Manmarziyan 29th August 2015 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Radhika asking Mala and Dada ji to what will she disagree. Dada ji makes excuses and tells about her earpain, asking her to clean his ear. Radhika asks Mala to say. Mala says someone is coming to meet you today. Radhika says she does not want to meet anyone, she will not marry. Mala asks her to settle down. Radhika says she wonβt marry. Mala asks her to tell that person herself. The door bell rings. Mala asks Radhika to come. Radhika says she canβt love anyone else and recalls Arjun.
Arjun come to her while she picks the papers blown by air. She says she wonβt come and asks Mala to go. He looks at her. Khwaishon pe likhiβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦playsβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦. He smiles and comes close to her. He holds her. He says your life is like blank paper Radhika, you are incomplete without ink of love. She turns and looks at Arjun. He asks why did she not marry. She says I m willing to marry, someone is coming to see me today. He asks such will with someone elseβs signs. She sees mangalsutra and says I was removing it. He asks her to remove and give him. She turns and asks why did he come here.
He says I have to come to take whats mine. She says he can get other mangalsutra in Mumbai and asks him to go. He says he will go after taking his things. She says she has got her everything here. He holds her face and says you canβt lie well even today, if you got your everything, why do you make me feel your presence all the timeβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦ he asks why is her name in all his talk, why does his every moment wish to have her, I love you Radhika.
He says you left me and came here, but I could not leave you. She says Sam loves you. He says Sam does not love me. She asks thenβ¦. He smiles and says where thereβs Samandar Singh, there is her idiot too. Sam eats food and Neil enters Radhikaβs home. He says wife is resting when husband is working. Sam tells Dada ji about her choice, asking if he is good. Dada ji asks Neil does he know to clean ears. Neil asks what. They all laugh. Dada ji says love is great when there is friendship intact in it. Mala says she will get Radhika. Sam says let them be, even Lord should not come between husband and wife.
Radhika asks Neil? Arjun says Neilβ¦ no one knows how love happens, look at me, I fell in love with my wayβs stones, I have my heart to my problem. Khwaishon pe likhiβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦playsβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦ He holds her close and kisses her. She says Sirβ¦ He says Arjunβ¦. Just Arjun. She says Arjun and he hugs her.
After two years, scene shifts in Mumbai, Radhika wakes up Arjun romantically. He hugs her and she reminds him the schedule. He says he is getting best copywriter award today. He says you never used to take my name, and now whenever you call, you scold me and call. She says Arjunβ¦ and combs her hair. He says just name will not work now, and holds her close. Sam is sleeping. Neil wakes her up and she greets him good morning. He says now this is yours, and handsover the puppyβ¦.. They think what to name it, and suggest like Nesam, or Apple.
Arjun, Radhika, Sam and Neil come to Birdsong and greet Piyali. They all work together. Manmarziyon pe ab hum chaleβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦.playsβ¦β¦β¦β¦. Arjun puts sugar in his coffee and they laugh seeing him. Some light moments while working are shown. Sam and Neil fight. Arjun and Radhika stop them. They discuss about work, while the title song plays in BG. They all hug and smile.
The show ended with a cheerful scene in Birdsong depicting their happy lives.
Update Credit to: Amena
2,074 Comments
Wow so nyc story’s guys waiting fr moreβ ββ
Kfar ur stories r sooooo goooooddddd !!!! Am waitin mor …. feels like readin a novel …….
Thena ur epis r like amaziinnn !!!! Can imagine each n evry wrd u write …… feel like d serial is stillll goin on ….
Hey abbz great words yaar….
Thankbu soooooooo much buddy
“We don’t want to lose anyone, but we have to lose everyone….” – Humayun Ahmed.
“Women can love you with so much emotion, that the men can’t even understand that….” – Humayun Ahmed.
“We love life, not because we are used to living, but because we are used to loving…” – Friedrich Nietzsche.
“Love is life. And if you miss love, you miss life….” – Leo Buscaglia.
“Love isn’t something that you find, love is something that finds you….” – Loretta Young.
Wow samiha u r writting so good words. I am so surprised that u write so good english inspite of being so much young. Because i dont think that i could write so good english when i was as old as u. God bless u.
Hi friends iam new here iam following thena and others work u guy are simply rocking
Hi friends iam new here iam following thena’s, anu’s and others work u guys are great… Simply rocking guys =D> =D> and sply thena u r fabulous no words to appreciate ur work keep rocking =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>
Frens, a very good morning to all….
i am here again to ask u to pressurize the SP & swastik productions as well..
WE ARE HAVING MANY WRITERS HERE WITH IMAGINATIVE STORIES like theena, kfar, anaya, natasha, riya and many more(sry if i missed any 1).
One more request from my side is “”PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORIES ON OUR FB PAGE TOO, as it wil be a proof to show how much love we have for the MMZ and eagerness to watch season2″”. Many people have been seeing our posts there and are almost sharing the posts to differents grps and pages..
For example : Yesterday i posted 1st episode of my imaginative story of dym2, we had much response.. that episode was nothing when compared with kfar’s story and thena’s abstract and renu’s thesis.. i hope you understand, if we cant pressurize them,then we cant get it back.. ITS OUR LAST CHANCE.. within days our posts can reach main heads of two SPs… so think about it once… we will be waiting for u there on fb page…
http://www.facebook.com/DYMTELLYfriends.999
mail them at
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I am posting my story.
Episode 3:
The episode starts with shreya and tiya talking in the magazine office. Tiya says mam do u still remember that radhika? Shreya says yes. She says i also remember how we moved her from our way.(fb shows that shreya saying to tiya over telephone i think u know what u have to do. Tiya says yes mam. It shows that a girl whose face is similar to ananya comes on the top of a hil and asks tiya why u have called me here? Tiya says welcome radhika and todays ur last day of life. Tiya pushes radhika from the top of the hill. Tiya calls shreya and says ur work is done mam. Shreya says good job). Now at present shreya says radhika was profitable for me as model of my magazine but only because of her my daughter riya was not able to work as a model so i had to kill radhika. And now look riya is number one model.
In radhikas house mala says to dilip do u remember how we got radhikas deadbody? Dilip says yes(fb shows that an inspector saying to mala to identify the deadbody.mala says how i can identify? Its face is fully destroyed. The inspector says we are confirmed that its radhikas body as all the birth marks are matching. Mala cries and dilip consoles her). Now at present dilip says i have to go to mumbai for some work. Will u accompany me? Mala says yes.
Its night. In anus house her parents are talking sitting in the garden. Mohit says our life filled with colours when ananya came to our life. He says to madhvi do u remember that day? She says how can i forget that day? (fb shows that mohit and madhvi are going somewhere by car. When they were passing near a hill madhvi sees a girl lying on the road. She asks to stop the car. They go near the girl and anu is shown who look alike radhika.Madhvi and mohit takes her to the hospital. After regaining consiousness the doctor says that she has lost her memory. Madhvi takes mohit outside the cabin and says we have no child. We can take this girl to our home and adopt her. Mohit says but… Madhvi says no but pls. Mohit says okey.)
Nikita is standing on the road. She says to herself what to do? She calls every internee and askes to meet her immediately in the hotel road. Everyone comes and asks niki what happened? Rahul says have u gone mad that u called us in so late night? Kirti says stop fighting and asks niki to tell what happend? Niki says do u remember that dr arjun told us to give him patients report? Neil says yes i remember but so what? Did u reported that dr arjun is a mental patient ? niki says stop joking. She says by mistake i gave him the love letter which was given to me by my ex bf. Sam says what? Neil now suppose ur job is gone. Anu says if dr arjun finds about the letter then he will kick u out of the hospital.Niki says i know we just met today for the first time but we are friends right? Sam yes and asks now what can we do for u? Niki says this is the patients report and i have a plan for which i need ur help. Niki asks will u all help me? She asks for promise and everyone gives her promise by giving hand.
Precape: everyone is wearing monkey cap. Niki says guys we have to be very careful.
@Natasha: Nice episode, but will you be able to complete the story in just 10 episodes?
And I didn’t write those, those are some famous quotes. I just translated them….. And thanks for the compliment…..
Am loving this story.
Guys can u tell me the date when this page will be closed? I am writing my story without dragging as far as possible. Hope u r liking it.
Dear telly updates.com pls dont close this site. Other serials at least run for 1year but mmz ended so soon. Pls dont close this site or open a fan page where we will be able to comment just like here.
@anu what to do? when i type the address of our facebook on google then its come but nothing is showed . But when i go to the fb from ur comment i can see everything. Pls give a solution to this problem because after closing this site i will not able to enter to our fb on basis of ur comments.
u can bookmark it on ur browser and it ‘ll be easy for u to check it often without trouble..
@farah -I read ur story on kyy page please continue it here It was an interesting start by the way????????
Heyy thanks a lot bud dat u read the story and haha i tried der but dey kicked me out and yep I wil try yaar π
Also Natasha theena anu anaya riya samiha u guys write so wellllll I don’t miss a bit of it.u guys have rocked it???????????
Natasha ur doc story is superrr …. so much mystery already …… waiting 4 futther epis
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I fell in love with my wayβs stones, I have my heart to my problem.
Aapne raste ki pathar ke sath pyaar hogey…….
Most heart touching dialog of Arjun………..
hey did any1 watch the grand wrapup of DYM .. it seems there was a grand party before they wrapped up the show
Episode 4:
The screen shows ‘tour begins today’
Students are boarding the 2 buses. The bus is about to leave. Some students have not yet arrived. They waited for another 15 minutes. Then with permission from vikrant sir they left. As soon as the bus left from gate and was about to be out of sight, our 3 so came running. They yelled rokkooooooo… Driver didn’t seem to hear them. Neither did any of the students or teachers. The bus was out of sight. Sana : ” great! Now what? Let’s go back home”. Pancho : ” oh no. You know na.. My parents left for hometown as I was going for the study tour”
Reeva : ha yaar. Also I had boasted so much about the sceneries we will get to see to my cousins. Now they will all bully me. No. I can’t go back”
Sana: then what will we do now?
Just then our 3 MA enter the college ground. Jagat : ” mene kaha tha na. Wo ankur or uske chamche kuch to karenge Hume na le Jane ko”.
Parth:”chill mar yaar. Hum jayenge. Unke sath hi trip enjoy karenge”
Ansh :” par kese? ”
Parth jeep ki taraf dekhta he.
Ansh:” no way…. Jeep me. Siliguri tk?”
Parth: ” nahi yaar. Mene Anank ko phone kiya tha. Trip ki planning ke hisaab se aaj raat wo NH se 2 km door ke rajdhani hotel me stay karenge. Mene google map me details dhond lie he. We will catch them there. Ok?”
All 3 joined there right hands together.
They are about to start the jeep.
Far away from them our 3 sp r standing.
Panchi :” yaar. Dekho. lagta he wp bhi late ho bye”
Sana :” oh. Wo log to time pe aa jaye to surprise hona chahye”
Reeva :” ya right”
Panchi :” chalo unse puchte he ki wo ab kya krne wale he”
Sana ” rhne do yaar. Wo jo kare hame kya he”
Panchi : tum nhi samajhogi yaar. Me ghr wapis nhi ja skti or Reeva bhi”
Sana looks at Reeva. Reeva gestures with a nod.
Sana sighs.ok
They head towards the 3 MA.
Panchi :” hai”
Jagat : ” hey”
Panchi :” tum log trip pe Jane ke liye aye the na?”
Jagat : “ha. Par bus miss ho gyi”
Panchi :” hm bhi late ho gaye. Ab kya karoge?”
Jagat : hm log soch rhe the ki jeep me unhe follow krke raat tk catch up kr le.
Panchi: oh .ok…..
Jagat: haa
Jagat looks at panchi n sees her fingers playing with her culry hair n was feeling reluctant though it felt she wanted to say smthng.
Jagat: would u like to join us?
Panchi’s eyes gleam. She looks over her shoulder to her friends. Reeva is happy. Sana just stood still.
The scene focuses Sana & Parth remembering their lab encounter. Both looked annoyed at the sight of the other.
Panchi : ” yes. Thank you”
Ansh jumped with his right fist clutched saying “yes” as if he won a game. Everyone turned towards him with a ? on their face. Ansh ” sorry” and he looks with a cute smile on his face. Or uski ankhe sirf Reeva pe thi, jo blush kr rhi thi.
Flash back:
Reeva ovr her phone ” him shayd late ho jayenge. Panchi ab tk nhi ayi’
Ansh :” oh.ok.”
And after 10 minutes, he texts Jagat and Parth that his jeep is in workshop and will come within 15 minutes.
The screen again shifts to the 3ma and 3sp planning to go together scene. Sana looks is disapproval towards Panchi. Panchi aawaz k bina Sana ko hoton se ‘please’ khti he. Sana surrenders to her plea. Ansh is on drivers seat. Sana,jagat, panchi n reeva peeche bethne jate he. Parth sits on the adjacent seat. Ansh :” Parth yaar, tujhe piche bethna acha lagta he na.” Parth looks with an ‘ achha bachuu. Larkiyo ko dekha to hm out’ look. Ansh smiles sheepishly.
Parth gets down. Jagat says I also enjoy sitting at the back. Reeva or Sana if any of prefer to sit in the front seat……. Before Sana gets up, Reeva jumps out. I will sit. Reeva and Ansh on the front seat, Sana n Panchi on one side and Parth n Jagat on the other. Jeep starts. And on screen, it displays ‘ the journey begins…..’ BG music. Pause.
Precap: jeep takes a sudden brake and Sana clutches Parth’s hand with eyes shut
Hah, Nice episode. So you are fixing
(Parth-Sana
Jagat-Panchi
Ansh-Reeva)
hmm, seems interesting….
Anaya can u type the cnvrsatns in eng????????I can’t understand Hindi???
I dnd mean tat smiley.i meant:?
Ok aastha. I will try to
I am editing the Hindi convos to English. Hope it works fine.
Jagat:” I told you,that ankur and his gang will do something so as to keep us from going over the trip.
Parth:” chill yaar. We will go and enjoy the trip with them for sure.”
Ansh: “but how?”
Parth looks over towards the jeep.
Ansh:” no way…..on jeep? Till siliguri?”
Parth: no yr. I called anank. As per the planning they will stay overnight in rajdhani hotel 2 km away from NH. I have collected the details. We will catch up by then.
Panchi: look. It seems they also got late.
Sana: we shud b surprised only if they r right on time.
Reeva: ya right.
Panchi : let’s go and ask them wat they r gonna do now
Sana: let it be yaar. It doesn’t matter.
Panchi: u won’t understand yaar. I can’t go back home. Nor can Reeva.
Panchi: u too came to go for the trip. Right?
Jagat: ya. But we missed the bus.
Panchi: we also got late. Wat r u gonna do now?
Jagat: we were thinking to go chase them by tonight.
Ansh was looking at Reeva alone n she was blushing.
Flash back:
Reeva over her phone: we might be late. Panchi has not yet arrived.
Ansh: oh.ok
Ansh: parth, you prefer to sit in back seat.right ?
Parth gave a ‘ great. As soon as u saw girls, am out’ look.
I hope this is ok because I didn’t have my computer at hand today and couldn’t just copy and edit. Sorry aastha for any inconvenience.
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii All My Very Very Dear Friends
Its really sad , some of our friends(IREENA , ARU) r leaving…..
some ll leave in coming days
nothing lasts for always
so I m dedicating MY THIS POEM TO ALL OF US
Once we were toooooooo close
Our friendship was bud of rose
Like the each n every petals of flower
We were near to each other, not far
With the running time, bud grew
It was soft n sweet , in my view
Bloomed… as a magnificent flower
Which attracted all with its power
It faced the burning sun of summer
as well as, the chilly wind of winter
But, how long ? it could tolerate
It had to accept, its coming fate
Magnificent flower, completed its time
Our friendship ended its lovely rhyme
Blowing wind separated the petals of flower
Passing time took us away and very far
ALL MY DEAR NOT FINISHED YET
After few days, there, grew a weed
Where, flower left its each n every seed
Oh.. Lord…. It is the same old flower
To attract all, again, with its magical power
SO ALL OF YOU WHEREVER YOU GO, OUR FRIENDSHIP SEED(LOVE N MEMORIES) LL BE ALWAYS THERE IN YOUR HEART
superb savera.ur lines are just awesome
thank u 4 liking it Paru
Oh WOW!!! It’s just so nice……. Keep it up dear…
My dear Samiha
first of all WOW 2 u my dear
for d great lines.
thank u dear liked it
Hey bohat senti hogayi yaar love u!!!
Lov u 2 Mandy,
tru , I bcame bit emotional.
See, we dont know anything (face, name,age ,etc.) about anyone,
we r only related by our expression of words. Its d greatest n purest relation as I think.
Superb!!!!!!!!!!keep in up?????
THANKS U LIKED IT
Superb
thanks Natasha
Savera wow I’m bowled over.Amazing amazing awesome. I like poetry n love to write poetry but nothing is compared to what u wrote. I hope someday we meet in some cafe and chat over coffee about poetry n sorts hahaha. I like it. I love it. I heart it π
Thanks 4 praising d poem
I cant believe… u r saying it awesome
it rly means alot dear
ya someday,,,,,, we ll….
Hey savera!!! Just awspme yaar… Ye hui na speechless karaane wali kavita. Nailed it Buddy.
Thank you so much Anaya…….for d awesome comments
hii friends,
natasha, thena,kfar like your mnm episode guys! !!! fabulous imaginary scene would be created by you masterpiece peoples …
@thena- hospital scene omg arjun’s teary eyes – its make me emotional then sindoor scene wow like it…continue it.!!
@natasha- awesome story dear… madhavi and mohit nice people. they want to adopt memory lost victim … hate riya tiya. Now waiting for next episode . keep going on dear it is interesting! !!! π
@anu, rocking mnm episode wow nesam scene–romantically like it . for precap waterfalls scene I guessing one waterfalls name which is come in my mind Thalaiyar Waterfall don’t know it is ryt or wrong… Now waiting for ardhika’s moments !!!! eagerly waiting for next episode. π
@anaya- wow wow wow wow anaya I doesn’t have a word to express my feeling … omg 3 ma and 3 sp are together in one jeep omg… really its makes me very exciting vardhmaan college students going tour at hill for study purpose. precap is also fab..sana parth scene luv it …. can’t wait for next …tnx anaya for giving such a fantastic college youth story as I want
π π
thnx u all guys for continuing marvelous story n our romantic mnm pair ardhika, nesam love you guys ” have a nyc day ” β‘β‘β₯
A big hiiiii to all my MMZ friends,
first of all very sorry to all of you , 4 bng so late to gv my comment.
Oh THENA u rly took my heart dear,
what a splendid epis(127 &128), finally Radhika said d 3 magical words 2 Arjun.
My dear with which words, do I praise? luv u 4 dis dearie.
Ur writing is like fresh, peaceful & soothing love music, which I m loving it like anything.
Continue it my dear, in ur very own way.
Ur this friend is always waiting 4 it.
Hey savera hw r u ?? Missed u yaar
Mandy Hiiiii
I missed u tooo dear
Hiii Anaya
Ur epi(3&4) r nice, I think in d coming epi full masti n dhamaal ll b there.
missing my excursion.. keep writing. I m rly rly enjoying it.
waitng 4 d nxt epi.
Hiii ANU
VERY NICE , I liked it very much.
they r Nandini parents or Arjun real parents? ,
I think nw ll cum sm twist ..
Hey Natasha
i wz thinking d same dat Anu is Radhika.
story sounds very interesting n emotional.
I m liking it, good job Natasha
So, what ll b d Title? hv u thought anythng…
Savera wht a splendid poem dear!! tears r rolling dwn frm ma eyes…overwhelmed… really this the beautiful flower of friendship…..we r the petals of ths flower….didn’t wannna loose any petal…
Thanks Dipika
for liking n feeling my poem
Hey Kfar my budding novelist
first of all thanks 4 these nice words. it really means a lot to me.
you r an amazing writer n Ur novel story is awesome.
I m rly waiting 4 ur book.
Coming from the heart dear i love ur imagination and luv the lines alot might I add….n yeah me too hope ke chance miljaye n publish hojaye soon π
The episode starts with Neil and Sam having an eye lock and both hug tightly in water, but neil is still little bit annoyed. While our love buddies bit hesitant to get close in water, acts normal and enjoys swimming.. The duo couples after much enjoyment in water come out and walk for a while in the forest in opposite directions. Sam while walking in forest feels impossible to walk with high heels and hopping on one foot,she struggles to remove her high heel without tripping over. Neil finds sam not behind him & turns back & runs to her & offers his shoulder for support. Later he moves forward still being annoyed. Arjun and radhika find a small hut laid on woodenΒ pillars. They go inside but couldn’t find anyone there, as it looked as some tourists made it on their own.
San follows neil and says thanks for the help idiot, but I would now like to get into your arms, forwarding her hands up to him and winks. He smiles and he wraps an arm around her back to lift her & he lifts and takes a breath while his face is buried in her hair. Sam wraps her hands around his neck and both have an eye lock. Its an awesome Eye lock which we have never seen it before(between them) having a meaning of apologies, care, love, affection and warmth.
Radhika peeps out through the small vent while rubbing her hair with towel and listens to BIRDSONG ( song made by sounds of birds). But it was bit dominated by the roaring sound of waterfalls. Arjun can’t divert his eyes from her and moves forward to come close to her making a chuckle. A low chuckle behind her causes her heart to jump into her throat. She turns around to find out , it is none other than her love, Arjun. He holds her so tight that the water drops fall down from their wet clothes even after a long time since they came out of lake. Radhika feels uncomfortable as someone can see them and tries to get out of his arms. Arjun notices this and goes out angrily..
Neil makes Sam sit on a knee wall, both hug each other and he kisses her on her forehead,followed by eyes, cheeks,nose.. When he was about to kiss her ears, she tickles. He smiles seeing her and hugs her followed by kissing on her neck. Arjun comes near the lake and calls out NS & radhika as they have to go back to their homes. All the duo couples were about to leave and joins at the place where they parked the car.
PRECAP : SAM along with ARJUN goes missing from the place and neil & radhika were left alone..
(THOSEGHAR WATERFALLS near THOSEGHAR VILLAGE in satara)
I like thewhole outdoorsy romance…keep going dear. Luv nesam and ardhika here they r so cooler in ur story π
Ohhh! It’s real nice…. Hope Arjun’s annoyance goes away soon. Today you just showed(I mean wrote) only ’bout ArDhika and NeSam… Missed the office… Anyways, thanks for updating even on sunday(unlike SP).. Ha ha… Carry on…
As always….wonderful.loved it
wonderful epi Anu
what a writer you are…
rly mind blowing
“Perfectness is not attainable. But if we chase perfectness, we can reach exellence…” – Vince Lombardi.
”Nothing is impossible, the word itself says i’m possible!” – Audrey Hepburn.
Thena Anu anaya Natash- Awesome guys i really loveeee reading ur epis hope one day urs will be selected as series on t…keep up the good workguys:D
renu- i loveeeee ur reviews. Amaxing and outstanding no words π
thanks a lot to Thena renu, raashi, Jayaru, Tanya, anu , Samiha, aastha, Mandy, ireena, ure, clara, riya, mitty happy, abi, ishika, and if im missing anyone do sorry yaar and thanks a lot dears for liking and encouraging my stories π
”An unexamined life is not worth living…” – Socrates.
”Believe that life is worth living and your belief will create help the fact…” – William James.
“Strive not to be of success, rather strive to be of value…” – Albert Einstein.
mind blowing dear