Manmarziyan- Jannemaan Part 20

Holding Grudge or hatred which prick your heart like thorns z only going to hurt you so think wisely and let them Go!!!…
It was a beautiful morning, the dime melodious sound of twittering of birds was pleasant to hear indeed…the cool gentle wind seemed so gentle quietly moving leaves along with it…The early morning orange rays of sun through the window woke up arjun with a smile on his face…It was the most peaceful content sleep after many days…
Everything in his life was so perfect that sometimes he was terrified that might be snatched away….his ears got alarmed as he heard the sound of message popping up on his phone….
He grabbed it from the side table and peeped to see what’s there…his face lit up as he saw it was Radhika’s message, “Dear husband you are invited for my cousin’s wedding function by your mother in law…so please don’t be late and annoy my father.”
Arjun got up from the bed and marched to washroom to freshen up for the day…he came back after a good 15 minutes and walked to his grand wardrobe to cloth himself in the most lustrous outfit to look like a King in the function…
He selected a brown simple yet elegant sherwani and dressed up to glance in the mirror….He indeed was no less than any king of some rich kingdom….his outfit had a deep low neck which proudly the displayed the glimpse of his Radhika’s name tattooed on his chest….The letters ‘RA….” were clearly peeping through it rest was hidden…Her name was imprinted on his body…heart and soul…every single cell of his body was engraved by RADHIKA….
He got inside his car and drove off in a lightening speed to meet his beloved…soon he reached and received a grand welcome from his in laws…
As he entered inside…he moved his gaze everywhere to laid his eyes on the most beautiful girl of his life but couldn’t find her anywhere…
He got distracted when he felt a motherly affectionate hand on his shoulder… He turned to find his mother in law smiling wide…she chimed, “The one you are searching for z not ready yet….she z in her room if you want go and meet her now.”
He blushed after being caught off guard by his mother in law…he composed himself and replied,”Maa I will wait for the moon to show its beauty on its own.”

Mala smiled and murmured patting his cheeks…,”Your moon will take time today.”
He nodded and grinned with arrogance for owning a moon more beautiful than the one which hides behind the clouds in the enormous sky…his POV….”My moon has full authority to take time and make me wait because she z Radhika Arjun Mehra.”
It was so difficult to kill time and wait with a patient look on his marble cut face….It was indeed worth watching the Arjun Mehra growing impatient by every passing second yet waiting patiently…his eyes set on the path leading to her room clearly thirsty to see as soon as possible…

Atlast the wait came to an end as she walked towards the hall draped in a red chania choli( an Indian traditional outfit which consist of skirt and blouse draped with a dupatta hooked on the waist)
As she walked inside the hall she instantly became the centre of attraction….she looked like some celestial nymph lost her way on earth….Arjun noticed some men watching her lustfully and gave a angry murderous glare to each one of them immediately they dispersed in fright…
He crossly gawked at Radhika for not wearing any of her wedding jewels….his anger was fuelled by seeing her giggling with adi…
Arjun shadowed his anger with a careless and calm look and started flirting with a girl who was fascinated by his personality…
He pulled her closer and whispered, “Did anyone told you that you are the most beautiful girl here.”
She blushed at his words and nodded negatively….he smirked as he saw the grim irritated look on Radhika’s face…
Radhika was standing there in a corner watching them silently…she was burning in a blaze of Jealousy…her anger was at its highest peak… She looked at Arjun disappointedly….
Adi was also surprised by Arjun’s behavior… Radhika couldn’t take it anymore…she was so annoyed and mad, so she decided to walk away from there…

She saw a bowl of flower jewelry on her way and to gain Arjun’s attention she decided to make him jealous and teach a lesson…she took a hair veil made of Roses for herself and in a seductive and sweet loving tone asked,”Adi how z this veil?”.
Adi could sense why she suddenly changed her tone…Even he didn’t like Arjun’s behaviour and ignorance towards Radhika…He purposely replied loudly” Radhika… Its really beautiful and it will add charm to your beauty.”
As soon as adi praised Radhika’s beauty Arjun’s anger started to simmer gradually…and as per Radhika’s plan his mind got diverted from that girl…
Adi and Radhika were well aware of the fact that Arjun was watching and listening them…To distract him from that girl and make him more jealous, Radhika gazed intensely at adi and made a puppy face and requested, “Adi please can you put this veil in my hair.”
“Oh Sure!”Adi replied with a amusing grin on his face knowing what game Radhika was playing to make Arjun jealous…he carefully put the veil in her hair…
To add more fumes,Radhika asked him” How do I look??.”

Adi glanced at her passionately without a blink for a while, he forgot that Radhika was just acting to envy Arjun…He murmured loudly, “Radhika your beauty doesn’t need any rose veil….your face always glows like a rose.”
Arjun prudently watching and listening them with a hostile look…his simmering anger made him lose all his patience… He couldn’t hold himself more…he pushed that girl away slightly and swiftly walked near Radhika and adi…
He gave a dreadful look to adi and harshly pulled the Rose veil from Radhika’s hair and spoke in a thick tone” Radhika you look even more ugly in this” his scorning jealousy was obviously visible in his eyes….
Radhika responded to his exasperation in same manner… She answered him with fury…,”Excuse me Mr Arjun Mehra I never asked your opinion about my looks…why don’t you go and spend your precious time with that girl instead of mocking me.” She wrinkled her nose angrily at him and moved her long beautiful opened hair from back to front leaving her entire back exposed unknowingly…she was wearing a backless blouse and low waist chania(skirt)…Her dupatta covered a very little of her back…she started walking off from both of them…
Her curvy back was looking so s*xy…Arjun noticed every man present there drooling over her bareback…His eyes didn’t fail to caught Adi staring at her lustfully….His anger was not in his control anymore…he swiftly walked towards her and screamed while walking “RADHIKA STOP…..I said stop right there.”

Radhika instantly turned towards him with bothered gaze….Arjun with extreme fiery look held her wrist very tightly with one hand….Radhika got really scared after seeing Arjun’s shimmering anger….He harshly held hair and brought them back to cover her backless blouse with other hand…Radhika immediately understood why he moved her hair to the back and why he completely lost his temper….In anger Arjun forgot that he was holding Radhika’s hand…he gripped her wrist cruelly…her glass bangle broke and pricked inside her vein…she started bleeding profoundly from her hand…
Radhika winced in pain….tears streamed down her cheeks…she struggled to free her hand from his ironic grip but he was way to strong for her….Arjun’s anger was at its peak he couldn’t hear her wince or realise that she was bleeding severely…Darkness entirely took over his senses…
Radhika shouted, “Arjun you are hurting me” but her voice didn’t reach his ears…she shouted loudly again with sobs” Arjun let go off my hand.” Arjun came back to his senses and felt her blood on his hand instantly realized this all happened because of him….Seeing Radhika’s blood…his face filled with terror…he roared loudly, “Call the doctor NOW….”before anyone could think anything Radhika ran away to her room..
Adi glared at Arjun with rage but controlled himself to avoid making a scene in front of all their guest….
Mala brought turmeric paste to apply on her wounds…Arjun took the paste from her but couldn’t meet her eyes staring him with bottled up anger….he ran to Radhika’s room…
Radhika came inside her room and washed her hand with water but the bleeding didn’t stop….her tears were flowing down her cheeks…Arjun came into the room he felt extremely guilty after seeing the blood on her hand…Radhika without looking at him spoke harshly, “Leave me alone Arjun.”
He ignored her request and carefully took her hand in his and applied the turmeric paste on her wound with care to stop the bleeding…he felt broken and vulnerable…
Radhika stared at him with hatred and disgusting gaze, then said with cynicism,” Papa was always right about you….you are the biggest mistake of my life which I cannot rectify even if I wish to do so.” She realized later what she just uttered in her anger…
He freed her hand out of his grip and got up….he masked his tears and somehow controlled himself from breaking down after hearing her hurtful words…. He took a deep breath and calmly yet sternly replied, “Radhika if you think your happiness z somewhere else then we don’t need to continue this marriage like you said few months back that there could be nothing between you and me….as per your wish and desire we didn’t consummated our marriage till now so you can still think over it and let me know….you can live here as per your own wish….I can see you really have very good friends here to take care of you forever so you need not join me to Mumbai against your wish…Then No Arjun….No suffocation….No pain….No relation NOTHING!!!….he finally said, “My happiness lies in your happiness…. If you don’t want me as your husband then I can divorce you.”

Radhika’s eyes widen with shock she stared at him without blinking her eyes…it took her few seconds to comprehend what he just said in his anger and ego….she had no idea where all this came from…tears crept from her silent lifeless eyes…the word Divorce was echoing in her ears repeatedly…she didn’t had any strength left to utter a word….her face turned red and her breathing haggard…. She felt as if someone slapped her harshly on her cheeks…she stood there frozen…
Arjun immediately realized what he had done in his Jealousy and Anger….but he had shot the harsh words which he couldn’t take back now…he was shocked to see Radhika’s reaction…she looked as if someone had sucked all life inside her….her condition was awful…
He shook her vigorously…,”Radhika….”
She came back to her sense and asked him in a thick deadly tone…,”Do you want to give me divorce???…do you want to break our marriage??.”She wiped her tears and before he could answer her question she made a declaration of her decision,” I have taken my decision…I will come back to Mumbai and do everything according to your wish…I will never raise my voice or go against you…I assure you that you will never get a chance to complain again.” Her tone was deceptively soft…Her expression was unreadable… She stared at him impassively with no expression….Radhika folded her hands and spoke in a clipped, stern authoratively calm voice….,”Can you please leave me alone for sometime. “
Arjun had never seen her this terrified… Her clipped soft tone scared him to the core….her expressionless eyes killed him…he couldn’t figure out what she was upto???….she had the subtle nature of fighting back and answering him with same fury but today she didn’t even questioned him for his harsh words….Arjun understood that it was not right to talk to her right now because she was too much angry…Arjun without saying anything walked out of her room fearfully after seeing her dangerously calm….
Precap….Anger z like an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it z stored than to anything on which it z poured…
BE CAREFUL WITH YOUR WORDS
ONCE THEY ARE SAID,
THEY CAN BE ONLY FORGIVEN
NOT FORGOTTEN!!!….
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Hey Dearies I know I made you wait for too long….sorry for that so how was this chapter???….Guys this my very first ff and I thought only there wedding won’t be the exact ending…. Everything should fall it its right place….I mean his anger should be channelized and he need more lessons to control himself as per my opinion…. What you think???….So good news for all Jannemaan fans I m not ending it soon….chalo do let me know you review on this update….Till then byee!!!….

43 comments

  1. manha

    Hey gummie. Darling supu. It was awesome. Swift change of emotions very clearly and nicely written. And the last words soo goood. Very touchy. so now will they move to mumbai without patch up. Lets see what will happen next. Waiting. Take care.

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Thanks a ton manha di for your lovely words….you lifted my confidence instantly….will update soon…a bonecrushing bone crushing hug for you…

      Love You😘😍

  2. Sammy

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    My lovely suppu ..this was awesome ..uff arjun is always too much ..lovely ..and thanks for updating this ..I enjoyed it ..but don’t know what she will do ..update next soon and waiting for love you forever 🙂 🙂

    • Sweety

      Sammy please update u r lost patience.story. ….I eagerly waiting for you. ……please. …please. ..

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Awww baby!!!…Thank you so much…will update love you forever pretty soon and this one too…Waiting for desperate silence pls update that soon… Hey I saw the Aham’s interview on YouTube I really loved it to the core….I m not a fan of Ekta’s shows but will watch brahmarakshash for aham….I wish he works with Monica in some other project….

      Love You😘😍

  3. Shree

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    Baccha…. Hello?! Dimag mein chal kya raha hai? Arjun ko itna gussa kyun? Damn these two are idiots… Seriously… Dayum.. But his anger is so stupid.. divorce?! Now Radhika please give him silent treatment like this… I want him to be unaware of what she’s thinking and what she wants to do…

    Baccha.. this left ne in shock… But I loved it..

    Post soon.. Love you 😍😘

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Oh Mamma your baccha has very tiny brains to think….lol…thanks a ton…don’t worry Aradhika will reunite your baccha knows what to do next….you better update mate or I will pester you 24\7….I mean it mamma I will become a bad baccha then…will update soon…

      Love You😘😍

  4. Jara

    Thank God u r not ending it… Well I have been trying a lot to comment on ffs but i guess my net connection with some ffs has a very bad relationship but now it’s OK plz continue yaar and arjun should learn his lesson , u r absolutely right, this is the first ff I read on this website… And U r just awesome…

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Jara…I m happy to see you pleased with my writing…. Wow so this z the first ff you read really I m happy knowing that…will update pretty soon….

      Stay Blessed😘😍

  5. KK

    It was awesome…blossom. epi
    But precap scared me….i hope radhika wont take silly step and hurt herself. yes…i agree you dear…he needs to learn to calm him self…but at the end i m so happy that you will continue with this ff.i love ot…and i jave small request. Plz add some romance too…

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Thanks Kk for such a wonderful comment…. No rads z a modern era girl I don’t like portraying weak girls becoz I have a fiery stubborn nature in real life….so no silly steps….she will give him silent treatment….will update soon…romance after some updates promise

      Stay Blessed😘😍

  6. Brin

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    Arjun needs to get his anger controlled, he is only hurting Radhika. Awesome episode and I am glad your not ending it, waiting for the next update. 🙂

  7. Rossy

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    This Arjun should control his anger…what happened man??? Now rads also angry?? Will see where this anger take them..take care 😊

  8. Amber

    Awsum chappy..Well I think arjun’s anger his possessiveness was right no one can see that some other men watch his lady with lustful eyes..but arjun should not hurt her poor radz…well now m waiting what will happen next..and hmm schii sis ur writing talent iz MashaAllah..

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Thanks Amber dear….arjun was angry but its the test whether to hurt or control nd he failed in it….will update pretty soon….

      Love You😘😍

  9. Jessie

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    Oh god.. wat happened suddenly.. he needs 2 control his anger.. but both let d words isnt..Rads pointed him as a biggest mistake n he being hurted said abt divorce.. happy tat u arent ending this story.. wat abt love has no limits.. any update.. did dilip watch this.. no isnt.. I dont want him 2 create a issue..lol .. patch up1 d birds without giving more hrtbrks.. waiting 4 nxt one.TC dear

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Thanks Jessie dear…no dilip didn’t watch all this but he will know for sure….arjun will apologize but it will take time to get back old radhika….he will learn to control his anger in this course….will update pretty soon…

      Love You😘😍

  10. Lakshmi05

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    Superb suppu…u expressed their emotions very perfectly dear… But they both need to overcome their anger for their love… And arjun needs to control his ego n his possessive nature towards rads..he should know she also have equal rights to be anger on him too…n rads should make him understand his fault without bearing his anger silently. Hope everything will be fine soon between them…will be waiting for next one….luv u…tc…😘😘

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Di….arjun will learn to control his anger while getting back the old bubbly chirpy radhika….she will give him silent treatment don’t worry they will reunite but after some episodes…will update soon…

      Love You😘😍

  11. subha

    happyyyyyyy ….u not ending this story……. awesome episode……..eagerly waiting next one………update soon….how is u r health ?.& take rest …….tc love uuuuuuuu

  12. Gauri

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    First one slap for Arjun … he should trust Radhika 🙂 But one thing I would applaud you potrayed emotions nicely now make them repent …. and when are you posting Devil !!! do it soon or you will find one under your bed send by me 🙂 love u

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Yippee!!!…finally m getting praised by my favourite writer…. You boosted my ego along with confidence di….you send the devil even he will fall for me….lol…will update soon….thanks for the lovely comment…

      Love You😘😍

  13. _Ritu

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    Awesome chappy Supriya dear…finally u posted…loved it dear..Arjun need to control his anger for sure..Rads too turning all mogambo…m glad u r not ending it soon…and hows u dear..take care..waiting for ur nxt update and plz update love u forever too if possible..love u..tc 🙂

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Ritu di….m fine now but still under the effect of medicine…. Yuck!! I hate them like anything…. Arjun will be tamed soon….will update pretty soon…love you forever I m still writing maybe a double dhamaka in next….

      Love You😘😍

  14. Dipika

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    Supri it was fabulous update…y this arjun is keep hurting rads yarrr..any girl can say tht why rads said…applying lotion giving pain thts good but still..u r right he hav to channelize his anger..m waiting for next now…love u..

    • Gummiebear

      |Author

      Thanks a ton dipika di…your words made me smile wider….arjun will control his anger in course of getting old chirpy radhika back….will update soon….

      Love You😘😍

  15. Myra

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    Suppu……its was fabulous….really glad that you arent ending it…..arjun ka gussa ufff….update soon sweetheart….its too good! Love you dear 😘

  16. Roma

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    Awesome, marvellous episode my supu…very very well narrated. …how beautifully u showed that mare few meaningless acts done by someone can create how messy situation. …the thing started with just Lil teasing n jealousy but it turned out to be very messy n destructive. ….I hope ardhika get back together soon. …n all the misunderstandings get clear. …very lovely story n awesome dialogues. …keep it up honeyyy….love you loads …muaaaaahhhhhh. ..bear hug. .. ♡♡♡

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