ALONE (Shot 1)

Hello guys. I have been a silent reader for a long time and since my effective brain had suddenly popped this idea to me and here i am to try my luck. So, before starting i would like to thank these people who have truly inspired me to write

Thanks to: diyaa,awestruck,vhm,shaoni,ria,annie,anya,astha,luna,mouni,farin,dreams,crystal ariya,aqua for indirectly inspiring me to write.
You guys are truly amazing, wonderful, talented and are indeed very creative and smart.
Here goes my first instalment and hope you guys like it. Ignore typos and grammatical errors.
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Alone

“Nothing is going to happen to you until I’m there…”He assured her for the umpteenth time. She just gave a very weak smile and replied “Do you still think omkara…see god has given me a call…He is missing me…”she spoke with long pauses…”i hate him for that…he never lets me to live happily…”she almost fainted in his arms. “Open your eyes…nothing is going to happen…you will be perfectly alright…we have almost reached the hospital…”he sobbed. He wanted to cry his heart out but he is acting strong only for her so that she remains strong but she kept assuring him that her time is up and it’s the time for her departure.”Ahh…..it’s paining …curse that person who stabbed me….”she said clenching his shirt…”don’t say that…”He snapped her back.”Oh c’mon it’s gonna be the last time you’ll speak with you wife…talk….hey wait….!”.”Shh………………. not a word from you…”. ”last time…

just once” she said gaining some strength. ”Hmm… say….”. “It’s your birthday next week and you will be celebrating without me…”she said sadly. “Don’t say that…you are scaring me…” He pleaded her with tears in his eyes. “Accept the truth omkara… this is reality. Well actually i wanted to give you a surprise on your birthday but god has given me shock…” she started crying and stared breathing heavily. “Open your eyes… DOCTOR…!”He panted.
As soon as he entered the hospital he laid her on the stretcher and called out the nurses and the doctor’s.

“Please do something…I’m scared…please…he started crying…”
“OM!!!………”she called him out.” I wanna say something…Don’t hate me for not saying this to you before…Om i love you and I’m…..ahhhh…!”She fainted. “Hurry up!! …the doctor wailed…”
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Almost fifteen minutes has passed and it seemed like fifteen decades for him, he was helpless and he couldn’t help with those tears that came in, he wanted himself to engulf in her arms and feel her warmth. It is because of him that she is facing so many problems, but never complained. She brought back the life in him when he was in a critical pain. She fought with him, cared for him, shared her emotions with him and loved him, his family and stood through every adversity.
These thoughts were racing through his mind and when he felt two strong hands on his shoulders. Yes, he was right it was his two brothers ….he could feel safe in their arms, he could relax, he could feel strong and comfortable. His home where he could feel satisfied.
It was then he noticed their faces. His baby rudra was crying and shivay looked helpless at his dear brother’s situation. Om just gave a short sad smile and stared at the window next to the waiting area.
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[Another half an hour]
“Mr.Omkara…” the obro’s stood as soon as they heard the doctor’s voice. “What is it doctor..?? Is every…..Th thing alrigh….t?” Om stammered.
“I’m so sorry MR. Oberoi, Mrs. Oberoi’s condition is very critical and she has lost so much blood and there is a lot of internal bleeding which is very dangerous and due to that we couldn’t save the baby’s life “the doctor spoke sadly
“Baby…!” Exclaimed a surprised rudra.
“Mr. Mehra could you explain more clearly??” asked an equally surprised shivay.
“Shivay, ishaana was pregnant.” The doctor replied slowly as he was equally surprised.
Shivay and rudra turned their heads towards Om for his reaction as they thought he would know about ishaana’s pregnancy, but to their uttermost dismay Om looked towards them more shocked.
“What are you saying doctor…?? Was ishaana pregnant…?” asked Om out of shock.
“Yes, she was, my wife was the one who did the tests one month ago…she was carrying a one and a half month old toddler in her womb. She came for checkups regularly.” The doctor explained.
“I thought you would know…din’t she tell you about this…?” questioned the doctor.
“No…No she din’t….she never said this to me.” He stammered.

With that he fell on the ground and started weeping. He cried his heart out. Shivay and rudra came to his rescue and hugged him from both sides tightly conveying him that they were with him. Shivay caressed his hair and said

“Om…you can’t fall weak. You will have to stay strong and help ishaana overcome this situation, she will be more distraught if she gets to know about this, and trust me only you can do this, and nothing will happen to ishaana. Stay strong and i know this is a tuff time for all of us. Rudra take care of Om and I’ll go to police station to file a case on Svetlana and Mrs.Kapoor. Now they will have to deal with SHIVAY SING OBEROI” he spoke hiding his tears.
He wanted to leave that place immediately so that he doesn’t lose his emotions and he wanted to deal with those two wretched women himself who have targeted the Oberoi family. He wanted to show them who were Oberoi’s and the price for playing with thiere emotions and dear ones.
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Rudra slept in his o bhaiyaa’s lap after an exhausting day and after knowing such shocking truth that churned his heart, he badly needed a rest. It was about 2 hours that shivay left; it was only Om and rudra in the entire waiting hall. Just then shivay arrived
“Om, is everything alright?” asked shivay noticing rudra fast asleep
“Ya…” Om replied sadly
“Did you speak to the doctor??. Everyone is tensed for ishaana and i din’t tell them about the baby issue. You see they were already tensed and saying this to them will make them more sad.” Stated shivay
“You are right, and it is better to hide this baby matter to the family…let this one be a secret among us.” replied Om.

“You stay here with ishaana while i drop rudra and come back…he seems to be affected with all these” shivay answered back.
“Hmmm….”that’s what Om could answer back.
As soon as shivay took the half sleeping rudra from Om’s lap, the doctor arrived and said that ishaana wanted to meet Om and Shivay. Shivay took rudra to the car and said to om that he will be back after dropping rudra in the car, thus om proceeded towards ishaana’s ward.
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So, that’s my first instalment and the continuation will be in my upcoming fan fiction called “THE SILVER LINING” but the next update will be of rumya’s which will be considered as the second prologue of the silver lining.
Do give your valuable suggestions and comments and i know I’m a very bad writer and your comments will improve me to enhance my writing skills.
Appreciation and Criticism welcomed
Wonder3112

15 comments

  1. Aarti32

    Aarti32

    |Registered Member

    It was soo painful..My heart cried reading it..But I’m confused regarding d updates!! N is it only abt Ishkara..Or Ishkara n Rumya both??

  2. shabnam

    Sooo emotional thanks for writing ishkara i just loved it 💕💕💕💕💕👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

  3. Bhavana

    Wow yaar… Its superbbbbbbb… Nd how could u even tell that u r a bad writer… Its written fantabulously beautiful… Loved it… Eagerly waiting for the nxt… Update asap!

  4. AHSANA

    It’s was an awesome episode👏👏👏 I’m waiting for your new ff”The silver lining “update soon. 💖💖💖

  5. Pratha

    Pratha

    |Registered Member

    Hey wonder, u just took my heart from my body. The writing was just…..
    I don’t have words to describe how much happy I’m feeling to read a ff on my lovely and best couple with whom I’m so much obsessed that too this wonderful, a story which each of ishkarians wanted in d show.
    Ur story is great and Pl. keep d pace of d story same & post next asap I’m not able 2 wait for the next update….
    Lots of love 🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫
    Pratha

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