I hv read fan fictions of many amazing writers like.. renima di ..b.k.maha,b.isha di …rasika..sahana di..mrunal di..IME..anha..shraddha..verna di..shivika22kapoor..kuhu di..nd many more..u all r just amazing nd my inspiration… this is my first attempt…so plz forgive me if there r any errors..thank u..
In my story omkara nd Gauri r childhood frndz nd both families I mean oberoi’s nd sharma’s business partners…..gauri nd omkara use to visit each other’s house in their vacatvacations nd frm dat time they became gud frndz..no best frndz….But after schooling Gauri went London for her further studies…..nd omkara was in Mumbai itself…
So the story takes place when Gauri returns to Mumbai after 5 years….
Let’s start now…happy reading…nd plz forgive me for errors…
In oberio mansion..
Omkara was in mix emotion of angryness nd nervousness continuously checking his phone then watch..phone nd watch..same drama was going on frm 5hrs…
Ani:- shivaye whts wrng wd om??..wht happened to him???..y is he behaving so??..
Rudy:- Arrey bhabhi…woh aa rahi h naa…bhabhi cum bhai chor..!..
Ani:- frm bhabhi I understood ki koi ladki aa rahi h..pr yeh bhai chor kya h???
Rudy:- haan bhabhi who bhai chor hi h…u knw whenever she used to come our house om use to roam behind her…nd om ko uske alawa koi dikhta hi nahi tha….bilkul paraya dhan hojata h yeh lambe Baal wala prani..dont whts gonna happen now can she is coming after 5years…bhaiya humara o hume bhul jayega (in crying tone)..toh hui naa bhai chor.
Shiomani:- shut up rudra!!!…
Shiv:-anika tum iski baato main mat aao .. I will tell u..
Ani:- tell naa…shuld I take appointment of urs??..
Shi :- omkara’ s best friend nd our business partners daughter Gauri is coming…
Om:-y didn’t she came uptill now, she checked out 2hr ago…
Shi:- u r u overreacting…u knw Mumbai’s traffic naa…she might hv stucked in traffic…chilax bro…
Rudy:-(in crying tone)…look at him …abhi tak aayi nahi toh yeh haal h…aanek baad kya hoga???
Om:- rudra…will u plz shut up..(Nd give him a deadly look)…
Shi:-om..now it’s really very late call her nd ask where is she…
Om was any to call her..nd suddenly someone frm back said hws u dabbu???…
Yes u r r8 she was our GAURI…omkara was very happy..suddenly his angry face turned into bright happy face…both ran towards each other nd give a right hug…after sometime Gauri releases herself nd go to shivaye nd hug him..
Shi:-Gauri.. .u r looking beautiful..
Gauri:- thank u so much bhaiya….
Btw who is she??…(pointing towards anika)..
Ani:- Hiii Gauri.. .I m anika..
Shiv:- no…ANIKA SHIVAYE SINGH OBEROI..
Gauri:- hello bhabhi so u r the beautiful lady who stole my bhaiu’s heart..not bad not bad..saying this she hugs anika..
Rudra:-ab sirf usne hi Mike kya???..mujhse toh koi pyaar hi nahi krta…(makes puppy face)
Gauri:-awww.. my sweetu..come here..nd gives him protein shake packets…
Ani:- was surprised by sudden change in rudras gesture…shivaye what happening I thought rudra didn’t like Gauri.. or yaha toh mamla hi ultra h..
Om:-bhabhi I knw him naa…he says dat I keep revolving around Gauri.. but in actual case is different..rudra is Gauri ka chamcha..
All laugh on omkaras statement..
Rudra:- don’t b jealous o..
Gauri:- haan om..dont b jealous..
Janvi comes there..
Janvi:- Arre wht r u all doing here ??..rudra college nahi hasna tujhe??..aur shivaye tej is waiting for u beta..go otherwise he will get angry..
Shiv:-Thanks badi naa.. today u saved me otherwise badepaoa toh meri OMM…. kr dete.. .
Janvi:-kuch bhi shivaye…..om show Gauri her room…nd anika u come wd me..we hv to go to temple..pinky nd mamiji r waiting..come hurry up..
Janvi anika nd shivru leave place..
Om was staring Gauri.. .
Gauri:- what happened dabbu??..
Om:- nothing yaar gabbu..but dis name doesn’t suits u anymore…
Om:-ab tu moti nahi rahi naa..
Gauri:- wht u called me motu.. he dare u??
Om:-like this moti..moti..moti..
Gauri rans to beat him but her leg gets stuck in luggage she stumble nd falls but om holds her…..
Aankho k pannoo or..
Maine likh a tha say dada…..Main hoon hero tera plays in background..
They share an eyelock….
Precap:-anishiru teases gaurika….
Guys plz forgive me for mistakes..i hope u will understand…do comment guys..nd tell me whether I shuld continue or not…
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