Arjun and Radhika Crazy Love (Episode 12)

Starts with arjuns lip is nearing rads neck…..rads closed her eyes…..arjun lips touched her neck….rads shivers….arjun cant able to control his burning feelings turns rads to make her face him….rads has her eyes closed….he cups her face and bring her lips close to his….suddenly there is knock on door…..arjun and rads looks ateachother shocked…arjun opens the door and finds neil….neil: ur practice s not yet over uh dude,arjun blushes and looks at rads…..neil notice both of them blushing with eachother…neil sayswith cuning smile oh…oh…i came here at wrong time i think so,,,isnt it dude….arjun signals him to keep his mouth shut…rads moves from there….neil smiles seeing rads and again start to tease arjun and runs…arjun runs behind him.

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Rads is siting in class,lost in thought of arjun,she s sweating more and his lips are shivering….tittu calls her…bt rads din respond…she comes and stand infront of rads….rads is busy dreaming abt arjun….tittu shakes her up….rads come out of her trance and ask hey…tittu wen did u come?….tittu: for past 10min am shouting like anything,n ur asking me wen did i came,in wich dreamland ur girl,hmm….rads become tensed,titu ask her….HEY WAT HAPPENED Y UR SO TENSED CHASNi? Did arjun tell anything…rads nods nothing….
Tittu: ok,watever it may be,nw come with me to canteen,am very hungry….rads tells no..titu am not coming u go,,,tittu ask y?….wat u going to do….rads says tittu am feeling tired pls leave me alone for sometime….she leaves…titu looks at rads confused.

Scene3

ni8,in hostel,rads feels restless,she again get lost in arjuns intimacy…rads get up and drinks water,and tells what s happening with me?,,,,y am thinking abt him too much…y my heart beats faster wenever he s close to me….wt kind of feeling is inkling wih me….she lays in bed, thinking…

Atsame time,arjun also thinking abt rads,,,y i cant move away from tis girl,y her presence is affecting me,,,y i cant control my feelings towards her….he s also left thinking…both are thinking abt eachother without knowing they are unfortunately falling in love with eachother crazily…

Precap:
rads tries to avoid arjun

Credit to: Deepa

39 comments

  1. Awww..Deepa wat a story yaar..Awesome,Superb,,good going..love ❀ it..eagerly waiting for next track…Pls update soon…Can’t wait..to know what is gonna happen…love ❀ it..Love ❀ u alot and ur story…Tight hugs to u dear..from ur fan..Aaliya…

    • Deepa

      Oh my sweetieee thena…tight hug for u too my dr…..am going crazy to ur story yaar….its so hot…keep rocking buddy

  2. nandhini

    this makes me to addict more than manmarzian.
    manmarzian makes audience glue to their seats at the mid of the serial(Lenovola trip ardhika feelings..)
    But this crazy one is dragged from the initial episodes…
    keep doing it deepa
    love your loads always awesome …
    one small request that i want you to narrate the story in very elaborate manner i mean so many scenes ….
    the updates are have intense story line in few passages only but i want the detailed story describes their feeling,chemistry,……(the god will to being together.)

    This is my wish if it hurts you in anyway i’m sorry….
    I love crazy love manmarzian so so so so muuuuuuuuuchhhhhhhhhh.

    • Deepa

      Hey nandhini….nice name yaar…sure vll describe it elaborately dr…..keep giving ur feedbacks dr….dont feel sorry n all yaar….

  3. happy

    hi deepa…..so long i am waiting for nxt episode….because i read all episodes till now……pls…..waiting for nxt episode…….pls….post dear……thanks for giving a wonderful story…….thanks once again………………………..

  4. hii deepu, tight hug to you dear !!!!!!!!
    wow soooo much romantic yarrrr ‘‘‘
    ardhika always rocks, miss you a lot manmarziyan.

    but deepa we want also Neil- misha convo πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰
    eagerly waiting for next epi…post it soon dear. love you dear β™₯β™₯β™₯

  5. nisha

    Hey deepa , An awesome episode.

    Wow. Love is in the air.

    Actually You know how to make your fans addicted to your story.
    Just loved it.

    Darling. Well as a fan I really loved your story. But one thing is little bit missing.
    Ardhika’s moment a bit smaller . Make it larger more romantic . With your beautiful words.

    Actually how much much we read we enjoy keep reading about them.

    Its up to you all. Love you dear. Always loving your story.

    Love you Dear Keep writing.

    • Deepa

      Hey nisha….love u buddy,sure vll try to put big yaar…ur song selection is awesome yaar….loved it buddy…keep giving feedback yaar

  6. Krishy

    u are soo good deepa it’s beautiful…………………………..
    will wait for the next epi ……………………………………………………. i never saw manmarziyan bcoz i almost stopped watching starplus after nauc’s end …………………………………
    but after reading ur updates i think i missed a cute crazy story (manmarziyan)

    will wait 4 hte next update πŸ™‚ πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰

  7. kfar

    Hey my dearyyyy wat awesome epis tight hug..im so sorry dat i couldnt cm here n comment mostly becoz i was kinda busy soory, but i lv al ur epis. Keep going dear:D

    Li the atmosphere n da title amazing and awesome πŸ˜€

  8. chinnu

    deepa ur story is very interesting and cute keep go on like this buddy…………………………….luv aradhika sizziling chemistry b/w them.

  9. nandhini

    i am very glad that comment is 33 over crazy love…
    people keep encourage your work … I too..
    always keep rockz…

  10. nandhini

    i am very glad that comment is 33 over crazy love…
    people keep encourage your work … I too..
    always keep rockz…
    And plz post episode asap.

  11. prathyu

    Hi deepa..i read dis story for first time and not able to move off till i read all written episodes..dis story made a big fan of u…really super……

  12. Asha

    awesome story of ardhika…by the way is there any videos for the story?if gt mean plz let me noe the web,i’m so eagerly waiting to watch it

  13. Maha lakshmi

    Hey deepa,,,,,,,,, Awesome yaar……….. keep rocking……… I wish that manmarziyaan season 2 should come out with this story (same cast).

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