“Believe Me!!” Twinj FF (Epi 6) ~By Tamanna

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Hello guys! I m here! Thank you so much for ur comments! Lekin frnds mujhe aisa kyun lagraha hai ki u r loosing interest in this story! Frnds agar aapko lagtha hai ke mujhe yeh continue nahi karna chahiye tho you can tell me bcuz mere paas dusra idea bhi hai! But plz do tell me! Plz its a request!

And twinkle ke saath kuch galat nahi hua!

Link: epi-6

Disclaimer: this article is not meant to hurt anyone’s sentiment and if unknowingly I do so I sincerely apologize.

Recap: Twinkle goes missing. Kunj searches. Same boys chasing Twinkle. Kunj beating them. Twinkle unconscious. Kunj carries her to a village. The old woman thinks kunj to be twinkle’s husband and gives a dress to kunj to make Twinkle wear it.

Lets begin,

Kunj opens the door and moves towards the old man and woman.
Kunj: sorry aunty, I can’t change her dress.
Old woman: kyun beta? Tum uske pathi hona.. (why dear, you are her husband isn’t it!)
Kunj: aunty I m sorry! Maine jhoot kaha aapse mai uska pathi nahi hun aur hum yahan college ke project ke liye aaithe… (and narates the whole story!) Aunty aapko jo saza dena hai mujhe de dijiye lekin plz Twinkle ko yahan sirf ek raat ke liye rakh lijiye plz. (He cries) (Aunty I m sorry! I lied to you! I m not her husband and we came here for a college project! (And narrates the whole story) Aunty you can punish me but plz let Twinkle rest here for one night plz.) (He cries)
Old woman and man looks on shocked. Old woman brought her hand near his face. He closes his eyes thinking she would slap him but gets surprised to see her caressing his cheek.

Old woman: (smiling) I m glad that u told me the truth. agar tumhari jagah koi aur hotha tho iss samai ka faida utaletha. Tujhe koi sazaa hi zarurath hai. Tu jaa aur aaram kar. Mai twinkle ke saath so jaaungi tu mere room me inke saath sojha! Mai uske kapde badal thi hun! Tu apne.zakham ko marham laga de. (I m glad that u told me the truth. If any other would have been in ur place then surely he would have taken the advantage of the situation. I won’t give you any punishment. I will sleep with Twinkle. You sleep in my room with my hubby! I will change her clothes. You aid ur wounds)

Kunj: thank you so much aunty! Agar aapko meri zarurath ho tho bulalena. Mai aajaunga. (Thank you so much aunty! Call me in. Need. I would surely come.)

Old woman goes to Twinkle’s room. Kunj with old woman goes to other room.

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Morning 11:00

Twinkle opens her eyes and looks around. She sees kunj sitting, holding her hand, beside her. Kunj lips form a smile. He asks her to get up.
Everything flashes before her eyes. How twinkle was sleeping with kunj. Same boys takes her from there. She escaping from there. They chasing her.

“Nahi!!!!(noooo!!!)” She shouts crying.
Kunj: kya hua twinkle? (What happened Twinkle) (Worriedly).

She looks at kunj.
Twinkle: kunj mai kahan hun?
Kunj: Twinkle hum ek ghar me hai aur safe hain.

She looks at her clothes. She gets shocked.
Twinkle: kunj mere kapde kisne badle. (Kunj who changed my clothes?)
Kunj: Twinkle mai…. (Twinkle, I….)(interrupts)
Twinkle: what kunj tumne! Sab boys ek hain! Tum…. (what kunj you! All boys are same! You…
Kunj: Twinkle meri baath sunle. (Twinkle listen to me)
He holds her shoulder but she jerks him.
Twinkle: Tumhe kisne permission di mujhe touch karne ki. (Who gave you the permission to touch me?) (She cries)
Kunj: Twinkle don’t cry, I’ll tell yo…..(he cups her face)
She jerks him but unknowingly she slaps him! Twinkle and kunj both were in shock. Kunj looks at Twinkle. Hurt was clearly seen in his eyes. Twinkle’s eyes becomes teary. Kunj looks at her in pain.
Kunj: Twinkle believe me I didn’t…. (before he could say anything there was a knock on the door. )
Twinkle opens the door to find the old woman and her husband. She looks at kunj confused.
Old woman: beta confuse math ho! Tum hamare ghar me ho! Kal yeh bichara raat ko tujhe leke yahan aaya! Tu behosh thi! (And narrates the whole incident) use patha tha ke agar wo sach bolega tho mai use saza bhi de sakthi hun lekin firbi wo tere respect liye sach batha diya! kal raat wo inke kamre me soya aur mai tumhare saath! Lekin inhone bathaya ke wo kal raat bilkul bhi nahi soya tere liye bus pareshan tha isliye humne aaj sawere use tere paas bejh diya! Dekh usne tho apne zakhmon ko marham bhi nahi lagaya! (,dear don’t get confused! You are in our house! Yesterday he came with you unconscious in his arms. (And narrates the whole incident) he did know that if he say the truth he may get punished but he cared for your respect more and said the truth.yesterday I slept with you and he with my hubby. But my husband said that he didn’t sleep a bit 2ndz he was tensed for you. So we sent him here in the early morning.)

Twinkle looked at kunj with guilt and respect. Kunj avoided eye contact.

Twinkle: thanks aunty! (She said with a smile)
Old woman: tujhe thanks mera nahi isska karna chahiye! Hira hai wo hira! (Don’t say that to me tell thanks to him! He is a true gem) she said with a smile.
Twinkle: (eyes turns glassy)
Old woman: maine naasta laga diya hai aakar kha lo! (To twinkle) isko marham laga dena hamari baat hi nahi maantha! (Breakfast is ready! Come Have it! (To twinkle) aid him dear, he didn’t listened to us. )
Twinkle: okay aunty hum abhi aathien hain(okay aunty! We would be there!)
By saying this old woman and man left. Twinkle closed the door. She turned. His eyes were red. Twinkle’s eyes were filled.

Twinkle: (guilty) I m sorry kunj!
Kunj: (pain in his voice) its okay Twinkle! Teri galthi nahi hai, tujhe mujh par trust nahi tha! Shayad trust ke kaabil nahi hun mai! Isme meri hi galthi hai! (Its okay Twinkle. You are not at fault. You don’t trust me! I guess I was not able to gain ur trust! Its only my mistake.
Twinkle: kunj aisa math bolo! (Kunj don’t say like that!)
Kunj: Twinkle its okay! Lets move to breakfast table!
Twinkle: wait kunj let me apply ointments to ur wounds.
Kunj: its okay Twinkle! U will feel uncomfortable touching me! I would apply it myself.
He takes the ointments from her and starts to apply it. Twinkle looks at him with guilt.

Screen freezes!

Precap: kunj manao mission. (Pacifying kunj mission)

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How was it? I guess it was long! Plz tell me frankly that should I continue this or end it soon. Plz

Drop ur comments whether positive or negative! Any confusion? do ask me! Suggestions are always welcomed! Ignore mistakes if any!

See you!

With love,
Urs Tamanna

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23 Comments
  1. Sohi

    Amazing yer emotional episode
    Liked kunjs care towards twinkle
    Felt bad for kunj
    Don’t be sad Coz of less comments
    Do continue and post soon
    Bye

  2. Awesome epi…
    Liked that kunj is taking care of twinkle….
    And feeling sad for kunj bcz twinkle slap him and did not trust him…. I luv to read ur ff tamana so plzzzzz dont be sad with nmbr of cmnts…. Plzzz try to write epi soon and more long(hungry for ur ff😉) un ka liye jo cmnt krty ha or un ka liye jo ap ka ff ko like krty ha…
    Luv u…..post nxt soooooooonnnnn….byeeee

  3. Very emotional n awsm epi
    felt bad for kunj….plzzzzzzz do continue
    post soooooon

  4. Hi, I am zoya
    I am a big fan of your ff and os and your today’s episode was amazing and your way of describing each emotions was fabulous

  5. Presha

    Oye tamatar…
    Maar khayega tu..
    Its just awesome sochna bhi mat isse drop krne ko….
    Just loved it….
    Too good…
    Felt bad for kunj yaar…
    It was emotional…
    Love u….

  6. Ohh God …that slap ke baad ka Twinj ke conversation mein kunj ke dialogs pad kar I literally got goosebumps… 😱And kuch kuch in stomach also😀 well amazing episode👏👌💕kisne khaha we are loosing interest …no …kyunki abhi toh party shuru huyi hai😳😀😍💕👌i mean ff😀😀💕💕post soon 💕💕

  7. SidMin

    Aww Just loved the episode
    Respect for Kunj has increased he is just too good …
    Love you post soon ❤

  8. SidMin

    Aww Just loved the episode
    Respect for Kunj has increased he is just too good …
    Love you post soon ❤

  9. Mia12

    Aeyy meri nakhre queen kisne bola tuje ki hum sab interest kho rahe hai,,😱😱😱 Lagta hai shyad mar khani hai tuje kyuki bin banaye khyali pulao Jo pakati hai,,😠😒😒.. or yrr kal mera bhttt WiFi ki net pblm ho rahi this isliye kisiki bhi ff par cmnt nai kar payi,,😔😔.. But u know this epi was Marvelous, Amazing, Fantastic, yet emotional,😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.. And mostly no words to describe it just love it to the core yrr,,❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤.. but yh buddhi toh Hindi ki andar English bhi bolti h bhtt acchese,,😂😂😂.. Ab jaldhi next post karde ok,,😛😛..
    LOAD’S OF LOVE,,😍😍❤❤😘😘💝💝💝..

  10. Nice episode

  11. Fabulous episode
    Post soon

  12. Episode was really good and emotional

  13. Awesome episode

  14. Superb episode

  15. Nice episode
    Post soon

  16. Purnima.agrawal30

    AMAZING…bt feeling sad for kunj

  17. Simiyy

    It was nice but emotional
    Post soon

  18. Nice episode
    Feeling bad for kunj
    Post next one soon

  19. SidMin23

    Wonderful and now waiting for twinke pacifying kunj can’t wait do post soon.

  20. Ramya

    Tamanna ager and karna ka socha bhi na
    Mai tere pehle wali ff ur wish my command ki tarah comment hi nahi duungi
    Hamesha sirf chotu comment sungi aur ho sake tho bilkul bhi nahi duungi
    Blackmail his sichle
    Well sry cor late
    Ita superb awesome amazing
    Liked kunj loyality
    Amazing superb
    Love u

  21. dude it was really good who told we are loosing intrest
    if you have another idea post that one also in ff not in os

  22. Shalini15

    Hi Tamanna my baccha look I’m back but just for today 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 well episode was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb. Loved kunjs behaviour his character is too good. But feeling bad for him. Loved it so much 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕 nd kisne kaha ki sab interest kbo rahe hain?? Dobara mat boliyo warna………….. baat nahi karungi 😐😐😐😐😐

    Achha byee… take care of yourself. ….

    Love you 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 😗 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖 💖

  23. Baby

    Awwwwww…..god sch mein yrr……sooo emotional jst wat can I say m myslf crying….. 🙂
    Itna cute hai kunj…..itna pyaara hai….
    Jst loved it amazing emotional….osm painful…..bt srsly luving it…. 🙂
    Lods of love…. 🙂

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