurious life..I just want you to be my side till my last breath… so all due respect I’m Ready to becam Mrs Arjun Mehara…”

Arjun slipped the ring into her ring finger. A glimpse of ring shining in her eyes.

Arjun plastered her to his front and claimed her lips. Their lips coaxed with each, devouring the each other mouth with the happiness they are feelings inside their hearts.Passion.Affection and UNCONDITIONAL Love for each other..All the emotions in the kiss.
As Radhika moved further she bumped onto the table which made a loud thud.
They got separated and Radhika gasped “ Ohhh not again..another vase I broke…” She said pouting her face in embarrassment when she saw scattered pieces of vase.

Arjun laughed hard “ I was waiting for it….Its lucky thing for us…I love you “
“ I love you too till eternity “ Radhika said

They laughed and Arjun touched her forehead by leaning his forehead.

After Two year…

Arjun was pacing anxiously in the hospital corrider..NeSam is pacifying him but no use..He was biting his Nail time and again as any time sooner he would ate his finger too in nervousness. Soon the red light turn off on operation theater and doctor came..Arjun heart is thudding loud inside his ribcage.he hold his breath.

Doctor came smiling and came to Arjun “ CongratulationS Mr Mehra…You blessed with baby girl..”

For moment arjun can’t react..He was overjoyed. Then he scream in happiness…” I became a father….”

Neil gave him tight hug…Sam ran towards Radhika’s room.
When all came to radhika..Nurse handed baby girl to Arjun..radhika chicks flooded with happy taers

“Oh my god!..she is so precious..” Arjun exclaimed and kissed the forehead of baby..

Nesam and Raj and sonali congratulates the new paraents..

“ Thank god my lil rian got baby sis…He was continuously asking me for sis…Btw whats the name for this sweet angel….” Sam said happily

“ PANKHUDI…” ARadhika said in chorus…

All laughed…Click selfies with baby girl…

Screen freeze


So this the end of the story..Hows it?
Sorry for ending this ff in haste..I know many of you going to scold me,beat me and punch me hard..So sorry guys…
Actually due to work pressure I couldn’t make out with writing things so I taking little short break..That’s why ended the ff in haste..As ganpati bappa is arriving home shortly so I will be busy in decoring and other stuff…
I know I can’t stay away for longer time from you guys so I will come soon with next..As wrote prologue of my next story named As “ Written on stars” and going to post it wattpad shortly..and here too I will post it..

Thank you sooooo much my lovely darlings for bearing my bakwas and encouraging me all the time to improve and give better and better each guys are truly amazing supporter…you made me live my small dream of bevoming writer…..Love you sooo guys are my extended family…….So see you soo..

Never say good bye..Always say…

Hum hai rahi pyar ke..fir milenge…chelate chelate!!!
Take care!!Muhhhhhhaaaaa!!!!

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  1. S.v

    This is so not done all of a sudden this shock has to end ?? Dipikaaaaaaaaaa im shouting this big u r an amazing writer dear. What an update god you dont know i was reading with eyes popped up. You always make me go crazy with your ff and so today. God wish i would see the proposal in my real eyes but you made me feel like i was watching those scenes. Awww super awesome so cute extremely romantic what more words to say you made it dear.

    Jai argh i am feeling sorry for Arjun he was so heat broken so sad but now im furious as you ended this spectacular ff sparking you because you said you are coming up with the next ff .
    With pout face update soon the new ff dear pls……… Love you tons and once again she broke the vase is she any secret partner with any vase company so that she is breaking and Arjun will buy more of that…….

    Love you tons always smile and do come here dear cant leave you for more time wanna read your ff soon. Love you lods my friend

    1. Dipika

      Omg SV i had a tears as i read ur comment…Thank you sooooooooooo much for this much love….M on moon with your word.. I knw u r angry cos i ended this ff..but can’t help much things going around na…i m pretty emptied to thank you..m soo overwhelm…i m so mych happy tht u like this last chappy..yeah..jai is evil n he forgot all the love given ny arjun n his family… Haha..yess u guesses correct rads hav tie up with vase company… Lol….i couldn’t cntrl laughing… Loads of love darling… N soooo many kissss for you…i will come soon…

  2. Sathya

    Dipu… What’s this…. Seriously it’s a surprise for me… When u given this for proof reading I never expected this gift from u… Love u soooooo muchhhhh darling ??? and another surprise I’d last part… It is so cute n lovely…. N what is that pankhudi… Can u tell me the meaning pls….

    I really want to kill jai for betraying arjun… It was an emotional moment for arjun…i felt like then all those days he was just acting only…. Very bad… N last but not least… I told u already that this proposal is the best n costly proposal… Lol ??????? omg in ship alone, crackers on Sky… That was awesome one dear… But I m feeling sad for this end n of course I can understand the work pressure.. So take rest n come back with full force n special story. Love u so much darling ???????

    1. Sathya

      Highlight is breaking the vase n it becomes lucky for them… Fantastic one… Keep writing dear ????

    2. Dipika

      Satzzz darling m sooooo happy that u liked the gift so much!! I m on moon now…twirling n dancing.. Haha…Thank you soooooo much my romance queen….yess Jai did acting all the time..n persn like him is very difficult to track…n abt this proposal.. I will tell our jiju to do this kind of grand praposal for you…n thanks for your support… U always encourage me qhn i feel low abt myself….i will surely come with new energy.. Love you tons..muhhaa!!

  3. Jessie

    Deeppzz…thats a surprise..!! All in one go.!
    But still .. its superb.. ! Loved it.. Jai n his father.. brainless.. Neil d saviour.!! Superb..Arjun n punch… and d surprizzzzeszz.. gosh.!! Loved d hearty confession!!. U made it too grand!! Super girl!! Awesome final touch with girl baby..

    I was shocked reading d words last part..! U gave a shock treatment for us.. eager 4 ur next story… An advance warm welcome from me to Ganapathi bappa!! Enjoy d time 2 s fullest.. Will be waiting… TC n loads of love..

    1. Dipika

      Jessie darling i will miss u badly.. U always makes me smile so wide each an every time….Thank you soooo much for making me smile all the time….i m sooo happy u like the ending… N sorry abt shock don’t worry i will come asap…Happy ganesh chaturthi in advance to u n ur family… Muhhhha…tons n tons of love…muhhhaa

    1. Dipika

      Thank you Nandu di!!

  4. it was a wonderful FF from start to end…loved each and every update of yours. thank you for that…and waiting on your next story.

    1. Dipika

      Thank you soooo much KK darling.. You always encourage me n suggested me whn u felt really…thanks for it darling.. Hope i will see u on nxt ff you muhhaa

  5. hey……….I unknowingly closed the window………nw I have to type again………..liked it…… life is…..well u know how we wud b on the eve of exams ri8??????????? esp when u know that u have another half to study when u say “eureka I finally finished it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ” at mid ni8????? well that’s hw I was yest…… I performed rather poorly due to procrastination……….once again I realized that procrastination is evil………………..but then Onam is coming up wich means one week holiday and lot of payasam………..but I have a tooth to be plucked out by surgeon as it is not in the way it shud b…..wich resulted in accumulation of food and in my tooth next to it came a hole wich will b filled permntly tmrw…… all together my life is in a down hill……I feel…….forget abt me tell me abt u…………’s every thing going???????????

    1. Dipika

      Omg my my lil sis hav bear this much things at once..yeah i can very well understand the exam pressure which makes our heart beat race as fast as it can..haha..ohhh mg..ur took…means u hav to eat tasteless food…take care baby..n don’t think much…i hope u could get well soon…n abt me…this days m facing very hectic days filled with tons of work tht me exhausted like hell…n as ganesha is coming home so will b busy in welcoming him…hope tht my work pressure get lessen soon so i can come here see you soon darling.. Love you shooo much..i lke to hav my old asthu back…muhha

      1. Aasthu

        y is Ganesha coming home??????????any festival?????? What do u wrk as?????? and ya may not be tasteless food…….but definitely I won’t able to eat chips and sarkara varatti and also payasam……..tday dad asked not to eat chocolates as majority of my teeth have been filled due to decay……..just imagine!!!! I’m thinking of posting my ff’s during vaccation…………bye……… tell me abt ur wrk…………love u………..TC………..

      2. Dipika

        Hey aasthi darling yeahh its ganesha festival.. We bring ganesha idol at our home n celebrate this 10 days…n i work po in Punjab National bank…ohhhh..take care dear…n stay away frm.chocolate for some days..n recover fast…love you ..bbye..c you

  6. OMG…
    You too ended this. ..
    Nice episode. ..Will miss it. ..

    1. Dipika

      Savera darling thank you sooo much..i will too miss soon will come to meet you.muhaa

  7. Thankyou so much dipika for entertaining us..might b I have not commented bt surely I must b d first person to read ur ff…u r amazing..when I m at my workplace.. I constantly open this website to check whether u have posted the ff or not…nd if u had I feel like I m on cloud nine…hope u will soon come up with a new ff….ALL THE BEST!!

    1. Dipika

      Ohhhh Thank you soooo much Sanyu darling..i can’t tell you how happy m feeling such sweet n encouraging words frm u…m on moon now…i promise u i will come soon to meet u again…m so overwhelmed by ur love..loads of love..muhha

  8. outstanding……..

    1. why ?????????? awesome ff…

    2. Dipika

      Subha darling thank you so much…i will come soon darling.. u..

  9. Piku superb chappy. Breaking vase is lucky thing. Lol. It was too gud. suprises were superb. chapper, boat, decorations, dress and the dream proposal. Everything awesome. It ended.

    everyone is on verge of ending their stories. Ufff. waiting for the next. But dear why is this khali wala update. I expected some intimate scenes too. common how could you do this piku. Lol.???. K. Fine. Was just pulling ur leg.

    I loved it. The whole story is nice, lot like love. keep smiling. All the best.

    1. Dipika

      Manhu darling Thank you shooooo r truly my motivator….you boosted my confidence always by ur soothing words…n what m reading here..manhu asking fir intimate scene..some one pinch me pls..haha….i thought if i add something like it..u will sue me..haha..kidding..u knw na in how much hurry m ending this ff..but don’t worry in nxt ff i will add intimate scene..haha…love you shoo much..muhhha

  10. Kavina

    Loved it. So sad that it ended. Can’t wait for your new story

    1. Dipika

      Thank you soooo much always the person qho never fail to encourage me..i will surely come you.. Muhha

  11. Di…the end? That was unexpected.Jai?I never thought he will be such cruel.and the proposal part ..fantabulous..and atlast breaking the vase..obviously that was their lucky symbol.only one like you di…take your own time and come with the you di…

    1. Dipika

      Aadia darling Thank you sooooo much for lovely n kind words…i so happy that u like this story n gave ur love to it….ur encouraging words will make me come soon..yeah i surely hit tu with bang….loads of love u dearyyy..muhhaa

  12. di wat is tis shhck u ended the ff my fav ff tis soon i am crying huhuhuhuhuhuhu
    tis is a very big shck for me but at the same time happy tat ur starting another ff
    todays ff was mindblowing wow the proposal was amazing i wld luv to get propsed like tat i wish my bf proposes me like tat tat was like a wow di
    neil was super asusual gps in watch tat was amazind ardhika blessed wid a BABY GIRL wow tis is amazing di i luved todays episode
    yeah its ganesh chaturthi tym nah
    njoy ur festival di
    we will njoy tooo
    tanks for writing such an amazing ff
    luv u di bye tc

    1. Dipika

      Nitu darling thank you sooo always makes me smile frm NLYG to never fails to encourage me by ur cute n lovely words…. Your wordd will make me come soon..n y not..your bf will surely do this kind of grand proposal for u as u r so cute n lovely na…yeah i wish u happy ganesh chaturthi in advance…love you my cute sis…

  13. Sammy

    sooooooooo cute lovely …wao …hehe Arjun will be like …Mr too much attitude ..and he is multitasking …buisness ..flying chopper….and having bullets for his meal…lol feeling sad for jai …i want him to be good but it’s ok ,….now come back with a new one soon deepu dear

    1. Dipika

      Sammy darling lol u makes me laugh too much attitude n having bullets.. Haha….he is our hero yarr..kuch b kar sakta hai…haha..yeah..jai…but kya kare storu made him bad..yup will come soon in arjun’s chopper.. you buddy.. Muhha

  14. Brin

    Awesome ending,eagerly waiting for your next ff. 🙂

    1. Dipika

      Brin darling thank you shooo much…yeah i will come soon….love you. Waiting for ur story..

  15. Gauri

    Dipika you ended my fav story so soon 🙁 🙁 🙁 …. I am all sad….now please do something about pacifying me …. ok I will tell you….write one more please . Dipika your stories are so real ,,,,so emotional yet so simple….once I start reading them, I can barely stop….this was a beautiful journey….and I understand work pressure dear ….sometimes its so difficult that u don’t even get time for yourself…hatts off to u for giving such a beautiful story…come back soon love you 🙂 million hugs 🙂

    1. Dipika

      Ohhhh Gauri Darling…m so emotional now…i always waits for ur comment so badly.. Cos i getting feedback frm queen herself is really big thing.. N i made u sad..i gonna slap my self fot it..haha…n of course i can do anything to cheer u up..haha..i qill surely come soon..yeah this days m working like as soon as i get free lil bit i will ran here…Love you tons n tons… Muhhaa…

  16. Myra

    woahhhh….what just happened?
    dipikaaa di…..not done yaar……a lot like love was one of favourites….and we were just in the 17th chapter…..
    anyhow di, it was the perfect ending to the perfect story…….like making jai the villain was sheer brilliance……you just nailed it…all the emotions and everything was so real…..please please come back soon with another ff…..well, as soon as you get some time…..
    you will be active on tellyupdates…right? if not, posting then reading definitely…haina?
    take care…..loads of love…

    1. Dipika

      Myra darling Thank you sooooo much for this mucj love n support… I m.unable express my gratitude…n m sooo happy that u enjoyed the story…. N yess i will b active in comments i cane live without reading words awsome writers like u…n soon i will come with next story tooo….love you darling..

  17. Did I read right? Did this story just ended? ?okay I will stop being over dramatic. This was a beautiful story of love btn two people who were opposite from each other but as they day opposite attracts. I really enjoyed this story n loved it from the bottom of my heart. Ardhika’s first kiss under the rain was my favorite scene ?? will be waiting for ur another story. Stay blessed ??

    1. Dipika

      Ohhh my Gia darling sorry for this sudden shock of ending this ff..i too will miss this one..but more ever i will never forget ur support n love….Thank you soooo much for this!! You r amazing frnd…n yess i will be back as soon as i you..

  18. Jewel

    dipika… this chapter is awsome….. jai, i cant belive that he can cheat arjun… ardhika moments, really beautiful. breaking of that vase, that was nice. and last arjuns tension…. everything are beautiful…. bt why did u end this fast…. please come with other ff soon….

    1. Dipika

      Jewel darling Thank you soooo much for this amazing words….n sorry for ending it suddenly as i am busy this days due to some work pressure…n yesss i will come soon..hw can i stay far frm u guys so

  19. U finished it offf soo fast… dipi ur ff are simple and very cuteeee…love the way u write… u shud become a proposal planner lol wow u describe very proposals so beautifully that i get jealous of radhika all the tym even in never let u go i remember how u described arjuns romantic..
    Do post ur next ff soon uu

    1. Dipika

      Neetz darling m sooooo happy..u calls me dipi.
      Actually most of the frnds call me by dipi..n i like tht…haha..n abt proposal planner.. Will think on tht profession..haha…if u want any thn i will plan for u….thank you sooo much dear..tht u still remember my work…soon will with another romantic praposal… you..muhhaa

  20. Gummiebear

    My heart z stirring!!!… Why o why so soon???… Di you made me sad…I understand work pressure but still greedy for your updates….yup Ganpati bappa z coming so I can excuse you, but on one condition… Come soon with another story….I m not giving you a choice to say no…if I start pestering m very bad then…you can ask Guari di nd shree mommy…so better come soon…abt the update… Just rocking? you nailed it….I never expected Jai to be so bad…but m happy that all r safe nd together…. Loved Arjun’s proposal…. You r such a swthrt Di…baby girl? wow that’s best part….now plz come soon…Happy Ganesh Chaturti in advance… Love you…muaaaaaaaah… Zillion hugs for you?Stay blessed???

    1. Dipika

      Ohhhh my cute sis sorry fir this shock…haha..u pestering dhamaki hi kafhi h…i will surely come soon..cos already i started missing my writting…Thank you soooooo much for your love n support darling.. Happy ganesh chaturthi in advance…love you my baby sister..

  21. RituM

    good job piku…for completring ur two amazing stories!! lots of love

    1. Dipika

      Thank you sooo much Ritu di….u r always my best supportor.. My lovely di…love u..muhha

  22. Jnana

    awesome…. dear where is your other ff waiting for that…. and you finished this with a shock… this is not done….. but still waiting for your next ff

    1. Dipika

      Jhana darling Thank you sooooo much for your lovely words n support… N m shortly updating my next ff..going to miss you

  23. Sweetie

    Sweetheartttttttttttttttttt…………youu really really broke my heart..*listen to the crack sound* When I read last chapter,I was like “whattttt”,how come this early..I’m crying real bad now.. 🙁 First Abha di and now you..Waiting for the next story of yours..Wattpad UN bataa de,I’ll follow you there.. 😀 About this story,no words..Seriously I want Arjun like bandha.. 🙂 Even if he isn’t rich,I want this supportive and loving partner.. 😀 *kiss* Love you loads sweetheart.. 🙂

    1. Dipika

      Awwww…m sorry darling fir cracking my sweetheart’s heart…i felt tht sound…but don’t worry i will not leave u guys..m coming with next one..hey m on watty as dips4 ..whts ur name on watty..i will follow u…n don’t worry u too will get the banda like arjun..milake dhundenge…haha…i will miss u badly..Thank you shoooooo much amazing love……loads of darling…

      1. Sweetie

        Sweetheart..My UN is geethu_sweetie28.. 🙂 Yours UN is dips44,kya??I can’t find dips4.. 🙁 Send me a message if you find me.. 😀

  24. Shree

    Did you have to end it? I was falling in love with it and you end it.. no I fell for it.. not falling.. now it is hurting.. I Dhanshree Ramesh aka Shree curse to keep writing stories throughout your life and manage bank simultaneously.. lol..

    Loved it.. stupid Jai.. his dad ws alive? Stupid fellow.. six month leap cute.. lol he annoyed her.. the gestures of love were ccuuutttee.. is Arjun Mehra so rich? Dayum… It was cute.. dance wa lovely.. fireworks.. diamond ring.. lol even in the end she didn’t let go of the vase.. haha finally Arjun is Pappa… Pankudi is a cute name.

    Waiting for the one on wattpad.. come back soon

    Love you ??

    1. Dipika

      Ohhhhh my cute darling shree..sorryyyy for hurting my sweety…..n ur curse is soooo cute n i can Live with tht curse all my life.. Lol….Thank you soooo much baby. U inspired me alot each n every time..m overwhelm…. N yess arjin mehra is ceo one of biggest firm in india so..kch jyada costly praposal kar diya maine…haha…yeahhh darling today m going to post on watty…waiting for ur review there…Love you toooo dearyyy..muhha

  25. Omg dips…it was outstanding n stupendous ending of this beautiful amazing story. …jai n Sahil got what they deserved…..ardhika were fantabulous n amazingly awesoooooome. …nesam were really superbbbb. ……arjun’s surprise for rads…proposal n confession was mind blowing n dynamite. …loved it very very much. …n lil pankhudi so lovely name for ardhika’s lol angel…n nesam’s son rian very cute name…it was very beautiful n amazing story my sweeeeeetheart dips…..I’ll miss you my dearrrrr. …..keep in touch n stay blessed n healthy safe alwaysssss. .love you loads muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug 🙂 ♡♡♡ 😉

    1. Dipika

      Thank you sooooo much my darling di..i was eagerly waiting for ur comment…you always make me smile n encourages me a lot….thank u sooo much for supporting me thru out this beautiful journey…. Love you loads di..n how can i break any contact with my lovely di..stay blessed n healthy… Muhhhaaaaaa..tight hug for u..

  26. _Ritu

    Dipikaaaaaa…dear what was dat… U ended dis story…bt why yaar…I was going to ask for a double dhamaka nd u ended it..dis is so not fair…bt it was a perfect ff story dear..ur every update was a masterpiece….Sad for Jai bt he deserved dat…ArDhika were stupendous…. 🙂 🙂 Hey now I got it why u ended it…coz U want to keep dis Arjun all for urself right 😉 😉 😉 Bt Don’t forget m also there…will badly miss d story dear nd Arjun ofcourse 😉 😉 waiting to read many more stories from u.. 🙂 come back soon only den u will be forgiven for breaking our hearts..loads of love 🙂

    1. Dipika

      Ritu darling i was so desperately waiting for ur comment..i thought u missed it..but now m sooo happy…n masterpiece… Omg..uts abig word..Thank you soooooo much darling for this r always the person never miss ay chance to make me blush..haha..yes i want to keep arjun for myself na thts y..all girls started drooliw na..haha..ok i will share with u..hahah..ofcoursr i will come soon..i can’t live without u guys for mych longer time..Love you shona…muhha

  27. Ye tune kya kiya…dil mera tut Gaya..hayeeeeee tune mardalaa….so soon …ending…?? then I’ll love never let u go more..jai was such a crappy person want to kill him..neil is a rock star as usual..he saved every one..pankhudi was wonderful name..see ya …come back soon ?

    1. Dipika

      Ohhhh my rosie darling how could i let u marjava alone…n i know my darling never let me go anywhere…. thank u sooooo my dearrryyyy….love tonsssss…muhha

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