Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 14)

Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 14)

Hello, I’m back. Thank you for all your comments and support. They really made my day. I’m glad you all are liking the way the story is shaping up.

Well, here is the link for the previous segment:

This segment is in Kunj’s voice. Twinkle’s voice would be reintroduced again. I wrote this one on your demands. Anyways, hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

Are you all excited to read what’s in stock? Let’s start then.
I entered the room and found Twinkle and di talking. “Can I come in?”, I asked. Di and Twinkle looked at me as Twinkle rolled her eyes while di said, “Ofocurse Mr. Sarna.” I narrowed my gaze at di as we both burst out laughing. “Come, sit here”, di said. I went and sat beside di as Twinkle said, “I’ll go bring coffee for the two of you.” She got up and was about to go when di said, “Twinkle, you sit. I’ll bring it.” “No, it’s okay”, replied Twinkle but, di walked out of the room ignoring her. “Di”, she called out and was about to go when I held her wrist.

She turned around and said, “Leave my hand.” I nodded my head in a no and walked closer to her. She tried freeing her hand but, I tightened my grip and pulled her towards me. I softly held her hand behind her back and said, “You didn’t answer my question.” “I said no”, she replied trying to free her hand. “But, your eyes say something different”, I said and pulled her closer to me. “K..Kunj”, she called out. “Do you love me?”, I asked. “No, I don’t”, she replied looking straight into my eyes. “Does it not affect you when I come closer to you?”, I asked after she lied. “No”, she replied as I pulled her even more closer making her front touch mine. “Not even now?”, I asked. “K..Kunj”, she said. “Does it not matter to you when I’m close to you?”, I repeated myself. She pushed me away and said, “Kunj, just be in your limits. I’ve already had enough of you and I’m not going to take it anymore.”

I walked towards her while she moved back. “Kunj”, she said as her back touched the wall. “Kunj, see”, she said pointing her finger at me as I moved towards her and placed my finger on her lips. “Twinkle, please give me a chance”, I said. She pushed away my hand and said, “Don’t tell me that you want me to be here with you.” I lowered down my gaze and said, “What I did was wrong but, can’t I get another chance?” “Apply for the divorce. I’ll go before di and bhai’s wedding”, she replied pushing me away. “Twinkle, please”, I muttered but, she walked out of the room. I clenched my fist and hit it against the wall. “Kunj Sarna, you’re wrong. How could you do that to her?”, I said to myself and after sometime walked away to our room.

I was in the washroom washing my face when someone knocked the door. I quickly swiped the water from my face and opened the door. I saw Twinkle standing at the doorstep. “Your coffee”, she said. I turned around and said, “Can you please keep it on the table there?” She placed the cup on the table and was about to go when someone said, “Oh Twinkle, you’re here. Actually, I wanted to talk to the two of you.” It was maa’s voice. I turned around and asked in a choked voice, “What happened?” “Actually.. what happened Kunj? Why are your eyes so red? Did you cry?”, maa asked. I smiled and said, “Nothing. Something went into my eyes and I was constantly rubbing my eyes so, it just became red I guess.” I looked at Twinkle who was staring at me with me a surprised face. “What did you want to tell?”, I added. “Ya, I’m going to talk to Leela ji tomorrow. We’ll decide Mahi’s wedding soon”, maa said. “Maa, why so soon?”, I asked. “It’s not early at all. In fact, it’s pretty late. Anyways, I need to go downstairs. I’ll talk to both of you later”, maa said and walked out of the room.

“Did you cry?”, asked Twinkle. A faint smile covered my face as I replied, “I applied for the divorce.” She looked at me with a shocked face as I walked out of the room.

Happy Birthday Rashi! Hope you’ve a great day and an amazing year ahead. You’re one of the first few friends I made from TU. Do stay in contact forever. Love you lots!πŸ’ž

Did you all like it? Let me know through your comments. But, please I request you all to comment as that’s my support system and without your support I can’t continue this fan fic. Criticism is always welcome but, please no ill language.
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  1. Anam_sidhant


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    Hyyy ria! I dont have words for uh❀ i mean how can uh write so well i m in love with ur ff its superrr amazing😍😍 now I’m feeling bad for kunjπŸ˜ͺ I hope u ll unite them soonπŸ’œ loved it to the coreπŸ’› please post next one asap😘

  2. Maggi

    It was awsm…..luvd the last part a loads….
    Feeling very sad for kunj….it was indeed a gr8 shock…but the way u bought out his emotions were mind blowing

  3. Tara


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    the last part…. ufff cant express..
    it was so touchy.. i mean.. i could feel his emotions man.. wonderful episode of ur best..i must say…
    kunj is sooo cute…loved it completely..
    loads of love..
    take care..

  4. Kritika14


    |Registered Member

    I loved it. The last part, shit that was so touchy! I feel so bad for kunj. Loved it throughout. Write soon x Love ya idiot πŸ’•

  5. |Registered Member

    Ria di
    No long comments.
    Super shocked!
    Horrified in a sense.
    TU was real fast this tym, no?
    Anyways, hope to see a reconciliation soon.
    Love you😘

  6. Rashiverma2199


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    Thank u so much ria….
    Luv u loads…..
    I liked the episode to moon and back…..awesome amazing….. Fantastic …..superb…..
    Thanks for u lovely wishes….😍😍😘😘

  7. Baby


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    amazing ria fabulus luvd it 2 d core
    d sdn change oh god post nxt soon
    cnt w8 emotional n cute epsidoe……
    love u………. πŸ˜€

  8. SidMin


    |Registered Member

    Loved it πŸ™‚ The episode was awesome Post soon πŸ™‚ can’t wait πŸ™‚ Hope you won’t make me wait πŸ™‚

  9. Chruti1306


    |Registered Member

    Awesome β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹
    Loved it.
    Post next soon

  10. |Registered Member

    Hey ria awesome amazing fantastic fabulous superb episode…for the first time felt bad for kunj…you portrayed kunj’s emotions so well…as always damn damn excited for next episode…try to post next soon…can’t wait more…after every episode my curiosity and love to read your ff is increasing more and more…

    Love you 😍😍

  11. Sara28


    |Registered Member

    Awww I feel bad for kinj. U portray his emotions so well its amazing. Maybe now twinkle will understand kunjs worth and might come together during yuhis wedding. The
    Epi was fantabulous!

  12. foreverfanoftwinj

    Hi bq le comment kr dia
    Dosti mat todna
    Haath mein glass ghus gaya hai so zyada nhi likh sakti
    But phir bhi ur ff is amazing
    Lafz nhi hai bayan krne ko
    Ati-utaam gud

  13. Sayeeda


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    Hey Ria sorry for the late comment yrrrrr…….but seriously yrrr I loved the episode a lot …..
    The way Twinkle hid her pain from Kunj is amazing …
    Kunj’s pain is portrayed so well yrr …I’m really feeling bad for him… hope Twinj get back together….

    Anyways; it’s really a fab episode… loved it to the core ….

    love youπŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’“

  14. Zuha Fatima

    Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    So sorry Ria for being late!
    This part was rocking as alwaysβ€Ό
    Keep rocking this Fan Fiction like this only πŸ™‚
    Good going and reach heights πŸ™‚
    Stay blessed!
    Take care xx

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚

    Love u loads dear!


  15. Romaisha


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    Omg dii!
    God so sorry couldn’t comment earlier but u no my reason πŸ™‚
    The segment was simply amazing! Like i said i love emotional episodes so this one was just too good!
    Feeling sorry for Kunj though :3…
    Love you! πŸ’•πŸ˜Š

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