I am back with my zid (Epi-14)

Hi everyone, this is anah ,I’m very very sorry for being late actually I’m very upset ,kisi kaam pe bhi mera Mann nahi hai i thinking about to stop all ,but i request all writers don’t stop,now iam going to stop…this is not fair ,so i’m back on the track , iam going to end ff ,maybe 2 or 3 parts more to go….thank u for reading my ff,plz drop ur opinions……
Let’s start,

epi-14,
abtak…..
ansh’s accident….
Anika reviled ansh father……
now,
Anika sees all oberoi members and stands shock…..
shivaay coming towards anika…
Shiv:wo mera beta……?????
Anika still silent……
Shiv:i want answer……
he shout in fury…..
devki:haan…..beta…

Anika keep silent….
suddenly shivaay slap her…all r get shock…. Omru try to stop him…..
shivaay shout…..
Shiv:i want answer from u….?
Anika break the silent…..
ani :no Mr oberoi he is my son only…..he is my son….u have no rights to call ur son…..
Shiv:unbelievable……i thought u r angry with me…..u punish me only but no u also punish my son,
anshiii……Shiv called anshi….
anshi:what pappa…..?
Shiv:tell about ur mom…..
anshi:meri mom is world best….,
my pappa punish her without reason so my mom is angry ,but oneday my mom must come for me……

Anika is now confused……and sees Sarah…..
ani:but ur my is here naa..!!!
Shiv:yes she is here…..i never tell her anything wrong about her mom….but u….. u know what ??? my son ask me what is the meaning of dad…..he ask his father…..u know how much its hurts….now its time to return….
ani:matlab…????
Shiv:anshi…..she is my daughter..
ansh Ki twin sister ,he tell anshi…
Shiv:anshi ,she is ur mom….
and point Anika
anika and her whole family now get huge shock…..
ani:my daughter…. but how….
Shiv:haan our daughter,i get her in city hospital before bomb blast
Anika in tear eyed and call anshi near,anshi about to go but ShivaayΒ  stop her…..
Shiv:its ur turn anika ,i want my son so i can go any stage to get him….and if u want ur daughter then come to oberoi mansion…

Om take anshi and dadi to oberoi mansion…,
Om take her and leaves…..
anika stands helpless…..anshi leave in front of Anika
ani:Shiv……shivaay….plz don’t do this……plz…..
all oberoi family stand silent….
rudr about to convince shivaay..
but shivaay is shivaay he didn’t change his decision for anyone…
but anika still beg him…..

after all she is mom……
Pinky didn’t bear……
Pinky:shivaay now a days u took all wrong decision only….. how could u apart mom and daughter
Shiv:i am wrong….???? in five years she did same only….she apart me from my son ,if she did right then i also not wrong…
and one more thing i am not that merciless like her….if she want her daughter then she should come my house only
that’s final and no more argues..,
shivaay leaves…..

anika brake down and sat on the floor crying badly….
all r see her helplessness ….
devki sit near anika ,anika hug her and crying…..devki console her….
ani:maa…..wo meri beti……
plz tell shivaay i want see her,touch her……hug her……
Tej see anika conditions and crying silently…….

in doctor cabin……
shivaay and Sakti……
Dr:but Mr shivaay abhi abhi uska operation katam hua hai…..how could we discharge him so early….i mean some treatment Abhi bakki hai…..
Shiv:no prblm…. i will arrange all facilities in my house…..
and Sarah already stay with us…..
she also doctor…..she will manage everything …..right…
Sarah:yes….,
Dr:then i have no prblm with it,
u can discharge him today….
Sakti:thank u Dr ……

nurse sift ansh…..
ani:which room…?
Nu:no mam ,we sift him oberoi mansion ,we discharge him…
ani:what….!!!!?????
Shivaay comes,
Ani:no Mr shivaay,my son don’t come oberoi mansion…..i didn’t allow that…..
Shiv :who want and wait ur permission ,bhool naa bhi math..
Till now we r married ,if u any prblm with it then we will meet court…..thap bhi no one can defeat shivaay singh oberoi…..
Tej:no shivaay ansh can’t stay with us i can’t allow
(Tej do this favor for only anika,
He is always positive )
Shiv:then i and anshi can’t stay in oberoi mansion ,we will go anywhere…..
Janvi:no……Tej plz…….
Tej:then anika……

Shivaay:as her wish…..i have no prblm with her decision……agar.usko oberoi mansion main rehna hai tho all r must follow my conditions only…..
Devki:anu plz……..
Anika still shock ,she didn’t get what to do…?
Somehow all r come oberoi mansion……
Pinky take aarti to her bahu and ansh…..
Shivaay prepare all facility only his room…..
Shivaay give room to all and explain…..
Shiv:rudr u give ur room to soumya and Ishana…..
Shiv : Devki aunty u can use Sarah room..,Prinku plz share ur room with Sarah ,Om plz share ur room with rudr and ranveer….
All nods…..

Ani:ansh…????
Shiv:my room..
Ani:main…????
Shiv:u also…..
Ani:I’m gonna stay with u….?
Shiv:ofcourse….
Ani:never.,my chameli bhi aapke saath room share nahi karoongi.,
Shiv:ur wish,and one more thing in my house no one going to share room with u…..this my order to all…..
Ani:ok….fine……i will stay living room…..
Shiv :no…..u can’t….. Bcoz i didn’t like anyone stay living room at night…..
Ani:but where I’m staying…?
Shiv:my room always open for u.
Ani:but i don’t want…..
Now shivaay get angry….
Shiv:then go terrace and sleep open space…..but u can’t go from my house…..
Ani:fine…..ok….bade my house..Thadi baaz….
They stares eachother and turn….

Precap:
Anika and shivaay slept on terrace area…..
Oberoi members masti…

Sorry for grammatical mistakes ,bear me for next 2 or 3 episodes,
Plz drop ur comments….
and all writers this is request from me plz give ur link….i don’t want miss any one fictions……
bye……

59 comments

  1. Samaira20

    |Registered Member

    It was so awsum….just loved anika and shivaay’s fight….and his forcing for anika to sleep in his room was cute…. don’t stop ur ff…..I like it….

  2. Liara

    Why r u stopping plsss continue everyday I wait for all writers to write ff but u don’t care about our feelings don’t stop humble request nice episode 😒😒

  3. Tulasi

    |Registered Member

    Hey anah…..awesumm update dear….i luvd it sooo much….i couldnt comment on ur previous episodes….its really really gud…☺☺☺☺ suprrb…..

  4. Shivika22kapoor

    |Registered Member

    THANK YOU 😊 SOOOOOOOOO MUCH ANAH dear thanks alot for posting it so soon I am glad that you heard my request so sweet of you dear.
    Now coming to the episode it was just amazing I loved it alot dear Shivaay’s attitude oh god sometimes I really wish to kill him. Moreover presently in the real IB as well he has turned out to be such a devil.
    You nailed the epi.
    Dear I can understand that you are suffering from lot of problems in your life and I don’t have a right to speak in your personal matter as well but trust me dear one day you will be perfectly fine and completely healthy there is always a beautiful beginning after alot of hardships so don’t let your moral down and face the worst because the best is yet to come.
    Don’t take any sort of tension dear and just be positive.
    I won’t ask you to change your decision of stop writing although you are a wonderful writer and I really like your story line but with lots of calm mind just re think your decision dear.😊
    KEEP SMILING 😊
    STAY HAPPY
    MAY GOD BLESS 😊 YOU WITH LOTS
    OF HAPPINESS AND GOOD HEALTH.
    LOVE ❀ YOU DEAR…….😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ’ 😊 😊 πŸ’ πŸ’ πŸ’ πŸ’

  5. Saira Barkat

    I am a silent reader but today i thought to comment on your ff. Plz upload the next one asap. Your ff is one of my most favorite ff.

  6. HarSHaN

    |Registered Member

    Anah..The story is playing its Jingles in a luvable tone..Expressions &portrayal R very NYC..”I said about Ur gudness,Bt U..”,”My mom is the best”,”He asked his father”..Nyccc..Make the next Soon..Anah..

  7. Ayath

    |Registered Member

    don’t stop this I really loved ur ff…………today epi also awesome………..don’t stop this by 2 3 epi I always eagerly waiting fr ur ff………..u know my exams are going on so I just checked tu I didn’t read any ff but when I see ur ff I read it fully and then I continue my studying………

  8. swati

    Hey anah di u r superb u know i m wating fr ur ff very egarly but u made me wait so long but u came with a suprb episode nd ya plz don’t do tthis again plz update asap nd ya i m. A silent reader of urs ff but today i m finally cmting nd ya i m 16 what is ur age nd ya u don’t mind if i call u di

    • anah

      thank u soooo much swati finally u broke ur silent….
      I’m very glad u like my ff…
      and I’m 20 yaar so u can call me di ok choti…..

  9. Adhya

    Awesome dear…plz continue don’t end quickly yaar plz…want to see And &Shivaay bonding and Anshi’s with her mother too…plz dear …Keep Rocking and smiling always

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