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Manmarziyan – My Little Queen (Shot 5)

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Hello…..Everyone….Its Jessie again..Do share your precious views after reading my friends…

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My Little Queen (Shot – 5)

I turned around to pick her call.,and as I expected,she ran down holding her skirt a little high…. “Radhika….wait!…listen me!”,she dint pay heed to any of my words….I tried to have a look on her,fearing she may miss the steps in dark…

“Hello…hello…Bhai….”,Sam sounded restless

“Yes…Sam…tell me….Why are you worried…”,this time I turned little worried…

“Are u at home…bhai…pls check for Radhu….her phone is not reachable….she…bhai…pls…she fears to stay alone…”

“Ok..relax…she is here”,I blurted…

“THERE??!!!!”,Sam shrieked….

I realized my mistake…”Sam…here means…here…in her balcony…arranging the same lamps… I could see her from ours..”..I replied…

Telling lies have never been this difficult….

“Oh..ok….”..”aunty…she is there…bhai told…dont worry pls…”,I could hear her convincing Radhika’s mom..”Nope…in balcony it seems…that’s better…”,she still spoke with her…

“What’s better….”,I asked confused…

“Well..I told…she fears to stay alone…anyway…bhai…pls inform her we will be back in a hour…she must be searching…and she wont stay alone in her house….pls…plsss….”…

My sister pleaded unusual,which only raised my hackles…..

“If you know she fears..then why you left her behind…..and whats that one hour…lets shop tomorrow..!! Come fast…”,I hissed in anger…

“Bhai”

“What?..you want her to stay in balcony and in terrace for next one hour…she is already alone”.,I said worried…

There was a complete silence…..

What have I said…oh..!! The word ‘she fears’.made me mad…!!.yep..Mad…!!

“Bhai….it was you,who said you both weren’t in good terms…that’s y I came with aunt…..you know…I planned it at last minute.,fooling everyone….I thought to ask you to pick up Radhu…so that you both could speak…but you denied..!! Thats y all this tension…now don’t scold me…! If you can..you say…else I will ask saral to….but…we can’t shop again…and Aunty…is like..Radhu needs to learn staying alone..”,Sam said in one go…

“Oh!!”,was all I could exclaim at last… “and who is Saral…her relative?”,I asked….The million dollar one for me..!!…What I heard next….I couldn’t control my happiness…but somewhere her tears and disengaged behavior intrigued me….

“Ok I will…and call me before you come”,I said assuring…

I hung the call..and collected those scattered pieces of her mobile… battery…sd card….and her keys….!! Unable to find her anywhere on her balcony, I stood in my portico…
after some 10mins I noticed something to move little away from her balcony…exactly the steps for third floor…Oh.!..she had been sitting on steps….Most of the families devoted themselves to their television I guess.,I heard only those noises as I stepped towards her home.,She looked startled when I stood before her…

“Sam told to inform that they will be returning in one hour..from..shopping..”,I said extending her house keys and mobile….Her face turned deeply disappointed listening that…
“Hmm..well…she thought to ask me to pick you it seems…anyways..do you want to join them..”,I asked..

However…she won’t get inside her home….I had no mood to leave her like that…..She saw me accusing!…

“I will book cab..!!”,I tried to convince….She nodded in negative irritating me….”I will drop you and come back…Is that okay?”,I asked bit sharp…

“I don’t want to go”,she mumbled…

Sighing exhausted..”Then..you are going to sit here in steps?”,I asked her… She glared me for a sec.,and tried to unlock her door…

“Whats your reply Radhika?”,I stood behind her….

“For what?”,She mumbled surprising me….I saw the adjacent flat to stay closed….”Have they vacated?”,I asked…

“Yes..”,she said and went inside her house… The road was in complete silence.,No one can notice whats happening there….

“Whats that?”,I asked and she turned behind,I quickly stepped inside and locked the door fast..

“wha..wa”,she stammered….I strode having a leisure look of her house…Good!!

She tried opening the door.,the latch was bit high.,I thought she couldn’t.,but she balanced her knee on the door and pulled it down..

“No use..I had locked with keys”,I took from my pocket…

“What do you want”,she asked alarmed…..But Alas! the power went off…I saw lights in my house…

“You don’t have a inverter?”,I asked surprised…

“Something went wrong”,she said irritated…

There were earthen lamps inside their house too…Inside every room..one in dining table… “You should have lit inside instead of arranging on compounds”,I sarcastically remarked..
I collided with her as I walked in dark.,she sighed annoyed.,that was something new to me…”Sorry..! I will stay here..you bring candles”,I said…

“Sir..Better go to your home”,she sounded sombre…

I heard her voice below my chin…I stood silent..”You light candles…I will…”,I replied…

I dint receive any reply after that…it was quite some time,so I called her…when I turned she came with a tray of lit lamps..,her face shone with the brightness of more than 10 lamps in that tray…but what.,she looked me terrified…Am I gonna eat her…!! I sat in that dining table chair…There were few lamps exhausted..I watched her and followed the same,wick ..oil..next…Ah..Matchbox… “Give me matchbox”,I asked..

She glared and moved away…Just a random thought crossed….I just imagined her reaction.,if she finds me to lit a lamp with my lighter…I so wish to do that.,definitely next year.,I need to do this..at least to earn her angry glare…

“Tch…I missed my lighter back at home”,I chuckled a unseen one..and she saw me with rage…My god!! did she think she could scare me with that look….

“When is next..kar..this festival”,I asked…She was in silent….Arranging more lamps inside the house.,she moved here and there.,I was left with only option of watching her….I clicked few pics as she went oblivious….How could she..??When a man is sitting in the middle of her house…Only me and her!!

She kept the tray and walked past behind me.,I caught her wrist and pulled before me,she landed in my lap..Perfectly..!! She gritted her teeth…”Where are you going?”,I asked smiling….”Reply”,I said….She tried to squirm from my hold….”You want me to run behind you..”,I husked in her ears….

“Sir..sir..Please…”,she tried to push me… “I am…sorr..sorry sir..”,her words choked…

“What?”,I asked confused as my grip went loose….She got on her feet…biting her lips.,she took few steps behind..”Sir..Iam sorry…I din’t know..why….I…I…there..when..you..”,she stammered….

“You love me Radhika”,I stood from my place…Its been 15 mins I had been patiently waiting in her home….Not any more!

“No”,she retorted…

“Then..what about ..”

“Sir…That was a mistake…!! Am responsible…!! I won’t say to anyone…So..Please..don’t speak about that further”,she said sharp….

What nonsense…! Mistake!!! She was too furious thinking something…Here.,I had been rejoicing the moment like a teen age lover..and she behaves extremely opposite…Usually..It would be guys to back off but here.,in my case its contrary….

“Mistake??” I asked..she was silent….”Ah…I never thought you would be eccentric..”,I continued…and she stood with her gaze at ground….”Good..Forget that…Anyways..that was a good kiss”,I said…She looked me in disbelief…

“So…you won’t say that to Sam or anyone..”,I asked…she nodded in negative….”You had no problem isn’t..I mean…”,I asked…she again did the same raising my temper…. “Can you do me a favor?”,I asked..

She looked me…

“You don’t love me?”,I asked…

“Yes.”,she said…

“Then..No issues…ah..you see…you are so Addictive…Lets get over with this..”,I smiled..,her forehead creased in confusion…

She stepped backwards,with every step of mine towards her..”Relax..!! I won’t be hard..we have an hour….I will take just 15 mins”,I caught her wrist…

“What?”she asked shocked…..

“Why?”,I snapped back….

“Sir….You are drunk…Plz…go to home…Pls…”

“I was drunk then too…”,I took her in my arms…My chest felt her whole to tremble at that…. “Radhika…Either say you love me..or…”.I dragged….

“What does that have to do….”

“Then…Lets do it…and Forget it like a mistake..!! See..we will be vacating from Chennai this January…So..lets have some moments together”,I walked fast searching her room…

“Sir…This is wrong…You can’t do this..Am sorr…”,

I dropped her on the bed and got over her….Leaning close.,her breath fanned my chest….She lied dumbfounded beneath me….”Won’t you retort when a stranger touches you?”,I asked smirking…

She tried to move.,her orbs filled with tears….I adjusted myself comfortable.,my lips inches apart from hers…I could sense every nerve of hers to vibrate in anxiety….sensing some danger…her breath turned heavy…..

“May be….May be that day….when you get my kid here…you will come for me”,I said stamping my palm on her belly….I felt something to hit in my left cheek… “was there a mosquito”,I smiled rubbing my cheek,where she thought she had slapped…

“Okay now!”,I leaned down..she began to hit my chest with her balled fists….”why don’t you hit me hard?”,I asked…and she broke into tears whining,”Go away…go…pls go away…”…

I laid watching her,pushing me annoyed.,pouting a little,but dared to look my face…I got down..and pulled her to me….”I said..not to cry today…still!”,I wiped her tears…

Moving to dining hall.,I gave her some water saying.,”I will leave now”,she had her gaze intent on that glass…I so want to yell at her.,but something made me this supple…This is not my way of dealing things or people,yet…I din’t know what I was doing.,why I still stood there waiting for her reply….

“Did you check your mobile…It must be working”,I said as I was about the open the door…

She switched it on immediately….Her eyes widened and caught mine,as I expected…Of course.,I kept her pic of lighting diyas which I took that evening.,as a screen saver….her fingers rapidly swiped the screen only to hit gallery..and next sec she looked me like a deer caught in trap…

“I took those pics..Just to threaten you…just like how you did with me…Nothing much”,she said after a minute of silence…I leaned on the wall folding my arms with a smile…

“Believe me!”,she said again… Her eyes moved in every possible directions of wondering ‘what’.,I could never guess…but at times snapped at me….

“Sir…Why are you smiling?”,she asked…

“Fernandez sir”,I corrected… “Do you have something to say”.I asked laughing…After few mins of silence.,I turned to leave…

“Fernandez sir…”,she called me pleading…

“Yes sir!”..I smiled ..

“Sir..This..won’t work….”,she stuttered…

“Why sir?”,I walked to her….she bit her cheeks to control herself listening my tease…

“Ah..Dont get any ideas that I had your pics..”,she said annoyed…

“Then why you prayed for my wellness…why were you so concerned about my persona…!!..Listen..the truth is Radhika Viswanathan Loves Arjun Samuel Fernandez”,I enunciated those last words only to clear my doubts,I had for her hesitance..

“Iyer…Radhika Viswanatha Iyer….This will not work…I know…No use of convincing myself”,She bit her lips,her nose tip got a tinge of pink shade…

Good! Thats what I wanted to hear…The retort…the reason.!!..

“I know..how to make it work…”,I gave equally back….

“Please..!! Please!! “,she said irritated…

“Have you ever seen someone to plead like this”,I asked pointing me…

“Ok..you are so clear…I can’t do anything…But let me tell you…This will be a pain for both…I may drown myself in business…May be…I will quit drinking and smoking,staying with your thoughts….You will marry…I know that…For the sake of your mom.,family…But…everyday you will cry remembering me….!! His every touch will bring me to your world….You
prefer to taste a living hell !!….But..I won’t marry any other girl….No one!! Even if my mom says…!! She may even then,contact you lamenting about me..and you would listen concealing your own wounds…and that day…that day !…you will think about of what Am saying now!!….”,I finished defeated before her…. She looked me with tears….

“Do we want that Radhika!”,I asked with tears and she broke down….

“Won’t you trust your Fernandez sir once!…”,I extended my arms….She moved into my embrace.,sobbing…. “Do you trust me”,I asked…and my chest vibrated with her nod….

I lifted her feeling delighted….”I love you Radhika”,I twirled her once….

She giggled..”Love you Fernandez sir”,she murmured feeble in my ears… Just then.,power came back.,showering brightness on our love and life….The lamps were glowing along with the lights adding more charm to her house…our love.!!…

“Umm…Love you Radhika Iyer”,I laughed…..she giggled more…

“Fernandez sir?”,I slid her to sit over dining table and pulled a chair to sit before her… “Stay”,I said when she tried to get down… “So.?”.,I asked placing my hands either sides on table…

“Mom will come”,she said biting her lips…

Resting my right elbow on her left thigh,I sat looking her face.,with palm supporting my cheek…..Her legs dangled in nervousness,and my face shook along with that… “Then”,I asked amused…

“Sir…please…..”,she pleaded cute….

“I need to see your face…clearly…what not you made me…I am sitting like this, before you now…”,My throaty voice raised goosebumps on her…

“Shall I get down form table now..”,she asked again…I chuckled…

“From when..you were in love with me?”,I asked…. How literally she had fooled me with her antics.,while she was actually a step ahead in our love!…

I pulled my chair even more closer to the table now.,and her legs hit my knees…”Sorry”,she mumbled…

“I have never been nice with you….”.,I looked her intent… “Pls..speak something..”

“Arrr…Ferrr…”,she chuckled surprising me….

“If you don’t speak..I will pull you to my lap”,I said folding my arms over her knees….

“Hmm…Am sorry…..I hurt you a lot…”,she said sullen….I gestured her to continue….”I…I like you so much!…but…you always scold me….but…but…you are too good for me”,she smiled a lovable one…

“Really!! means you too smoke and drink?”,I mocked her…

“No.! shut up!!”she said..

“What?”I feigned a shock…..She blinked…

“Well..tell me…what was that Saral doing..?was he practicing a proposal with you?”,I pushed a hair strand that fell on her face…

“You came here!!Why?”,she adjusted herself..

“Came to propose you..but…”

“You din’t see Rathi..!!she was standing in her terrace…we planned a jealousy track…You see..If she watches him to propose me..,she will feel jealous..and….”,she paused looking my glare..

“It worked…!! Rathi cried,then she proposed…That’s why I gave that Rose…but you got me wrong…Saral is younger to me”,she pouted sad….”But I plan well,you know..see..their love turned successful…”,she smiled…

“Then why you din’t answer me when I asked?”,I sat straight.,relaxing a little…

“I was angry!! Why did you drink?”,she counter asked surprising me…

This is what I had been waiting for…something to start off….

“Why do you always hurt yourself.??..That day too…You were angry with uncle.,and drove Vicky’s vehicle being drunk….when Vicky told me…you know how much I was scared…whattt?”,she finished annoyed with my smile….

“Then why did you avoid me Radhika”,I asked… My eyes catching every single move of hers…

“Arj…”,she paused when I coiled my arms around her waist…

“Say it…I did ask you to call me isn’t”,I encouraged her…God..! why in first place I scolded and now am yearning to hear it…

“Arjun Samuel Fernandez SIR!!…”,she tittered…Her whole vibrated…..My eyes devoured her mirth…I quickly pulled her.,she slid down to my lap balancing my shoulder…”Too naughty!!”,I hugged her close…

“You said so”,she mumbled feeble with loss of air..,,”Leave me”,she said…

“I won’t…”,I bit her earlobe…

“You are too bad today”,she giggled in my lap..My front attached to hers felt her shook…

“Where did you get this dress?”,I asked…

“Its nice isn’t…My favorite”,she gave a proud look.,somehow managing to pull her head from my chest…

“Nice!! Too nice…”,I smirked mischievous…

“Thanks..”,she smiled finding a way to get down..

“Very s**y…. Easy to handle”,I unhooked a button and she gasped….Now it was my turn to laugh…”Do you remember….you already called me,by my name today”,I adjusted her in my lap…..”You moaned into my mouth”,I whispered and see hid her face in my chest….”You scared me with your tears…”,I kissed her cheek..

“You too had scared me…”,she sounded like a complaint…”you took me to bed”,I brushed my stubble on her cheek and she shivered a little holding me close…..Her everything was inside my hold..and the effect of sensing her reactions for me,turned me wild….increased my crave for her….She clutched my shirt hard,when I suddenly placed a open mouth kiss over her neck.,trailing towards her cheek….I insanely kissed her features…sucking her cheek,to which she curled more into me…her sweetness drove me more crazy and my tongue tutored her.,she being little bold now..played along encouraging me….her thighs rubbing mine,I leaned completely over her.,and she laid back a little with her back
hitting the table….”Love you Radhika”,I whispered as I kissed beneath her collar bone..she giggled when I played tickling with my stubble…”Kiss me back”,I said.. Being a quick learner.,her lips moved breaking the barriers between us….My palms rubbing her back,only to assure her…..She stopped listening a ringtone…..

Sam’s ringtone!…In my mobile…

“We are coming home….”,Sam said…and I disconnected the call.,as I was breathing fast…..She looked me confused… “Whats that you had,with elaichi flavor”,I asked..

“Cream biscuit”,she saw my face…

“Have this dress safe”,I said and hooked that button…”Radhika…They are coming back…”,I tried to get her off my lap.,while she sat bemused…

“What..??”,I got her down…”Adjust your hair first”…I moved towards mirror..but saw her to stand still…..I quickly switched on the fan..and adjusted my dress…We have been so enticed in living our moment.,that the necessity for basic air facility took a back seat…

“I’am ok isn’t”,I asked and she saw me unblinking…

God.!…There was a lot,to ask and discuss with her…But I…!! She buttoned my shirt smiling…

“Look yourself”,I adjusted her hair…she looped an arm and gave a chaste kiss on my left cheek….Before I could respond,the door bell rang….

She stood completely messed….Her lips.,hair.,her dress.,her eyes…I wiped her cheeks hastily with my hanky and she looked me affectionate…”Go inside..and adjust this dress….I will manage..ok”,I patted her cheek and rubbed off a drop of blood in her lips…..

How wild I have been? She was like a fresh rose bud in my arms and I just..!..I have no words to describe my annoyance on myself….The bell rang again…

“Radhi….”,I heard her mom’s voice…

She smiled and walked backwards looking me…First time.,I felt something wrong with her smile….

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So….how was it….Happy Holidays Friends!!!….Don’t forget to share your views…Pls ignore My Typos and Grammatical errors….and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! Love u all loads…Take care…

58 Comments
  1. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Jessie

      Hey Kavina…thanks a lot dear.. TC…keep smiling…

  2. Brin

    Outstanding episode, very beautiful story, love it to the core, eagerly waiting for the next update, Jessie you nail it, well done. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Brinzeee…..thanks a lot dear…am glad you loved it …will post….thanks again….TC…loads of love…

  3. Appadi finally SHE CONFESSED.my goodness nowadays you are making sam and arjun as siblings.you know I can’t tolerate them as a couple.radhika voda last smile something fishy.arjun is very hot today.thank you dear love you take care

    1. Jessie

      hahah….Nimmadhi perumoochu…!! lol…so nice thana…annan thangai a irukatum…hot a…ok ji….fishy…parpom…! you by now got Arjun’s character isnt…so its easy to guess….thanks a ton dear….Love you too….TC

  4. Amazing Merry Christmas to you to Jessie.

    1. Jessie

      Hey Niku….!! thanks a lot dear…Merry Christmas to you too….Keep smiling….TC

  5. Andha three words solrathuku radhika ku four episodes aachu.that too possible by making our arjun crying.namala irundha naal muzhukka sollite irundhurpom.I love you arjun nu.

    1. Jessie

      Chashni…….Bear hugs….4 chap…lol…aama…..ena panna…Arjun summa illama thituna…ava ena panuva….arjun crying..aana…vazhiku kondu vandhutanle….heheeh…Public…Public….ragasiyatha veliya solla koodadhu….hahah… naal muzhukka…..avalo…love!!! unmai than…Fact u…Factu…lol….Love you girl..you made me smile….TC

  6. too good dear..

    1. Jessie

      Hey Maddy…..thanks a lot yaar….TC…Keep smiling…

  7. arti viswanathan

    Outstanding and excellent episode jessie darling…. I loved all scenes….. Arjun kissed her again…. Omg, arjun told hos love for her… And the last scenes why she smiled weirdly seeing arjun….. And what will sam do if she comes to know her bro loves her best friend….. Tc loads of love and teddy hug to u from me….. And where is sangee and meen where is ur next episode waiting for it…..

    1. Jessie

      Arti..Arti….thanks a lot dear…am glad you loved everything…Sam knew Arjun loves her…First chap has the part…here too.she says in the first para na….TC dear…loads of love…

      Sangee…will be updating after her mobile prob gets over..and Meen…I guess probably the same…Mac prob..!!Even my lappy is so stuck today….I now have no idea…will I access tomo or not…

  8. wow ! Jessy seriously ur r a wonderful &aws story writer ya and I just love this update very much ,I can’t say anything to express my feeling to u ya nice……. enaku romba pidichi iruku and neenga romba azhaga story ya kindu poringa Semma romantica and ethavathu problem varumo and radhika firstla irunthe namma Arjuna pudichi iruku atha ava church biriyani senja thane Jessie and I am so Glad u know Tamil and u reply to me in Tamil ,I am so happy ya and take care ,apram update soon ya I waiting for u……………….

    1. Jessie

      Hey Sne….thanks a lot dear….u said it so beautifully…and thanks a ton my friend….yep….avaluku avana pidikum…prob…lets see…chicken senja…!! Church ava en pona…She will say…..aama neengalum tamil..am glad…thanks again…update…lappy le problem ma…enaku ena pannanu theriyala…it will take days…naduvula…if possible I will update…I my self feel bad to say it….

      TC…loads of love

  9. U r amazing dear.merry Christmas to u. Awesome episode dear.love u.eagerly waiting for next update.

    1. Jessie

      Hey Devika…thanks a lot dear…Merry christmas..!! Happy with your support….love you too…Will try to post soon….TC n loads of love

  10. Jewel

    Jez, jez, jez…. This is excellent…. His teasing, I forgot my lighter, and her look. Then that “sir” part, everything is superb…. His way of convincing her, I liked that a lot…. Finally she also confessed…. I liked this chapter a lot jez…. Now waiting for next one…. Happy Christmas 🎅…..

    1. Jessie

      Shonaaaaaaaaaa…..Thanks a lot dear…..Lighter!! My fav scene here…Now am jumping ..sir..hahah..yep…Arjun k liye..likha…Reach ho gaya…Shukriya…!!! Am so happy you liked it shona…will post…Merry Christmas dear….Wow…!! your likes!! I expected that from you..! love you tons…Thanks again….TC

  11. Amore

    wow such expectant unexpected…

    Waiting for the reason…

    1. Jessie

      Hey Amore!! thanks dear…will post…TC…stay happy

  12. too good dear..waiting for next one

    1. Jessie

      Hey Maddy…Thanks a lot dear..will do…TC..stay happy

  13. Dipika

    Jesssssss godddddd you made me speechless again.. No word can describe this amazing chapter.. Sach me. No word.. This issss sooooo beautiful.. N m soooooooo happy that thy r now together.. He was all on teasing mode.. Made her annoyed by his unstoppable questions.. Lol.. No invertor. N that saral.. Part.. I was like husshhh.. Just practicing the praposal.. Lol… Then he takes her to bed.. Lol.. Pointing towards belly.. Lol.. Naughty arjun.. Shadi se pahele baby chahiye.. Lol… N her cute confession.. Hey i too wanna knw since qhn she fell in love with him.. Y her mom can’t come lil late…. N their moment wowowwww… I don’t want this to end ever… He bite her lips.. Arjun is like experience prsn collected himself fast.. Lol.. M. Sooo eager yo know further.. Pls post soon.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

    1. Jessie

      Judwa behana…Speechless..!! wowow!! Thanks a lot dear…..yep..yep…yep…Arjun hai to aisa…jealous wala scene..Practice nahi….Deepz…I expected you to say that child part..lol…baby nahi chahiye..bas threatening…!! she slapped!! lol…Thapad se matlab nahi…Pyaar se…lol….Just loved your review girl….you brought it alive again….she will say yaa…lol…Arjun ne bhulaya..come soon…!! wow..wala moment..k liye thanks in spl…lol Deepz…experience person…rofl….yaar..Prestige…image…damage…lol….will post if my lappy does good..like honestly…am like..lemme reply to everyone..when I get chance…dint read your wos..!! sorry…I will do tomo…love you tons…My dear….TC…stay happy…

  14. Awesome…… ..mind blowing dear waiting for nxt part

    1. Jessie

      Hey Ani…thanks a lot dear…glad to get your view…will post…Stay happy….TC

  15. Sulbi

    OMG my Jazz kutty… this part was amazing… u know some feelings were raising iniside me… even i got goosebumps whenever Radhika had… i just lived in this chappy… am super duper happy… enjoying… atlast radhika confessed… and Arjun played a smart move to burst out… really i was scared when he pulled her to bed but that was awsme…naughty arjun… chance kadaicha podhum velaiya kamichiduran…

    Really jazz my heart want more to read this… when it came yo an end i felt like oh shit not so soon… amazing… lovely… so now radhu mom came… and for the first time arjun felt something wrong in her smile… that makes me fear… whats gonna happen… am starving for this ff… pls update soon darling… u nailed it… and i loved it to the core… and teddy hug for u and love you aloads for this wonderful chapter… tons of kisses bear me… muuuuuuuaaaaaaahhhh.. 🙂 :-*

    1. Jessie

      Sulbi Jaan…Teddy hugs dear….goose bumps!!! My god!Girl…thanks for such a awesome compliment….am so happy…seeing you enjoying this much…smart move!! Naughty Arjun..!! haha…cycle gaple auto otran!! correct thana..ena pana..!!

      End..!! yep..Its already bit lengthy…Yep..her mom..thanks a lot dear…dont fear…When Arjun Fernandez is here!! will update dear..am so glad with your comment…love you loads dear….Thanks again..you are a wonderful support…will bear you…jaan…TC…..stay happpy…..Muaahhh

  16. My super girl…
    What do I say dear? It’s awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome …
    So finally Radhika realised….
    Superb style of writing my dear..
    Stay HAPPY always
    Bye

    1. Jessie

      Sunshine…Thanks a ton dear….yep..she realised…thanks again….you always make me happy with your comment…Love you loads…TC..stay happy dear…

  17. Gauri

    Jessie so beautiful so amazing finally confession and a beautiful one….all the moments were too beautiful to chose one…but really at the end you left me with a chliffhanger ….is radhika playing with Arjun…I am too confused….my whole head is stuck there in her smiled please come back soon …. I dont think I can wait 🙂 loads of love

    1. Jessie

      Gaurii….Thanks a lot dear…. No..she isn’t playing…Next chap has the details…The word beautiful here..means a lot yaar…Thanks a ton for that…don’t be confused…Radz..isnt playing..and smile k wajah..after the next chap..hopefully you all will guess with next one…simple reasons…love you tons…Your excitement and lively words boost me dear…TC

  18. Merry Christmas Jess.. …this was romantic. ..amazing. ..proposal was too good. …love the way u write.. ..awesome

    1. Jessie

      Hey Likii…thanks a lot dear…. thanks for pointing the proposal in precise…love you loads…Thanks again dear…The words boost me a lot…Sweet comment!! TC…

      WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR!! STAY HAPPY

  19. jessy … Breathtakingly awesome update….the way Arjun convinced rads…rads realization n cute confession..thier cute n hot romance..every thing was beautifully written.. loved it.

    1. Jessie

      Aww…Breathtakingly awesome!! Loved that…Thanks a lot Swathi … wow..!! thanks again for sharing your likes…Rads realization..yes…and he convinced…woo!! am glad now.. Love you loads…TC…

      WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR

  20. Rossy

    No words to ur writing…it’s WOW…WOW….u know ur writing style make it more beautiful ….and this chapter is totally outstanding…very very nice dear…no doubt u write,its good for us…now Arjun ko chodo…i even don’t figure out reason behind radz smiling at last…they loved each other then…what’s happening around them….will anyone oppose this marriage….don’t know why but m constantly thinking 😔 what’s gonna happen….lol…update soon…😃

    1. Jessie

      Rossyyyy…..Thanks a ton dear…Radz smile we will have in shot 7..her pov…so engrossed…
      Am glad you liked the story and each and every thing here…yes…they love each other…will update dear…thanks again for your support and review….Love you loads….TC

  21. Jnana

    ohmygoddamn…… jesssssssieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee………………….. sooooo cuteee… i was so entralled….. awwwwwweeeee her confession…. so cute…… radhika you too drink and smoke….. that was more a question he asked….. but arjun samuel fernandez sir is turning a way too shamelesss. bad boy,….. he had scared the girl to hilt the day before…. he’s soooo possessive…. loved this shade of both but speciallly arjun….

    1. Jessie

      Hey Jnana… Thanks a lot dear…..hahah.you too drink and smoke..!! thanks for pointing those…yep..he scared her…am happy you loved it…sooo possessive..yes…yess….Am so happy Jnana…love you loads…TC

  22. Mindblowing… Jessie really loved it… Sorry for late comment.. Aradhika awesome want more from you… wait for next..
    Pls update next soon… Take care…
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    1. Jessie

      Thanks a lot saran….More of Ardhika!! ok…!! am glad you loved it…will post…TC….Stay happy…dont be sorry for being late..am happy that you shared your view…

  23. I want to know u ….if its possible tell so!ethimg about u ya and its no in the sense its oknleave it ya and thanks for ur reply and soon update ya.

    1. Jessie

      Hi Sne..well..you could pm me…if you have reg id here…..to know dear…my pleasure…and will post soon….TC

  24. Aasthu

    Jess I’m really sorry for not commenting on your previous chapter…..I was away from home….being Christmas holidays, I had gone over to my grandparents house……….I loved the last update too….Arjun’s repeated proposal was very funny………….this one….too hot….ardhika…Arjun’s way of making her speak out her hesitance was really nice……….ardhika kiss……my goodness Jess you are improving at a fast rate…….now I’m sure by the time you complete “My Sweet Mistake” you’ll overcome even Satzzzz………hehe……..

    How did your Christmas go??????????? love u……..take care……..ummmaaaaa……

    1. Jessie

      Hi Aasthu….thats ok dear…thanks a lot and thanks for sharing your likes…hot.!! improving…lol…Now..Chinnu…what to say…Am rolling…you always have some fun in teasing me isn’t…waiting for ammu..!! nope…She is romance queen…Overcome…Lol…Chinnu.turning too naughty…love you loads…TC…Muaahhh..dear..

  25. Jessie…. I loved this to the coreee
    Radhika Fernandez s back in a Indirect manner though
    What say Jessie
    Fernandez sir s juz so cool

    1. Jessie

      Fernandez sir!! and cool….Raj..!! thanks a lot yaar… am glad you loved it…yes..she is…soon in a direct manner…ok!! well…you know..Am now stuck with that ‘Fernandez sir is jus so cool’ comment of yours…Haha…Sweet !!! Spl thanks for that…TC..stay happy…

  26. Gianna

    Sweetheart I never knew you were this romantic, lovely story just like you. Give me the names of other stories u have written I would love to read them all.

    1. Jessie

      Sweet heart…… WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR!!! Romantic!? me…No..!! Am trying !! hehe…thanks ya… ok done…I will PM you…am glad with your response…Jolly….Loads of love….TC…

  27. Sangee

    hey j what is this yar….this epi was outstanding dear….hugs and kisses for u….
    you going in jet speed yar ….here after dont tell me ur innocent (wink) ….rads fears to stay alone..is there any background story for it…so sam have planed this to help her bro … OIC ….
    intelligent girl …you want her to stay in balcony and in terrace for next one hour…she is already alone… sams mind voice:hello brother nee company kudupa nu dane avala thaniya vitu vanthen makku makku he he he …ardika convo was super ma.. locked with keys… 😛 😛
    mun jagiradai ya irrukaram …he he power off..minvettu naali ingae minsaram pole vanthaye va va en velicha poove va nu bg la arjun ku song ketu irrukum 😛 …inverter …super super…ligter to light lamps….adapaavi…idula veeta vachitaru nu feelings vera…nee mattum appadi senji irrukanum
    he he he …definetly next year ah omg… thats karthigai 😛 ….teenage lover…usally boys…ha ha ha arjuns pov was highlight in this epi ma…lets get over this ah..Relax..!! I won’t be hard…dei antha chinna pulla ya enda bayamuruthura….kid ah love propose panna poren nu thane pa nee vantha ippa enna enna vo pesara….i read with a wide opened eye seriously he did all possible stunts to make her confess….mosquito va …en ma radika unnaku little sonna mattum kovam varudu la appa nalla full force ah use panni adichi irukanu 😛 …thats not something arjun adarku per dan loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee <3 <3 sir…fernandez sir…this wont work sir….why sir….ultimate j …so the reason is caste … yes radika iyer he knows..how to make it work 🙂 🙂 arjun explaining abt future anga nikira da nee ….Won’t you trust your Fernandez sir once …sir ah marupadium modala iruntha ha ha ha tada power came …Arrr…Ferrr ..lol pesama sir ne sollidu …you too smoke and drink? solla ve illa 😛 proporsal drama konja nerathula arjun ah devadas akitiye ma ..she was angry man …he he he ….too bad too naught sema pair … nice dress …Easy to handle…i was like aahan (vadivelu style) ….elachi cream biscut 🙂 … have the dress safe …adjust ur hair..I’am ok isn’t ..rads buttoning his shirt…. ovvoru scene um sema sema j nee engayo poita… annoyance on myself…nee nallava na kettavana ton ton ton doin…he he he something wrong with her smile … j is there any twist in the tale…iam curiously waiting update next one soon….totally the epi was fabulous …love u loads hugs and kisses ….

    1. Jessie

      Geet chellam…Nee pona varusham comment panadhuku naa indha varsham reply panren…hehe…Hugs and kisses dear…jet speed…Aahhhaan!! innocent than! innocent than!! Gounder style…rofl….Minvetu song…Sema matching po….POV..thanks…Lighter…hehe…adhu naan illengo..!! lol…bayam!! haha…Indha Arjun ippadi than..ena panna…possible stunts…sema le…wide eyed…hey..hey..nadika koodathu..rofl… ongi adicha ondra ton weight a iruka ava enna
      singam surya va…pavam pulla bayandhu poiruku….loveeeeeeee..hahhaa..epic…Aiyo…I love this comment…Thanks ya…ninutana…ok..!! vetri…! pinita po….Part parta potu thakita….smoke and drink..Athane…! cream biscuit..! puduchuteenga…!! Geet… When I wrote that part…I know you will definitely say a word about it…Geet..enga ponalum una vidamaten..hahah…music vera….theriyalaye ma…theriyala ye..No twist…Trust Arjun..hehee… thanks a ton dear…you always make me happy…sema happy…Nandrigal kodi…oru litre boost …love you loads…Stay happy forever

  28. Dear God! someone is game. on a terrific pace. loved it. hey Jessie dear, wats tat u possess! seriously girl, trust me, the portrayal of scenes n the way they flip over is something…donno wat to say. anything wud be an understatement. I mean, u r at the line, the thin line tat is wat is called the exactness. neither beyond, nor below. I can sense a deep correctness in ur thoughts. hats off to ur amazing skill. ur confidence, tats so tangible tat I can actually feel it. gen feelings u r handling extraordinarily. love u darling. wat a humor sense u got to be tagged wid u lol. tat dress of hers. hahaha. oh! l love pattu pavada satta so so much. tats basically makes u graceful. n did u mention the color of her dress. usually it be maroon r green. actually I do like purple n dark green. lemme fantasise here tat in green. aw!!!! I loveeeeeeeee it. I had one. tat elaichi thing was absolute. wow, tat was nostalgic b’cos I so loved eating cardamom cream biscuits back then. Girl, u r seriously rockingggggggggg. keep going. n baby darling just don’t consider the only scenes I talk about b’cos those r all just automatically cumin out in the heat of a moment. actually everything is ruthlessly spectacular. I just cant mention. in ur previous update wen I read ’22 yr old cant be a naive’ I was like gaping ‘hey, come on, why not?’ seriously lol hehe. teddy hugs dear. love u loads 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Thenaaaa…..Am glad you loved it…you always make me speechless Thena…Am like addicted to your words…thin line..I won’t retort that..!!! Here…I was taking efforts for being on that line..Am like super surprised to know.,that you looked the writeup from that angle… Everytime.,I get a doubt like,will it turn to be a dragging one.,since I follow that line..now am happy…Thanks a ton…I have no apt words now..to express my happinesss….I should have scrolled down the other day to read your comment…Seriously…Its so encouraging and more than that.,I feel someone is next to me watching a movie with same POV..humor sense..hehe…thank you…
      Thena…..Pattu pavadai…..I so love it..yep..gives you grace….and dad says cute!!..Its.Maroon…In 1st chap..Arjun says the color…Oh..yea…Green would have been cool…I should have thought that…Purple and green is awesome one ya..Elaichi…!! wow!! you noticed…!! Am like jumping…I expected very few of our friends here to say…and now you surprised me… you say so beautifully Thena…automatically coming out..!! I got it…Now am feeling ecstatic!! wooo…..I just love your words… why not??!! haha….yep…I agree that…am more than 22…and am Naive..now dont think to hit me…but believe me… heheh…unmai kasakum…Most of the times I blink to catch the meaning of few jokes.,and withdraw silently…onnume puriyala ulagathule…lol…I will stop….I just enjoyed this moment…Thanks Thena!! for making me feel this delighted…you passed your energy to me with your comment…Love you tons…stay happy forever….TC…Teddy bear hugs…

  29. Jessieee…sorry sorry sorry for late commenting…woww !! finally finally she confessed…oh !! my guess was right..she afraid that their love wont be accepted…i just loved every bit…hats off to Arjun’s patience…update next soon..eagerly waiting..muahhhhhh

    1. Jessie

      Hey ya Aastha….yaar…Pls dont say sorry…!! you make your presence worth with your comment…so sorry mat bolo meri saheli… yesssss….she confessed…yes…you are corrrectt…. Am so happy you enjoyed it…patience..! hmm…Arjun scores high…updated my dear…muaah…
      thanks a lot…love you loads

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