Ishq Ka Rang Safed 29th August 2016 Fan Fiction

Dhaani is sitting in the hall and smiling remembering all the sweet moments spent with Viplav. Suddenly she feels a hand kept on her eyes and she quickly recognises the person.
Dhaani(smiles)- Viplav….
Viplav- Shhh.. Quietly come with me.
Dhaani- First remove your hand.
Viplav- No, first u come with me..
And he takes her to their room. After reaching the room, Viplav removes his hands.
Viplav(smiles)- Now open your eyes.
Dhaani slowly opens her eyes and finds a black board in front of her.
Dhaani(smiles)- This board….
Viplav(interrupts)- To teach u.
Dhaani(shocked)- Seriously??
Viplav- Yes! I want u to become a renowned lawyer just like me😜
Dhaani(innocently)- First of all what’s the meaning of renowned?πŸ˜‚
Viplav(in style)- Famous, just like me!πŸ˜‚
Dhaani laughs out loudπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Viplav- Accha now stop laughing and sit on the bed, I will teach u from now only.
Dhaani(murmurs)- First at least learn to teach your children
Viplav- What?
Dhaani(smiles)- Nothing nothing, u start na.
Viplav- okay.
He writes his name first on the blackboard.
Dhaani sees it and smiles.
Dhaani(smiles)- This is your name na.
Viplav nods smilingly.
Viplav goes near her and sees her writing. She is writing with all her attention on the book. Viplav is lost in her eyes.
He starts imagining something, lets see what’s in his mind.
Viplav is seen on a hill singingπŸ‘‡
Tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.
Dhaani comes running to him. He holds her back and Dhaani holds his shoulder and starts dancing while Viplav starts singingπŸ‘‡

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai..

(Dhaani smiles while Viplav continues his song along with his romantic dance)

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara..

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaaun jo tu karde ishaara..

(Next ViDha are seen in a beautiful garden full of flowers and Dhaani is seeing the flowers and plucking it for herself. Viplav continues singing looking at her lovingly)

Kabhi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushboo se takrau main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwaab tu….

(Dhaani sees a butterfly and starts running behind it and tries to catch it)

Tere mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor
Main hu soona sa ek asmaan
Mehtaab tu…

(Dhaani while catching the butterfly slips and was about to fall but Viplav holds her. He again starts dancing with her while singing)

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena gawaara

(Later ViDha are seen sitting for a candle light dinner where only they both are there, Viplav forwards his hand for a dance and Dhaani agrees. Viplav starts singing while dancing with Dhaani)

Maine chode hai baaki saare raaste
Bas aaya hu tere paas re
Meri aakhon main tera naam hai
Pehchaan le…

(He twirls her and brings her more closer to him and kisses on her forehead lovingly, he continues singing)

Sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai
Sau baaton ki ik baat hai
Main na jaaunga kabhi tujhe chodke
Yeh jaan le….

Oh karam khudaya hai
Tera pyaar jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main beheta musafir
Tu tehra kinaara
The song ends.

Viplav is imagining all this when Dhaani pats him in his shoulders.
Viplav(smiling)- Oh wow! The best dream ever!πŸ˜‚
Dhaani(confused)- Which dream??
Viplav was about to tell when Vidha comes running.
Dhaani(worried)- What happened Vidhu?
Vidha(trying to breath due to fast running)- Woh… Bua….she….fainted…
Viplav and Dhaani are shocked.
They all rush to Shaaj’s room.
The episode ends.

Precap- Sushma tells Dhaani about the karwachauth vrat and asks her to keep vrat for Viplav. Later Dhaani asks Viplav to forgive Dadaji and Kanak and make them free from prison.

73 comments

    • Mariyam123

      Mariyam123

      |Author

      Again CongratulationsπŸŽ‰πŸŽŠ U commented first again😊 If u are free can u come and make my project ready😜 Just jokingπŸ˜‚ I m seriously fed up of these projects😀 But its a good way of doing time passπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

      • Aiswarya

        Aiswarya

        |Registered Member

        Just now I finished doing my cousin’s project 😊😊now I’m free cutie where is ur house I’ll come n do ur projects 😊😊

    • Anya

      Hi Ashi, thanks for giving the link😊, i thought it wasn’t getting from my side only.but i read Ellu’s reply on yesterday’s page after sometime & saw the link also😊.

    • Mariyam123

      Mariyam123

      |Author

      Oh yesπŸ˜… I was too busy to even type the dialogues. U won’t believe but I typed the dialogues just before posting and then I posted it in a hurryπŸ˜“

    • Anya

      Hi Areeb πŸ˜ƒ Ok what happened on the last page, i mean yesterday’s page while answering my query? U addressed me as “maa’m”?πŸ˜“πŸ˜ Arey Don’t b so formal yaar. I’m not at all a formal person.πŸ˜ƒβ˜Ί

      • Areeb

        Areeb

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        HAHA. I apologize Anya. Actually, in start I used to call everyone with there names only but on knowing some are elder than me. I actually felt bad that I used to call them with their names. From that fine day.. I’ve started using ma’am for every new one. πŸ˜‚ Sorry about that faltu logic. πŸ˜‚

    • Anya

      So what yaar, wen u r friends, u don’t think abt this elder or younger thing, as long as the other person is ok with it. And with me, it’s perfectly fine, so no need to worry for thatπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

      • Areeb

        Areeb

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        Oh no actually, some friends here are more likely sisters to me. I found some more of as guide here. So better show respect in a manner – that’s only my piece of mind.
        Han lekin doston sey kon izaatt sy bat karta hai. Me to nahi karti. πŸ˜‚ But yahan I behave like a normal teen. πŸ˜‚ So a bit of difference in ‘ Friends ‘ .
        It’s alright Anya. I’ll be calling you as Anya only! Hi5. πŸ˜‰

    • Anya

      Hi 5 from me tooβœ‹πŸ˜Š izzat dene k liye bade aur buzurg hain na, doston mein to dosti hi honi chahiyeπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜„ (no offences to anyone please)

  1. Anya

    Thanks so much for the update Ellu and SORRY also for bothering u so much, i shud have remembered that u have other assignments and work also to complete, sorry again.πŸ˜’
    Coming to the epi, a super oneπŸ‘πŸ‘Œ Vips & Dhaani romancing in Vips’ dream was 😘😘😘😘😍😚😚😚😚
    I always wait for these moments btwn the twoπŸ˜„πŸ˜,the best part it was today. And yes the starting was also nice, dhaani reminiscing all the Sweet moments with Viplav,πŸ˜„πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜ My wish fulfilled so soonπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚Shalu going to become a mother😊cool one. And the precap will not let me take my eyes off the clock till 6:30 tmrwπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚y, well karva chauth for Vips,that means more romantic momentsπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‚. Great going SweetuπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ Love to u 😘😘😊

  2. Shruthy

    Shruthy

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    Blackboard scene reminded me of that scene in IKRS where she pinches his cheek by excitement <3
    She was cute when she started laughing when he said "famous like me".
    That dream song sequence tho… It made us feel being in a movie seriously πŸ˜€
    And I guess, Shalini brought some good news, hai na ? :p
    Cant wiat for the next episode. Waiting for tomorrow

  3. Anya

    Hi Renu, sorry, cud not reply back again yesterday. I’m not registered as yet but will register today. I hope it won’t b too late for ur query?

  4. Renuverma

    Renuverma

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    Elle u have written everything we wanted to see πŸ˜ŠπŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’
    Saraswathiji always said why dhani remembers bitter things n look u have shown her rembering sweet things😊😊
    Yesterday saraswathiji told u that viplav shud forgive dt n kt n today u have incorporated πŸ‘πŸ‘
    On 27rh mahi had told u to add karvachauth n look u have added it .☝☝
    Vwise thoda early ho gaya actual karvachauth mw to time hai😊😊
    Thursday is ganesh chaturthi then eud be GANAPATI STAPHNA FOR 10 DAYS THEN VISARJAN THEN 15 DAYS SHRADH . THEN NAVRATRI THEN DYRGAPUJA THEN DUSHERRA THEN KARVACHAUTHπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‹πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

      • Mariyam123

        Mariyam123

        |Author

        Di u also😭😭 Wait let me tell u that I love this song so much that I know it by heartπŸ˜… And I have first only watched many song videos specially of Sharukh’s as he is the king of romanceπŸ˜… So I knew how to write and also Maha di had once written like this only but the scenes and song were different so I had got a fair idea about how to writeπŸ˜’ First of all I wrote and now u are telling this😭 I know I m becoming too childish but I don’t like when people become suspecting😞

        I felt very bad😞 My parents go for work so they are not available to help me and even if they are available I never take their help😀 I believe that one should be independent and our school teachers also teach us the same😌 And till today whichever ff I have written, I have never ever taken the help of u all. Leave this, I have not even taken the help of my elders etc, not even my friendsπŸ˜ͺ

        I m sorry if I hurt u and Renu di but I promise I have not taken the help of anyone, but when u both told this I felt as if I had done a mistake by adding this imagination romance😭 I want to be frank that’s why I m telling this, at least if I say this I will feel light, but if I hurt u both then I m very sorry, I hope u both understand my feelings😭😭πŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺ

    • Mariyam123

      Mariyam123

      |Author

      Never😀😀 I never take my parent’s or elders helpπŸ˜’ Whether it is my project, craft, drawing, assignments or ff. My mother goes for work and my grandparents don’t know english, in fact they even don’t know the song. How will they help me?πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜’ I actually shouldn’t say this but I felt bad when u told this😭 I promise I have never taken help of anyone for writing ff😭 SacchiπŸ˜ͺ

      • Aiswarya

        Aiswarya

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        Cutie don’t cry plzzz I’m so so soooooooooooooooooooooo sorry
        I did a mistake in understanding U so sooooo sorry
        Cutie I made u cry na so sorry plzzz forgive me
        I thought that someone has given u this idea so sorry I misunderstood u
        Plzzz forgive me πŸ™…πŸ™…
        I made u feel bad na 😦😦😦
        I can’t forgive myself then how can u forgive me 😟😟😟
        So sorry Cutie
        Love u❀
        Plzz forgive me

      • Mariyam123

        Mariyam123

        |Author

        Don’t say sorry😞 Because by saying sorry I have never felt betterπŸ˜ͺ It has hurt me more😒 No need of sorry, and also I don’t want to talk with u now😭 I m hurt and till I cool down, I don’t want to talk to u😞

        U don’t know how much I struggled to write this episodeπŸ˜“ I had to leave my assignment at the side and write the episode for u all. There was no one to help me. Who would help me? And I was not going to include that imagination part but I did that for u all. I would have written an episode of 10 lines and submitted but I didn’t do that. I was very hurt when I read your comment, I never ever expected this from u😭 and one more thing, plz don’t say sorry😭 I m feeling more hurt, because I can’t even try to forgive u for that thing, when I feel better I will definitely talk with u but till then I don’t want to talk to u😭

  5. Mahaaijaz

    Mahaaijaz

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    First of all TU k sabhi sathiyon ko Maha ka big wala hello! πŸ˜€
    Louella u are giving us one by one beautiful episodes.. This one was also too lovely plus cute the way viplav takes her in room and imagined those romantic scenes was amazing.. Tere sang yaara! My goodness, u have selescted a fab song..
    Shalu is unconscious.. Let me guess, she is expecting.. Haaiina ?
    Sweetie thanks for adding vrat.. I don’t know u read about my request or not but thanks a lot.
    U are doing great just love u <3

  6. Mahaaijaz

    Mahaaijaz

    |Registered Member

    Can someone tell me what is the repeating time of IKRS or mohe rang do laal on rishte channel please please don’t ignore this comment and kindly reply..

  7. Anita Roy

    Hi Louella, ….after all the chudail episodes we went thru recently it is a nice change being romantic…after all our Vip is a master of romance isn’t he !!!.
    Nice one !!!

      • Anya

        ELLU, Sweetu, don’t feel so hurt dearie. I’m sure it hasn’t been said to hurt u in any way, it wud have been just like a passing thought yaar which doesn’t even deserve any importance. It is not that they have any doubt abt ur writing skill, what i feel is this: Actually that dream romance has been so beautifully described by u that it must have been a real surprise for them to read such a wonderfully, perfectly described dream at this age from u(don’t take it otherwise please,it’s actually a compliment to u ) and though they know more abt ur writing than me as they have been reading ur ffs much before than me. But let me tell u that it’s the first time that i’m reading ur ff and i want to say that i really really like it πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ. Reading these episodes it doesn’t seem to me that i’m reading an ff, i actually feel as if i’m watching it on TV😊😊😘😘😘😘. So please don’t b hurt Sweetie😞😒. And seriously Hats off to U that u complete all ur work be it ur projects, assignments, anything all on ur own and after that U write ur ffs also, Cooooooooool yaarπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ My bent respects to u LITTLE QUEENπŸ‘ΈπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
        GOD BLESS U ALWAYSπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œβœ‹βœ‹πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

      • Mariyam123

        Mariyam123

        |Author

        Anya di u know it took so much of time for me to type this episode😒 I had to make my assignment and it was 6. I thought I will first make my assignment and then type the episode, but then it became too late😭 And it was already 6:30. I left my homework, assignment and all other work and started typing the episode just for u😭😭 But then what did I get? I know there was no intention of anyone to hurt me but then too that comment had hurt me a lot. U know I thought I will submit my assignment today only but now I have to submit it afterwards_😭 I sacrificed for u all and then what did I get?

        Yesterday I was doing two works. One was doing my work and typing the episode, both together😭 I had not thought to write that imagination part but then I thought that first only I have posted it late so I thought to make u happy by the imagination part. But see what I gotπŸ˜ͺ I know I m becoming too childish but I am really hurt a lot. I know it is a very small thing but u don’t know how much I struggled to write the episode as well as do my work😭😭 I know that comment does not deserve any importance but just think, I had to leave my assignments and type the episode for u all, I would not even give u this imagination part but I wanted to make u all happy and check the lyrics! They are very long, and I had to also complete my homework😞 But if I get this who will not feel hurt? I m really sorry to say but telling is easy but when it happens to us it is really hurting😭 This is always told by my teachers in school. When she explains in front of everyone, we keep talking but when she sends us to explain in front of everyone, its hard😞 Thats what I m telling u. I know u felt bad but I want to be frank. And I m seriously telling that I never expected them to tell this😭 I m angry with them and don’t want to talk till my anger slows down and I feel betterπŸ˜ͺ Till then I don’t want to talk to themπŸ˜’

      • Anya

        Ellu, i can perfectly understand ur situation, what u r trying to say and what u r going thru. I know lecturing the other person and trying to say this and that is very easy but very difficult to feel how much it affects the other person. I wanted to say some things to u but i won’t. U take ur time to cool down and if u want to further vent out ur anger, pl do so, it will make u feel light and relaxed. And u can freely do so on me, anytime, anything u want to say, just take it out, i wud b more than happy to hear U, infact i wud consider myself fortunate that u thought me to reliable enuf to share ur feelings with me.

        Ok now keeping these things aside for a moment, one thing i want to say to u. Please please don’t write the update at the Cost of ur studies. I know TU and this ikrs family also has a very special place in ur life and it is for this family that u took such a big responsibility inspite of ur busy schedule just to make sure that we don’t scatter away. And it is only and only bcoz of u Sweetu that all of us r still a family. 😘😘😘😘. I Sincerely, whole heartedly have the utmost appreciation and Respect for U and i Salute ur Sincere, Selfless effort to keep this family together and to make everyone happy also upon that. But still DEAR, ur studies r ur first priority and please don’t sacrifice ur studies & ur assigns etc. for anything ( pl don’t take it otherwise). It’s ok yaar if u can’t update for a day or two. Wen we watched ikrs on tv, they used to hold the telecast for 3-4 days na, then, didn’t we all keep patience then? It wud the same here also. U just drop a msg on the previous day’s page,that’s it, ur work is over after that. I know i don’t need to say all these things to u as U urself r a very responsible person but yesterday u did this, u kept aside ur assignment for the update. And as a result u cudn’t submit it on time. Please Sweetu, pl don’t do this again. Ur studies r of utmost importance. Ok, i think i have said too much perhaps. If anything has hurt u whatever i said, please forgive me, i didn’t want or intend to hurt U at all.
        God BLESS You AlwaysπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

      • Anya

        Hi Ashi😊😊 thank u so much for all the links😘😘, two or three wud have been enuf, i wud have continued thereafter, but still thanks a lot for all of them, i’ll definitely read them one by oneπŸ˜„πŸ˜„

  8. Areeb

    Areeb

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    Episode was so good! They say.. sabar ka phal metha hota hai. 😍 Well you posted late and look what you gave! Such a cute episode. For me highlight was only

    Terey Sang Yaraa!!!!! ❀

  9. Sujie

    Sujie

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    Louellu….. Big big sorry for commenting late…..
    But theek hi hua…. Because I got time to enjoy the episode thoroughly….. ❀️❀️❀️❀️
    Dhaani…soon to be a lawyer…..superb one πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
    You know what you made me nostalgic…
    In IKRS…..we all remember there is a scene…where Dhaani gets happy seeing Viplav gifting her study materials to her…showing the blackboard ….Writing DHAANI=Shakti ……
    And I don’t know why reading that scene…… I remembered VI….PA….LA….V…. The way Viplav imagines Dhaani writing his name when he comes to know about night school….in real IKRS….
    But this scene is no less…. I really mean that you are one of my chota packet and Bada dhamakaπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ‘
    Love you for this …..
    And shaalu Ko kya hogaya…curios to know ……
    Love you and evvvvveeryyyone ❀️❀️❀️

      • Sujie

        Sujie

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        Na Na….
        πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜ love you chuttku
        Aapka hukm sarakhon par πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈπŸ’“πŸ’“

  10. Saraswathi.j

    The broad casting timings of IKRS ( Mohe rang do all ) in Risthey is 8 am,12 afternoon,2.32 to 3.2 pm of Indian time again the next episode 8 pm night.

  11. Angel20

    Angel20

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    Thank you so much for this ff😍😍 just loved it!! To the core.. AMD the imagination was awww😍😍 dil ko Chu gaya☺☺
    Keep going and shalu is pregnant of courseπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ post the next one soon!!

  12. Sujie

    Sujie

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    Good afternoon family πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
    Love you all πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

  13. Arshdeep

    Arshdeep

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    Awww Louella very very cute episode❀ That dream sequence was so lovely😍 Could imagine everything dear😍😍
    Waiting eagerly for the next episode😊
    God bless you😊😊
    Love you lots😘❀

    • Mariyam123

      Mariyam123

      |Author

      Actually I m very bad at guessingπŸ˜‚ So sorryπŸ˜… But I m getting something in my mind but not able to rememberπŸ˜‹Plz tell have I ever known u? Sorry but I m not able to guess

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