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Fanna – One shot by Saghi

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HEY GUYS I’M HERE WITH AN OS…
FANNA!!

Ragini’s Pov

I was standing there like a lifeless body…He fell down on his knees…I…well tears running out of my eyes…I was there in a bridal red lehnga with white gold type color embroidery on the lehnga…
I think life is soo short…
Today was the day of my marriage and he…he messaged me…I was so happy reading that when I read… ‘I don’t wanna marry’
and there my dad MR. Shekhar Godidia was there fallen on his knees…who would think the head of DRIZZLER, one of the best fashion house owner is crying there coz of his daughter..
Well actually not coz of me but technically yes…He was crying due to me…

I ran to my room…I was now no more crying but had a face with no emotions…
I looked on my study table our picture…Our ‘Me & Sanskar’
I moved to our memory lane..
*flashback*
It was our 3rd meet…
when we met 1st time…both asked for second meet and sometime to talk..
In the second meet we said yes…It was one of the best day of my parents…
We both were sitting fighting why??!!!
Well we came for shopping for our engagement and we were fighting coz he was insisting to buy a really expensive pendent for me from his expenses and I was against it…
And we came to the conclusion that we gonna share the expense…Stubborn he is, Isn’t he??!!!
I sighed…

*Flashback ends*
As I sat on the bed I looked into my hands written the initial ‘L’.
Yes well u might be thinking why L is written…Well it was my mistake…I spoke like that…
Actually not like that…I have feelings for him still but…
Let me clear the confusion…
Well he is Laksh my childhood best friend…my first love…
I was going to tell him but I sooner realized he love my best friend “Kavya”
I told Sanskar about my feelings for Laksh in the first meet…even he did too…he loved Swara but she is married a guy named Sahil…
We decided to marry…we thought to give a chance for 2nd love…

We agreed and we agreed to a relation mind it for an Indian girl her husband’s duty is the most and here we both were going through the same situation so we decided to move on and we need to hold someone’s hand so why not we hold each other in love our fate was not with us. But guess what??!! it was with us…We actually started to like each other’s hand…we shared small gestures like kiss on forehead ,cheeks…

Both us and Families were excited for this marriage…When I heard a knock on the door and there stands him and only a name came from my mouth “Laksh”
I know I could not hold myself anymore…He closed the door turned to me…he didn’t even looked back properly when I flanged my arms around him…

And I cried. I cried…but he was there…It feels so heavenly in his arms…
I hugged him tightly and cried till eternity…
Broken I am…now I don’t have to say somethings…
Over all is over…

Laksh’s POV
Broken…I know she was broken …
I can’t see her like this
‘Shhh’ I said soothingly too her
Ragini said ‘how could he’
She just spoke this when I said
‘He doesn’t deserved u’
I hugged her…Then I asked her ‘let’s go down to see what’s going on u need to be strong right??!!’
She nodded in ‘yes’
As we descended to the hall we saw ‘Sanskar’s parents…
I clenched my jaw…
Suddenly Sanskar’s mother came to Ragini and holds her hands and continued ‘I am sorry beta…I don’t know why he said no..I’m sorry’ while crying she fell on the floor on her knees still holding Ragini’s palm..

Ragini bent down and hold her from shoulders and hugged her and said ‘aunty it was not your fault’. I took her away…

She looked at me angrily…But I sat on my knees and there I was…,
Ragini Godidia, I Laksh Maheshwarui your best friend loves u.. Hopelessly fallen in love with u.. I know u have gone through a Heart Break right now but I Laksh Maheshwari loves u. Would u give me the pleasure of becoming your life partner , to call your parents mine, to become father of your children. Would u Ragini Godidia change your name and add mines and become Ragini Laksh Maheshwari for the rest of your life. Would u be your best friend’s wife and forever’s his. Would u??!!!! Will u marry me!!! ?’ As I said everyone was looking at Ragini with full hopes I was also looking when suddenly she pulled her hands out of mine and ran to the door…And there he was ‘Sanskar’ I fisted my palms…

She ran and ran and hugged him and cried. I clenched my Jaw tight…When she came out of the hug she looked at him and slapped him and he…..He fainted…

As doctor came and checked and went…I was not at all having a good feeling…and Ragini she was sitting beside Sanskar like a lifeless doll…
When he woke she looked at him and asked ‘why he decided to call off the marriage’
and he just pointed at me…Ragini spoke firmly and just whispered ‘Laksh’…
And I … I was stunned…

Sanskar started to spoke ‘He loves u…He called me and asked this. I knew u loved him so I decided to call off the marriage. But I love u Ragini… I love u…’ he was speaking when we heard a ‘Thud’ well it was not a thud but a slap Ragini gave to Sanskar. And she spoke ‘ who r u to decide what I do, I chose, I trusted u. I moved on just to be with u be as your loyal wife, just to give u what u deserved but I was wrong… U deserve this slap. ‘

And then she came to me and spoke ‘I thought u were my best friend.. I trusted on u more than anyone but u betrayed me. I hate u…I hate u’

And that was it…I was broken, I just wanted to run from here…I was about to go when Ragini spoke ‘U guys want to know whom I will marry…??!!! I will marry non. U two r not allowed to rule my life. Just u both goo’

And we went…
We went forever. .
I lost my friendship… My best-friend…my love

Narrator’s POV

2 years …It’s been 2 years that all happened…
All is changed…
Today I’m here why??!!! I’m here on the funeral of Laksh…Yes he died…
And I’m happy coz not in this world be they met in heaven..
Who they??!!! Ragini and Laksh
Yes they died..

I still remember the date and the words and the letter of Ragini..
Just after 1 month of the call off wedding I was there in the hospital room where Ragini was lying and was living the last breathes of her life…

She told me she loved Laksh…I would had still wondered then why didn’t she married him but I’m not coz of the letter…She handled me a letter just before her dismiss..

She wrote

Kavya,

Well yes I’m kavya , the same kavya whom Ragini felt Laksh loved but that’s what Laksh wanted Ragini to feel…He loved her so much to make her confess he asked me to act like his girlfriend and why would had I said no??!!! I was their best friend and beside I loved and loves and is married to the same NIKHIL MODI…

She wrote

“kavya,

When u will be reading this letter, I might be not with u. But it’s important to tell at least once. That day after mehndi I realized I still loved Laksh and that’s the reason L yess L for Laksh was written in my mehndi as my Groom’s Initial Letter. I called Sanskar to tell him but when I called him I was about to say to him when I heard Laksh…yess Laksh was in his room…Sanskar by mistake kept the phone on and I listened to the whole conversation…I was happy…happy that Laksh loves me…When Laksh went Sanskar saw the phone and realized and then he kept the phone on his ears to clear my doubts when I myself told him Thank u for agreeing to Laksh and then I heard him say Thank u ..I was shocked. When I asked him why he told me Swara is not married. She broke the marriage coz the boy was not good. He told me he is happy and a burden left my shoulders. We cut the call… I was about to call Laksh when a knock was made.. I opened and got some reports.. I decided to open them. I was having pain in my head so I had some tests and the reports came..
Tears were felling from my eyes as I read.. It was stating I was having last stage Blood Cancer and nothing could be done and I have just some weeks left for me and I knew that medical assumptions r just approximate, they could be even 1 week or some days..But I know I have to do something. I can’t ruin Laksh’s life coz of me. I called Sanskar and told him everything. And we came up with the plan and the rest u know. I only know how I managed to say Laksh no on his proposal. How I managed to say I hate u to him. Kavya please don’t ever tell Laksh about this please…
Consider this as my last wish…

With love
Ragini”

And that’s it…She left…

She left but she shifted from Delhi to Mumbai… Why??!!! Coz she knew Laksh would try at least once…

Laksh came to know about her dismiss on New Year. How??!! Well Ragini’s b’day come on 1 January and he came to know about her shifting to Mumbai after interrogating from the local localities for month… He came to know about her when he went to DAZZLER from her father. He broke. He broke down.

His whole life turned upside down. Due to his emotional breakdown and over stress he went into depression. And 1 month ago was diagnosed of Brain Tumor. Unlike Ragini he could have been cured but he left the hope for living and died…

He died… Left us forever…

But guess it’s good…At least now he is in peace away from emotional turmoils…Life like a hell. ..

Here I Kavya taking off from my electro Ning diary with the loss of my two best friends..

Unki mohabbat ki aag mai FANNA hogayi…

Narrators’s POV end

Hey yeah guys…I know it’s sad…As said not every story have a happy ending. It’s all fictional things that Die together and all things..

As said mohhabat ki aag mai FANNA!!

With love
Saghi

Hugs and smiles…..

15 Comments
  1. Sreevijayan

    It seems today everyone has taken the quotation for sad os….very emotional

  2. Emotional One 🙁

  3. IQRA222

    Awesome os didu
    Totally agree with the wuote

  4. Follybraverl

    Oh so much emotional raglak always meant to be love…

  5. Lovely7

    Emotional one, nice

  6. Abhi142

    I have read this in fb….But there its written sameera as name …
    https://m.facebook.com/permalink.php?story_fbid=868739689849268&id=344376305618945
    Anyway..its awesome

  7. Asw

    Amazing but sad too will u update ur sadi love story ff please? Keep going

  8. Touching os and pls pls pls pls update ur Sadi love story ff please

  9. Awesome

  10. so much emotional awesome. update ur ragsan ff dr especially shaadi to love dr

  11. Richa19

    Superb yaar so emotional….. Loved it!!!!!! Awesome os! ‘!!😘😘😘

    Pls update ur other ffs too!!!!

  12. Dharani

    awesome

  13. Superb dear

  14. Asra

    amazing dear…it’s emotional dear…loved it

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