It was all a lie…. Twinj (Last part episode 15)

IT WAS ALL A LIE………episode 15

Everything’s perfect
Everything is fine
We both are with each other
Forever and ever
And i know one thing
She is my beloved,
I love her now and forever and ever.
U r in my embrace
Thats what i always needed
And will always need.

Kunj , twinkle and leela were sitting on the dinning table. Twinkle was sitting in between them nd they were stuffing food in twinkles mouth.
Maa nd kunj plz i am full. If ill eat dis much food I’ll become fat. Plzz i dont want to get fat said twinkle frustrated.
We dont mind fat twinkle, what say maa said kunj with a wink and gave hifi to leela.
Twinkle was hell frustrated and angry with their act. She got up from the table nd was heading towrads thier room but suddenly called their name.

Hello Mr Sarna we have got hold of Manohar and Usha Sarna. U all dont have to worry said inspector.
Y did they do so asked twinkle.
Its just that they wanted property and u all know the rest story said inspector.
Now I should take a leave said inspector.
Kunj and inspector exchanged smilles and inspector went back.

Twinkle ran towards her room and shut the door loudly. Kunj looked towards leela and then towards the floor.
Leela kept her end on his shoulder and nodded him with her eyes.
Kunj went in their room and saw twinkle crying.
Heyy sweetheart dont cry everything is fine believe me said kunj hugging twinkle.
Twinkle made a pout and was cringing on him.
I loveeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuu sweeetieeeeeee said twinkle
I ummmmmm loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuu tillll infinity said kunj kissing her.
Kunj wat we will name our baby asked twinkle
Ill tell u afterwards said kunj.
Ok said twinkle innocently
Kunj smilled at her innocence and they both cuddled with each other.

Everything was perfect. Every moment they were cherishing with each other. Their love was increasing day by day. They were falling in love with each other more and more. Leela was also happy seeing them together. Love was the only thing around. They were more than happy. They knew a sweet bundle of joy was also going to come in thier life.

After 2 years

Romania

A beautiful villa is shown from outside. Beautiful garden with heavenly fountains. Then a dark room is shown especially a wall with lots of photoframes hanged. A girl wearing a floral one piece with moves her hand on them and smiles her beautiful smile. She is non other twinkle. The photoframes are from twinkles first meet to their new born baby nd then their 2 yrs old angel ayesha.

Kunj, ayesha get up said twinkle turning around amd moving towards their bed. Two cute faces are shown sleeping with a content full smile on their faces. Kunj ayesha get up babies. Said twinkle folding her arms around her chest.
Suddenly some one grabbed her hand and she landed between ayesha and kunj and they both wrapped their hands around her.

Good morning mamaa said kunj and ayesha together.
Good morning my babies said twinkle.
Momaa our good morning kissie said kunj and ayesha.
Twinkle kissed ayesha on her forehead and kunj on his lips.
Twinkle puttar shouted leela from downwards.
I want you both down stairs in next 15 minutes said twinkle and ran away from the room.
Ayu and kunj got up and looked at each and then burst out in laughter.

After 15 minutes

Leela and twinkle were sitting on the dining table and were waiting for their cuties.
Naniii came ayu shouting and running and hugged leela.
Good morning mera baby said leela
Good morning s*xy said ayu and giggled while saying this.
Leela kissed her forehead and ayu went towards twinkle and sat on her lap.
Good morning moomaaa said ayu.
Twinkle smilled and her forehead. They both started playing with each other in a very cute manner. Their bond was completely different.

Affer few minutes kunj came and first kissed leela on her forehead , then twinkle and sat down in between leela and twinkle and took ayesha in his lap.

Kunj and ayu had an amazing bond. Kunj was her superman, her everything. Kunjs most important people in his life were with him. He worked day amd night to attain what he is now. Kunj is the most rich personality in Romania. Its all about love and passion that lead him were he is now.

Twinkle started feeding kunj and ayesha amd leela was clicking their pics. Their were enjoying within themselves. Ayu was their princess. Their life, they cannot imagine their life without ayu specially kunj.

After one hour

Kunj and ayu were in ayus toy room and they were playing with her big big stuff toys and all those toys she loved. Kunj always wanted to give ayu all the happiness he always dreamed of as a child. Twinkle and leela were standing at the door and were looking towards them.

Mom isnt your son best dad, father and a son asked twinkle.
The best replied leela.

Momm , nanii come play with us said ayu making a pout.
Coming said twinkle.
They started playing with ayu. They enjoyed each and every moment.

Its all about first meet, its all about a person who comes in your life and bever leaves your side. Its all about love, care, trust, passion and most important commitment. If ders no commitment in any relationship then that relation can never flourish.

Hello guys , so i am here with my last episode. Hope today everyone silent reader of my if any and everyone who read it will comment. 😊

Guys i never thought that ill share my wrk with u all. I started writing due to a reason and it slowly became my passion.

Guys its been year i joined tu. Wen i started writing my own ff i also wanted to be an important part of tu. I always wanted ppl to like my ff like they did for other ffs.
But i feel i and my ff never became an important part of tu. I always wanted to feel like other ff writers did bu it never happened πŸ˜•πŸ˜₯

I dont know whether u all really liked my ff or were fooling me.
I dont know whether u all really liked me.
But somethings never happened and unfortunately i cannot change themπŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯😞

Anyways guys thanks to everyone who commented on my ffπŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»
Shukriya.
U all are very important for me
I love u all ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

Last but not the least
Bieeeee guysπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™ŒπŸ»πŸ™ŒπŸ»πŸ™ŒπŸ»πŸ‘‹πŸ»πŸ‘‹πŸ»πŸ‘‹πŸ»πŸ‘‹πŸ»
Good luck πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

75 comments

  1. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Yrrrrr chikuuuuuu pls come back wid another ff n who told u that ur not an important part of TU u r n u will always be and just stop imagining things agar kuch imagine karna haii toh imagine another story n come back soon n u thought that we r fooling u very bad yrrrrr ur n amazing writer so stop all this and from the start this ff is a hit n one of my favourite soooo stop all these n this one was awesomeeee loved it to the core
    Hope u come back soon
    Love u 😘

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks thanmy😘❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Ach baba
      Theek hai nahi sochungi negative baatein promise and ill try to come up woth another ff.

  2. Kiara

    Last episode?kehdo yeh jhoot hai😭😭😭brilliant ff ❀❀one of my favorite πŸ’• πŸ’• all the best πŸ’š loooooovvvvee uuuuπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

  3. Monica

    |Registered Member

    I loved this! How dare you say such words? I swear, you really have made a special space in my heart ❀️ I am really gonna miss you as i really loved your ff a lot. Hope you soon come back with another bag on ff of yours. Will be waiting ❀️ Love you πŸ’•

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks u sweetie😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️😘
      I am glad that u liked it
      Thanks for always commenting on my ff
      Love u too❀️

  4. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Chiku,
    That was mean Okay? How could you say that your ff means nothing to us? It did mean a lot. I can bet you everyone present here have always loved your work.

    In fact, I appreciate all the ff authors coming up each single day and presenting their wonderful stories before us.

    Well, the ending was superb. I legit loved it. Hope we’ll get to see you back soon.

    Loads of love.πŸ’ž

    • Chiku

      |Author

      thanks ria 😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Acha baba sorry i wont say this again
      Sorry
      I am glad that a writer like u lolike my ff
      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜

  5. Meeta

    |Registered Member

    Chiku, darl why did u end this so soon.
    That was brilliant.
    You’re such an amazing writer.
    You must write more.
    Hope u will be back with season 2 or maybe new FF.
    Hope to see you, soon.
    Love you till infinity.
    <3

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks mita😘❀️
      I ended it because story line was finished
      Ill try to come up with new ff
      Love u too❀️

  6. Roshini125

    |Registered Member

    β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ hey chiku it’s amazing sry yaar i didn’t know that this ff is urs, 2 days back I was surfing smething my I started reading all epis of urs it’s amazing lovely n outstanding thanks r such a wonderfully one love u dear keep it like this nly n cme back soon love u

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks roshni rockstar😘😘❀️❀️❀️
      I am glad that by chance u started reading my ff and u loved it
      Ill try to come up with new ff
      😘❀️😍

  7. Payal ....

    Hey chiku
    I love you and your ff so much…
    this ff was mind blowing
    And last epi was superb…
    love Ayu’s bonding with kunj, twinkle and leela……
    I will miss you and your f2f very badly…
    pls come with another ff soon…..
    take care
    bye
    luv u

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks payal😘❀️❀️❀️
      I am glad that u loved my ff
      Ill try to come up with another ff for sure
      Love u too❀️

  8. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Chiku frankly speaking I dint like you and your ff because I love you and your ff to square of infinity…I’m right now 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 your ff is one of my favorite ffs…you ended it so soon…very bad haan…the way you started and ended this ff is just out of box…loved it to the core…I so loved the love and bound that Leela and TwiNj shared between and loved Kunj-Ayu’s bonding too…dear please come back with season 2…plzzzzzzzzz…chiku now just stop thinking negative things and start thinking about storyline for season 2…

    Love you sooooooo much chiku 😘😘😘😘😘

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Hey diii dont cry.
      Remember u only asked me to come up with a ff.
      i am happy that u like it actually loved it
      Ill try to come up with season two paka se
      Love u ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  9. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    Yaar Chiku!! Mein Miss India hun kya? Mera pyaar n friendship tumhein nahin dikha? Yaar it was soo amazing n ur very special dear!!! U have a place in my heart n ur ff has been one of my fav so far!! Pls udas-udas mat raho pumpkin! N i want u to be back n show all of us who’ve loved u sooo much!!

    Love u dear❀️

    • Ayu

      |Registered Member

      Pumpkin yaar! Aise sad hoge to mein bhi sad ho jaaoungi! Now think about season 2 cuz i want my pumpkin to be back!!

      • Chiku

        |Author

        Thanks ayu😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
        I am happy that u liked my ff
        I am very happy
        Nd thanks for calling me pumpkin. I really liked this name😘❀️❀️

  10. Shakti

    Yes.u have a silent reader.& that’s me.
    The story is beautiful.I loved every bit of it.The poem lines at the beginning of each episode was really different.
    I’ll miss the story.

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks shakti😘❀️❀️
      Silent reader of my ff
      Thanks alot for commenting ❀️❀️❀️
      I am glad that u love my ff

  11. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Beautiful ending dear!!..i loved it..i will miss ur ff a lot!!!…do come up with another amazing story like this one..

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks fan😘❀️❀️❀️❀️
      I am glad that u liked it.
      Ill try to come up with another ff

  12. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Hey chiku
    Awesome episode dear
    Srsly loved it to core
    N plsss come back with other one
    As I dnt want to miss u
    Ur ff was amazing frm start to ennd
    Loved it N love u
    Byeee

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks ramya❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️
      I am glad that u liked it. ❀️❀️
      Love u

  13. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    chiku Dont think like that….ur the main part of tu…every member dreams about being it…some came true..some still dreaming…n I know u came in first part…every one know u…Its almost been a year I have been in tu…I have read almost every ff from starting…I wanted to write ff to cnnct to all tu members bt I was scared if my mom comes to know…bt thanks to idea…I wrote one os from my tab by sending 100 mb to my tab n I posted it…I know u have achieved…but I want my dream to come true one day…n if u don’t mind can u give me ur email id…

    ur ff is an master piece I really loved ur ff.. im gonna miss it badly…plz do come soon with another great ff…love u…

  14. Srija

    |Registered Member

    such a sweet and happy ending😍😍😍
    awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
    and will miss u please come with a new one soon
    love u loadsπŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

  15. Sidhanshi

    Heyyy chiku why r u saying like this… U r a very important part of tu… I love u’r ff… Not only i but we all like… no no no… love u’r ff… I’m gonna miss u nd u’r ff very badly… Love u always…

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks sidhanshi😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      I am glad that u liked it
      Love u

  16. Ritzi

    |Registered Member

    Be yaar chiku…dekh upar dekh Zara….nd u will get to knw hw much we love u…look wen I started my first ever ff it was luv tht brought them together….. Twinj I swear in the beginning …for abt 15 epis I didn’t got good response at all….but did I gave up? No na….look love cannot be gifted….it has to be earned….nd if u will give up…then it will not work at all…I would only like to tell tht if u really want to be remembered the cm back with a new ff….pls!

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks ritzi❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Acha baba sorry
      U r my inspiration dear
      Nd ur ff is my fav
      Specially bruno ❀️❀️

  17. Manvi

    Haayee kya episode tha ….. amazing.πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ but sad ….it was last episode…😯…. but the story was amazing… all the 15 episodes were full of life….πŸ’• i luvd it..

  18. ranabulbul

    Ek min did u just said that u r not a part of tu
    AGR Aida hai to we r sailing on the same boat ..dear. ….
    Ur ff I was literally dying to read it
    I have always asked u mesaaged u on whatsapp abt ur ff …
    On ur request I posted mY ff even if I was not in mood …
    Does that speaks how much u r imp.
    And ending was so cute and lovable
    And come with season two also

  19. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Chiku how could u say your ff u
    Is not important to us girl
    And we’re fooling you!???
    Do u actually know what an excellent write u are
    Haan I didn’t comment in ur previous episode
    Maaf kardo pls Teri sis KO
    Let me tell you what u can’t change
    U can’t change the way we loved ur ff and u
    I love your ff..I’m not lying sweetheart
    Paka
    I love you

    Episode was the sweetest cutest and amazingst

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks angy❀️❀️❀️
      Acha sorry i wont say this again cuteipie
      U r soo sweet
      Thanks for commenting
      Love u❀️

  20. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜” chiku tussi jaa rahi ho …… tussi na jaao ……….. chehek Plzz comeback with another ff …… u have brilliant ideas …… Plzz comeback soon ……… n about this so I’m speechless …….. u rocked my sissy ….. u don’t even know how much I loved twinj n ayesha n leela bonding …… u don’t know how much I loved this ff …..n will always be ……………. just comeback soon 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 ……. the journey has been the amazing one ….. just wish u comeback soon dear ….. love a aloottt 😘😘😘

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Tussi udaas na hoo
      Itma pyaar se bullao gr toh jaldi wapas aa jaugni
      I am happy that u liked it
      ❀️❀️❀️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘love u❀️❀️

  21. SidVee

    Amazing n beautiful ending.. how can u say that ur ff was not an important part of tu? In fact it was one of the best n my fav too.. will miss this ff sooooooooooooooo much.. Plz come back again with another ff.. will be waiting πŸ™‚

  22. Shreya

    Chiku miku!!..this is not done u can’t say that you aren’t Important!
    You have always been an important part of TU..an amazing writer sis …plz don’t say that..
    I loved this sweet ..lovely and pyaari si ending…I hope you’ll be back with season 2 or any other ff..

    Love you

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks shreya❀️❀️😘😘😘😘😘
      I am glad that u liked it
      I am very happy ❀️❀️😘😘
      Love u

  23. Tara

    |Registered Member

    excuse me… kya bola tumne?? u r’nt important?? yehi bola kya??
    u know what u spoiled my mood.. i was so eager to comment.. bt i wont do it now…
    huh…
    chiku yaarrrr.. how can u say this…
    every one in Tu is imp.. and so r u..
    i never read ur ff from the beginning..thats true… but when i read.. i couldnt wait longer for the next episodes…. i know i cmnted rarely.. but i loved ut ff very much sweetheart..
    this was sweet wala ending..
    do come back with another ff..
    love u loads..
    take care..

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Yahi bola….. sorry sorry aise nahi bolungi agien se
      SorryπŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»
      Maaf karde
      Thanks for liking my ff
      I am happy that u always liked it
      ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Ill try to come up with another ff
      Love u

  24. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved the episode πŸ™‚ So sweet πŸ™‚
    Chiku I won’t talk to you πŸ™
    Yp\ou know why coz you said that you mean nothing to me I mean how could you say this You know what I have commented on all your episodes read them enjoyed them felt them and you say that you mean nothing to me
    You have commented on almost all my ff’s Os and ss episodes and have been one of the best commenters and support system for me And You say that you mean nothing to me πŸ™
    How could you ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
    Now get one thing clearly in your mind that You and I are very good friends And will always be You are as much important to me as I am according to you πŸ™‚ I love you (Now don’t think it in a wrong way I am a girl Ha ) Love you πŸ™‚ And want you to come back with another FF or OS or SS πŸ™‚ But don’t even talk like this that you mean nothing to me πŸ™‚ Get that πŸ™‚ Love you πŸ™‚

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Hayeeee sorryπŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»
      Maaf kar de
      I am sorry
      Nahi kahungi aisa
      Pakaaa
      I am happy that u always liked it
      And u always commented
      I love u❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Ill try to come up with another ff

  25. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Kuku!!!!! No body has been fooling you di! Why you always say that yaar!?
    I feel hurt when u call your ff bad and u call yourself a bad writer.. Please don’t do that… And yes TU has been a very special thing in my life.. You all came especially you .. You know at school whenever i feel sad i always remember u all and i always remember how i call my favourite dii Kuku! And i will always laugh at our comments and they way we talked.. Di you’re the best and i love you!! ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

    You know when i saw last epi, my heart shattered .. I didn’t want to read it because i hate when good things come to an end… 😒 i will miss your ff di! Very much!
    You ended this one oon such a good note and so cute! Father- daughter bond was extremely πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œβ€β€β€
    Like too amazing! It was just superb di!
    Can u please come back with another ff? Please.. *pouts*
    I know you will for romu sake right?
    πŸ˜‚
    Love you to the moon and further di!!!,❀

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Romuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
      SorryyyyπŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»
      Maaf karde bachi ko
      Galti hogayi
      Nahi karungi aaisa
      Promise
      Gussa mar ho
      I am happy that u liked my ff
      I am really happy
      Thanks for liking it
      Nd our silly talk will always continue bcz i am kuku❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Ill paka try to come up with another ff promise 😘😘❀️
      Love u😍

  26. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Yrrrr sooooooooo sorry for so late comment yrrrr….I know I’m very bad janeman of urs….I always make u sad…. but I’m sorry for my follies …..

    U ended one of my fav ff ….I’m very sad …I know that u can’t extend it further coz of which u ended it … but plzzzzzz it’s my request that plzzzzzz come back with new ff …plzzzzzz…..

    Amazing ending…. too good yrr….the note on which u ended this ff is so awesome….loved it to the core….

    love you my Shinchan😘😘😘

    • Chiku

      |Author

      HahaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Finally i made u comment. Sorry for late revert. I completely forgot about it

      I am gld that u liked it
      I ll come up with new ff soon
      Love u minir❀️❀️❀️

  27. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Chikkuu….. What to say yaar… I don’t know how to appreciate u… A huge applause to my chikku… And I’m feeling sorry myself that I missed such amazing ff… Wonderful, beautifully u written… Amazing yaar.. I’m proved of u…. I love you yaar… Keep it up…

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Omg😱😱😱😱😱
      Afa di u commented. Omggggggg
      Wen did u start reading my ff
      I am glad that u liked it
      Thank u for commenting sweetheart ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Love u

  28. Aamu

    ooooooo my god…meri chiku chikni..!!…ne to ff hi end kardiya…
    are tu samjthti kya…hai…
    huh..
    i dont wanna talk with u…!
    u end my fav ff…
    today i took decision dat i will read all d ff which i use to read before…but…
    huh…
    meri chikni….
    dis was a best…awesome…cute episode…
    der love
    der bond…
    der affection towards eo…
    was just speechless..

    tu yaar..
    kya ladki hai…!..
    u made my day…but again u broke my day..
    u ended ur ff…!
    n sorry i cmntd d last..
    i today only got time to read..sorry…
    or haa…ye tu bhik samajh..yaa order..yaa request….yaa jo b samajh..
    U HAV TO CM WITH ANODER::::
    UNDERSTAND:::!!
    my chikni…
    wat u were saying…
    u r not important ….ur ff is not goos…
    agar tu mere saamne hoti to abtak tu zammeeen par hoti kyiuki mene tuje ek thappad mara hota…..chiku chikni…
    chalo by…
    milte hai tere new ff ke saath…

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks aamu for commenting
      Yup ill come up with another one promise.
      Promise
      Chiku chikni ka promise πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      I am glad that u liked my ff

      Zarorr milenge new ff ke sath

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