Devakshi OS: Thank You Dad

So I am back with this OS. So lets start,

A voice is heard,: people say that love happens at the first sight but for us, it was hatred turned to love…
Flashback starts,
A big college is shown and all the students are getting inside for their lectures, some are there who are just interested in bunking. The lectures start,
Teacher: yes Sonakshi, tell me this answer.
A girl in her early 20’s gets up and answers the question correctly.
Teacher: very good dear!
Sonakshi smiles and gives a death glare to a boy.

Now Dev you get up, and answer the next question.
A handsome boy gets up and answers the question correctly.
Dev gives a death glare to Sonakshi.
Teacher: very good both of you! I am very eager to know, whether Dev or Sonakshi will win the best student award this year in studies. Dev and Sonakshi look each other determined. The lecture ends. Everyone leaves for the canteen whereas Sonakshi comes to Dev,
Sonakshi: just wait and watch, I will only win this award.
Dev: haha! What a joke!! You wait and watch!!
They both turn other side and leave.

Days passed by and they started preparing thoroughly for their exams which would decide whether they will win the award or not! They both often used to fight because of their competition. They both never believed in love as their main focus was just to win the award. Whenever they met they had a competitive spirit.

Only a month was left for their exams, to prove themselves. Their teachers always used to support and guide them in their studies. Sonakshi used to live alone in her 1BHK. Whereas Dev used to live with his parents.
One fine day as Dev was jogging in the park as per his daily routine to refresh his mind, he saw a girl sitting on the bench crying with her head down stuck in her knees. He goes towards her and tries to recognise her. And looking at the features of her body, he could quite easily recognise her. She was none other than Sonakshi! Sonakshi did not even feel someone’s presence as she was so deeply engrossed in crying. He keeps hand on her shoulder, she feels someone’s presence and lifts her head up to see whom the hand belonged to! To her surprise he was Dev.
Dev: what happened Sonakshi? Why are you crying? You can share it with me.
Sonakshi sobbingly says: my fa… father died.. and she cried.
Dev: what?? But how? What happened?
Sonakshi: he was suffering from cancer. And I came to know that today itself that he was suffering from cancer. He didn’t tell me, so that I don’t lose out on my studies. And she cries terribly.
Dev: and your mom?
Sonakshi: she died when I was three. I don’t even remember her face. I miss them. And she continued crying.
Dev was shocked that all these years they were studying together but they didn’t know anything about each other.
Dev: so where do you live and with whom?
Sonakshi: I live alone in my flat, she said sobbingly.
Dev: come with me… I will drop you home.
Sonakshi: no… its ok..
Dev: you are coming with me and that’s final. Sonakshi had no other option but to go with the person whom she never liked, not personally but because of their competition. The one whom she always criticized and wanted to defeat him. Dev also had the same feelings for her but after all he was good at heart. He took her to her house and consoled her for sometime. Till the time she stopped crying.
Sonakshi: actually I will have to go to Chandigarh as its my native place. where my father was living all these years for the last rituals. So I will meet you later.
Dev: I will also come with you. I cant leave you alone like this.
Sonakshi: what do you think, uh? I am not strong? I cant go alone? You are wrong Mr. Dev Dixit.
Dev: I didn’t mean that. I just said seeing your condition.
Sonakshi: thanks for your concern but I can go alone! I don’t want your favour.
Dev: its not a favour, its just that you are in a trauma so…
Sonakshi: I am fine.
Dev: but still I will come with you, whether you like it or not!
Sonakshi: I said no!!
Dev: please don’t take it in a wrong way, I just want your safety.
Sonakshi: but why?? Do we have any relation that you care..
Dev was speechless.
He didn’t know the reason of his concern! Then was it love? No.. it cant be because they always hated each other. So love is impossible. Then what it was?

Finally after convincing Sonakshi he went with her. They reach Chandigarh.
Sonakshi’s aunt: come beta Sonakshi… and who is this boy?
Sonakshi: he.. he..
Dev: aunty I am her friend.
Sonakshi’s aunt: ohh.. only friend na??
Sonakshi: of course! What else?
Sonakshi’s aunt: nothing.. come in… your father was a very brave man, she said with tears in her eyes.
He survived cancer for almost 2 years but then finally gave up. He warned us to tell you this because he never wanted your studies to stop. He wanted to see you win that award. That’s why he never let you know about him. I miss my bhaiyya.. she said crying.
Sonakshi was broken from inside, and she thought to herself that she will somehow win the award and fulfil her dad’s wish. She looks determined at Dev. Dev consoled her aunt and Sonakshi.
Dev: she will surely win the award for her father. Haina Sonakshi?
Sonakshi was shocked hearing his words, she nods in yes.

Some days later after completing all the rituals, Devakshi go back to Mumbai. They continue with their studies, they no more hated each other. They became close friends and they both helped each other in studies. Dev helped Sonakshi a lot and was determined to make her win for her dad. Their friendship grew in this one month. They both loved spending time with each. They both loved hanging out together. They both had started feeling for each other. A lot many changes happened in this one month. The whole college was surprised seeing this change. They never thought two enemies would turn such good friends. Dev never let Sonakshi miss her parents.
After one month it was their exam time. They both did well in their exams and were waiting for their results to be out. As they had prepared a lot. The college had organised a farewell party for all the students. All were very happy for it. They were very excited. Sonakshi and Dev also were very excited. The reason for their excitement was different, they both wanted to confess their love to each other that night.

Farewell Party,
All were dressed up well and one could see Dev looking very handsome in his dark blue suit. His eyes were just searching for Sonakshi. And then she enters in her peacock blue gown, she was looking gorgeous. Each and every boy was flat on her. Dev was mesmerised seeing her beauty. She just couldn’t stop staring her. Sonakshi moves towards him making all the other boys jealous. Sonakshi blushed hard looking at Dev who was just continuously staring at her.
Sonakshi: Dev..
Dev: hmm.. let me look at you first… he realises what he just said and tried to cover up.
Sonakshi: ok… you are looking pretty handsome..
Dev:thanks and you are also looking gorgeous, seems like an angel has stepped out from the heaven.
Sonakshi blushed hard and says: Dev…
They were standing together enjoying each others company. There was an announcement made that a paper dance competition is to be held and everyone should chose their partners. Many boys came to Sonakshi asking for dance but went back with sad faces as it was quite obvious that she will dance with none other than Dev. The same happened with Dev, the girls had to go back. They didn’t even ask each other, it was just obvious. All the couples were given a piece of paper on which they had to dance. The winning couple had to perform a dance in front of everyone.

The song played, Sonakshi and Dev were dancing very happily, the rule was they should not step out of the paper. The song stopped and some of them were out. They now had to fold the paper and they did so. Again Devakshi were lost in dancing, they didn’t notice anything about the outside world. The song stopped and they again folded the paper. Now they were very close to each other because of the short piece of paper. Sonakshi was standing on Dev’s feet and they both were dancing lost in each others eyes. Some time later when they had no place to stand, Dev picked up Sonakshi in his arms, that was so sudden that Sonakshi didn’t get the time to realise that her feet was now not on the ground. She blushed and they were lost in each other! What else they wanted?! Suddenly they hear everyone clap and come out of their world. They realise that they had won! They both smiled and Dev spin Sonakshi in his arms. Sonakshi was never so happy in her life. They happily went on the stage to dance. The song played tu hi tu from the movie Kick.
Tu hi tu har jagah, aaj kal kyun hai
Tu hi tu har jagah, aaj kal kyun hai
Raaste har dafaa, sirf tera pataa
Mujhse pooche bhala kyun hai
Naa main apna raha, naa kisi aur ka
Aisa mere Khuda kyun hai
O.. o.. o.. (repeat x2)

Dheeemi dheemi aanch pe jaise
Dheere dheere jalta hai dil ye,
Beqarari kyun hai ye khumari
Kyun hai awaargi kyun hai har mod par
Naa main apna raha
Naa kisi aur ka
Aisa mere Khuda kyun hai
O.. o.. o..
Dev and Sonakshi were dancing closely. They both were again lost in each other. They never wanted to stop. Dev spin her, picked her up… and finally as the song ended they hugged each other. Dev slightly kisses Sonakshi’s hair such that no one notices it. But it doesn’t happen! Everyone notices it and start hooting. Sonakshi was feeling very shy. She blushed harder. Dev sat down on his knees and takes her hand in his,
Sonakshi, such a sweet name! I have always hated you because there always had been a tough competition between us. But as the time passed by we became friends, our friendship grew and I didn’t realise when it turned into love. I love you so much Sona… this is the name I want to give you my sweetheart. And for all this I will want to thank your dad! Because of him we came closer! Will you be my partner in all phases of my life?
Sonakshi was teary eyed, she said yes happily. Dev’s happiness had no boundaries. He picked her up and spin her and kissed on her forehead. Sonakshi shies and says I love you too… and she also looks up and says thank you DAD! Flashback ends.
The girl who was remembering all this was none other than Sonakshi. She was at her home waiting for someone special to pick her up. And she runs out hearing the horn. The boy on the bike was none other than Dev. He gets off the bike and they have a hug. They both sit on the bike and leave for their college! Yes!! It was the day! The announcement of who won the award!! All knew it would be either Dev or Sonakshi. They both were also very excited. Dev was day night praying that Sonakshi should win the award whereas Sonakshi wanted to win as she wanted to fulfil her father’s dream but on the other hand she also didn’t want Dev to lose! They were waiting for the award now.
It was announced that this time there are two instead of one who are sharing this trophy. And they both were none other than Dev and Sonakshi! Everyone clapped for them, they were very happy!! They hugged each other and went to take the trophy.
Dev to Sonakshi: its good that we both won it otherwise what would have our children thought? Their mom is more intelligent than dad?
Sonakshi blushed and said: you!!! And they again hugged each other.

The story ends…

Pheww! My hands are paining now. So here was the story, hope you all liked it! If yes then please do comment! Maine bohot mehnat ki hai yaar!! Daya khana mujh pe… haha but seriously I need your comments, even the silent readers. And if you don’t have time to comment then at least press the like button! When I come back I want to see this page flooded with comments…  love you all…

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  1. Asmita...

    Same u posted for EDKV… nice talent of just changing the names and keep posting fir various shows…

    1. Angel20

      Thanks btw! I love both the shows that’s why I posted it! Only for these ‘2shows!’

    2. Angel20

      And if you read it then you should have commented also before commenting about this talent!

  2. Hey Maria di!
    Awesome yet again! Read the one for EDKV as well, but I seriously liked this one better! After all, it’s Devakshi!
    M hoping for more of these from your side!
    Loads and tons of love!?????

    1. Angel20

      Hey darling…
      Thank you so much for reading both of them☺☺ I’ll surely be back soon.
      Love you❤

  3. Just a fabulous episode please keep writing OS I am become a fan of your OS I am desperately waiting for your another OS just love it…?

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Princess☺☺ omg!! You are my fan, I’m so glad… Yeah I have a story in my mind will be back soon…??
      Love you❤❤

  4. Ali


    1. Angel20

      Thanks ali☺☺

  5. Manya

    Love love?

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Ayushi☺☺???
      Love you❤❤

  6. Simplesweety1

    Wow! I Loved It! You Are An Awsm Writer! Do Write More Stories On Devakshi! 🙂

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much dear☺☺??

  7. Rj12

    It was amazing I read the edkv one but didn’t comment and both were good

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much☺☺

  8. stupendous and epic one……..?❤??????????❤???????❤?❤…… was awesome and a treat to read……loved it…….???❤????❤??????

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Maleeha☺☺???????
      Love you❤❤

  9. Rockzzzzzz

    Ur hard-work can be easily seen….it was fabulous…can’t be better than this…loved it….post something new soon

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much☺☺
      I’ll post soon.
      Love you❤

  10. Bhoomi

    Superb Maria ….. Loved it….. Soo sweet????…. Write more ?…

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much☺☺??
      Love you❤

  11. Saheli

    Read your story…touching…brought tears ….nice emotions…nice portray of characters…??????????never read u please continue writing….waiting for next updates????????????

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Saheli☺☺??
      I’ll continue dear…
      Love you❤

  12. Aaru

    Awesome OS..luvd it..

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Aaru☺☺

  13. Caira

    Loved it❤?????

    1. Angel20

      Thank you Ciara☺☺

  14. Apurva

    Awwww…. sweet one dear

    1. Angel20

      Thank you Apurva…

  15. Awsm episode yaar. ..
    Liked it so much
    U know I M in class 10th now and one of the two toppers of my school (atleast from the last 10 yrs)
    Another one is a boy for whom I have worst of feelings including enviousity anger competition along with haterd…?
    In fact the whole school gives examples of our enmity
    And in the beginning i found the story quite linked to mine…
    But heaven knows we can’ be lab partners even in fact can’t even stand side by side..not for a minute even
    It was my life version but
    when there is Devakshi ,Twist ought to be there…
    Luved to the core our so called Mr obodro’s care and concern …???
    U know wat when the result was gonna declared even my heart was throbbing hard…And stopped only after reading that Both are winners..
    The paper dance was soooooo…. romantic ???????
    Luv u loads and Double of it for Ur awsm OS….❤❤

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Juhi☺☺ oh really?? OMG!! My story is linked to your life. Ohho you have enormity with a boy! Study hard! Lets see whether you both haters turn into lovers?? just joking.. but seriously I can’t believe it… And you are in10th I just gave 10th(2016) so I’m elder to you by 1 year lol?? and all the very best for your exams… And if at all you two turn friends then do inform me☺☺ so friends? And lastly thanks so much.. and all the best I hope you defeat your enemy??
      Love you❤❤

      1. Of course dear
        I consider U and all Devakshians my best of friends
        And I don’t think that within the remaining three months Me and Vishal wud be friends
        For we don’t consider each other anything other than competitors, not even classmates…
        But U are already my gud friend(right?)…???
        And post more such nice OS
        Waiting eagerly for Ur next OS
        However U know Di today we had a competitive exam and that to a group one and our school sent we both along with two others who are quite dumbo in maths.. Only Me and Vishal solved almost the whole question paper and even I can’t believe that 2gether and that to without a single quarrel! !!!!
        Anyways that doesn’t mean any less of rivalry. .
        The results are to be on Tuesday…
        Hope we do gud..
        Otherwise there gonna be another blame game…
        Anyways Bye gud night Di…?
        Faltu me aapka kaan paka diya hoga maine mere bak bak se. ..
        Sorry for that…??

    2. Angel20

      Are kaan nahi pakaya..
      So you both were together today without any quarrel??? you should go ahead and ask for Friendship Na.. three months me to ho hi jayega.. friendship karli, then you both can help each other in studies also Na…
      And I’ll pray for you that you win, don’t worry there will be no blame game…
      And yaa we are best friends… No need to ask…
      Vaise where are you from? Just asking and what’s the name of your school? Don’t think that I’ll visit your school.. aise hi puch rahi hu??
      Chalo bye good night.. all the best for your results.

  16. Awesome. Loved it. ??

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Dolly☺☺

  17. luv the most.

    1. Angel20

      Thanks Niki!

  18. Yashfeen

    Heya…u r too gud in OS..I jst loved it..

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Yashfeen☺☺

    1. Angel20

      Thanks Raya??

  19. It is copied from a short story book

    1. Angel20

      Yeah it is only inspired from that book, because even I haven’t read the entire story! It’s not copied just the start is same!

  20. Erina

    Awesomeeeee OS swtheart ??????nd* chooolyyy sachiii vali kaan pakar k ????*bcse i haven’t commented naa

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much darling?? vaise kaha ho? Itne din se baat nhi Hui??

      1. Erina

        Swtheart mainu bht projects banane h islye thora bsy hu vaisa aap kaise ho thik ho abhi???? Hows ur pain swtheart????? . Aapne rply nhi kiya??? thats why maine koi baat nhi ki….. But seriously maine abhi kch din aur tk nhi aa skti i guess y mera last convo h aapke sth but see u soon swtheart till then take care, bye nd love u ?????nd miss u too ???
        With loads of love to my swtheart

    2. Angel20

      Awwww I’m so sorry for not replying you.. actually I was busy.. and my pain has vanished now! Thankfully! Last convo… Aisa Na kaho… So all the best…. And be back soon…
      Love you darling…❤❤

  21. Tessie

    Unbelievable.. Just awesome from the very start to the end.. Loved it ..
    Dev and sonakshi came closer just coz sona lost his father n that was the right tym for someone to b ther for her.. Compltly good thought..
    The paper dance part was more awesome.. Wish they show this in serial to for devakshi.. Imagining ur story was not difficult at all just went with the flow as it was very interesting plus so romantic.. The farewell party the dance.. the proposing part was just incredible.. When it came to its ending i tot sona wil win obviously.. But there to u showed both are deserving.. It was mind-blowing dear.. Feeling so good reading ur ff.. In just one go it was done.. Thank you for taking tym to write this.. For us…

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much di????
      I’m so glad that you liked it.. really a pleasure..☺☺ I’m so overwhelmed?? thank you so much again for reading and appreciating it!! I’m really glad that you found worth reading it???
      Love you❤❤

  22. Tessie

    Sorry.. Typ error..
    As sona lost her father..
    Writers get inspired from othr books only so no mattr u started with some help may b but ur imagination skills n efforts to write it for us.. Turing it into devakshi for us..
    Pouring more of ur love into it and imagination ofcos.. Jus for us hats of to u.. Thank you maria..

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much for supporting me??? and welcome as well??

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