my betterhalf (Episode 1)

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Hlo! I m giving first update of this ff. Let me know your views through comments. Kindly ignore mistakes.

My better half
Epi 1
Maheshwari industries
A calm environment of an office can be observed. Everyone is busy in doing the work assigned to them. Then only one can see a man in his mid twenties entered inside and everyone wished him and he just nodded by giving small smile. As he was moving towards his cabin then only he collided with some one.
Girl: I m so sorry sir.( she said immediately as she looked at the man)
Man:its all right. Be careful.( he simply replied moving ahead)
But ragini was lost in him and was thinking

Ragini( monologue): OMG sanskar sir you are very handsome. I just love you.( she blushed)
Sanskar’s cabin—
Sanskar was seen annoyed.
Sanskar: what the hell!!! Why there is no reply since morning.
Then only there was knock on the door.

Sanskar: yes come in.
Ragini entered holding a file. Before she could say anything sanskar asked.
Sanskar: what is today’s schedule.( still busy in mobile)
Ragini: sir you need you check the presentation of different employees and choose the best one for meeting. Then there are some files which you have to sign and lastly in the evening you have a meeting with foreign delegates.
Sanskar: alright then let me check presentations first.

Ragini: sure sir. I will Hans over you within few minutes.
Sanskar: OK.
Ragini let the cabin and sanskar again checked his mobile and got irritated with the ignorance of the person he wants to talk.

Mumbai
Apartment.
A small house is seen with one bedroom,hall and kitchen. A girl of about 24-25 years is doing packing as of she was going somewhere.
Girl: is everything ready Rita.
Rita: yes swara mam everything is set you need to leave for airport as your flight is after an hour.
Swara: yes yes I m ready. Let’s leave I m damm excited to see everyone’s surprised faces after my visit.

Rita(she is swara’s PA): mam you didn’t inform anyone.
Swara: nope. Everyone might be expecting Me to come next month as I had informed but as the recording of my next song is delayed then why not to surprise all.
Swara and rita left for airport.

Next epi: swara come to Kolkata. Let’s see what happen.

Thank you .

Credit to: Mars

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38 Comments
    1. Thank you

  1. Superb waiting

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  2. Sus

    nyc dear

    1. Thank you

  3. Phoniex

    Loved it dear

    1. Thank you

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  4. Neptune

    oh swara is soon coming to kolkata waiting for swasan meet but please update longer dear

    1. Thank you and i will try to update longer parts.

  5. Nice dear

    1. Thank you

  6. Kojagorimalik

    Nice loved it

    1. Thanks dear

  7. Mahavir

    oh god intresting..!! but ragu i think she is going to hadi in kabab..!! anyways i think sanskar is waiting for swara’s reply may be but i m not sure..!! nd swara is coming to kolkata wooooooo waiting dear post soon..!! loved it yaar..!!

    1. Thank you dear just wait for next epi everything will be clear

  8. awesome update soon

    1. Thank you dear

  9. great episode…jst want to kno if da pair is swasan or ragsan!!!plz post da nxt epi soon…eagerly waiting

    1. Thank you dear and pair is swasan. Just have a look at character sketch which I had already posted .

  10. Awesome….loved it…Pls update soon..And season as pair..

    1. Thank you dear and pair is swasan only.

  11. Gayathri.visu

    Interesting… But its very short dear.

    1. Thanks I will post longer part next time.

  12. Aasthu

    Interesting….was S trying to reach Swara??? is it swasan and raglak ff ??? or swasan ff??

    1. Its swasan ff and your doubts will be cleared in next chapter.

  13. Hey! This is mars I want your help plz.
    i had recently joined telly updates and I don’t know much about posting ff. Yesterday i submitted episode and they posted but now next chapter is not getting submitted. Can anybody tell me where I should write and then submit. And m using only mobile to write the epi. Already I had written epi 2 twice and it got cleared. Plz tell if anyone know.

    1. Kakali

      Hi dear, Welcome to TU..!!
      Loved your 1st part..!! Continue soon..!!,

      And coming to how to post.! Oki, it does happen as I also faced the same in starting days.
      So you write on Wordpad or Notpad. Than simply copy paste your story in TU(Submit Article) option.!
      Hmm also use chrome or any other browser to post as it’s very helpful..!!Moreover you can post being a registered member though,..
      Thnk u.. ;-*

      1. Thank you soo much dear for your support.

    1. Thank you

  14. Rachna

    Awsm… Update soon next part

  15. Seebu_s

    nice mars?

  16. loved it…

  17. Simi

    Nice.. ?

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