Ishqbaaz ff by nans(part 9)


Hi evryone
I am happy with ur sweet words for my previous part.I hope anika questioned shivay all those which u wanted her ask.plz do comment in this part I always say just a emoji so tat I know it made u smile.

Last part shivay proposed anika.anika rejected.shivay anika kiss.Here goes next

Next mrng, in oberoy mansion
Evryone doing breakfast
Dadi: finally ur ishqbaazi started billu. but make her agree soon
Tej: just anika yes then see how grand ur wedding going to be.I am sure this time u will agree for a grand epic wedding.
Shivay smiles and says: I just need my brothers , my family tats it
Pinky: oh my mata! I forgots anika don’t believe on god much what will I do?
Shakti: arey pinky! When one’s life becomes beautiful then ta magic god does is also knwn.
Om: by the way shivay, the way u proposed her at a tat moment we all have tears in our eyes
Rudra: haan! Mr.amresh puri also became amitabh bachan
All giggle.tej gives a serious look to rudra.rudra keeps mum
Om:we never thought u will speak ur heart out like this.
Shivay: I just say what I felt tat just cut it OK?
Rudra: arey bhayya! The way u kneel down waah! The way u asked for marriage waah!
The way u said I love u……saying this he stops
Evryone realise and at a time
“ u didn’t say I love u?”
Shivay: okkkkk I said tat much what else u want??
Evryone: u didn’t said I love you???
Shivay: guys pleaseee
Om: let it be some feelings are beautiful without saying also
Rudra: but bhayya. U wre talking abt pool party to anika didi.
Shivay coughs…..

Rudra gives him a suspicious look
Om: and u were saying abt tat painkillers night
Shivay fastly takes glass and drinks water speedily.
Evryone looking at him curiously to know
Shivay: its nothing….
Soumya: nothing?? There is something.tat day u n anika didi tried so hard to stop us watch video.
Omru: shivay???
Rudra: did u become imran hashmi tat day?
Evryone: hawwww
Shivay: rudra u r impossible.
And he fastly get up and goes to his room.
Evryone laugh aloud giving HiFi each other.

After sometime
Office time.tej shakti are ready to leave.ahivay comes and says
“ dad,bade papa I mailed all details of project to mishra.I have some work. I will join u later.”
They say its fine and leave.
Omru: some work? Or anika work?
Shivay: ha u guys na, OK I am going to her only.fine? Happy?
Omru sowmya: how romantic!!!!!
Shivay: just just…. And he fastly leaves from there.
He goes to designer jewelry shop and takes some box he had ordered already and drives to anika place.

Anika place:
Anika is packing her luggage as she is leaving tonight.she is reminiscing all shivay words but again his distrust and then tat kiss.she finishes packing and kepts in bedroom.
Her phone rings.she comes to hall and picks it.
Anika: ram!! U took promise from me when I was leaving tat I will not take risk of calling u regularly.but now?
Ram: what to do? U must have made ur place lake by now by crying.
Anika: haha such a PJ!!!
Ram: so everything fine?
Anika: nothing fine.yesterday he proposed me.
Ram: interesting!!!!
Ram: I was angry on him but he finally spoke his heart sweet!!
Anika: r u on my side? Or his? Byeee
Ram: OK listen!! Its only 10 days na.come here only.why to go somewhere else? U will be safe here.evryone are missing u.its been 4 months now.
Anika: I too miss u all.but u want all see me in this devdas expression? I need to compose myself.its only 10 days na? I will be back.and I will take my care.pinky promise.
Ram: OK fine bye.
Anika: bye.
She pickups her bag and turns .she gets startled by shivay just in front of him.
Anika: R u mad? Y r u scaring me? And she just composes herself.
Shivay: I was abt to call u.i..
Anika: y r u here?
Shivay: what u mean by y am I here? After yesterday…
With ta word yesterday,anika reminisces ta kiss and becomes nervous.
Shivay notices this.anika looks away and says” just leave “ and tries to move aside as she is between the table and shivay and she can’t hndle this much closeness.but shivay blocks her by placing right hand on table and gives her a victorious smile coz now she can go nowhere as there is wall on his left side.
Shivay: OK I will leave ……..along with u.just come with me.
Anika: if not what will u do? Will u forcibly take me ?
Shivay; ya if tats what u want.I can make evryone agree for live in relationship until our marriage happens.
Anika is totally surprised n shocked with this loving stealing cool new Shivay
Anika: what?
Shivay: I proposed u with ring Yesterday.but u were angry.i accept ur decision.until u say I won’t make u wear ring.but u can accept this na? Saying this he opens box and takes out a platinum chain and keps the box on table and shows her by placing it on his palm.the chain has dollar of AS letters beautifully entangled n carved with not just studded by tiny diamonds but also his love.anika is more surprised n looks into his eyes.after few seconds she comes to senses and tries to leave again.but shivay pulls her with his left hand.
Anika: do u really think I am going to wear it?
Shivay: no becoz I will myself make u wear this.saying this he leans towards her right side and makes her wear the pendant.he was so close to her neck.shivers are passing through her body and he can clearly sense it.he sowly comes to her face and takes out her hairs out of ta chain brushing her neck with his fingers.she is just feeling his cold touch and he is feeling her warm breath.
Then she pushes him and tries to take out ta chain.but she can’t open the hook.shivay seeing this behind her,
Shivay: don’t trie hard.u can’t . and he comes n hugs her from back and keeps his head on her shoulder and whispers in her ears
“ i am sorry anika,plz forgive me”
Anika: in my dreams and she pushes him back.
Shivay: OK fine u take time to forgive me.but until u come with me I am not leaving.
Anika: OK fine stay.
And she takes hr bag and lock goes to door to lock n leave.
Shivay stops her closing door.shivay: u want me to stay in ur place romantic !!!!
Anika: what????? U r …… U r…. U r. No1 billu
She pulls him outside ,locks ta door.

At ta very moment she gets sahils teachers call( guys sahil trip is over.she is going to pick him up)
Teacher informs anika tat “sahil bua came along with a couple and said they r sahil parents.they adopted him.from now they are his guardians.and they take sahil with them.sahil was crying thought to inform u.and tells the names of them.”
Anika is hell shocked ,angry,worried for her sahil
Shivay notices this calmly asks her” what happened?”
Anika: sahil bua gave sahil to somebody and i know she would have got money in return. Don’t know how is sahil.I need to go.
Her eyes are wet and is abt to cry her like this shivay hugs her saying nothing will happen to him.
Anika too reciprocates.and cries.shivay rubbing her back.

Precap: shivay naughty side.

Guys sry for short update.and don’t wy for sahil.the couple adopted him are very relax.and guys I already said anika has nothing to do with sahils real parents.she know him when she came to this city.within a short span they both r connected with souls.
Just send me ur views if u like my ideas

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  1. amazing episode nans…
    day by day shivaay become naughty…..

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks ansh.and I already read ur ff anah. I loved it.mainly ansh n anshi scenes

  2. Wow…eagerly waiting to watch his naughty side

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks sabhya

  3. Lisaaa


  4. Shivika

    Wow……superb…..waiting for nxt episode

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks shivika

  5. nice one

  6. Dear Nan’s ,
    What should I say after this mind bobbling heart touching or heart snatching episode dear in the previous part I commented and gave you a nick name jadhugarni seriously I meant it and see today you itself proved it dear with your amazing storyline dear you know whatever you wrote I was just connected to it easily as I am living it toh hua na jaadu…
    Suggestion from my side
    Dear we all know that real IB is not showing sahika ( Sahil+ anika) bro sis bonding properly if its possible to show their equation then I will love it more may like serial he makes anika understand her feelings so Baat hi kya hogi awesome….

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks shama.and I already made a story line long back.u will get it in upcoming stories.and for sahil and anika I will show them also.but in my ff anika is more close to ram.just wait n watch dear.and share ur views

  7. Nice episode…Rudhra asking about pool party… ….the reaction of shivay….wowwwwwww
    Waiting for next update

  8. Uhhh u show so much suspense and excitement in precap ???u make viewers desperate ??

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks Laura.I just hope my next part will make ur desperation cool

    2. Nansshivika

      Liara sorry for tat spell mistake sry

  9. Sanaya_malik

    Ufff shivaye is so naughty….. Wow pool party….. Rudra is awesome….. Once again awesome episode….. Eagerly Waiting for next.. ??

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks sana baby??????

  10. RichieRich

    The naughty Shivay… I am still in imagination.. It is interesting to see his naughty side.. Hats Off for this episode

    Proud reader :-*

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks a lot dear

  11. Sat_9492

    Awsm episode…

  12. Rocking day by day….episode is Awesome yaar…Loved it to core. ..Keep Rocking dear

  13. Pri_24

    Nandupie…. you rocked once again and family bond is amazingly written and Rudy’s counter question are superbbb I liked it alot…

    And I love this naughty Shivay and And even stubborn Anika…

    And hope Sahil’s matter get solved with Shivay’s help and this bua is so idiot…

    And Ram and Anika’s bond is coollllll….

    Waiting for next part plz update soon na plz plz plz plz plz…

    Love you alot Nandupie…

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks a lot chocopie????? I too wanted ram anika bond like tat.I am glad u felt tat you too????? and plz ki bachi nautanki, I will upload asap

  14. Tulasi

    Awesummmm again meri bacchi……i luvd it sooooo much……shivaay naughty sude…wowwww i wanna seee it soooooon………??????? kya karega ab billu ji……..aur ofc panika yeh sab me phas jayegi…..awww…i luvd it soooo much nanduuuuuuuhuuhuuuu i have no words left ……blushng mode on hogayi

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks a lot tussy.tumari excitement dekne ke baad I will try to add more moments.hope u like it????

  15. Jazz1

    So cool ? and nice ? episode. Rudra asking about pool party and painkillers day ???? and shivaay’s reaction ?????????. Precap OMG ? shivaay naughty side really waiting to see it.

  16. Priyanka_22

    Amazing nans.. The way omruso teasing him along wid family lovedd it 😀
    And m dying to see I mean read shivaay’s naughty side.. Plz update soon

  17. Anjaly

    fantastic episode .i really loved it.

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks anjaly

  18. Shivika22kapoor

    Awesome epi di Agent Rudy is on duty ????????. All the Oberoi family ? scenes were spectacular.
    The entire part was superb and waiting for Shivaay’s naughty ? avatar. Ani hugging Shivaay at the end was super cute pls get them together soon.

  19. Nice..

  20. Mukta

    Aww it’s so beautiful yar!!!!! Amazing??

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks mukta

  21. Ayath

    awesome epi all the oberoi’s are cool and shivika scene also superb……..

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks ayath

  22. Omg
    You killed it
    Sorry for not commenting on your previous ff i was stuck somewhere
    But. It wont happen again

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks hriday and tats OK dear??

  23. Rithik

    Its Amazing epispde continue

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks rithik

  24. Waiting for 3 magical words from Shivaay..

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks for reading pohor.but I am sry yaar the three magical words will take time.plz bear with me….plz

  25. Jayashree

    Aww so cute..I luv this romantic side of shivaay… Osum episode dear…waiting for next update..

  26. Nice dear I’m love it

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks lalli

  27. Hey Nans your story is amazing.
    I liked it.
    I do read only Pri’s FF and OS but she recommended me yours, and other two author Tulsi and Sanaya Malliks’s FF and I started reading with yours and I’ve to say sorry to you for not commenting on your story so far. Hope you accept my apology.

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks a lot need to apologise dear.I am so happy u started our ffs so sweet of u.and chocopie(PRI) is like her name always sweet

  28. I was a silent reader…. But after reading ur last two episodes…. I think I should tell u this… Ur writing is superb yaar….awesome update…. I really loved it…

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks arya for sharing ur views.???
      Do continue commenting.thanks a lot dear

  29. Akshaya

    Chala bagundi nandhu. Loved . Waiting for Mr naughty. Omru omg teasing kings????

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks aksh???? I submitted it 1 hr back.

  30. Ananya7044

    Am not getting nee words for commenting..hamesha fab…mind blowing kehke thak chuka hu….aapke liye har ek episode keliye naye naye wirds nahi laa sakthi yaar mai…anika se poochna padega ki voh apni ajeeb ajeeb words kaha se laati hai..taaki mai bhi jaake thida new words leke aa sakthi hu tere liye…..
    It was fabblowing…fabulous+ mind blowing……. Fansome..fantastic+awesime ???

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks a lot ananya for fabblowing n fansome comments.

    2. Ananya7044

      Haha..ur welcome ???

  31. Samm

    cute shivaay!
    i think i fell in love with shivaay after reading all these amazing ffs… it’s all your fault! 😀 😛

    1. Nansshivika

      I am already in love with him.Milkar pyar karlenge koi baat nahi??? and thanks for such a sweet comment

  32. Ruchitha

    veryyy nice,,,,,,,,,,,, I am really waiting for shivaay’s naughtyy side,,,

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks ruchi dear

  33. Razna

    awsomeee episode nans……i loved it veryyy much….your story line was suprrr…and waiting for shivikas marriage….srry for late comments…..plz update next part faaastly as iam eagerly waiting……….

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks razna need to be next part is posted dear.

  34. Ishqkum

    Super dr

  35. Tany

    now whats with this ram it makes me curious and yes shivaay and anika rocked……..

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks tany.I will reveal it 2 or 3 parts

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