heart beat a show changed my life (epi 19) (her surprise)


Hi my dear lovely friends. One month, 13 days after I’m posting my ff. I know all r hell angry on me. But I had my own reasons.

Kiddo I’m sorry baba. See I’m here. Talk to me. I promise I never vanish like that.

This part is special. I dedicate it to my dear ikrs family. But I’m nervous as it’s first time I’m writing something like this. Now enough of my talks. Happy reading.

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Episode 18

#upmc college

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Mujhe azmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Junoon hai mera
Banoon main tere qaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Cell ringed. Ria attention diverted to her bag. She was shocked as far as she remember her phone was silent. But how and moreover ringtone of song. How it changed?

“Miss. Ria Tanweer Malhotra out of the class now.” Sir said sternly.

“But sir…. ” she felt freaking out.

“I said now. If u don’t leave then I report to principal. Out.” He said sarcastically.

She was pissed off. She was exactly like her topper bro studious. She get enraged, it’s first time sir thrown out of class. She sit on bench in front of college confused.

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shamil

Her cell( of course I mean Shravan’s) again started ringing. She received the call, without seeing called Id.

Ria in anger asked “what?”

“Mam can u pls give cell to Sir. ” other side a girl replied.

“Excuse me!! No sir only mam is here.” Ria replied.

“But mam.”

“Wrong no.”

Ria cut the call angrily. She murmured “uffo. Today people make so much wrong calls.”

Again her cell ringed. This time she got irritated as today she getting too much call.

“Hi son! Did u reached there safely.” Ria frowned. It’s aged lady on other side.

“Aunty ji I think u dialled wrong number!” She replied politely.

“No beta. I dialled correct number only. It’s my son phone. Where is he? Who are u? What’s your name?” Lady asked all in one breath.

She was tensed hearing a strange girl tone in her son cell. Ria got confused about her words. She didn’t understand what she meant. Why anyone wanted to know about her.

“My name is Ria.” She replied.

“Ria beta how is my son Shravan? Is he fine?” Lady asked worrying.

Hearing Shravan name Ria almost dropped cell. She clears all jumbles, 100 votage bulb flashed on mind realising it’s Shravan Kumar cell. She saw called Id “mom” and bite her lower lip in tension.

“Yes aunty ji. He is fine. I’m his friend.” Ria replied.

“Ok Ria beta once he get free ask him to call me.” Lady requested her.

“Ok aunty. Bye.” She replied.

Ria felt bad thinking what must Shrvan mother thinking about her. Her thoughts interrupted with a call. She decided not to receive call and sits her arms crossed across chest. But, it frequently ringing.

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shamil

She sees called id and sees her no flashing on screen.

” Idiot, duffer, stupid! You could told me about our cell swapped. But no! You didn’t.” Ria said all in go in single breath.

“Shant mata shant hoja! Look who saying, if u let me speak then I can say na.” Shravan growled.

“How mean!! You think me chatter box.” She asked with pout.

“No thinking. I’m sure you are.” He scoffed.

“Shravu ke bache I’ll kill u.” She said sarcastically.

“Look what fate come. First you took my cell with u. Then I called u to inform it and your threatening me. Your just impossible.” He said dramatically.

“Stop your nonsense. Give me my phone back soon.” Ria yelled.

“Ok baba. Calm down don’t shout my ear is paining. What’s so hurry to get cell by the way. You not have bf whose call u waiting.” He replied.

“How did u know I don’t have bf.” She asked with confusion. Then her mind flash her cell with him.

“You checked my cell. How dare you? Give me my cell back.” She shrieked.

“Your talking as if I stealed ur phone. Ok fine meet me in sunshine cafe in half an hour.” He said with sigh.

“Why cafe? It’s not date mister. I’ll see u in home after half an hour.” She said cutting the call. She smiles herself remembering her and Shravan talks. She mumble “he is crazy.”

(Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave..)

Shravan smiles remembering his first meet with Ria. A smile crept across his face recollecting angelic face of Ria. That was love at first sight for him.

( Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave..
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere…)

(Kol means with)

Malhotra mansion

Dhani is sitting on lap of Viplav in bench in front of mansion.

“Viplav leave me. Anyone will come and see.” She said tensed

“Common dhani. Pyar kia tho darna kya (when love then y fear)”

(All those under 16 close ur eyes? )

He hugged her from back. His arms lying at her waist and his chin lying at her shoulder. Dhani could feel his hot breath on her neck. He pulled her closer, her back hit his hard chest. Dhani realised something and she stiffened. Then she pushed with force.

(Now open ur eyes)

Viplav fallen on ground. He was shocked of Dhani reaction. She laugh heart out and runs seeing Viplav giving her glare.

“Sry viplav it’s 5. I have to go fm station.” She said leaving.

“But it’s only 5. You have show at 6.” He growled with pout.

“I have some work before it.” She said blushing which Viplav unnoticed. She lesves from there making Viplav confuse.

*Viplav pov*

Dhani behaving strange today. I can feel she hiding something from me. But I shrugged that thought.

It’s 6 her show time, I put earphones and heared her show. I was waiting for show end and to take Dhani to movie date. As clock striked 7 I drove my car infront of fm station. I comeout of car and about to call dhani. But Dhani moved to my opposite direction smiling. I looked the way she going and saw Shravan. They talking something and then I saw Dhani hugging him. That’s it, I fisted my clunch. Possessiveness over took me.

I started my car engine and drove my car.
* Viplav pov end*

#Tripati mansion

Viplav entered mansion with full anger. He threw vase smashing it against wall.

Dhani entered there smiling. She hugged him from back.

“Don’t touch me.” Said Viplav stiffening.

“Go back to your Shravan Kumar. He must be waiting for u. Don’t make him wait.” He growled.

“What to do you mean Vip” asked confused Dhani.

“You were hugging him and talking him so freely. Since when he came, you forgot me completely. You ignoring me.” He said sternly.

“So my Viplav is jealous.” She said smiling.

“Jealous.. why will I be jealous?.” He said with red cheeks.

“You know Viplav you look so cute when you jealous.” She said pulling his cheeks.


“Viplav come with me. We have to go somewhere.” She said pulling Viplav.

She make him blindfolded.

“Dhani what is this?” He asked confused.

“Common Vip be patient. I’m not kidnapping u.” Dhani chuckled.

“Verry funny. You know what sweet heart I would love if someone special kidnapped me.” Said Viplav in flirting tune.

“Viplav shut up and come with me.” Dhani stuttered.

“Ready Viplav open ur eyes now.” Dhani said opening his blindfold.

He sees hall decorated with white and orange veils. And small candles everywhere enlightened to it. Before he realise that it was Dhani house, light went off. Spot light falls on Viplav and Dhani no where seen.

“Every day I used to talk about love in show and I never knew I fell in love oneday.”

Viplav turned and find his princess wearing purple starpless dress looking gorgeous. His hear beat skipped to see her beauty. He looked at her lovingly as she holds mike on her hand. Her eyes evident love for him.

(Backplay song kaun tuje from movie MS- Dhoni)

(Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bharti hoon
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hu)

“Since childhood we used to fight. We were Tom and Jerry. As Jerry cannot leave without Tom I can’t leave without fighting with you. But that fight made me delighted. Fighting with u I spend my childhood which were blissful due to u.

You have special place in my Viplav. It is true we fight with those whom we love most. ”

(Hawaa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon)

“When we become singing partners was best moment in my life. I never thought I could get any space on your life Viplav. Since childhood I loved you Viplav. But my ego come infront of love. I used to faught with you. Now I realised how stupid I was not saying my feelings to you.

When I heard you love payal I was shocked. I felt my life complete. I felt as if I got treasure.”

(Meri nazar ka safar
Tujhpe hi aake ruke
Kehne ko baaqi hai kya
Kehna tha jo keh chuke)

“The competition day I wanted to pour out my heart. But that day turned everything you started to hate for my mistake. I knew you hate lie, still i lied u. But Viplav u know why I lied u. Because I wanted confession to be special. But unfortunately, you cone to know it the way I never expected.

It’s true worst thing happens to us caused best things in future. Staying away from u one month, was hard for me. I realised that time I loved you to the core I can’t leave without you. ”

(Meri nigaahein hain
Teri nigahon ki tujhe khabar kya be-khabar)

“The friendship day when u forgive me was best day. I never thought you’ll forgive me. But you forgive me. Your proposal was cutest that I vowed that day I too make something special for you. So today here I’m.”

(Main tujhse hi chhup chhup kar
Teri aankhen padhti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon)

“My heart beat utters your name Viplav. I love you. Words are less to express my feelings to u.”

(Tu jo mujhe aa mila
Sapne hue sirphire
Hathon mein aate nahi
Udte hain lamhe mere)

She kneeled down and holds shocked Viplav hand.

“I never thought fairytale story in real life. But it happened in my life. I got my prince charming. Mr. Viplav Tripati will you marry this crazy girl?

Viplav say something my legs are paining.”

(Meri hansi tujhse
Meri khushi tujhse
Tujhe khabar kya be-qadar)

Viplav was beyond shock. He never expected to see this form of Dhani. Of course why will he? Which girl proposed a guy for marry her.

He node his head. A wide grin across Dhani lips. Viplav was delighted to hear her feelings. He too kneeled down and caresses her face.

She hugs him saying ” I love u Viplav.”

“I love u too.” He replied hugging her back.

(Kaun tujhe yun pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon)

They separate and stand when they heard all friends, family members and relatives clapping and cheering for them.

Kanak and Shambhu approach to them.
“Welcome to family Dhani.” Shambhu said blessing her. Kanak hugged her. She was happy now Dhani will be officially her daughter.

“Dhani congrats..” Kritika run to her. She took him to bone crush hug.

“Dhani is my life. I swear if I saw a tear in her eyes I will not spare u. Congratulations Viplav bro.” Amit threatened Viplav. Viplav scared to see Amit possessive side.

“Ouch.. rithu maa my ears.” Viplav stuttered to see Rithika holding his ears.

“Bachoo you played with me na. What did you said that day you will I came here regularly as your life is here. I should have realised that day only.” Said Rithika growling.

“Take care of my doll Viplav. ” said Sameer. Viplav nod.

“So ladies and gentleman here you most loving couple Viplav and Dhani engagement.” Amit announced

Precap :
Dhani and Viplav engagement.


Guess master mind behind this engagement scene.

Longest chapter I ever written as compensation to month. I hope I didn’t waste your time. It took 3 hour for typing. So ur comments matter alot.
Don’t throw rotten eggs or tomatoes. I’m really sorry if it was boring.

I’m writing proposal part for first time. I’m sry it was too long. But it was necessary.

Maha are u happy now? Maria did u liked your surprise? I guess all might be happy now Vidha marriage.

Ps : I can’t write next part till jan 6. My sem exam starting on 23rd. So see u after exam.

Take care

Pls comment

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  1. woow meghs its a fantastic, beautiful, mind blowing proposal by dhaani. It is really shocking for viplav which is unexpected surprise from dhaani. Thanks for updating ur ff… 🙂

    1. Meghs

      Thank u.. I think it’s ur first comment on ff?

      Ur welcome. Keep supporting me.

    2. Meghs

      Hey welcome to ikrs family?

      1. thanq very much meghs

  2. Shanitics

    Neghs di.. Happy that fw days back I’m officially 17 ?

    Btw Is blw 16 mnkys? u have ths emotionji ?

    B\w proposal prt was ?? U naild it didi..

    Reading this hrtbeat bt hrt beat is increasing. Saachii?

    Keep going… Al d bst.. Was waitng fr a epi of ur ff.. Nw happy.. See u mu scholar on FB?

    1. Meghs

      That’s cool ur 17. Otherwise u missed that part? thank u for liking proposal part. My heart beat too raised when I write hb?

      U asked for ff. So Iwrote it yesterday in hurry. Now no more post till my xm finish ok

      See u ok fb ??

  3. Sujie

    Waah ji…. you nailed it dear….love yiu for your surprise…..
    you know what there are colorful butterflied flying in my stomach…and that special feeling overpowered me….sacchi bata rahi hoon…. I was imagining myself as Dhaani…and hai…. MIshal as Viplav….. I died thousand times reading this by blushing hard and came back to life….because I had to complete reading it….. was in my dreamland…. and song choice…. you are a rockstar dear….
    The moment Viplav smiles and kneels down as Dhaani did…to caress her face….and say I love you……. you made me blush really really hard……

    Superb episode it was dear…..excited for next episode..aur haan I will throw tomatoes filled with love for you!! Will you accept those ???
    Keep rocking like this dear…
    And yes…all the best for your exam…….lots of love 🙂 🙂 🙂 <3 <3 <3

    1. Meghs

      Glad u love it.. otherwise i thought all will kill me? lol kidding

      How sweet if u were dhani and telling those words to mishal na. I’m sure u would turn to deep tomato ?

      Imagine same scene if dhani did in real ikrs i always wanted to hear such propsal when eisha is as dhani.

      Of course i accept anything with love?

      Thanks alot. Tomorrow exam starting so see yaa

      Will update as soon exam finishes I’m hell excited to next chappy as u

  4. Maha_Aijaz

    Amazing Megha loved that sweet proposal and the way viplav bent down to cup her face fantastic!! You told me that you can’t write romantic scene but you did it yaar that too with perfection so very good??
    And finally engagement track which I was waiting for long, I bet it will be an memorable one so post it soon

    P.S: Was free so thought to comment and give you a surprise can’t type more as I’m in li’l hurry.
    Take care
    Lots of love❤

    1. Meghs

      Awwwe so sweet words. Glad u liked it. I was looking forward to ur comments

      Just saw it. Thank you

      Keep reading
      Love u?

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