Love On Road.. The Unique FF Epi:-18 (Bye Bye Dhaani)

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Refresh ur mind.. By my ff this time!!? If u forgot the last epi… Thn here it goes………

Episode 17

Okay ? soo refreshed the memories of my last epi … Thn read my new epi… It’s a new epi for me.. But the last epi for Dhaani in Goa… Soo al ready for that day…

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The shining sun ? made the moon ? hide and stars ? invisible… The waves battling each other to reach the shore and cover the feet ? waiting for it’s arrival..

Yes! A new day was there in front of my eyes ? Another day with opportunities.. Challenges… And beautiful memories…

I scratched my eyes ? and removed the blanket and stretched my arms… I saw no one near to me.. Last night ? I slept with shalu didi and Bhabhi.. But no1 was there.. I looked them in the room.. They were not there… I moved out of the room.. And moved inside the other room.. Where I saw Bhabhi making Viplav bhaia woke up…

Dhaani::(Shaking Viplav) Mera jaanu wake up na!! Look a new day… Is here.. Subah hua baba!! Wake up.. It’s 9:30 wake up!!

Viplav:: Yesterday I slept ? lately.. I want to sleep ?

Dhaani::(Kissed ? on forehead) Baba wake up na.. All r waiting for you down!! We have to leave…

Viplav::(In a sleepy ? voice)No.. No.. Leave.. We will sleep ? here… (Pulling Bhabhi close to him and hugging her)We will sleep ? like this…

Dhaani::(Hugging him)Yeah.. We will sleep ? like this.. First you wake up…

Viplav:: (Scratching eyes ? and stretching the hands)(Still on bed ?) Goood.. Morning!!

Dhaani:: Good morning…. Acha suna! To day you all will leave.. So wat abt me.. How will I go.. Back to home ?

Viplav:: Today we are leaving… OH.. DAMN!! That means tomorrow onwards I can’t see ur face… Noo This can’t happen!! And wait ✋ where will you go… You can’t go to home ? na!!

Dhaani:: Eh.. Papa… Ne bola ki..

Viplav:: Papa???

Dhaani:: Mathlab shambu kaka!!

Viplav:: Nahi go.. On with papa and smile ☺

Dhaani::(Smiles ?) Papa said that he have called chachu and chachu asked him to send me their.. And also chachu called ? me today morning ? asking me to make a return.. And also that he is happy ? for me..

Viplav:: Y he is happy ? fr u??

Dhaani:: Because I got a husband like you.. Family ? like this.. And all that

Viplav:: Ohh.. Yeah … Yeah!!

Dhaani:: VIPLAV!! First wake up from this sleep.. And wash ur face!! Have you listened to anything that I said now…

Viplav:: (Pulling Dhaani close to her) Ab bolo… Ab can I give you one on ur beautiful lips ?

Dhaani::(Hugging Viplav)Yeah… U ca.. Now.. I’m all yours… But Remember not on lips ? Uskeliye Let that night come.. Now you can…

I slightly closed the door ? as by now I became over shied and I left to my room.. I came back to my room brushed my teeth and came down for my chai ? I saw Viplav Bhaia and Bhabhi coming together…

Shahid:: Ye lo aagaye… The love birds…

Akshay:: Love birds.. Future partners…

Shalu:: Agni ko sakshi mankar mein vajan deti hun….

Me:: 7 rounds…

Kanak:: Ah, now instead to of teasing one another… Go and pack the bags ? we have to make a leave na…

Shalu didi.. Me.. Jiju. Didi.. Akki… Avi..(Together):: No… No…

Shambu:: Kya no… No… Uh??

Me:: I don’t want to leave… I want to stay here..

Kanak:: So we will think that we all are going to be separated..

Everyone smiles ? I winked ?

Shambu:: Viplav beta…

Viplav:: Ah,papa..

Shambu kaka:: Wat about Dhanni’s tickets ? Or how will she leave… Wat is the plan??

Viplav:: But.. Dad if she went again into that Lion’s den.. Then..

Dhaani:: Nah… Now chachu is there na.. Chachi will be controlled by chachu.. That’s a guarantee !!

Viplav:: Okay ? Then.. By wat time ? we will make a leave…

Jiju:: 6:00 ? ko… So we have to at least reach by 5:30 ? in airport ✈

Viplav:: Ohh.. Okay ? Then… Dad.. We are going by our private jet ✈ na…

Akshay:: Ah.. Y

Viplav:: That’s how u all came??

Akki:: Ah.. Y

Viplav:: That’s a 6 seater only na…

Me:: Bhaiaa… Me.. Kaka… Kaki.. Avi.. Akki.. Were only there!! U and shalu didi.. Came via car ? Jiju and didi came through air India flight ✈

Viplav:: Oh!! Then wat about return??

Jiju:: Naughtoose… Is coming with us!!

Viplav:: So.. From Ur house ? she will come back to ours uh??

Me:: Nah.. I’ve kept my bag ? al ready packed in my home ? Soo once I reach didi’s flat ? I’ll ask our driver ? to make it reach in didi’s flat ?

Dhaani:: Kya strategy hai!!

I smiled.. ?

Viplav:: Ah.. Papa wat about our car ? who will drive it back…

Akki:: Aaj.. Hamara driver ? aayega… So it’s okay ? He will make a way!!

Viplav:: Then I’ll book a business class ticket ?

Dhaani:: Thankss…

Shambu:: Okay.. Try to find a flight ✈ with it’s arrival time before 4:00

Viplav:: Yeah.. Sure!!

Viplav bhaia had His tea ? While he booked the tickets ? Dhaani bhabhi sat near Kanak kaki.. While having tea ? And they had few talks… I sat with Jiju.. didi.. Avi.. Akki… Talking and gossiping on bollywood industry!!

Viplav:: Al ready.. Aaj 4:00 ? ka flight ✈ connected flight hai…

Shambu:: Acha… Okay then you have to leave by 3:00 ? @least !!

Me:: Now itself it became 10:30.. After bath ? And after break fast… Say to be 12:00 nearly… Uske baath packing.. Then lunch ? Tabhi.. 2-3 hoga… Thn we can leave!! Perfect

Viplav bhaia became sad ? hearing ? he have only few hours he can spent with his love ❤ But kaka made bhaia’s mood cheer up by saying that..

“Within 3-4 days we will have our engagement ? ceremony conducted… And after that within 2 months weeding ? too happy.. Viplav beta… ”

Viplav bhaia cheered up ? and Dhaani bhabhi left to take a bath ? while I went to my room… Avi.. Jiji… Akki went for morning ? walk ? on sea shore by 11:00… ?

Later we all had our breakfast ? ? ? Together with many talks… Related mostly with Vidha teasing… Now it’s we siblings time to tease them.. Our PRIOR DUTY.. Later We completed our food with fun and masti.. Bhabhi went to room for packing.. Followed by Didi.. To help Bhabhi in packing!!

We also did our packing… Took our bath.. Had lunch and now! It was time for Dhaani bhabhi to bid a bye ? we all were waiting for Bhabhi in the hall… Bhabhi came with eyes filled with Water which were ready to fall any time!! Dhaani bhabhi came down and took the blessing of Kaka and kaki… And hugged all of us.. With ready to water eyes ?

Me:: Bhabhi.. Don’t cry…? Within a month thr will be engagement ? Thn jaldi hi shaandi ? Then u’ll never br separated from us..

Shalu:: Ah, Bhabhi… U can never be separated from us after ur marriage wth bhaia…

Dhaani bhabhi hugged me soo tightly and gave a passionate kiss ? on my forehead.. And spoke.. “Do you know I stayed with you guyss only for 2 nights ? But the memories we made were handful and the attachment I had with you all.. Especially with Shalu is more than I can explain in words.. Thankss for everything…

Shalu didi hugged Bhabhi and smiled ? after delivering a kiss ? on cheeks…

Jiju:: Same here… We never thought that this road trip will give Viplav his love ❤ and this family a new member…

Akshay:: And we pleasantly surprised ? that we got a bhabhi of our dreams… One who will not break our togetherness…

I::(Laughingly ?)Do you bhabhi didi ne first kya pucha tha Jiju se??

Dhaani looks blank @ Didi…

Didi:: I asked after marriage ? you should not break our youngsters group..,ie,.. I’ll always share my confidences with them… My happiness.. My sadness.. My emptions with them… And u should not ask me not to do that…

Dhaani(Interrupting):: And wat he said??

Shahid jiju:: I said that.. I won’t say anything but you have to make me also a member of this youngsters group… And I said my demand…

Viplav:: Vo demand tha.. Ki.. U should keep the family united…. And not break any hearts ♥ due to your words or actions…

Kaka:: And within few minutes.. ie… After he said a yes to Mira’s proposal… Say after 30 minutes… I saw shahid and these warriors talking … And Laughing…

Akshay:: Yeah.. We still don’t know how within few minutes we became close that before he left our house that day after engagement ? we added him to our group..

Avi:: He was damn similar to us.. The way he talk.. The way he smile.. The actions and everything..

Shalu:: And in the same manner u too took place in our hearts and look at ur watsapp now..

Dhaani unlocks her mobile ? and check the watsapp… “A new group”…. “Youngsters”.. Oh My god.. Thankss yaar.. That means u added me to also to ur group… That was lovely.. And we all gave a group hug to Bhabhi… She took blessings from kaka and kaki and entered in to her car ? and bid a bye ?

Viplav:: Kya bye ? we also coming till airport ✈
Dhaani bhabhi smiled ? we all entered in to our cars ? ?

Kaka:: U guyss go I’ve to pack bags ? Arrange the flights ✈ and all that.. So you guyss go..
And kaka and kaki bids a bye ?

? Accha chalta hoon
Duaaon mein yaad rakhna ?
DHAANI BHABHI BIDS A BYE ?
? Mere zikr ka zubaan pe swaad rakhna?

?Accha chalta hoon
Duaaon mein yaad rakhna?
KAKA AND KAKI IS SHOWN BIDING A BYE ?
? Mere zikr ka zubaan pe swaad rakhna ?

?Dil ke sandookon mein
Mere acche kaam rakhna?
CAR ? IS SHOWN FROM THE TOP…

? Chitthi taaron mein bhi
Mera tu salaam rakhna?
A POSTMAN IS SHOWN WALKING ? IN FRONT OF THE RESORT ?

?Andhera tera maine le liya
Mera ujla sitaara tere naam kiya?
VIPLAV IS SHOWN DRIVING THE CAR ?

?Channa mereya mereya
Channa mereya mereya?
(Channa mereya means light of the soul)
JIJU AND DIDI ARE SHOWN

? Channa mereya mereya Beliya
O piya… ?
VIDHA ARE SHOWN

?Channa mereya mereya
Channa mereya mereya?
DHAANI BHABHI IS SHOWN

? Channa mereya mereya Beliya
O piya… ?
DIDI IS SHOWN

?Mmm… mehfil mein teri
Hum naa rahe jo
Gham toh nahi hai
Gham toh nahi hai?
ROADS ARE SHOWN…

? Qisse humaare nazdeeqiyon ke
Kam toh nahi hai
Kam toh nahi hai?
SHALU IS SHOWN SITTING AT BACK OF THE CAR ? LOOKING AT THE SCENERIES WITH TEARY EYES ?

?Kitni dafaa, subah ko meri
Tere aangan me baithe
Maine shaam kiya?
FB::VIDHA MAKING A CHEERS ? WITH THE COFFEE ? (THIS SCENES WAS DURING DHAANI REVEALING HER PAST)

?Channa mereya mereya
Channa mereya mereya?
FB::VIDHA PRAYING TO GOD (THIS SCENE WAS WHEN VIDHA AND REST OF THE MEMBERS WENT TO TEMPLE ?)

? Channa mereya mereya Beliya
O piya… ?
FB::VIDHA ARE LOOKING AT THE ROSE PETALS FALLING ON THEM(THIS WAS AFTER VIPLAV’S PARENTS SAYING YES TO THE PROPOSAL AND COMING BACK TO THE RESORT)

?Channa mereya mereya
Channa mereya mereya?
FB::VIDHA TAKING SELFIES (LAST DAY IN RESORT)

? Channa mereya mereya Beliya
O piya… ?
VIPLAV IS SHOWN DRIVING CAR ?

?Tere rukh se apna raasta
Mod ke chalaa?
FB::VIPLAV PROTECTING DHAANI AND SHALU ( IT WAS WHEN PARTY PROBLEM CAME)

? Chandan hoon main
Apni khushboo chhod ke chala?
FB:VIDHA ARE SHOWN SLEEPING(LAST DAY IN RESORT)

?Mann ki maaya rakh ke
Tere takiye tale
Bairagi, bairagi ka sooti chaula
Odh ke chalaa?
FB::VIPLAV PROPOSING DHAANI IS SHOWN

?Channa mereya mereya
Channa mereya mereya?
FB:: ALL GIRLS ARE SHOWN TAKING ON THE SHORE OF THE BEACH(LAST EPI)

? Channa mereya mereya Beliya
O piya…?
FB::VIPLAV KISSING ? DHAANI ON FOREHEAD (AFTER PROPOSING)

?Sachi mohabbat shayad wohi hai
Jisme junoon hai
Jisme junoon hai?
FB::DHAANI SHOWN PROMISING MIRA DID THAT SHE WON’T BREAK THE YOUNGSTERS UNION

? Par do dilon ki yaari mein bhi to
Kitna sukoon hai
Kitna sukoon hai?
JIJU IS SHOWN DRIVING CAR ? WHILE DIDI IS STARING AT HIM

?Deke mujhe teri judaai
Mere Rab ne mujhe paigham diya?
VIPLAV APPLIES BREAK AS THEY REACHED THE AIRPORT ✈

? Channa mereya mereya
Channa mereya mereya beliya?
ALL ARE SHOWN STEPPING OUT OF THE CAR ?

Viplav takes the luggage from the car ? and passes to Dhaani.. Dhaani hugs everyone with teary ? eyes ?

Viplav bhaia:: You are sure na.. U won’t be harmed by anyone there again…

Shahid jiju:: If anyone did anything.. Thn make a call ? to any one of us… Don’t think ? twice before calling ?okay ?

Dhaani bhabhi nods..

Mira:: Stay in touch with us.. Okay!! And call ? us whenever you want… Don’t hesitate… We too will call ? you

Me:: Bhabhi… Love ❤ you… We will miss you…

Shalu:: We can chat on Skype.. For maximum of 5 months… Within that span u’ll be a part of our home ?..

Akki:: Bhabhi… Don’t cry ? we will never let you miss… Especially mera bhaiii VIPLAV

Avi:: bhabhi… Nah.. Ro math… Once you reach ur house msg karde.. And also there is only 2-3 hrs distance between our’s and ur’s house ? soo Keep coming and going…

Mira:: Inn do ✌ house ? ke beech ek chota sa flat bhi hai.. And smiles ?

Me:: Uss flat ? mein rahtha koi nahi.. Didi.. Kab dekho hamare ghar ? pein hogi…

Jiju:: Ah.. Kuch acha khana milna jahiye na Stomach ko bhi….. varna pura intestine kharabh hojayega…

We all laughed ?

“Bhabhi carry on.. Varna it will be late… Okay then Bye ? ” Said Avi…

We all also said bye ? while Dhaani Bhabhi entered into the Airport… Giving us a fade view of her!!
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Toh… Say how was this epi… Now only max of 2 epi are left… Soo say ur views… Now… Criticisms too are welcomed…

Enjoyed ? channa mereya song?? Remember those scenes which I described?? I hope u remember…

With the hopes this epi too was relatable… I end this epi!!

C u guyss in the comment area… ?
Luv ? u all….

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11 Comments
  1. superb episode shani….veryyy emotional episode dear…however it is a last day hey na toh tears apne aap aajayegi…
    I like the way u choose songs in every episode…And i love the chenna mereya song..a lottt…
    ur jiju ka character is very interesting and lovely…
    I am glad that u mentioned some vidha romantic scenes….
    plz come fast shani…
    byee dear…
    keep smiling and keep writing

    1. Shanitics

      thankkssss Lalitha didi…. happy that my sng selectns are been lvd by u!!! same here mine too fav sng!!
      mera jiju is as usual interestng!!! Hpe in my real life I fnd a jiju lke ths!!!
      YEAH.. u said na vidha scenes were lss.. soo here it went!!!
      yep!! wl cme fast

      lastly are there on fb????

      1. yaah yes i m there in fb…
        so here my user name..
        sri lalitha and my profile pic two dolls..

      2. Shanitics

        Ohh… Thankss didi!! Wl snd u requst soon!!?

    2. i am sorry shani…
      my profile pic isnot two dolls..
      its a small girl with pink dress

  2. Maha_Aijaz

    Swetha this was another fab episode given by you ?? loved it dear, ViDha’s sweet short romantic scene was too good! Then the siblings bond was worth reading ❤
    So finally dhaani got her family back, nice! Channa Mereya song is really nice and the part which you wrote was relatable ??
    Excited for engagement and wedding but sadly only two updates are left but that doesn’t mean you’ll fade away like you did before, stay in touch even after this fiction!
    And yes I’ve read that OS too, it was also superb and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing the link with me dear❤ wesey personally I like Shivaay he’s handsome dude, I’ve watched Nakul Mehta’s first serial pyaar ka dard hai meetha meetha pyaara pyaara, and I really loved​ his pair with his costar. Khair coming to your OS it was really an awesome work!
    Keep going dear!
    Lots of love ?

    1. Shanitics

      Thanksss Maha didi fr ur comment!!

      Yeah… It does not mean I’ll fade away… Actually my net connection is smetns ltd… Whn mama sees me connctd wth mobile ?

    2. Shanitics

      Fr a lng tme.. She will nxt tme make my nt offr ltd… And it gt finished.. And I’ve to wait fr a lng time to gt recharged… That time is the tme whn I usd to fade away… But don’t worry ? I won’t fade away… Don’t worry… Wll always b in touch wth ths page?

      Really!! U read the ff.. I’m soo happy☺ I too… Actually I too usd to watch pyaar ka dard hai… But to nt til d nd.. Thankss fr reading my os and cmntng here

  3. Sujie

    Hayee……awesome one….
    but sad haan… only two episodes are left….
    chalo leaving sadness………I toh loved the episode…..
    Loved this jiju… the character is like that of my 2 jijus…. totally relatable this is….
    loved ViDhaani… along with the siblings …..
    keep rocking dear…..
    Undoubtedly Channa Merya made me emotional for a bit…. and Dhaani’s goodbye… 🙁
    chalo…will come back later..okay…lots of love Swethu meri jaan…. love you sisso

    1. Shanitics

      Was waiting fr ths cmnt!!?
      Thankss meri diduuuu fr ths cmnt!!

      Really.. Ur 2 jiju’s r lke ths? Wow that’s great… Thn u can totally relate my ff…..

      Okay ? didi.. Nxt tme cme wth a epi off ur ff… ?
      Love ❤ u

      1. Sujie

        haan haan…. its totally relatable for me…tabhi toh…..
        love you dear… 🙂 🙂 take care….

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