#On air serials #Competition #Suhani Si ek Ladki &Ishqbaaz #Entry 2

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So… It’s my first experience entering into competition… I will try to do my best… this story is happening when both couples go for an outing…in a hotel… Kriyam after their confession…and Shivika after Shivay get to know about his birth, adoption…

The Illegitimate Child

Kriyam reached hotel by the time of evening…As the same time Shivika also reached there.
Kriyam in a pleasant mood…enter the hotel…. Krishna looked around…For the first time she is happy being away from home…and also first time with Sayyam… the hotel was big enough..As she know Suhani aunty or Daidu ki choice hai.. They will get only the best for them… She looked at Sayyam.. who is on phone… talking to Suhani…
Sayyam : haan maa.. We’re reached just now… everything alright (looks at Krishna) yeah.. She is also good.. we are going to check in.. will call you later…OK..
Suhani : teek hai beta.. Krishna ko do phone..
Sayyam rubbed his phone on his shirt and gives to Krishna.. he moves towards the reception..To check in..

Shivay felt not good…after knowing everything..He felt like he is not deserves this all…He was a lucky person to get this whole love,luxury,family name and all….
Anika was enjoying the beauty of the hotel..

Receptionist : Sir may I help you…?
Shivay : (coming out from his thoughts) haan…. Hmm.. Yeah… I think …I have a booking on Shivay Singh Oberoi..
Receptionist : yes sir…I know you sir .. Everything ready sir…Please write your phone number…Just in case..

Sayyam was asking about the booking… the receptionist check the details… Giving him the key… he about to go..
Receptionist : Sir please…Write down your name and phone number…

Sayyam and Shivay both took the pen to write down their name…but both paused after writing their name..
Sayyam gets thinking… what to write…
Shivay stops after writing ‘S’ after his name…

There is loud noise..of falling plates and glasses into floor… Everyone’s attention goes to that direction where the noise come from… there’s a young boy standing with guilty facing down…shivering in fear.. the trolley was upside down… he started to sweating…as the manager came to him…raged.. he looked around..To the scattered plates ,glasses and other cutleries..on the floor…
Manager : ek kaam bhi teek se nahi kar sakta.. tumse… huh…
Hotel boy : Sir…maaf kijiye… galti se..
‘taaash’
Manager : (slaps him hard) naajayaz…ladka… Clean it right now..
The boy hold his cheek…He become red due to the immense pain to body and insult to his self respect.. before everyone…
Sayyam and Shivay both felt the slap on their face…
Sayyam crushed the pen… Krishna noticed and understand the situation…She place her hands on him…Bring him back to senses.. receptionist was really shocked to his reaction… Krishna..smiled at her..
Krishna : so sorry… I will write…It..
Receptionist : ok.. Ma’am…
She give her the key… Kriyam headed to their room..

Shivay face turns to red… hands were shivering.. Anika saw him…and looked at boy who is cleaning the floor… She understands… I know Shivay… yeh sub sunke aapko.. bahot dard ho raha hai… she comes to reception…
Anika : likhiye mein bathathi hum … likhiye..
Kya huwa…
Shivay looked at her..with a faint smile…
Receptionist write down… give her the key.. Anika cuddled on to Shivay… they leave to their room..

Kriyam room

Sayyam was still lost in thoughts… Krishna decided to leave him alone for sometime.. She went to washroom to freshen up… after a while…She came out… drying her hair… she looks at Sayyam..He is still in the same posture… water is dripping from her hair…She tossed her hair to his side… water splashed on Sayyam…Make him out his world…
Sayyam : (being angry) what the…..
Krishna turns to him with fake shocking expression…
Krishna : oh… Sorry… Sorry…Mein ne dekha nahi…
Sayyam : what…You didn’t see me…
Krishna : yeah…The same way you didn’t see me for the last 2 hrs..
Krishna narrowed her eyes…Sayyam looked at his watch… squeezed his eyes… then opens one eye… looking at Krishna…
Sayyam : I’m sorry…
Krishna : hmmm…nahi chahiye tumhara sorry…
Sayyam : please… please….
She turns to go…but Sayyam hold her by wrist…Make her stops..and pulled her close…
Sayyam : waise ithna buri nahi dikh rahi hai…
Krishna angrily looks at him..and…push him…To the bed..But he didn’t lose his grip on her…make her fall on bed with him… his face covered with her hair…They were so close to each other… Sayyam make her more closer to him…..He is about to kiss her… Suddenly they heard a knock on door..
Sayyam quickly give a peck on her lips and roll over…and stand up..
Sayyam : wait…I will just come…
He smirks… Krishna blushes…

Sayyam opened door to see…The same boy with the trolley.. he smiled at Sayyam…Get the trolley inside with champagne ..
Boy : Sir… It’s our complimentary gifts for you … enjoy your day…

Sayyam looked at him… he can clearly trace the fingers on his face…He was try hard to hide it…He smiled and turns to go…
Sayyam : what’s your name..?
Boy : sir… aapko kuch chahiye…
Sayyam : (smiles) naam kya hai… Tumhara…?
Boy : (little surprised) Kabir… Sir…
Sayyam : akele ho…??
Boy : nahi…Sir.. maa hai.. ghar pe..Or koyi nahi…
Sayyam : (comes to him. Put his hands around his shoulders) Kabir…Yeh..Sub hotha rahthe hai tum har mat manna… Yeh maar,peet or datt… yeh sub tumhe himmat dega.. zindagi mein aage badne keliye…Hmm.. Tumhari maa keliye… (Mereliye wo bhi nahi tha..He thinks in mind…)
Kabir looks at Sayyam with amazement… Krishna looked at Sayyam..with wide smile and proud….

Shivika’s room

Shivay was thinking… Ithna sub kuch jelna padtha hai…Wo bhi..kisi or ki galti keliye… Anika was runs to the balcony…. It’s really nice view from balcony… she looked back at Shivay… he still lost in thoughts…. Anika comes to him shake him…
Anika : dekhiyena….kithna achaa… lag raha hai Na…
She dragged him to the balcony…But he seems to be uninterested…
Anika : aap abhi bhi wahi soch rahi hai Na..
Shivay looked at her…tries to smile….
Anika : mujhe patha… hai… isiliye aapka dhyan hatane keliye…yeh sub kar raha tha.. Shivay looked at her… caressed her face…Hold her close… kissed her forehead…
Shivay : Anika…Thank you… for coming to my life…
Anika : ab mein kya kahoon… I love you Shivay…
Shivay : I DON’T NEED CHEESY ‘I LOVE YOUS’ JUST HOLD MY HAND AND TELL ME “I’M HERE FOR YOU.”
Anika : kya… mein ne aapko cheese kab…
Anika looks at him clueless… Shivay rolls his eyes…
Anika : boliyena…
Shivay : aah… Just forget it…Nothing…

They heard knock on their door… Shivay opens to see the same boy from reception… he smiled..at Shivay..Coz it’s his job…he pull the trolley inside placed it near them..
Boy : sir..This is our complimentary gift for you.. enjoy your day…
Anika looks at Shivay..She can read his mind…From his face..
Shivay crossed his arms…brushed his beard… he calls him…
Shivay : ahem….(he clears his throat) what’s your name…?
Boy : I’m Kabir… sir you need anything else …?
Shivay : ahem… ahem… wo…Wo…Mein…
Anika : wo tumhe thank you kahna Chahta hai.. hai na… Shivay..
Shivay : nahi… wo…Mein.. thank…
Anika : mujhe patha hai Shivay… aap jab thank you kahna hai kisiko thabi aap ithna.. hadak hadak ke.. bolegi na…
Shivay : Anika… Please…Let me..
Anika pouts…
Shivay turns to the boy…
Shivay : Kabir… hai na…
Kabir : Yes… sir…
Shivay : Kabir…I’m really sorry…
Kabir widen his eyes…being puzzled..
Kabir : Sir… Aap sorry kyun…
Shivay : I mean…I want to tell you something…Come…
Yeh… khoon khandan se kuch nahi hota… Jo bhi tum banna chahtha hum na…Wo tum decide karega… teek hai… tumhara pehchan tumhe khud banana hai.. kisi pe depend karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.. apne dam pe jeena hai… keep that in mind..
Anika was eavesdropping… their conversation..She dropped her jaw hearing him..
Shivay patted on his shoulders… he felt little light… Kabir leaves with a pleasant face… he was wondering…Both says the same thing..but first one has fire in his eyes and the latter one has guilt…

Shivay turns with a smiling face..
Anika : awww……
Shivay looks at her… puzzled..Then understood…He spread his smile…More.. Anika comes to him…Hug him tight….

Kriyam room

Sayyam got freshen up…He didn’t see Krishna in the room…Then find her in tHe balcony… Sayyam comes to her… hold her from back … Krishna shaken up first.. then lean on Sayyam…
Krishna : Sayyam…U know what…Wo thare dekh rahi na… mumma hamesha kehthi this ki wo mera Papa hai.. muhjse bohut pyar karthe hai…Or mumma ki jaane ke baad… wahaan do thare hai…Ek saat hamesha…
Sayyam tighten his grip on her.. Krishna closed her eyes feeling the warmth of his secure arms…
Sayyam : Krishna…Mein tumhareliye diniya saari khushi laaum.. par Jo tum khoya hai..Wo bhi mera Papa ki wajah se…Wo mein kabhi lautkar na de sake…
Krishna : Please… Sayyam… Tumhara galti nahi hai.. please stop blaming yourself…
Sayyam sighs… Krishna felt guilty…
Sayyam : Krishna…If I can fly high…I will bring those stars for you…
Krishna widens her eyes.. being awestruck..She turns to him…Look deep into his eyes…
Krishna : I’ll NEVER ASK YOU TO BRING THE STARS FOR ME, BUT I WOULD LOVE TO SIT AND WATCH THEM WITH YOU…
Sayyam smiles…cupped her face…Kissed her forehead…
Sayyam : OK…Then come sit…
Krishna smiled at his childish act…sit with him… resting her head on his chest…

Shivay and Anika..is also at the balcony…cuddled to each other… enjoying the beauty of night…

It’s morning…Both couples ready to go out… Sayyam and Shivay coming from opposite sides… Shivay looks at Anika….and bumped into Sayyam…their wallets fell down…
Shivay : oh…I’m sorry…My bad…
Sayyam : I’m sorry too…
They smiled to each other….about to go… Sayyam noticed his wallet..
Sayyam : excuse me…I think our wallets got exchanged…
Shivay looked at his wallet… they come to each other… exchanged their wallets..
Shivay : hi…I’m Shivay S(stops)…..Just Shivay…(he looked at Anika)
Sayyam : I’m Sayyam….(smiles)
They shake hands…Then go to their respective cars with their lovely wives…

Kabir stood there…after his shift…with a determined mind..to create his own destiny….

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18 Comments
  1. Anitaaa3

    Nice update

  2. Prethiga

    i vote for it.

    rating 8/10.

    1. Ankita27

      I vote for it 8/10

  3. Fidato

    I vote for it
    Rating 9/10

  4. Superb combo. Loved it

  5. Nithu

    i vote it…………..loved it………these both r my sabse bade fav serials hein………i love ssel sooooooooooooooooo much……………….

    1. Ruksy

      You forgot rating

      1. Nithu

        10 /10 sry i frgt to rate

  6. I vote for it 9/10

  7. NAPSHa J

    I like the way things have been connected.. I vote for it.. 8/10

  8. Mithila Farzana

    I vote for it..9/10

  9. I vote for it 9/10

  10. Just loved it…I love both kriyam and shivika…
    I vote for it… 9/10

  11. I vote 4 it 9/10

  12. Fanficwriter

    I vote for this!
    Rating 9/10

  13. I vote for it 9/10

  14. 9 /10
    Us it u Annie I am just guessing if you are not then really sorry but the story is superb

  15. Akshaya

    I vote for it 8/10

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