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YOU’VE COMPLETED ME… RAGSAN! FEW SHOTS…. SHOT 22

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Recap: swara n shomi patch… Kids refuse to come with shekhar…

Its night, shekhar comes to BAADI. … He comes to Ragini’s room and sees ragini and swara sleeping on either side of shomi. …

Shekhar ( monologue ): after six months I’m seeing all of them together…. Bhagwan ji pls bring my ragu back….. I can’t live without her….. Please…..

He cries and goes to his room….

At MM!

Ap is in sanskaar’s room and and talking to him in a hope that she’ll get up. Dp comes there with laksh who was holding a tray with food on her.

Laksh: maa… Come hv food….

Ap: y did u bring laksh?? Where is ur wife haan??

She said taunting. Laksh looks at dp who signs him to have patience.

Dp: y r u missing her,??

Ap: huh… Miss my foot….

Laksh: maa….

Ap: don’t shout laksh… sanskaar is sleeping….

Dp: ap… Its enough now……. Till when will u exaggerate this??

Ap: am I exaggerating???

Laksh: haan ma… Look whtever happened no one was at fault…. No one knew this would happen…. ..

Dp: ap whts swara’s mistake?? Even she’s suffering… N instead of giving her love n support u r always behind her n taunting her……

Laksh: I know ma the plan back fired but we all were part of it… U me papa everyone… Then y only swara????

Ap cries listening to all this!

Dp: doc said to give positive n happy environment to sanskaar n ragini but they r not getting it that’s y see how he is lying like this!??

He said pointing towards sleeping sanskaar.

Laksh: mom pls… Now v r tired… Just forgive her n see how everything goes fine…. Ma.. If either sanskaar or ragini gets up then the other will also get up… N like papa ( shekhar ) is trying to bring back ragini same way we hv to try with sanskaar….

Dp.: n this will only b possible if happiness is there…. sanskaar also wants to see u smiling n not crying all the time…. …

Ap: I’m… I’m sorry….. ( she cries…) I’m sorry ji… I’m sorry laksh….. Bcoz of me…..

Dp and laksh hugs her.

Dp: no nothing is bcoz of u ap…. Now stop crying…

Laksh: ma everything will b fine…. Come hv food now…..

Ap nods and hv food…..

Next day!

Shomi comes to shekhar who was standing near the window looking at nothing….. She keeps hand on his shoulder.

Shomi: did u talked to them??

Shekhar turned but before he could say something the door bell rings. Swara comes there n opens the door.

Everyone is surprised to see the kids, Om ishana aman muskaan sahil and saumya…… Shekhar has tears in his eyes seeing them……

Swara welcomes them in. They all come in holding their hands. The head of the orphanage comes from behind.

Head: they wanted to meet ragini so I brought them here… ( shekhar nodded ) I hope u don’t mind if they can stay here coz I hv leave for the orphanage work….

Shomi and shekhar nodded and she left.

Swara: come… Sit here i’ll bring something for u…

Om ( ignoring her ): where is ragu di??

Shekhar: beta first hv something….

Saumya: where is ragu di?,

The trio understood that they’ll not talk to them. So they nodded at swara.

Swara: come i’ll take u….

She moved towards Ragini’s room followed by the kids. Shekhar and shomi went to kitchen to get something for them.

Ragini’s Room!

The kids come in and are shocked and sad to see ragini lying there unconscious.

Sahil: we want to talk to ragu di…

All kids: alone….

Swara nodded and went out of the room. Aman closed the door. As soon as h did all the kids came around ragini and started crying asking her to get up… Aman muskaan and saumya sat on one side of the bed while om ishana and sahil on the other side…. Holding her hand all were crying…..

Om: di pls get up na….

Sahil: won’t u sing song for us???

Muskaan: see na di this aman is irritating me….

Aman: tell this bandariya not to eat my food…..

Ishana: u can’t break ur promise di…

Saumya: di u told na u’ll never leave us alone then how come u r sleeping here???

Om.: u broke ur promise… U didn’t came to meet us from last six months……

Ishana: pls di get up otherwise we’ll again become orphans….

N they keep crying n pleading keeping their heads on her hand. The girls hugged her in lying position while the boys held her hand ✋…..

Shekhar shomi and swara were listening all this from outside , ganga yamuna saraswati flowing from their eyes…..

Inside the room same condition is of kids who are crying from last one hour…… And finally the wait is over Ragini slowly moves her fingers and slowly moves her eye lids… … Her head was paining as she came across light after six months….

Sensing her fingers move om looks up only to find awaken ragini…. His joy knew no bounds.

Om: ragu diiiiii….

He shouted n hearing him all the kids looked up towards her as she weakly smiled at them. Ishana and saumya took her in a bone crushing hug.

Hearing their shouts the trio started banging the door and asked them to open the door. Sahil went n opened the door and ran towards ragini.

Trio: ragu……

Ragini looked towards them… swara ran towards her n made her sit straight and hugged her tightly. Shekhar kept his hand on her head and kissed her forehead. Shomi hugged her and kissed her cheeks and forehead. Shekhar called the doctor and informed dp….

Ragini: ma….

Shomi ( cried ): haan bacha…..

Ragini: ma my head is paining…..

Shomi stood up to massage her head but muskaan went behind ragini and started massaging her head slowly with her little hands. Shomi backed as she saw her daughter getting love from the children. Sahil and aman started massaging her legs while om and ishana took care. Of her hands….. Now saumya was left so she got up and got water for ragini and made her drink with her own hands…..

Father mother n daughter saw this from far and felt guilty for trying to keep ragini away from these angels.

Ragini was smiling seeing their concern.. She hugged all of them as they cried seeing their di back.

Dp with ap and laksh came running there as soon as they got to know abt ragini…. Doctor too came and did Ragini’s check up and declared that she’s absolutely fine now…… Everyone sighed.

Ragini looked up and found dp, ap and laksh and that’s when sanskaar came back n hit her memories……

A tear escaped her eye as she recalled the deadly night ? where she lost her sanskaar……. She closed her eyes tightly as the image of sanskaar with blood over his head and face flashed in her mind.

Om: di… Di r u alright???

Saumya: wht happened di??

Ragini opened her eyes and tried getting up from the bed. Om and sahil helped her . She came in front of her family and only one word could come out of her mouth…..

Ragini: sa…. Sanskaar……..

They all had tears in their eyes.

Ragini: wht happened that day???

Swara: ragu I’m sorry…. It all happened bcoz of me???!!!

Ragini: where is sanskaar di?? Where is my sanskaar??

She asked stumbling but was supported by the kids. She wiped her tears n said. A bit loudly.

Ragini: I’m asking for the last time WHERE IS SANSKAAR?????

Ap: beta voh…… He’s at home…..

Ragini took a deep breath and started moving out. all of them went behind her.

Swara: ragu wait…..

Shekhar: where r u going??

Laksh: ragini wait… Come with me i’ll take u….

Ragini nodded and sat in laksh’s car. Swara, ap and dp too sat in his car…. Shomi shekhar with children too followed them in shekhar’s car.

As soon as the car stopped Ragini ran inside the house stumbling a bit.

” careful ragini… ” shouted ap form behind.

But Ragini ran inside without waiting for anyone. Shekhar too came with everyone. Swara had tears in her eyes.

Swara: now when she’ll see sanskaar them……

Someone keeps hand on her head… She looks up only to find ap standing there with tears in her eyes. Rest all smiled.

Ap: everything will b fine shona……

Hearing this swara hugged her tightly and asked for forgiveness. Ap nodded n said she shld ask…

The children ran inside as tey were not interested in Saas bahu melodrama…. Rest of them followed them……

Ragini: sanskaar…. Sanskaar… Where r u?? See I’m back….. Sanskaar……

She shouted as she entered the house and ram upstairs to his room. She pushed open the door only to find sanskaar sleeping there…..

Ragini: arre sans…. Get up see I’m back…….

She said coming close to him and that’s when she saw so many needles in his hands and a machine beeping continuously…….

She covered her mouth with her palms and ran out of the room. She dashed with laksh who held her on time.

Ragini: why?? Y he’s lying like that?? N y there are so many needles on his hand?? Do u know how much pain he must b feeling?? N y is that machine kept there???

She held laksh’s collar and moved him and cried asking these questions?!

Laksh: ragini…. That day after that accident u both went in coma… N now after almost seven months u hv gained consciousness…. But sanskaar is still in coma…..

Ragini along with the kids are shocked hearing this. Ragini stumbled but the kids and laksh held her so that she doesn’t fall… But no matter hearing all this ragini fainted in laksh’s arms…. All panicked. The children asked laksh to take her to the room. Laksh picked ragini in his arms and took he to the adjacent bedroom. Dp called the doctor…..

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After two days…….

All were sitting in the hall Of MM! Except ragsan!

Shekhar: te condition is getting worse… If sanskaar didn’t woke up then ragini……. No no…. I can’t even think about that……

” if sanskaar didn’t woke up or if she didn’t saw sanskaar fine then I’m sorry to say she’ll again fall in coma or she can lose her mental balance…… ”

They recall doctor’s saying as she was leaving after treating ragini… They had cried so much especially the kids and from then they haven’t left ragini alone for a second also………

Laksh: but now wht can v do?? Even the kids hv tried but………….

He stops as they all hear some voice from Ragini’s room…. They all rush upstairs to see wht happened.!????? And when they reached her room they all had tears in their eyes…….

All the kids in front of Shiva’s small statue ( murti ) were standing folding their hands with tears flowing from their eyes… Automatically the others too joined their hands in prayer position and closed their eyes. . ……

Ishana: Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar

(( ishana starts the prayer joining her hands…..))

Saumya: Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar

(( saumya continues emotionally as the tears flow down her eyes…))

Sahil: Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere

All: Khuda mere tu bakshis kar
Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar

All: Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar

All : Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar

Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar
Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar

(( all close their eyes and pray for ragini and sanskaar…… Ragini was lying on the bed without any moment……))

Muskaan: O… teri marzi se ae malik
Hum is duniya mein aaye hain

(( muskan continues as flashes of ragini coming to their orphanage for the first time came in her mind…..She feels choked and stops singing. .. Everyone is silent for a moment…. ))

Ap : Tum log chup kyoon ho
Gaye gaao na bachoo gaao

(( ap opens her eyes and keeps hand on their heads and asked them to sing…..))

All.: Teri marzi se ae malik
Hum is duniya mein aaye hain

(( they got some courage and composed themselves and resumes singing closing their eyes…. Ap too closed her eyes…..))

Ishana : Teri rehemat se hum sab ne
Yeh jism aur jaan paaye hain

(( ishana sings…. Ragini is still lying unconscious but flashes of her meeting with sanskaar come in her mind….))

All: Tu apni nazar hum par rakhna
Kis haal mein hain ye khabar rakhna
Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar

(( all sings closing their eyes while ragini is still getting flashes and her hands move unnoticed by everyone…..))

Aman: Tu chahe toh hame rakhe
Tu chahe toh hame maare

(( aman cries while singing…. The kids sob thinking abt their ragu di….))

( cries )

All: Tu chahe toh hame rakhe
Tu chahe toh hame maare

Saumya : O…tere aage jhukake sar
Khade hain aaj hum saare

(( all bow down their heads in front of lord….))

All: O…sab se badi taaqat wale
Tu chahe toh har aafat taale

(( they pray to god to make everything fine like before…. Ragini opens her suddenly as the scene of sanskaar falling down from stairs flashed in her mind. …… ))

All: Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar
Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar
Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar
Teri hai zameen tera aasman
Tu bada meherbaan tu bakshis kar
Sabhi ka hai tu sabhi tere
Khuda mere tu bakshis kar.

(( all are engrossed in their prayer…..ragini Sits straight and gets emotional seeing all of them praying… She wipes her tears and stands up from the bed while rest of them continue to sing…….))

They Complete their prayer and bow down their heads in front of lord! They open their eyes and wipes their tears.

Saumya: ragu di….

She shouts as she see ragini missing. Everyone else too look there.. The elders get panicked. The kids run outside the room followed by the elders. …….

The kids rushed to sanskaar’s room and kicked open the door only to find ragini sitting their beside sanskaar… …..

All stand at the door and they see ragini talking to sanskaar…….

Ragini: sans….. Listen u know om ishana saumya sahil aman n muskaan hv came to meet u! Won’t u meet them???

The kids have tears in their eyes. They hug each other to console.

Ragini: u only promised them na that now they r not alone so now how can u leave them alone??? Bolo na sanskaar bolo…… Bol Na ullu ke pathe… Bol….

She sobs. The kids come inside and hugs her. She hugs them and cries feeling helpless…..

Om ( wiping her tears..): di u don’t worry jiju will b fine look how sahil n aman will tickle him n he’ll get up laughing…..

He signs the boys to tickle sanskaar.. They tickle his but no response. Ragini feels herself breaking.

Ragini: sans…. U told that u’ll never leave me alone…. Then how can u just sleep here haan??? Do u want me to go n work outside ,,??? Bolo na sans bolo…..

She shakes him. The elders cry seeing her state.

Sahil: jiju u promised me na that u’ll play video games with me… Then now wht happened… Come n play with me…. See no one plays with me not even om n aman… . … Pls get up na jiju……

They cry. The elders come in to console the crying kids and ragini…. But they shoo them away especially the kids.

Dp ( moving his hands in sanskaar’s hair ): bete see everyone needs u here pls get up n show that u r strong person n u can win over destiny……….

Laksh: sansky get up yaar now..

Swara: I’m sorry sanskaar pls get up now…….

Everyone continues on pleading. Ragini slowly gets up and moves back with tears flowing down her cheeks……..

“” Her sans was not listening to her. . He’s still sleeping…. His sleep is more important than her. . … .. He’s breaking his promise…. Sans how can u do this to me??? Pls sans get up na yaar. ……. “”

Ragini goes out of sanskaar’s room and goes out of the house………

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Okayyy so this was the next part…. ik many of u wanted that Sanskaar shld get up first.. but im soryy i did it like this……. now pls do tell me how was it!!! I’ll be waiting for ur response. … till then keep smiling !!????

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