YOU’VE COMPLETED ME… RAGSAN! FEW SHOTS…. SHOT 20

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Recap: ragsan are hurt…..

The wheels of the ambulance ? stop outside the hospital ? … The doors open and from one ambulance Sanskaar is taken out on the stretcher… Blood is continuously flowing from his mouth and head…. * HEARTBEAT PLAYS IN BG * Ap, dp nd laksh holds the stretcher along with the ward boys…. The white bed sheet has turned red…. Sanskaar is unconscious but there is a smile on his lips…… He’s taken in the OT!!!!! * HEARTBEAT PLAYS IN BG *

At the same time, Ragini is taken out from another ambulance….. Her face is fully covered with blood and her white saree has became red….. * HEARTBEAT PLAYS IN BG * There is a small smile on her face and she’s lying unconscious as shekhar shomi and swara push the stretcher inside the hospital……… * HEARTBEAT PLAYS IN BG * she’s also taken in the OT……

Shomi and ap sits on the bench, crying…… Swara sits down on the floor, crying vigorously as laksh consoled her….

Laksh: swara… Pls calm down… They’ll be alright…… have faith on god….

Swara: No its all because of me…… It was my damn idea to tease them… …

She cries hugging him. Everyone looks on. laksh makes her sit on the bench… Ap and shomi hugs her from either side and consoles her…. Dp shekhar and laksh are devastated to see the happenings and are not in the situation to react anything………

The nurse comes out and calls them.

Laksh: everything is fine na sister ???

Nurse: both have lost much blood and we need to give them blood but they both have rare blood group AB NEGATIVE so…..

Shekhar: my blood grp is also ab negative u can take my blood….

Shomi : but shekhar u hv diabetes….

Nurse: sorry sit then we can’t take ur blood….

Laksh: its okay i’ll give them my blood….. Sanskaar and I hv same blood group… Take as much blood u want but sav them……

Nurse: okay come…..

Laksh is taken inside… After sometime he comes out with cotton in his hand.

He assures everyone. Shomi and ap goes to the temple and prays for their children.

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AFTER 6 MONTHS!!!!!!!

MM is shown….. Swara is seen coming out of kitchen with tray., lifeless… … Laksh comes to her and holds her…. She looks at him with pain….

Laksh: shona… Take some rest…. U r working since yesterday night….

Swara: I hv destroyed everything laksh… How can I rest.. Bcoz of me……

She sits on the sofa crying…. Laksh hugs her……..

“” they both have slipped into coma…… “”

He recalls the doctor saying this 6 months back after which everything changed…… Nothing was like before now……. Ragini was lying lifeless in her house and here sanskaar was also in same condition……. Both the families were devastated….. Shomi’s and Ap’s health was also affected and swara considered herself responsible for all this …….. And laksh would console her….. Shekhar and dp were trying to console their wives…… Laksh was trying to find teh best doctor for his brother and friend but was not able to find one…….

BAADI!

Shomi comes out from Ragini’s room wiping her tears. Shekhar looks at her and takes her to their room… He makes her sit while she burst out crying….

Shomi: my daughter….. Shekhar……

Shekhar: control urself shomi….. If she’ll see u like the when she gets up u know na she’ll take my class…. Do u want ur daughter to take ur husband’s class haan c??

Shomi still cries….

Shekhar: n then she’ll make me a hen…. And then I’ll hv to be her alarm clock for 10 days….

He makes noise like a hen ?….. Shomi finally smiles through her tears seeing him. She hugs him…..

Shomi: she’ll get up na shekhar???

Shekhar : of course shomi??? She has gone on me… She’s very strong….. U’ll see after sometime she’ll come running to u for her….. Her…. Favourite pasta……

He too feels choked but continues coz he knew of he broke in front of shomi then she’ll lose all hr hopes and will die….. N he didn’t want anything like that to happen…… He hugged her and they both consoled each other…..

Back in MM!

SWARA’S POV!

Its been six months since that incident but still the wounds are fresh…. Ragini and sanskaar are in coma, lying lifeless on their beds…… Ma ( ap) and mummy ( shomi) are taking medicines for BP…… Papa ( dp n shekhar ) are tensed…. Laksh has got so many responsibility on his shoulders…….. Its all bcoz of me….. All bcoz of me……..

# FLASHBACK #

Laksh dp and ap came to BAADI to take swara back after her pag phera…. All were sitting and having tea when dp said….

Dp: shekhar ji…. If u don’t mind I would like to say something…..

Shekhar: arre dp jI.. y r u saying like this?? Tell na…..

Dp: actually I n ap were thinking abt sanskaar’s and Ragini’s marriage…. Only… Only if u don’t mind…..

Ap nods while swalak looks on happily. Shomi and shekhar look at each other.

Shomi : but….

Shekhar: I think we Should first ask them…

Swara: there’s no need for that papa…

Shomi: wht r u saying shona??

Swara: yes mummy…. They both already love each other…..

All: wht???

Swara: yea…

Laksh: but swara how do u know???

Swara: first of all it was evident from their eyes that they both are so deeply in love and then one day when I went to call ragini in her room she was in washroom and has left her phone open… N when I was going to call her, her phn beeped and I saw that it was sanskaar’s msg…. ” I love u my raginii “…

Everyone looks on….

……. I was shocked but when I checked all their msgs and found that they both love each other sooo much and… And their love story has all the aspects….

Ap: means??

…. Means they had first fight, then friendship, love, confession… Even they had separation also when ragini came here leaving sanskaar in Kolkata only…….

Everyone giggles.

….Yeah then punar milan and all this…… n maa don’t u remember maye ni maye….. ( sangeet ceremony) … Vaise she said that it was for u but no… It was for ur jamai!!!!!

Shomi recalls the sangeet night and thinks……

Laksh: wht a crazy love story…….

Swara ( in flow ): but less then ours…..

Laksh glares at her while she bites her tongue as to wht she just said…. They both look at everyone and found everyone glaring at them.

Swara: we can explain…..

Laksh: yeah we can……

Dp: So do u both want me to call pandit to find a good muhurat for telling the truth…..

Laksh: no u call pandit ji for ragsan’s marriage… ?

Shekhar: Laksh….

Laksh ( ?): sorry….

Shomi: shona now tell….

Swara: voh actually we met through a common friend and in starting we used to fight, tease and pull each others leg…….

Laksh: we kept meeting each other…. And destiny played its game and later when I went on a trip we both realised that we both love each other…….

Dp: So if u would hv told us then??

Laksh.: Then u would hv eaten me raw dad…..

Dp: I don’t know abt then but now I’m going to eat u….

Dp come near him and raises his hand but instead of beating him he hugged him after scaring laksh out of his wits…… Everyone laughed….

Swara: this was only a summary otherwise……

Laksh: acha now leave that….. Now wht abt ragsan??

Swara: I hv a plan…..

” wht v??”

Swara: we’ll tell them that their marriage is fixed but not with them but with someone else and we’ll make sanskaar say to ragini….. It’ll b fun to see their reaction…..

Ap: but wouldn’t it be too much…..

Shomi: it can be risky shona…. I don’t think we shld play with their feelings…..

Swara: No ma….They hv Lied to us now its our time to pull their leg….

Ap: but still beta…

Shomi: we shouldn’t take nay risk… Wht if they take it seriously and d something to themselves….. No…. Shona pls cancel this plan….

Swara: trust me ma….. Nothing will happen to them…. Just trust me and follow my plan……

After thinking…. ” okay we r with u…. ” all say….. N later ragsan came….. N u know the rest………..

# FLASHBACK ENDS #

(((((Ik Banjaara Ik Taare Par Kabse Gaave
Jivan Hai Ik Dor Dor Uljhe Hi Jaave
Aasaani Se Girahe Khulati Nahi Hai
Mann Woh Hadila Hai Jo Phir Bhi Suljhaave
Raahi Ka Toh Kaam Hai Chalataahi Jaave
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve, Sun Sun Saaiyaan Ve
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve)))))

Swara cries in her room thinking abt all this…..

Swara: I’m sorry ragini…… I’m sorry sanskaar…. I’m sorry everyone……. Please forgive me……. Pls comeback……. Pls relieve me from this guilt of destroying ur lives……….

(((((Tinaka Tinaka Chidiya Laave
Aise Apana Ghar Woh Banaave
Jarra Jarra Tu Bhi Jodke Ik Khironda Bana
Boond Boond Hai Banata Saagar
Dhaaga Dhaaga Banati Chaadar
Dheere Dheere Yuun Hi Tu Bhi Apana Jivan Saja
Sichata Hai Yahaan Jo Bagiya Ko, Wahi Phool Bhi Paave
Raahi Ka Toh Kaam Hai Chalaatahi Jaave
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve, Sun Sun Saaiyaan Ve
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve))))

Days are passing like this only…… Swara goes down and brings tea for ap and dp…. She gives them medicine……… While dp takes from her ap is angry on her for her stupid prank bcoz of which sanskaar and ragini are lying lifelessly on beds…… Swara cries and goes from there………. dp consoles crying ap and makes her eat the medicine and makes her sleep…….. He goes to swara who’s sitting on the floor crying….. He keeps his hand on her head.

Swara: I swear papa I didn’t knew this will happen… I’m sorry papa…… I’m sorry……

She burst out crying….. Dp hugs her and consoles her…. He makes her stand and makes her drink water……

((((( Din Hai Parvat Jaise Bhaari
Raate Bojhal Bojhal Saari
Tu Yeh Sochata Hai Raah Kaise Aasaan Ho
Saari Anjaani Hai Raahe, Jinme Dhunde Teri Nigaahe
Koi Aisa Pal Aaj Ya Kal Meherbaan Ho
Ghume Kabse Dagar Dagar, Tu Mann Ko Yeh Samajhaave
Raahi Ka Toh Kaam Hai Chalataahi Jaave
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve, Sun Sun Saaiyaan Ve
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve ))))))

Another day…… Swara takes her bag and goes to BAADI to meet ragini……. The scorching heat was not affecting her as she knew wht was coming up…..

” its all bcoz of u swaraa….. U r responsible for my daughter’s condition….. ” she closed her ears as these words rang in her ear.

She was standing outside her house and with all her strength and taking deep breath and wiping her tears she rang the door bell. … She thought to go back but till then she heard the door opening. She turned back and found shekhar standing there….

” papa ” and she hugged him tightly. He too hugged her back and patted her back to calm her down….

She broke the hug and went towards Ragini’s room but before she could enter shomi pulled her hand to stop her. Swara turned back and tears started flowing from her eyes….

” ma pls…. ”

” don’t u dare come close to my daughter……”

” shomi pls… Let her meet at least… ”

” no shekhar…. U remember na she said that v shld trust her….. And nothing will happen to them….. See nothing happen to them…… ”

She shakes her while the trio cry…

” ma pls let me meet her….. ”

” never….. Do u even remember how we hv separated them that day…. ”

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Swara cries remembering those painful moments….. Shomi goes inside Ragini’s room leaving swara there crying……. She hugs shekhar and cries………………. She leaves from there crying………….

((((((( Ik Banjaara Ik Taare Par Kabse Gaave
Jivan Hai Ik Dor Dor Uljhe Hi Jaave
Aasaani Se Girahe Khulati Nahi Hai
Mann Woh Hadila Hai Jo Phir Bhi Suljhaave
Raahi Ka Toh Kaam Hai Chalataahi Jaave
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve, Sun Sun Saaiyaan Ve
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve)))))))))

Shekhar brings shomi out of Ragini’s room and consoles her while she keeps on crying…..

Shomi: i’ll never forgive her shekhar… … Never…..

Shekhar: she’s ur daughter shomi…..

Shomi: yes… Bcoz of my one daughter my other daughter is………..

Shekhar: control urself shomi….. Shss……
Calm down…….

He hugged her and prayed to god to make ragini and sanskaar fine again…………..

(((((((( ik Banjaara Ik Taare Par Kabse Gaave
Jivan Hai Ik Dor Dor Uljhe Hi Jaave
Aasaani Se Girahe Khulati Nahi Hai
Mann Woh Hadila Hai Jo Phir Bhi Suljhaave
Raahi Ka Toh Kaam Hai Chalataahi Jaave
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve, Sun Sun Saaiyaan Ve
Saaiyaaan Ve Saaiyaaan Ve)))))))))

Swara comes back to MM and cries remembering all bitter words of shomi and ap…… Laksh comes to her and tries consoling her…… She keeps on crying until she fell asleep….. Laksh makes her lie properly and comes out of the room.

Dp: beta is she fine????

Laksh: no papa….. Every night she’s crying…… I don’t know wht will happen???

Dp: beta did u tried to talk to any doc??

Laksh: yes papa…. But they r saying that we should talk to them and try to bring them back….. And the doc who treated them is saying if any one of them comes out of coma then it’ll b easy to bring the other one back…. Bcoz they both r in this state coz they thought that they’ll hv to leave each other soo………….

Dp nods…………. Laksh looks on………..

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Dhantanaaaaa….. Okay so ik I’m late.. N after two weeks I’m posting this… U know the reason right??? …… Well now don’t kill me for putting both of them in coma….

AUTHOR’S NOTE ?……

PS — Well u guys can always share anything with me regarding my ffs, it’s characters, story…. Anything… U r free to say anything I won’t mind….

Ani ( Anisha ) dear… I hope I can call u that…. Actually till where I remember I always reply u with ur name ani only…. May be I haven’t seen it…. I really hope u don’t mind……..

N dear ik there are many other actresses which can be Ragini’s sister.. I’ll keep that in mind for my next stories I promise…. And dear u can of course say anything and suggest me regarding the story n its characters… U have.. N not only u my every reader has full right to say abt the story coz my aim is to make my readers happy with my updates…… If u guys r not happy then how can I be??? I hv grown as a writer coz of u all… Coz of ur support… So I won’t mind if u guys will open up to me…. Regarding ANYTHING!! U can pm me or can comment… I won’t mind………

And ani dear… I’m really scared coz I really don’t know abt which surprise u were talking….. Hopefully u’ll read this n will tell me……

N I don’t know but I guess u don’t see my replies.. U hv asked me some questions which I hv replied to u.. So once again i’ll tell u…

U can find my all stories in my profile and also among Shilpa Anand and Jennifer Winget… I’m a Jennifer fan but I liked shilpa anand too in dmg……

Okay guys…. Ik I hv said more than that was needed I suppose… So here i’ll stop my chit chat with a hope that u r not bored with the update nor with my bak bak….. Pls do comment and share ur reviews with me…….

N ik most of u ppl know that our queen is coming back with a bang as Pehredaar Piya Ki.. Which will stream on Sony tv from 17 July at 8:30 pm only……. There are many controversies going on but I’m sure with alk our love n best wishes it’ll cross all the hurdles….. So guys keep supporting and loving our queen!!!!!! ? ? ?

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N also here’s a new ff on raglak which my dear friend Shikha has wrote… I’m posting it on tu for her… So pls do read n share ur views….

Here’s the link……

http://www.tellyupdates.com/perfume-romance-raglak-ff-part-1/

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