love u till my last my last breathe (episode 1) by mehak

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Hy everyone!i m mehak .i m new here.how r u?hope u all r fine.My ff starts after mahi, kamini and ranveer revelation.And anika not get shot by kamini..so,here’s my first episode.Hope u like it.

Morning time in shivika room.shivaay is working on his laptop and anika is still sleeping(u know our anika is kumbhkaran).suddenly she wake up.
anika-shivaay good morning.
shivaay-Good morning anika.can i ask u one question?
anika-yes ask.
shivaay-jab farji(fraud) shivay yah tha toh tum tumne use hug tho nhi kiya matlab muje samajhkar.

anika-(in mind)so shivaay is feeling jealous.
shivaay-kya hua anika.(what happened anika).
anika-(in naughty mood) ha maine farji shivaay ko 1-2 baar hug toh kiya lekin shivay samajhkar.waise mujhe jalne ki smell aa rhi h.(she smiles)
shivaay-shut up aaisa kuch nahi h.

kanika-(laughing) main maazak kar rhi thi shivaay.(she tells him the incident after priyanka engagement incident)waise main use hug kar sakti thi shivaay samajhkar.kyunki aap mere pati h
shivaay-(happy)then its ok.(he start walking towards anika and pulls her closer) toh tumhara pati tumhare saath kuch bhi kar sakta h.

anika starts blushing.shivaay is about to kiss her but anika pulls him away and she runs away from room and looks back at shivaay and they both smile.

precap-oberoi moment and new main character entry.

bye everyone.hope u all like my first episode.if u all like my first episode plz comment.
BE HAPPY BE SMILE

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36 Comments
  1. Sairan

    Great episode
    Continueโ€‹ soon

    1. Mehakchalag

      thanx sairan.keep reading

  2. Vaishalijha

    Nice start dear, Post soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u vaishalijha.i will post soon.

  3. Surbhi Sharma

    Nice

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u surbhi.keep reading.

  4. Dhar

    Great start …. Post the next update ASAP

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u dhar.i will post soon.keep reading.

  5. Ahaana

    cute..

    1. Mehakchalag

      thanx ahaana.keep reading.

  6. Nice epi

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u lilly.keep reading

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u alekhika.keep reading.

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u bhavana.keep reading.

  7. pls write in english

    1. Mehakchalag

      thanks renu for reading and i will write next episode in english..

  8. Nice start

    1. Mehakchalag

      thanks vanshika.keep reading.

  9. fantastic

    1. Mehakchalag

      thanks shainaya.keep reading.

  10. loved it

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u setu.keep reading.

  11. Awesome

    1. Mehakchalag

      thanx naira. keep reading.

  12. Nice one..

    1. Mehakchalag

      thanx nikitajai.keep reading.

  13. Ruksy

    Continue seems great

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u ruksy.keep reading.

  14. It’s was awesome episode and nice starting. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    I’m waiting for your next episode. update soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Mehakchalag

      thank u ahsana.keep reading.i will update next episode soon.

  15. Very nice

    1. Mehakchalag

      thanx Fffan1234.keep reading.

  16. Mehakchalag

    thanx shuklarashi.keep reading.

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