“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 24)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 24

Sarna Mansion
All the elders were sitting and talking when suddenly the door bell rang. Usha said, “I’ll open. It must be Twinkle and Kunj.” She went and opened the door and hugged Twinkle. Kunj looked at them and said, “Lag toh aisa raha hai jaise beti ghar lauti ho, beta nahi.” (It looks as if your daughter has returned home and not son.) Usha smiled at Twinkle and said, “Ofcourse. Beti hi toh ye meri.” (She’s my daughter only.) Kunj frowned while Usha laughed and hugged him. They went inside and greeted everyone. “Call everybody, we’ll show what all we bought”, said Twinkle. “No, first you both go freshen up then. I’ll make coffee for both of you till then”, said Usha. Twinkle and Kunj went to their room.

Twinj room
Twinkle and Kunj entered in the room and found it nicely arranged. “Thank God! This time the room isn’t a mess”, said Twinkle. “I wished it was messed up”, said Kunj. Twinkle looked at him and gave a “you’re hopeless” look. Twinkle took her dress and went to freshen up. After about 20 minutes, Twinkle came out in a blue salwaar. Kunj enacted to cry and said, “Back to those boring 1990’s days.” Twinkle giggled and said, “Go and change.” Kunj took his clothes and went to freshen up. After around 10 minutes, Kunj came out and saw Twinkle struggling to tie the dori of her salwaar. He went to her and tied it. He kissed her bare back letting shivers down Twinkle’s body and said, “I told you western wears are much more comfortable. In one week itself you forgot how to tie this dori.” Twinkle turned around and said, “Rubbish. Let’s go now.” Twinkle was about to go away when Kunj held his hand and came in front of her. “What happened now?”, asked Twinkle. Kunj took out a silver bracelet from his pocket. The bracelet had hearts hanging with their names written on them, each letter on one heart and in between two hearts had their pictures they had clicked one in Delhi and the other one in Agra. He tied it on Twinkle’s wrist and smiled at her. Twinkle looked at the bracelet and hugged Kunj tightly. She said, “Thank you. I’ll be always wearing this.” “Okay, let’s go now”, said Kunj pulling back. “. “Yes, everyone will be waiting”, said Twinkle and they went down.

Twinkle was unpacking their luggage when Kritika came. She hugged Twinkle tightly and said, “I missed you so much di.” Twinkle pulled back and said, “I missed you too sweetheart.” Kritika searched a place to sit and found only one place empty next to Rahul. Rahul placed his hand on the place and asked her to come and sit there (through his eyes). Kritika sat on the arm rest next to Twinkle. “Why are you sitting here? Go, sit over there next to Rahul”, said Twinkle. “No di, I’m fine here only. Anyways, I want to stay with you”, replied Kritika. Twinkle smiled and took out everyone’s gifts except Yuvraj and Mahi’s gift. All of them liked the gifts. “Nothing for us?”, asked Yuvraj. “No jiju. This is your punishment”, replied Twinkle and turned her face faking anger. “Okay, we elders are going to the market. The food is prepared. Just in case you all want to talk, you can or rest as you both must be having jet lag” said Bebe. Twinkle and Kunj nodded their heads while the elders left for the market. Twinkle, Kunj, Yuvraj and Mahi went to Twinkle and Kunj’s room. Kritika got up and was about to go when Rahul came and stood in front of her. “Can you please tell me what’s wrong? Why are you ignoring me? Have I done something wrong?”, asked Rahul. Kritika ignored him and started fidgeting with the perfume Kunj and Twinkle gifted. Rahul held her by her shoulders and said, “Stop it Kritika! Answer my questions.” Kritika pushed him away and said, “I’m not answerable to you.” Kritika walked away and was about to climb the stairs when suddenly she stopped and turned around. “Rahul”, she exclaimed. Rahul was delighted and quickly turned around. Kritika in a stern voice said, “Tomorrow is the fest in my college. So, please be ready by 8.” “Doesn’t it start at 10?”, asked Rahul. “Yes, but I can’t wait for anyone except my best friend”, replied Kritika. “Yes, I know you’ll wait for me”, said Rahul. “I told my best friend, not you”, replied Kritika and went to her room. Rahul said to himself, “Best friend? Who’s this best friend? If I’m not, then who’s this person? But, what is it that’s disturbing Kritika so much? I need to find out. But, whatever it is why is she ignoring me?”

Kritika’s room
Kritika sat down on her bed and hugged a pillow. She said, “I’m sorry Rahul. I know I’ve been hurting you a lot. But, you’re trying to recreate the bond we once had and I can’t let that happen. It’s better if we stay away from each other. I want you to hate me and believe me it’s going to be beneficial for both of us.” She got up and closed the door. She came back to the bed and started crying hardly laying down on the bed hugging the pillow.

Twinj room
Twinkle, Kunj, Yuvraj and Mahi were sitting and talking when Twinkle gave them their gift. “You told you didn’t bring anything?”, said Mahi. “Actually we aren’t shameless like jiju so, that’s why couldn’t gift it in the hall”, replied Twinkle glaring at Yuvraj. “Twinkle, Yuvraj did for your good only. You both are husband – wife only no, then?”, said Mahi defending Yuvraj. “Whatever. By the way Kunj, we bought the perfect gift for them. Look at di, the way she’s defending jiju”, said Twinkle. Yuvraj smiled while Mahi tried opening the gift. She took it out and was amazed to see it. “Di, true no?”, asked Twinkle teasingly. (The gift was a photo frame for Mahi and Yuvraj which had two photo holders on the sides with a heart shape in between which said “Truly, Madly, Deeply in love”.) Mahi started blushing while Yuvraj smiled looking at her. They continued talking for about an hour when everyone returned from the market and called them down for dinner. All of them went down.

Dining Hall
Everyone settled down while Kritika came down. Twinkle and Kunj were sitting next to each other and opposite to them Yuvraj and Mahi. Kritika came down and saw all the places filled except for the one next to Rahul. This delighted Rahul and he pulled out the chair for her. She picked up a plate and served herself. She said, “Ma, I’m not feeling well. I’ve a headache. I’ll have my dinner in the room itself.” Leela said, “What happened puttar? Shall I give you a head massage?” “Aunty, I’ll go. Anyways, I’m very good at giving massages”, said Rahul interrupting. “Maa, I’m absolutely fine. I just need some sleep so, please don’t worry”, said Kritika and went back to her room. Rahul got up and being disappointed said, “I’m not hungry. You all continue.” He walked away to his room while everyone found him a bit wierd but, they ignored it. They started having their dinner and Bebe said, “We met Mrs. Malhotra in the market today. Her granddaughter is so cute and sweet.” “Ya Bebe, pata nahi hamein ye khush khabri kab milegi! Kab hamare ghar bhi ek chota sa sadasya aayega”, (Ya Bebe, don’t know when we’ll get this good news! When a small member will be added in our family too) said Usha. Suddenly, Mahi and Yuvraj who were drinking water spilled it out and started coughing. Twinkle smiled and said, “Jiju, honey..” “Bebe, Maa, what are you saying?”, asked Yuvraj interrupting Twinkle and gave her a death glare. “What? It has been a long time now”, replied Bebe casually. Mahi started blushing and quickly got up and went to the kitchen leaving behind Yuvraj smiling. Everyone laughed at her behaviour and continued eating.
Hey all! Thank you so much for such lovely comments and the immense support and love you all are giving me. Also, thanx to all my silent readers.

Sayeeda and Shreya, it’s a pleasure to know that my ff is one of your favourite ones. Hope I can continue to entertain you all further. Shatakshi, not only my ff but, your ff is also one their favourites. To be frank, it’s even one of my favourites.

RiaA, such a long time. You know when I didn’t see your comment for two days I just hoped that you were alright. I’m glad you’re back and please take care of yourself. Also, twinj marriage consummation is going to take some time. Sorry for disappointing you.

Are you all liking this ignorance track? I know it’s a bit rude but, I hope you all like it. Also, sorry for having no romantic scenes today. Tomorrow I’ll put in romance and after that a bit more concentration will be on Rahul and Kritika. You people seem to be quite excited with the ongoing track and I’m glad about it as you people are able to understand the emotions. Many of you asked me what has happened between Rahul and Kritika. I’ll try to reveal the past quickly and bring an end to your eagerness. So, please stay tuned.

Tomorrow will be the completion of 25 chapters of my ff so, I was planning to post something different but, let me know if you all want me to or not.

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:


I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow so, please stay tuned. I hope you all like it. Also, it might be a bit long so, please don’t be fed up.

Lastly, please don’t forget to throw your comments below whether it’s positive or negative.

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  1. its cool i would lyk u to post more sweetheart

  2. i want to sadda haq tooo its really sweet of u to ryt lyk this story u r really sweet can i chat wid u now plz

    1. Ria

      Hey Nimmi! Thank you so much. I would love to chat with you. But, dear I’m sorry I can’t write a fan fic on Sadda Haq as tashan e ishq is the only show I watch.

  3. Lama

    Awesome track….loved it

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Lama!?

  4. Purnima.agrawal30

    It was awesome….yuhi & twinj scene toh amazing….

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Purnima! Glad you liked it.?

  5. Angita

    Amazing track now I get why kritika doesn’t want to be close with rahul.crazy madly deeply in love i

  6. Angita

    Amazing track now I get why kritika doesn’t want to be close with rahul.crazy madly deeply in love liked it.ipyuo we like your ignorance track

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Angita! I’m really glad that you’re liking the ongoing track.

  7. Kruti

    Awesome epi

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Kruti! I’m glad you liked it.?

  8. Shatakshi

    Of course Ria
    We want u to post something interesting…correction…u always give us ur best episodes
    N I will be eagerly waiting for the next episode…
    N today’s episode was Amazing
    Loved it to the core❤❤
    Noe u can understand how much I like ur ff❤❤

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Shatakshi! I’m glad you liked it. I’ll surely post something new, do tell me whether you liked it or not. I love you!

  9. Fan

    Super epi ria..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Fan!?

  10. Ria, sweetie, I’m not disappointed about u waiting a while to let them consummate their marriage..infact, I understand. I don’t mind u posting something different as I know either way you’re going to show me & others how beautifully u write. And also, u know I don’t mind long epi. The longer it is for me the better. Today’s epi was fab. I felt the pain of both kritika & rahul. It was outstanding. Love u loads.

    1. Ria

      Hey RiaA, thank you so much for understanding. I’ll surely post something new do go through it and I hope you’ll like it. I’m glad you can understand the emotions through my writing. Love you to the moon and back dear.

  11. Nyc part

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Cutie pie!?

  12. Sayeeda

    Yes dear ..plz post something different…I will be waiting for it ..
    Loved today’s episode a lot nd the twinj nd Yuhi scenes were superb nd I’m loving ignorance track a lot …
    Sorry for the short comment what to do I’m very busy but still managed time to read ff’s

    1. Ria

      Hey Sayeeda, please don’t say sorry. I know it’s a busy month for you all.
      Anyways, thank you for the support as well as the appreciation. I’ll surely post something new and it’s already posted now. Do have a look at it and let me know how it was. Also, I’m glad you liked the scenes.

  13. SidMin

    Loved the episode Ria

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Sidmin! Glad you liked it.?

  14. Apoorwa

    always try something new, i would love that for sure
    epi was wonderful

    1. Ria

      Hey Apoorwa, thank you for the support. I’ll try something new but, please forgive me if you don’t like it.
      Thank you so much for the comment. I’m glad you liked it.

  15. Shamz

    Hey Ria
    Amazing episode as alwez….. And I wid love to see KriRah’s past……and don’t worry dear if there is no romance becoz inspire of no romance the episode was awsm

    1. Ria

      Hey Shamz,
      Thank you so much dear. I’m glad you liked this chapter. I’ll show the past soon. Just a bit more days.

  16. Ya ya post sumthng new n amazing….
    Lagna chaiye na hatke ….????
    Ok comming to d epi it ws fab…..
    Do cont soon…..?????
    N congratulations too in advance?????????

    1. Ria

      Hey Zikra! Sure, I’ll post something new. And, it’s already posted. Do have a look at it. Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked the chapter. Also, thanx for your wishes. Will be continuing soon.?


    aap ke jaisa koi nahi likh sakta

    1. Ria

      Aww Ayesha! Thank you so much for that compliment dear. Love you loads.

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    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Rashi! Glad you liked it.?

  19. Dreamer...arundhati

    Ria it was fantastic

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Arundhati!?

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Baby!?

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