“”A DREAM”” (SWASAN SS by Kakali) part 16

Hii ev1,, here m with d 16th part..
Thnk u all for ur amazing response on previous parts.. thnk u to all silent readers also..once again sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors.. :0 ๐Ÿ˜€

Guyzz story has come to an end… just 3 more episodes to go….. sooo silent readers plz comment… n sorry this chappy will b short… but next one will b okk… !!!

So Let’s go inside d DREAM,,,

Link of previous chappies :::
All Parts Here

Link of d teaser ::
Here

Link of my 1st OS ::
Here

Recap-Sansakr slapped Swara….

Here we gooooo,,,,,

After three days :::: At air port,,,,,,

“Omggg Luckyyy !!! Stop yarrr !! How much u’ll Cryyyy…. ??” Says Swara wiping his tears with her fav hanky !!!

“Swaraaa !!.. Swa.raaa. why Papa doing this? I dun want to go there !!! (Cries more loudly)”

“Luckyy bass kar yarr,, how much will u cry? I already wasted 2 blankets ….. now plz stop n haaaa Waise one thing u forgot”….

“Kyaaaaaaยฟ”(still sobbing)

“Hmmmm woooo Bee !!!! U going to her country naa ยฟยฟ soo think …. Think u can meet her ,, u can see her,, u can talk with her,, u can pull her hairs too …. Thnk all this hippo … just Think…”Says Swara all this in a very dramatic way n pull his nose…..

Huhh n Lucky is Lucky only .he stoped crying in one second …. heat shows in his cheeks n it turns into red… he keeps blushing but doesn’t say anything….

Simin(Hugs him)-Bhai… i’ll miss u…plz come soon… at least before Raksha bandhan… !!! N starts to sobb…..

Lucky hugs her back “Shhh !! Simmu why u crying?shhh !! N waise bhi m not going to settle there … i’ll b back … wo bhiiii with urrrr “BHABHI” n gives a blushing smile…

Swara is watching them with tears… she has many things to share with her Hippo… her best friend… her Lucky…. but she knows life is so damn unpredictable n doesn’t give us what we exactly want….indeed she has accepted this wholeheartedly…..

Lucky-Soo now no more rona dhona… Smile okkk… !!! N Shona (turns to her) sees her in deep thinking with tear filled eyes….

“Shona u okkk naa !!?!! ”

Before he could complete Swara comes n hugs him tightly “Lucky !!! I WILL MISS U… I WILL MISS U LOTTT… PLZZ TAKE CARE OF URSELF…. …. ” n cries….

Lucky is soo shocked seeing Swara like this for d very 1st time in his life…. coz she knows her since they were in 4th standard….. they r best friend….. n he knows her very well…. but today HIS KOALA,, HIS BEST FRIEND IS NOT SAME .she seems somehow broken.. “Shhhh Shhhh !!! Shonaaa !!! (Rubs her hair to console her) Shhh !!! Dun cry yaar… if u’ll cry how will i able to go,,, U know na i can’t see u crying…. !!!!” His eyes also starts to yelled up…..

Swara hugs him more tightly n whispers “WILL MISS U HIPPO…,,,”

Lucky sence d situation is going in a wrong way soo wipes his tears n tries to divert her mind “Waisee Shona… u r saying me good bye as if M NOT U R GOING SOMEWHERE LEAVING US… !!! (Breaks d hug n looks with widend eyes) ommggg don’t tell me u r going to elope with ur Sanskuuuu…..”says n giggles….

Swara fumbles n avoid eye contact “No noo…,, i was just saying …… ” (Lucky Cuts her)

Lucky-Shonaa what happen? R u okkk?? Is anything wrong?(in a concern tone looking her still sobbing(

Swara looks at him painfully n says “NO HIPPO,, NOTHING!!! WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO ME…. m fine ….

Aur haaa “Take care of urself,, don’t eat much …otherwise think what will Bee say… !!! ”

“Luckyyy !! Come it’s time for flight… ,, ” says his Father…

“Haa Papa coming…” says he side hugs Simin”Simmu take care of urself n Shona tooo… ”

Swara again cries n hugs n bids a final good byee to her Best friend bcz she doesn’t know if Destiny will ever give her a chance to meet him or not… “LAKSHH GOD BLESS U… ALWAYS BE HAPPY !… BYEEEE… !!!

Lucky-unwantedly bids Byeeee… n goes to his parents ……

Simin’s POV ::::

When Bhai went ,i notice Swara…!! The way she talked with us today, is different…. she is behaving odd with me ,Swayam n ev1 from 3-4 days… hope she is well…. !!!

Then i wanted to talk but she gave me a lame excuse n left d place… my heart says to stop her n ask what’s wrong.?… Soo went behind her… Before i could meet her she hired a Texi n went towards a different direction which is exactly opposite to her house….

“Taxiii,,, follow that car” i took a taxi n follow Swara…

My heart almost stopped beating seeing Swara going towards hospital…. i paid d driver n went to her direction ….after that what i heard made me freeze at spot….this is just can’t happen… !!!!!!!!

POV ends :::::

Swara-Doctor Hemanshii,, may i come in?

—-:—-Dr.Hemanshi Mehra- Swara’s family doctor n school friend of Janki. !!! Knows Swara well..,,, she is d 1st one who get to know about her disease…. tried to talked about it to her friend Jankii.. but Swara made her promise not to inform it to her Family “… —-:—-

Dr.H-Swara !! U here .. at this time.. ? Everything okk.. !! I mean u okk naa ?

Swara-Doctor… !! Now m perfectly fine… but can u tell me till how long??

Dr H.-Swara u still have hope… u can recover…. !!!

Swara-How many days i have more?? (With a chocked voice)

Dr.H-Swara try an understand… u can’t risk ur life… after one week we need to do ur operation any how… !!!! Then u will b fine… u have hope …. u still have 30% chances to recover…. !!! U just need to make urself strong…. !!

Swara (blankly)-No Dr.Hemanshiii ,,, now it’s late … it’s tooo late… n i have no HOPE (Someone cuts her)

“Shonaaaaa !!! ” says with trembling voice… !!!

Swara turns around n shocked to see Simin standing at door n listening their conversation…..

“Simmmu U here !!!! “Asks Swara n fumbles

Simin Comes near Swara n hugs her “Shona!! What’s all this? How it happened,?
Shonaaa (cups her cheeks) tell me god damn it.. !!!
Why u hide it from us?”asks n Cries bitterly

Simin( to Doctor)-Dr.. Swara is fine na? Anything serious?

Doctor.H nods her head in a no “Noo, Swara is not fine… She has.. . . . . . Shh.he haa.sss A hole in her lunges…. n (fumbles)

“N What Doctor ยฟยฟ” asks Simin holding her breath….

Tears roll dowm from Swara’s chubby cheeks but she wipes it n says smiliny “N I HAVE LESS TIME TO SURVIVE”…

Simin is not at all in sense to move…. it’s like a big thunder storm make her froze at place…….!!!

Dr.H -Noo it’s not true !!!! U can survive!! U just need will power…. !!!

Simin whispers “Will power?”

Dr. H- Yes,, she can survive… !! just need an operation.. but she has left all d hope ….. it’s like she has no will to survive….
Soo we can’t operate her… !!! As we doctor can’t do anything if d patient itself no will to live…. !!! Treatment will not work on her body…sooo ”

Simin looks on shocked ……
“Dr.Hemanshi can we talk for sometime alone” Asks Simin looking at Swara with furious eyes….. !!!

As soon as doctor left d place Simin drages Swara n make her sit “Shonaa !! What’s wrong with u? Do u even know what u doing? Why r u doing this?”

Swara again stands up n walks few steps “U know Simmu,, when i got to know about my disease,, i was heart broken,,,
I never imagined God can punish me like this… !!!”

“Punishhhh!!! For what Shona?”

Swara takes a deep breath n narrates her everything … When she born how so called father disowned her…
How he make her realize that she is a curse to ev1…
she says Simin everything from start to 3 day’s before incident
…… !!!!

N after hearing all this Simin hugs her n cried endlessly…

“Shonaa !!! Why u didn’t share it with me.. ?
Why u bear this?
N this Sanskar !!! Now i just hate him !!!
How dare he slap u without listening d full conversation…. !!! I hate him”…

“Simmu fault was not only his… !!! Infect it was mine also… !!!”

“Shona still u thinking about him??”

“Noo Simmu,, m not defending him… !!! It’s just i know him…!! I can understand himm!! That day he slapped me bcz he was rit at his place… !!! He feels n knows that he has RIGHT to scold me as a friend….

(*Guyzz u all must b hating Sanskar for his last part behaviour… !!! But u all know ev1 is not same !!! Soo he is !!

That time Sanskarโ€™s state of mind was something else.
1.He was confused regarding his feelings…
2.he was frustrated due to SwaSwa closeness.
3.Then u know he is soo short tempered..
4.Overhears SwaSwa convo that to half as itโ€™s he himself confuse n thinks that both r willingly doing thatโ€ฆ
5.his most week poing his papa !!!So Sanskar hears saying Swara โ€ its better not to have a fatherโ€โ€ฆ
6.he has no idea about Swaraโ€™s parentsโ€ฆ (i said it in previous part when SWASAN 1st did friendship)
sooo as a result he couldnโ€™t take that all situations together n slapped Swara,,,
it was mainly for saying for Swara herself orphenโ€ฆas he can understand how it feels being fatherless..

Hope u all guyz understand his Situation*)

Swara continues “But when he said he like Nia,, i was feeling like kiling myself… i was happy too as he is getting what he want…but n u know what he HATEs me n doesn’t want to see my face…

N then again my Papa… !! He also said me d same thing !!!then i totally gave up…now i can’t..I JUST CAN’T ..” Says n wips her tears of eye corner…..

Swara’s talk make Simin like a statue… who can’t move n only tears r rolling down… but she composes herself …

“Shona u need to be strong,, u can’t fall weak .. u r my strong N brave Shona naa” Says Simin holding her tears acting to be strong in front of Swara…

“No Simmu !!! I can’t act anymore.. i m really tired of all this.. tired to act as brave.. now i want to sleep.. i want to meet my mom,, i wanna sleep in her lap..” Swara says staring blankly at sky.. not even showing a single drop of tears..seems she is actually tired,, needs a peaceful n good sleep where no one is to disturb her,, where no one is to break her beautiful DREAMS..

Swara wipes Simin’s tears n says “Simmu,, u know life is so unpredictable,, we don’t get what we want.. specially TRUE LOVE ….
Life always doesn’t give us proper time to fulfil our DREAMS…. !!!

But u get it Simmu… !!! Swayam loves u. !!! TRULY…i can see it in his eyes… !!! N u r blessed to get it… !!!….

After 2 days at college::::

Sanskar’s POV:::::

It’s been 5 days that incident happened… !!! When i slapped Swara !!! N it’s been also 5 days i have seen her once!!!
After that day She has stopped coming college… !!! I don’t know why m feeling like something is wrong… !!!
Why m feeling restless… like something is going to happen… !!!
God just nothing goes with MY SHONA !!!

Sanskar widens his eyes n says “What i said MY SHONA !!!! (*buddhu prasad finally realizes)

Precap- Sanskar-Don’t u dare to utter a single word from ur bl**dy mouth for my Swara !!

Other Person-U love her…

Sanskar-Yes,, i love my Shona… !!!(with a furious tone)

Swara- Sanskar,, i’ll always love u…!!

Sanskar-Noooo !!! SWARAAA U CAN’T LEAVE ME… SWARRRRAAAAAA!!!!!

Phewwwww !!! Done with d boring part.. !!! Spare me for this part.. i dun knkw what i have written… hehhh now a days it always happen with me.. !!!!

Guyzz i want to say something .. actually wanna apologize to all d writers… !!! As m not being able to read n comment… !!! Hope u all understand my problem.. !!! Extremely sorry for that…

Thnk u sooo much for reading…
God bless u all <3 <3…

70 comments

  1. Simin

    |Registered Member

    Kaku u made me emotional
    Swara’s pain is just beyond a limit
    Plz shona try to live for your simmuu ur hippo and beee

    • Simin

      |Registered Member

      Shona how can u think that your simmu and hippoo will think about themselves when u are in trouble
      I just hope kaku ki u make simmuuu and hippo’s and sanky’s confrontation and iwe set his brains right

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u Manasaaaa Diii…m soo glad that u loved it… puuut puuuut !!!!
      huhh i dun know when i can upload d next one.. huhuhu !!! :0

  2. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Oh god !!meri kachu(pikachu+kakali)…it ws sooooooo emotional yaaaar!!!so much painnn !!! ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™
    Ahhh!!!lpooor swara ๐Ÿ™
    Precap is so so sooo amamzngggg!!!finallly he realised uffff!!!sanky!!!!
    Waitng eagerly for nxt part
    Keeep rockng n stay blesssed dr ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Love u meri pyari patar patar ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Fairyyyyyyy !!!! Huhhh love u toooo !!!! waaaa my new name… *hug !!!
      haaa finally he realized but may b it’s too late !!! u2 stay bleesed dear !!! puut puuuuut !!! ;-*

  3. Radhika..

    |Registered Member

    No words to describe the part di its so dam good…. So emotional ……… The part is lovable, emotions love it di. The pain of swara is beyond limits but the power she have to survive all the things that happen to her and the way she accepted it as her destiny but one thing she do wrong but maybe the conditions are like that which make her to like to do the things the way she is doing. Will power the thing which can do anything may be give life to a person who is just at the door of death and take a person to death whom is all fit and fine. She is like living in so many people but still no one can understand her . many few peoples are there in the world who are difficult to understand really as they are a mystery to everyone.she is like a mystery whom is really tough to open up the knots which are tied not easily got open every knot say its own story. And the way u describe her character and emotions are just out of the world.u know di sometime writing such a track we even can’t make the people emotional as we r doing it from the very first chapter and till the end it is like a story which have nothing. But u create the magic from the first day till now. Every chapter have more emotions than the previous ones. Loved it wholeheartedly still so much emotional talks there is one thing which create a happy moment laksh and his bee scene loved that very much and sanskar realising his mistake. Loved it wholeheartedly .about not reading ff its nothing as u wrote ur sits ok and now concentrate on studies and no worries of commenting and all. Complete this one and do ur studies and than comeback and read all of them .
    Love u di.
    Love ur writing ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooo much My Radhikaaa !!!!
      yoooo dear Swara has gone through lots of pain..but she has to bear more…. but we dun know about future naaa… it may b blissful or huhuhuhu !!! *thinking… !!!
      Love u tooooo my sis… n haaa i will concentrate on study only.. !!! *I I captain… (appka hukum sar ankon par)… BDW i have posted a OS… check it out if u get time… !!
      Take care.. ;-*

  4. Hemanshi

    |Registered Member

    Kakuuuu loved it…..hahhahaha here also you included me…..hahhaha…..it was not at all boring…..u know even I am not posting my ff from the past 1 week๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜…..

    It was awesome……awww my swara she is soooo brave…..

    Awesome๐Ÿ˜˜
    Love u๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Hemanshiiii diiiii !!! Thnk u sooo much !!! Huhhh love u tooo !!
      Swara is brave haaa !! but till how long?? hehhhh take care of urself… okkk !! n if u get time check my new OS…
      Love u tooo… !! ;-*

  5. Maryam

    God Finally….Fortunately today I opens this N see your update…Gosh I am so Happy….Deka dil sa dil ka rishta….Episode was painful dear…
    Don’t be Confuse I am your Lady Gabbar itself….Its My paper in Monday so Can’t talk more plz pray for me…Badly Needed prayer…
    Bye dear….N take care
    Last Visit to the Site…Bye Folks N my Dear Ms. Murderer too…

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Ladyyyyy Gabbaaar !!!! “Dil se dil ka rishta” … awwww !!m soo happy to see u..*hug! huhhh u again not there to see my reply for long… will miss u…
      God bless u dear n my prayers r always with u.. !! ;-*
      No byeee !!! we will meet soon…
      till then stay blessed n rock ur answer sheet.. !!!

  6. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    It’s so emotional,mummyyy๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ.. Aww,my poor doll๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ…Loved it dear… I have no words to describe how is it!!!.. Lucky,you are gone in love…Micaa, take care of your lucky darling๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰… Keep it up dear.. Waiting for nxt..
    Take care
    Keep smiling๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaa Thnk u sooooo much my Umaaaa !!!! m sook glad u loved it dear !!! *pull ur nose… !!
      u2 stay blessed… n keep smiling that tooo battisi nikal keee.. :3:0

  7. Mica

    |Registered Member

    Kakuuuuuuuuuuuuuu….please send back hippo to Shona *release hippo’s hug..
    huhuhuhu..shonaa never give up please!
    Simmu and Dr Hemmu please take care my Shona and the writer..
    since the writer has dramebazz disease..*crying
    i knew somehow Sanskar was rite as his acknowledgment, but slapped a girl ? just kinda coward…

  8. Chanu

    |Registered Member

    Urrrggggggg…. kakuuuuuu…. *yelling soo furiously
    I knw u planing 2 do dis.. hawwww soo bad soo bad!! !!
    u r nt a gd siso.. u make me cry!! :, ( :'( ๐Ÿ™ u shdnt hv dn dis.. huhuhuu
    Hole in lungs. Awww.. my poor swara. Do u hv any dushmani with my swara.. huhuh..
    bt dr I ddnt see any symptoms na!! Thinking…. (chest pain , breathing difficulties , skin discolouration , high heart rate ect ect..) ohhh god!!! Banging my head with pillow!! No no its nt gd.. banging myvhead with stove. Hw cdnt I notices it.. hawww… u show us al dat bt being a idiot I ddnt see dat.. shit. *pout..
    its k.. kaku.. nw u hv 2 make my swara brave. And do dat surgery or else.. I dnt like 2 think abt it.. ; (
    Kaku..
    its my warning I dnt wnt sad ending here.. at least nt in kakus story. Wรฌth puppy dog eyes hey hey dnt dare 2 close ur eyes again.. *holding a broom stick. ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Simmu.. I lv u.. nw u take care f swara.. and im sure u gonna do it..
    awwww.. dis lucky!! So cute dr..
    I rly lv their frndship.. soo true and eternal one.. ;-* :-*
    Omg.. once again he s blushing heeh heee *pull his cheeks..
    And finally my buddhu sanskarko samaj aya!!! Fuuffuuu.. thank god!! Oh no no thanks 2 kaku.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Yaa.. I cn understand my sankys situation. Mei nahi tho auล• kun mera sankyko understand karegii.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ bt im angry he sdnt hv slap her..
    lvly emotional heart touching epi dr..
    u hv headache.. nw after reading dis I hv heart ache. Huhuh..
    keep writing
    be happy always
    lv u..
    โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanuuuuuuuu !!! Finally m giving u reply.. !!! awwww i made u cryyy.. yeeeeiiii m soooo happy… *do nagin dance in happiness… !!!
      huhhh m not a good sis…whattt *breakdown…n crying on footpath….
      hahhh u noticed rit… i show all d symptoms in some epi…–: like changing skin colour with pale face n dark circles…
      –:Feeeling sudden pain at heart.. !!!
      –:Breathing heavily…
      hope u remember.. !!!
      Huhh dun scare me with ur beautiful saaa angry faceee *hide under bed..

      Hahahha their friendship is inspired bt my own life.. !!! *hug my besty.. !!

      huhuhu Finally he realized but why m feeling like it’s tooo lateeee !!! *shrug my shoulder with a innocent face…

      Ommmggg heart acheeee !!! Doctor Kakali*temporary…
      one heart patient need urgent ear operation…puuut puuut ;0;0 :P…
      Thnk u sooooo much dear !!! love u toooooo…
      Stay blessed… ;-*

      • Chanu

        |Registered Member

        Huhhhuu!!! Kakuuuu????
        U r happy and u doing nagin dance bz I cried!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ omg!!!
        I never seen a siso like dis.. *looking at u disbelieving
        huhhh…
        heee hee my cutey dnt cry… u r my gd siso.. :-* bt I lv da way u cried.. cn u plz repeat dat!!?? ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Huhuhuh.. no naaa… I ddnt notice it b4.. idiot me… nw nly I realised. ? Again im banging my head with pillow. I hv a headache soo nw ill stop banging head.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›

        cm out 4m ur bed.. im nt gonna leave u if u gv sad ending. Urrggg. * stick in my hand.

        uffffff.. kaku I knw its too late.. bt smthng is better than nothing na.. soo I said like dat..bt ur wrds ssceard me.. *hiding

        ear operation!!?? *clapping. Waa kaku waaa… ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ thank goฤ u ddnt choose ur profession as a doc.. or else poor us.. dnt knw wt ll hpn.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜›

        be happy always
        lv u..
        โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Ohhhh Goshhhh Chanuuuu plzzz don’t stare mee like this… !!! *blush…. huhuhuu !!! whattt u loved me when we cried… mu God now it’s proved we r seriously sisters that tooo loat in fair.. !! *chuckle… !!
      haa u have head ache like meee… take care dear !!!
      Yaa me2 scared thinking about u alls reaction upon my next part… God knows how will I survive.. !!!
      huhh dun tease me i will surely b a temporary CON-DOCTOR.. !!! *Run.. !!!
      Adore oya… !!!! ;-*

      • Chanu

        |Registered Member

        Hey heyits me who staring at u nt our sanku… soo dnt blush.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›
        u look soo cute while blushing. Awww.. *pull ur cheeks , pinch ur nose and kiss u
        hee hee..
        Obviously we r sisters!
        Huh!! Yup… I too hv headache. ! Oh I 4gt 2 ask.. did u read my last epi rply 2 chandus cmnt..
        im that I ask u 2 dnt do smthng and ect ect… soo did u do all da things like gd grl or u intentionally 4gt dat.. ha!!?? *waiting 4 ur ans with hands in my hips , frowning face.

        Huhh.. nw im more sceard f ur nxt epi.. huhuhu.. I think it’s better 2 book a hospital bed 4 me 4m nw on.. *helplessly looking at u..
        hee hee.. cn doc!!?? U r rly cute kaku… dnt run nw.. *chasing behind u
        adarei oyata godaak!!!
        โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanuuuuuu i read ur reply dear … n m doing as u said … *I I CAPTAIN… !!!
      huhhh u r Chanuuu not my Sanksar to kiss meee… sooo plzzzz *shyy n hard blush …
      Yoo yooo u can book for me2 a bad… coz m sure after reading next part people will eager to kill me… n i will become a patient …. *sobbing…
      Don’t run behind me okkk !!! *start my punctured rocket to take off … !!!
      huhhh !!! Love u…. ;-*

  9. SNY

    |Registered Member

    Don’t dare to tell it is boring it is rly awsm sis……..
    It was a good epi with lots of emotions……

    Plz unite swasan don’t separate them…..
    And myself yaz……

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Ohhhh God Yazzzz !!! dun scare me okkk !!! Thnk u soooo much dear !!!
      N will update soon … !!! just gimme some time.. !!!
      N about SWASAN… heeh dun know what will happen… coz desting is soo damn crural in aome matter u know… *curse myself.. :0 ๐Ÿ˜›

  10. Shashi

    |Registered Member

    awesome. u made me cry kakali. it’s too emotional. i think that istupid idiot sanskar will come and rescue our swara. huh! don’t blame me for calling sanskar idiot a nd stupid. waiting for next epi and onece again all the best for your exam. GOD MAY BLESS U TO GET FLING COLOURS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Shashiiiiii !!! Thnk u soooo much dear !!! no nooo dear dun cry.*wipe ur tears….. n huhhh infect i also call Sanskar idiot n dumboooo… *beat him with pimpom ball.. !!!
      once again thnk u sooo very much for ur good wishes n blessings dear… it means a loottt !!! Take care… !!! God bless u.. ;-*

  11. Monesha

    |Registered Member

    Omg…… My sweet heart is going to end but why this is not fair yaar. I really love your ff. But you are going to end ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž feeling very bad. I am really sorry sweety now only i came to this page then i read each and every episodes which i missed. You are really great darling. You rocked it…… Hats off to your talent. You are my sweet and cute multi talented friend. Love ๐Ÿ’— you a lottttttt……… Loads of huggggggggs and kisses to you ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ take care.

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Moneshaaaa !!! feeling sooo happy to see u back dear !!! ;-*
      Nooo dear actually i need to end it coz m leaving in some days from this site … sooo !!!
      i missed u a lot.. !! Thnk u sooo much for ur cutee sa comment .. it means a lotttt !!!
      Love u tooo… Lotss of chocosss n bear hugssssss for u…
      Stay blessed dear !!! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soo much Vyshu !! everything will b all rit dear !! just gimme some time.. !!!! n dun b emotional.. otherwise *landslide bcz of tsunami. ๐Ÿ˜‰

  12. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    It was awesome Di …. It really brought two three tears in my cute cute eyes … And a big sorry for this much late comment… My exams r going on so just got a little break between studies abd read this … Ab yeh mat kehna ki no nerd to read all this go and study because m already doing that … And di mujhe yeh bata that when will u post next one …. Aur when r u going …. Oky let me take a leave now and I need something from u … All I need are ur infinite wishes …. Lov uh Di … Bubyee take care…. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Cutieeeeeee !!!! .U hereee *beat u with imaginary cotton ruler… !!!
      Huhhh my good wishes n blessings r always with u.. !!! i know u will do ur best n will make me n us proud… !!! sooo m taking chill pilll !!! .
      Love u toooo dear !!! i know break is needed… n u should take it for sure… !!! Thnk u sooo much dear !!
      n dun cry *wipe ur tears !!!
      about going .. when i will complete my SS … it’s just 2 more episodes to gooo… !!!
      Stay blessed Cutieeeee !!!! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooo much Aasthaaa !!!
      next part will update soon dear !!! just need some time… !!
      Be ready with hanky for next chappy.. !! ;-* ;P

  13. Mahjabeen

    |Registered Member

    Kakuuuii my darls wat is dis…u made me cry…i ws soo mch happy fr my last test nd u made me cry…huuuhhhh i hate u..i wont tlk to uu gooooo*sobbing…kutttyyy kutttyy kuttty๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข
    Nd dis stupid sansku cnt he act by thinking..he slapped my shona nd again hurted her..i will nt spare him๐Ÿ˜‰ epi ws awesome kaku..loved it..nd loved hippo nd shonas moment its was soo painfulll…waitng fr nxt egrlyyyyy
    Love u๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Stay blessed
    Tk crr๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Mahuuuuuu !!! welcome back dear !!!
      waaa how was ur exam??
      how was ur papers?
      how much u gonna carry?
      goshhhh !!!!
      hyhhh dun cry my Sis*hug n wipe ur tears.. !!! last test .. yeeiiii *lets dance.. !! ;3
      Thnk u sooooo much dear !!! m soo glad u loved it.. !!!
      Love u toooo dear !!
      God bless u.. ;-*

  14. Mahjabeen

    |Registered Member

    BTW sry fr dis mch late fr cmmnt darls… my exam ended ystrdy only but u knw m soo lazy i ws sleeping so peacefully…well say how r u pikachhhuuu darls??? Ur test ended??

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Mahuuuu dun say sorry ever okk !! u can never b lateee.. !! mind it.. !!! :0
      hahhh not only when my test ended i was sooo lazyy n slept almost 8 hours.. mostly i get 3-3 n half hour… but that day i seriously took a long nappp… n it was sooo pleasurable… !!!
      huhhh now m totally fine but my head ache never leave me alone… !!! huhuhuh yoo my test ended last week n now m roming here n there … ;-*

  15. chandu

    OOh….GOD!!! I THINK i AM MORE DEPRESSED THAN SWARA…READING HER PAIN…!!! this episode completely blasted my heart…!! Those lines about ‘DREAM’ are soo touching…!! Yaaar…!! Dr.Kakali…if something happens to swara…I am definitely going to make you patient in apollo…!!! This is my final warning…!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanduuuuuu !!! why u depressed dear? *take ice cream.. !!!
      Patient in aplollooo woo woooo !! * :0 :0 :0 :0 :0 :0 :0 :0 ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ :o… Thnk u sooo much dear !!!
      i m ready for that.. !!! ;*

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