kahin Teri khamoshiyan jeet na jaaye pyaar se episode-15 ( last episode)

Hello ppl…I m here wid d last epi….plz I request u to give me a parting gift….make my comments section overflow wid ur comments…..I would be really obliged…. Nd I want to say that I will post acknowledgements later….coz if I write it now…it would be too long…..

Shravan is standing near his window…its night… He is staring at d moon….he thinks…
Shravan: It has been one year now….a long gap of….sadness…empitiness…loneliness..
D mind knows that it can’t be back to where it was…but d heart….its n emotional fool…..it refuses to move on…..to accept d truth….it still yearns for that smile….it still yearns for that one chance…to get everything to where it was…whatever happened… Shouldn’t hve happened….I wouldn’t say that I hve moved on….but I hve learnt to live wid d pain….I hve learnt that life never stops….it goes on nd on…..
He recalls….how d last word which she said was ‘Forever’…. how he was not ready to close those dark eyes…which he loved so much…how he was not ready to let go of that hand…which brought him out of d darkness….he thought then..that his only motive was to get Rohit punished….nd after he did ….he didn’t know wat to do wid his own life….how he was going to live…..when once again…Suman came…nd took him out of d darkness..he would hve possibly lost himself in……

Shravan moves toward his table….nd opens d drawer….there she was smiling….holding his hand..nd looking at him lovingly……in d photograph….. Shravan takes out d photo …nd moves his hand over it….nd says to her…
Shravan: One year….today our marriage completed one year…..u said u would be there wid me forever….nd u will ….in my heart… In me….
He takes out an envelope which was kept beneath d photo..he opens it …nd takes out several pages…… He moves his hand over it…trying to feel her in those pages…..
These pages were d reason he is alive today….
He recalls how once he was in his office…in his cabin….trying to keep himself lost in work…..when suddenly a letter came to him….d letter was addressed to Mr. Shravan Malhotra….nd was written by….Mrs. Suman Malhotra…..it read….

Dearest Shravan,
When u will get this letter of mine…u probably would be in ur cabin…thinking about me….I could not decide what should I give u on our marriage….I knew that u wouldn’t want any materialistic happiness…so I planned to write this to u…..as a token of my love….as a token of ur love….this is my wedding gift to u….
Mr. Shravan Malhotra… U met me when I didn’t expect happiness in my life….u came as a wave….nd took my heart away….I never told u what I thought when I first met u…..I thought..that u were a man…who can never let anything wrong happen to anyone….u were so selfless….I just couldn’t believe that u were not any dream of mine…..in our first meeting only I felt…that I had some connection wid u…..u were so like me…..yet so much better….
Then came our second meeting…when I arrived in d court bleeding…I never knew…that it was u whom I was helping…..but when I saw ur face….when I stared in those brown eyes of urs…I could c d pain…pain which was far beyond than mine…..I couldn’t understand it then….about y u were so restless seeing me in pain…..nd even if u were…y did I care so much…..but I did….when d incident wid Rohit happened…..when I woke up at ur house….nd looked at u…I understood at once…wat must hve happened…I fell in love wid u then nd there….nd I knew that u loved me more than me…..even in sleep…I could c d pain on ur face….d fear of loosing me…..when I held that hand of urs that night….I never wanted to leave it…..u always protected me….I always felt so much comfortable in ur presence….so much assured….when I saw u looking in my eyes…..
Then when u proposed me…..I didn’t expect it….I knew u loved me…but I never knew…that u would accept it so soon…..that night I spent wid u…was d most special night…I had ever experienced….it felt so much like a dream…..I never wanted it to end….I never wanted to open my eyes…..
We were always made for each other…..nd I can never stop saying that I love u…nd always will….no matter how far we r….forever…..u hve always protected me…but I want to promise u today…..that I will always be there wid u….nd try my best to save u from all d dangers I could….I know that I will always be wid u….but if a day comes…when I may not be by ur side…holding ur hand….looking into ur eyes…always remember that I will always be in ur heart….I live in u….nd u in me…..we complete each other…we can never be separated…..I would never want u to go back into d darkness…I pulled u out from…so today when u will be reading this…..I want u to promise me…..that u will always keep d hope alive in u….u will always keep d happiness alive in u…..u hve so much love within u…u wouldn’t let it be trapped inside u……If a day comes…when u feel alone….just keep a hand on ur heart…. Nd feel its beat….it will be me…in every beat of urs…..I love u so so much…that I can’t express it in words…..u mean more than my life to me……..coz u r my life….
I can just keep writing on nd on…nd it will never end….such is our love….endless…forever…. So to end wid…I would just like to say…..that u r handsome man….who has a charming personality……sweetest smile…nd most beautiful eyes….but more than anything….u r person wid a big heart….nd I m so thankful to u…for giving me a small space in ur big heart…..I guess u feel that I hve written it too long…but I still feel that it is too short….to express my love….nd how thankful I m …for ur love……so I once again say it…..
I LOVE YOU…AND I ALWAYS WILL… TILL ETERNITY…..NO MATTER HOW HARD IT GETS …OR HOW FAR WE ARE…I WILL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU…’FOREVER’

Urs now nd always urs…
Suman

Shravan repeats : Forever…..
He thinks: Had it not been this letter of urs….I would certainly hve died..but u wanted me to keep d hope in me alive…..For u…I hve not kept d love trapped inside me….

Suddenly a voice is heard…voice of a girl…..’papa’…it says….
She comes in Shravan’s room…wid a doll in her hand….nd hugs him….shravan picks her up in his arms…..
Shravan: So my li’l princess…y r u up so late…u hve school tomorrow right….
Suman: Yes papa…but I m not able to sleep….u plz continue that story of urs no…where a tall nd a handsome prince… Falls in love wid a warrior princess…..
Shravan: OK….let’s go….
Shravan recalls how few days after he got Suman’s letter….he went to an orphanage nd adopted a girl…now she means his life to him….she has kept him out of d darkness……she has helped him not to keep d love trapped inside him…
Shravan thinks: Suman….at first I used to think…that y did it happen to us only…y our story had a sad ending….but now I hve learnt….. That our story can never end…ur silence cannot win over love….bcoz we don’t need words for our love….u live here
He puts a hand on his heart….
In every beat of mine…u live in my heart….u live in me…nd u always will…till eternity….. Forever….

39 comments

  1. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Speechless
    Spellbound
    Fkabbergasted
    Dumbfounded
    Boggled
    Lost somewhere
    Imagining something
    Wondering something
    Pondering upon something
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    That’s what u will call me today….that’s what my condition is right now. We always don’t need words to describe the beauty of something…If u would have been here I would have touched ur feet for sure….are u coming up with another story? Plzz do come up….and ya….always keep writing, stay blessed, be happy….and love u and ur writings both….may we have the opportunity to see you back soon😊😘

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Thank you so so much laddoo…so vry sweet of u to say all of that…m so glad to read ur comment….really…u touched my heart…
      Luv u loads nd loads….
      :-)😊😊😊

  2. Lily

    Omg it’s so emotional…….. You did good work…… πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  3. Fati

    |Registered Member

    You had been an amazing writer from the start. I am a silent reader who never commented, I am sorry for that, that I had been reading all your parts and never commented…
    Your story was so beautiful…. I just love it.
    The ending was sad but the way you explain it and the way you write, its… its beautiful…..

  4. Nandini aka Nandu

    Awwww… weirdsister.. idk why but while reading this, i swear that my heart was wrenching. I seriously felt really sad. Keep writing. Lots of love. Will wait for ur other creation. Wishes for ur studies. Keep posting. Such a beautiful story it was. Really beautiful.

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        That was ur hardwork which paid u off. Btw di wht is ur real name?? Thanks for the wishes. Love u too. Any plans for another story or any os??

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Niyati…my name
      Nd story yaah…thinking BT not on shraman…frankly speaking..even this wasn’t meant to be n ff….bt u know…seeing ur warm response.. I made it into one…!

  5. sona

    Sis…😨😨😨😡😨😨πŸ˜₯😦πŸ˜₯😦πŸ˜₯😩😩
    U made me cry a lot..and lot and lot a lot…😧😧πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯😀😀😀😣😣😩😟in my heart..because..I can’t cry outside..varna..mere gharvale..mujhey pagal samjhtey..😳😳😳😧😦πŸ˜₯😞😞😊😊😊
    Seriously..yaar..I didn’t get to knw..when and where..and by whch words..im get invovedthwt much…my eyes are almost get wet..but I however..I managed..to accept..this painful truth..😐😐😐
    Its not only about the death of sumo..or loneliness of shravan ..but also..mixed feeling of remembering..its the end..
    Dear..😯😯
    But..pls..promise..u will never stop writing ffs..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
    I want to read ur ffs a lot..for the whole time…
    I can comment even more..but wt to do our serial gng to start in Sony..na..bye..☺☺☺

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh thank you so sona…😊😊😊…ur comment means a lot to me….!!..
      I will try my best to come back wid another story…luv u lots nd lots…may god bless u!!!☺☺

  6. Marie

    |Registered Member

    OMG my lovely sis…….!!
    U r amazing….
    I m speechless yr…..seriously tumhari tareeef Mai mere paas lafz khatam ho gai……
    I Swear I WS crying while reading this……so heart touching n emotional……
    U r a wonderful writer…..
    .May god always B.L.E.S.S u yr……
    The way u describe the emotions…….hayyyyyyy <3
    I WS imagining it……
    Amazing sad ending………
    Plzz do cm back wid another one……
    N all d best fr ur studies….

    Love u…!! So much,,,
    Take care dear…….!
    Wid lots of luv…….
    maria…. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Luv u too maria…nd thankyou so much for ur comment nd best wishes…I m so glad that u liked it….!!!
      May God bless u too…wid all d happiness…nd keep smiling forever…!!
      πŸ™‚

  7. Anamika

    Yr what shuld i say
    This was by far one of the best stories
    The story went perfect with the title
    U nailed it
    U made me cry but the story was for sure realistic😒
    I will miss reading this….
    Come back with a new one soon
    Will be waiting…😊😘

  8. Angel_pari

    Ahhhh what do i say u had left me speechless seriously i dont get emotional normaly but this……
    this was something which brings tears in my eyes i do know it was just a story a fiction but dono y i feel really sad reading this my heart become too heavy after that

    i had feel each and every word of ur ff today it was out of the world…
    Amazing superb fantastic these words are very less today for u ff……..
    IT WAS BEST YAR SUCHI MUCHI…….

    From begining till end u had kept ur ff amazingly…..
    Honestly when i read very first epi i read it randomly but slowly slowly i become addicted to it and today i can say without any doubt that IT WAS ONE OF THE BEST FF I HAD EVER READ………

    Ur thoghts are very much beautifull and mature………….. U should keep writing dear…..

    THANKU SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFULL STORY

    • Angel_pari

      And with this comment i,ll take leave for tu not forever till oct may God bless u all will miss u all dont forget me i,ll b back soon πŸ™‚

      lots of love ws sona di maira khushi niki sumo lovey pretty ria and all of my frnd take care stay blessed πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  9. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    it was soooooooooo emotional .. weird sister .. omg I can’t believe it ended.. although I don’t like sad endings but dis was not at all a sad ending..
    it was one of d best stuff I have ever read..
    u r just too good…
    in love with ur writing skills ur choice of words ur way of expressing it… ur story’s growth! everything is just amazing..
    I want u too return as soon as possible..
    plz be back! πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜
    lots of love.

  10. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    OMG !!!! Yr … !!!! Ab rulaooo gi kya .. very sad ending .. I was not expecting it bt u made it very realistic type story (quality of a true writer) … after reading this ff ..now m become a great great fan of urs .. u r just fab awwwwesome fantastic …
    Now I only wanna say plzzzz plzzzz don’t stop writing .. start another ff nd made it fab ..
    Stay happy !!!
    Stay healthy..!!!
    Stay blessed !!!
    Wid lotzzzz of lotzzzz of l.u.v .!!! 😘😘

  11. Naina

    Wow yar u r just perfection really i m speechless today all i can say is that u made me cry today today’s epi was so so so emotional that i couldn’t control my tears…… I just don’t know what else to say i just wanna congratulate u for such a wonderful ff i never liked sad endings of love stories but today i loved it from the bottom of my heart the way shr fulfilled suman wish it just me much much happy really great true love

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Thank you so naina…I m glad u commented… I was trying to connect to u…as u didn’t comment on d last Two epis…but couldn’t…so thanx….!!
      Keep smiling…!
      πŸ™‚

      • Naina

        I’m really for not commenting on the previous epis actually i was a but busy with my family n all so i couldn’t find time to do so but they were really great really heart touching plz come back soon with another ff

      • Naina

        I’m really sorry niyati as i couldn’t comment on previous epis actually i was a bit busy my family n all so i couldn’t comment but they were really great really heart touching plz come back soon with another ff

  12. Shiny

    OMG yaar!!! I just can’t believe it is ovr…its just amazing…d way u put emotions in it is just mind blowing…loved it…so emotional…so hearttouching…so expressive….keep writing….come back soon

  13. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    WS means weird sis but u made me weird sis really yaar
    I was really very touched
    My sissy how can u write such a nice ff it was awesome blossom dear
    Sorry for late comment
    So sorry
    But it was just amazing
    I m totally mad
    Yaar I m crying also and felt really nice reading ur ff
    Now I can’t say this also that please post next part soon😒😒😒
    Loved it by heart
    A lots of love and a bada vala hug
    Please write new ff
    Byeee
    Cutie pie
    Love u

  14. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Nhii yeh Kya kiya …..First of all m so sorry for being late well u know the reason😜😜
    Yr u made me cry I didn’t wanted a sad ending coz m really a very senti person yr….U made me cry as if there is a waterfall in my eyes this part was amazing and the best part was u made it as shravan’s pov amazing yr superb….love u yr.
    Well when is the next one coming
    Batao Batao??

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh thank you khushi….u commentedπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Nd talking abt next one…I really don’t knowknow…no shraman stories in mind…currently focusing on a proper full fledged story…so…😊😊

  15. Anjali

    hey dear writer ….I am also a die hard fan of edkv…so I started reading fabrics…just finished reading urs …
    n I’ll have to say it was beautiful..
    the way you showed there connection, their care, their love for each other…
    n at last after marriage sumo died…couldn’t control myself from crying…its the first fanfic in which I have cried like hell…
    n the letter of sumo made me cry more n more…ending was wow as shravu adopted a girl…
    the way you have portrayed the love even after sumo’s death left me speechless…can’t be described in words…
    amazing work dear…though I don’t know ur name but I can say ur a very good writer…but I have one request from you…when you write ur next fanfic pls don’t kill either sumo or shravu plsssssss….I love happy endings ..
    thanku … πŸ™‚

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Thnk you anjali…!!!
      I will try to…first let me form a story..!!
      U should hve commented just a day bfr…I posted acknowledgements yesterday only…but anyway…thankyou for being a part of my ff…!!!😊😊

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