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Zid (Kanchi) Teaser

NeonNingaBy 42 Comments2 Mins Read

Hi guys do you remember me. Actually raaz is going to end soon so this is my new ff.

I hope u guys like it and do comment and tell me should I continue this. If u r bored with suspense or twist.So I will not continue it

TEASER

In park

Girl – i will make u mine forever. Aur yahi meri Zid hai

Boy – I will make u hate me forever. Aur yeh mera Zid hai.

Girl -we will see whose Zid will win.

Boy -Just wait and watch

Girl – I hate u but I will marry u

Boy -I love u but I will not marry u

Girl -really

Boy – yes

They went opposite side.

Scene 2

Boy in Temple

Boy -I have to stay away from her .

Girl -u can’t stay away from me.

Boy – hamare bich nhi pyar nhi nafrat ka rishta sirf Zid ka rishta hoga

Girl – Aur yahi Zid ka rishta hame maut talak sath dega

Scene 3

They take seven rounds in Graveyard. Boy fills her hairline with black powder.

Boy -dekho yahi Zid ti tumari lo Aaj pura hogaya ab suru hoga mera Zid

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Guys this is not horror ff
This is something new.
I know it’s boring and u didn’t understand it sorry for that.

I’m not sure that I will continue this . I just wanted to know ur suggestions. If you guys say yes than I will continue it . Ur suggestions really really means a lot.

So Do comment and tell me should I continue this.

Regards
Ashnita

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Lovely girl a loving daughter loving sis and loving friend.Big fan of Shah Ruk khan. Favorite movie Main Hoon Na. And loves thriller, suspense and many more.

42 Comments

  5. AnahitaAnnie on

    Looks very interesting Ashnita!!! But I was a little lost due to the Hindi dialogues at the end. Pls can you also have translations next time!! Anyways how did u come up with such a unique concept. It looks so amazing. Sorry for not commenting on your other works. I am so busy in studies these days. Anyways I hope you will forgive me. And pls continue soon. I am too excited for this one. Love u loads ?

    • NeonNinga on

      Thank you and sorry for not translating I will do it next time and it’s ok for not commenting aleast u commented on this . Love you loads ?

  7. riyarocks on

    Ashu kuch boring kaise likh sakti hai???? interesting laga……dear…u continue…..my best wishes r with u……….luv u………

    • NeonNinga on

      Aww thank you so much sweetie. Yes I will continue this because ur best wishes r with me. And love u too

  10. niyaaa on

    Hey ashi u know what when i read it u did’t mention ur name in intro begining but when u write raj ff nd about suspense nd twist in one sec. I guess is it ur new ff teaser.. Hehehe.. Dekha hun naa m smart.. M to khushi k mare jhat se bath gayi… ohhoo ashi tum bhi naa hum bore ho jayein wo bhi tumhare ff se never ever hamare sapne kya tumhare sapne me bhi nahi..hehe.. Sachchi ab jyada bhaav mat khao khana khao or jaldi se isse start karo m waitting for it… wow do ziddiyon ki kahani nd agar tumne suru nahi kiya to hum dharne per baith jayenge or hum bhi bhut ziddi h samjhi…lovvv u post nxt asap aise hi khub bhalo.. Tc

  11. niyaaa on

    Hey ashi u know what when i read it u did’t mention ur name in intro begining but when u write raj ff nd about suspense nd twist in one sec. I guess is it ur new ff teaser.. Hehehe.. Dekha hun naa m smart.. M to khushi k mare jhat se bath gayi… ohhoo ashi tum bhi naa hum bore ho jayein wo bhi tumhare ff se never ever hamare sapne kya tumhare sapne me bhi nahi..hehe.. Sachchi ab jyada bhaav mat khao khana khao or jaldi se isse start karo m waitting for it… wow do ziddiyon ki kahani nd agar tumne suru nahi kiya to hum dharne per baith jayenge or hum bhi bhut ziddi h samjhi…lovvv u post nxt asap aise hi khub bhalo.. Tc

    • niyaaa on

      Sorry ashi kabhi to ek baar bhi commnt nahi hoto or kabhi do baar show kar deta h cvs ki tarah ab to TU wale bhi pichche pad gaye h kya kare kismat hi kharab h bye

    • NeonNinga on

      Offcourse u r very smart sweetie. Thank you very much.hehe u ordered me so I have to continue this warna tum mujhe maar deo gi apne ziddi avatar mein. Love you der saraaa.

  12. Palak.Sharma on

    Looks really interesting and mysterious!! How do you come up with such unique plot lines?? I’m still struggling to finish chapter 30?. Great teaser!! Can’t wait to read it

  13. Khamoshi on

    Ashnita plz continue this one..it seems so interesting.. i am eagerly waiting to read more from u on this concept. Good luck ans the dialogues were just perfect ? for that. Too good

  15. Abhilasha on

    Oye hoye ek aur dhamakedar story from our ashi….seems really hatke and I m waiting for it!!