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Home»Fan Fiction»YOU’VE COMPLETED ME… RAGSAN! FEW SHOTS…. SHOT 16
Fan Fiction Swaragini

YOU’VE COMPLETED ME… RAGSAN! FEW SHOTS…. SHOT 16

Richa19By Richa19May 10, 2017Updated:May 10, 201764 Comments14 Mins Read
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Recap: ragini’s outburst….

AT MM!!

Ap ; sanskaar beta go n call laksh from his room.. Its getting late we have to start the ritual…

Said ap to sanskaar from downstairs as he was coming down. He compiled and went to laksh’s room and found him sleeping…

Sanskaar: oh god.. He’s still sleeping if mom got to know then on his wedding day only he’ll get beaten up by mom…. But but…. It’ll b awesome to see mom beating him ??…

He keeps his finger on his chin and goes in a dream where laksh is getting beaten up by ap and everyone is seeing him and laughing….

Laksh: mom please yaar leave me….

Ap: acha leave u?? Jab dekho tab sota rehta hai… Now i’ll see how u even sit let alone sleep…

Saying she hits him on his Bum with broom. Sanskaar is laughing like a mad holding his stomach.

Laksh: ruk ja bete tu…. Bcoz of u I’m getting beaten up n instead of saving me u r laughing…. I’ll see u later….

Sanskaar stops laughing.

Ap: you’ll scare ur brother haan c?? U r threatening him???

Laksh: no mom no… Ahhhh….

She again. Beats him… sanskaar again starts laughing…. After sometime ap stops and comes to snaksaar and holds his ear..

Ap: I told u to wake him up na??

Sanskaar ; voh…

He smiles sheepishly. Laksh got a chance and added fuel in the fire.

Laksh: yes mom he came to my room but said that it’s still 5 am and I can sleep for 2 more hours so I slept….

He said innocently while sanskaar looks at him shocked. Ap glares at him. Laksh shows his tongue from behind ap and silently laughs. Now it was time for sanskaar. Ap started beating him while laksh laughed and sanskaar shouted.

“” nooooo “” shouted sanskaar…

He came out of his dream and coughed and wiped his sweat.

Sanskaar: oh god.. Wht a dream yaar v? First parts was nice but after interval .. No no no…. I’ll wake up bhai now otherwise……

He keeps his hand on his Bum and then shakes his head to erase that thought also….. He shook laksh to wake him but he wasn’t ready to wake up…

Laksh s @rre sone do na…. Whole night I was talking to swara now at least let me sleep…..

He said in sleep. Snaksaar thought abt ragini but sighed and continued waking him up by putting the point of a pencil ✏ in his ear and making sound from the things kept there but he was sleeping like a kumbhkaran…. Finally he saw a polythene bag there and an idea struck him. He blowed air in the bag and made a balloon type and brought it near laksh’s ear and burst it by a needle … Hearing a blowing sound laksh suddenly got up and saw sanskaar laughing. He chased him in the room and when both got tired, they fell on the bed and started laughing like anything…. Sanskaar informed him to come down quickly as ap is waiting for him. Laksh nodded and sanskaar went downstairs thinking abt ragini and helped ap with tge preparations.

Later laksh came and all applied haldi to him while he made faces. Sanskaar was enjoying coz he got am idea to make up with ragini … Later ap asked sanskaar to go to GH AND give tge shagun ki haldi to shomi. Sanskaar nodded and went to GH. .

Shomi: shona yaar u please keep sitting here… Ragu just hold her.. ..

Instructed Shomi to swarag…. Swara pouted while ragini sat beside her holding her hands.

Swara: but ma I don’t want to apply this haldi… its yuck…

Complained Swara making faces. Ragini giggled.

Swara ( holding rag’s ears): don’t u laugh at me ragu… Ur time will also come then I’ll laugh…

Said she sticking her tongue out. Ragini just smiled as she didn’t understood what she said.

Shomi: stop teasing her shona and u keep quiet it’s a rasam so u hv to compile. . its for sometime only.. Sanskaar might b coming with the haldi…..

Shomi went to see the preparations while the sisters sat there with their cousins who were dancing and talking….

Swara was wearing a yellow and white lehnga with flower jewellery and Ragini was wearing yellow and orange patiala salwaar suit!! Both were looking gorgeous!

All the gents were in the house having breakfast and talking and giggling. Shomi asked shekhar to call dp and ask him abt sanskar! He complied and called dp. He told him that sanskaar has left and might b reaching in a few minutes.

Outside Ragini was getting a little bore as she was not able to listen anything and felt isolated though Swara and their sisters tried to cheer up. She excused herself and went to her room to get fresh.

Sanskaar came in with ” shagun ki haldi “. He was looking so hot and handsome in a white patiala salwaar ( men’s of course ? ) and yellow kurta with orange prints totally matching with ragini’s outfit, coincidentally. His eyes were looking for ragini but couldn’t find her. He came in and greeted shomi and handed the haldi to her. Shomi blessed him and invited him for the breakfast. Firstly he refused then compiled as she was requesting him.

In the hall all relatives of swarag were sitting including nikhil. he smiled and took blessings from the elders. He totally ignored nikhil. Shomi served him tea and some breakfast and went out to start the ritual.

All were talking and laughing when suddenly shekhar’s hand hit sanskaar’s hand and the tea ☕ spill over his kurta . He jerked and moaned a little as the tea was hot.

Shekhar: I’m so sorry beta….

He said cleaning the his kurta with the tissue. Sanskaar held his hand and stopped hin and signed that he’s fine.

Shekhar: beta pls u go n wash this i’ll get a new kurta for u…

Sanskaar ( types in his phone) : it’s okay uncle.. Vaise bhi I’m going home only so it’s okay.. I’ll wash and come…..

Outside, ragini came down and she also applied haldi to swara. Swara too put haldi on her cheeks and nose. Ragini frowned and was abt to attack on her when shomi held her hand and asked her to get few gifts from their ( shek-shomi) room… Ragini compiled and went upstairs.

Saying so he went upstairs to wash his kurta. He entered in one room but few kids and a lady was there so he couldn’t go inside. In the next room thankfully it was empty. He went inside, locked the door and took off his kurta..??? he was looking just ahhhhh ???? so handsome….. he hurried and washed the stain with water and blowed air on it to dry for sometime and then wore it and came out of the room.

He sighed and went downstairs. Ragini came from the other side and entered the same room and took the gifts as per the orders and started walking looking at the gifts when she bumped into someone and both fell down with the person’s hand on her head so that she doesn’t gets hurt.

” ahhhhh ” she screamed as she hit the floor with a heavy body on her. All the gifts got scattered on the floor.

She opened her eyes and looked above and found sanskaar on her. She widened her eyes looking at him and then turned away and blushed a little realising their position.

Sanskaar removed his hand from under her head and got up from her and forwarded his hand for her to get up. She smiled and also forwarded her hand but then reality struck her and she took her hand back and got up herself. She brushed her clothes and picked up the gifts.

She was abt to go when he held her hand and pulled her inside the room and closed the door. She was shocked and annoyed with his actions. He got his phone from the bed which he left before. He came to her and made her sit on the bed and he himself sat on his knees and kept his hands on her knees and took a deep breath.

( sanskaar’s dialogues are in sign language. )

Sanskaar: raginiii I know that I did wrong with u….. I didn’t trusted u.. Our love… N trust me I’m regretting doing that… I’m really very very sorry raginiii ( he holds his ears and tilts his head. She smiles as he was looking very cute but then straightens herself and turns her face… He sighs and turns her face to face him) raginiii please give me one last chance I… I promise u that I’ll never give u a chance to complain….. N if u want u can give me any punishment I’ll accept it but please forgive me and…….. ( he makes her stand and takes her hands in his) I’m again proposing u raginiii….. ( she gets teary eyed) Raginiii will u marry this duffer idiot ullu ka patha ex or still a boyfriend of yours?????? Please raginiii please…… I promise after our siblings marriage I’ll talk to our parents abt us and…….

Before he could complete ragini too bends down and hugged him tightly and nodded yes… He too hugged her back close to his heart and kissed her hair…

” I love you sans…. ” murmured ragini and kissed her cheeks, breaking the hug. He smiled and lipsed ” I love you too “…. Both smiled and touched their foreheads and cried and smiled……

” raguuuuu ” shomi shouted from downstairs. Sanskaar told her and she smiled, got up and took the gifts and was about to leave when she turned back and said….

Ragini: oye ullu ke pathe।। ( sanskaar got surprised seeing her talking like this.. She winked at him ) I’m still angry on u so u hv to do something special for me…..

Sanskaar: don’t worry meri ullu ki pathi… I’ll b ready with ur surprise. U be ready to be my wife……

{ I’m soooo sorry for using those words.. Please forgive me if I hv hurt u….. }

They both chuckled and sanskaar left after pecking her forehead. She smiled and went down now fully happy and excited….

She went down and handed over the gifts to shomi and then went to swara from back and took handful of haldi and applied on her face and laughed.

” raguuuu ” shouted swara and took more haldi and throwed on her but she bent down and it went on shomi.

” shona what r u doing??? ” scolded shomi. Ragini showed her tongue to swara who showed her, her fist ✊ and acted like beating her. Ragini laughed and ran.. Swara followed her and finally catches her…. And applies all the left over haldi on her face. Ragini pouts cutely. All this is seen by sanskaar who came to bid bye to the elders. Shekhar stops him as he doesn’t want him to be the victim of swarag’s fight. Both the sisters hug each other and Ragini starts dancing and singing…. Shomi makes her vedio…..

Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tohra saajan ayo tore desh

(( ragini goes in the middle and starts dancing beautifully… She points at tge door while her eyes are fixed on sanskaar…. He too smiles seeing her and does ??.. Hiding from shekhar and everyone else… She blushes))

Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke
Mere sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya
Pyar ka… lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka

(( she then closes her eyes and moves ahead and acts like opening a window by her hands ….. Then she goes to one side and acts like reading a letter….. Everyone smiles and claps…. She pulls swara with her and both then dance…..))

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

(( both the girls do the steps gracefully
and blushes thinking abt their love…… Sanskaar winks at her making her weak in her knees…. She shows fake anger and goes from there…… ))

Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tohra saajan ayo tore desh

(( swara again pulls her and keeps her elbow on her shoulder and winks at her… She’s teasing her abt her would be husband…. Both ragsan blushes at their respective places….))

Woh kabhi dike zameen pe
Kabhi woh chand pe
Yeh… nazar kahe usse yahan
Mein rakhloo bandh ke
Ek saans mein
Dhadkano ke paas mein
Haan paas mein ghar banaye
Hai bhoole yeh jahaan

(( ragini goes in her dreamland where only she and sanskaar are there…. But every time she goes to touch sanskaar he disappears making her blush at her madness…. At last she catches him and keeps his hand near her heart and then hugs him…. He too hugs her…..))

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

(( swara breaks the hug bringing ragini out of her thoughts… She blushes and both the girls dance in the middle while some other girls surround them……))

Preet mein tori ore saawariya
Payal jaise chanke bijuriya
Cham cham naache tan pe badariya
Hooo..hoo hoo…

(( swara goes to everyone taking rounds and rounds while ragini keeps singing and staring at sanskaar who blushes…. ))

Baadaliya tu bharse ghano
(bharse ghano..bharse ghanoo)

Aaa..aa..aaa..

Jo… yeh badliyan woh chhed de
Toh chalke baarishein
Woh.. de aahate kareeb se
Toh bole khwaishen he aaj kal
Zindagi har ek pal
Har ek pal usse chaahe
Hai jiska dil hua

(( swara comes and takes Ragini’s hand and entangle her hand with her’s and moves here and there dancing….. Ragini again goes in her dream land with sanskaar where they both are walking hand in hand and looking in each other’s eyes….. Sanskaar holds her hand and pulls her making her fall on him…. She goes weak in her knees feeling him so close and his fragrance was making her mad……..))

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

(( swara again pulls her out of her dreamland by patting her shoulder and they both do kikli together…..))

Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke
Mere sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya
Pyar ka lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tohra saajan ayo tore desh

(( all the girls and ladies and grannies come together dancing like anything while our love birds are having a cute eye lock…. Sanskaar is standing far with shekhar and other gents while ragini is dancing in the middle with everyone…. ))

Finally the song gets over breaking their eye lock…… Both blushes and bid bye to each other from far only and. Sanskaar leave for his home…..

Later everyone gets freshen up and sleeps for sometime…. They all needed proper rest as tonight is the wedding and they all wanted to look fresh…..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Ahaan!!!!! So so-so……. Misunderstanding clear…. Happy guys?? ??? chalo chalo now tell me fast how was it??? Did u liked it?? N yes I hope u guys didn’t mind that ukp! Ik its common now a days but still……. Okie now I need to go…. Bbye… Take care n keep smiling always!!! ????????????

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Richa

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    64 Comments

    1. sinni on May 10, 2017 6:24 pm

      At last misunderstandings are clear awesome update

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:48 am

        Thank you sinni!!! ? ?

    2. dharani on May 10, 2017 6:27 pm

      awesome… very happy that misunderstandings are clear

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:48 am

        Thank you so much dharani dii!! ? ?

    3. lovely7 on May 10, 2017 6:54 pm

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:49 am

        Thank you lovely!!! ? ?

    4. asra on May 10, 2017 6:55 pm

      fabulous dear…yippee ragsan misunderstanding clear….sooo happy….ragsan scenes r super dear….loved it alot….swarag dance superb dear….sanky imagination hilarious dear….waiting for Sanky surprise….tkcr dear…

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:50 am

        Thank you so much asra dii!!!! ? ? I’m glad you liked it!!! ?

    5. Vk on May 10, 2017 7:14 pm

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:50 am

        Thank you vk!!! ? ?

    6. Jayanti on May 10, 2017 7:14 pm

      fab update richa…ragsan misunderstanding clear ho gayi…badiya and that ukp wala dialogue was nice…hehehe…it realyy is common now

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:51 am

        Yeah very common… Though I don’t use but thought to add it here ?? thank you so much!!! ? ? ?

    7. mk on May 10, 2017 7:26 pm

      amazing dr. finally misunderstanding are clear

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:51 am

        Thank you mk!!! ?

    8. aditi on May 10, 2017 7:28 pm

      superb

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:52 am

        Thank you aditi!!! ?

    9. Sreevijayan on May 10, 2017 7:37 pm

      Loved it my dear..awesome

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:52 am

        Thank you so much sree di!!! ? ?

    10. Sindhura on May 10, 2017 7:41 pm

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:53 am

        Thank you sindhu dii!!! ? ?

    11. vini on May 10, 2017 7:53 pm

      superb

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:54 am

        Thank you vini!!! ?

    12. P112111 on May 10, 2017 7:54 pm

      Hehehehe……. Lga hi nhi koi misunderstanding thiiiiiiii……….. ???????

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:55 am

        Hehe!! Voh toh baad mein pata lagega!!! ??

    13. sug on May 10, 2017 7:55 pm

      mindblowing am happy to see ragsan together

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:55 am

        Thank you sug!!! ?

    14. vani on May 10, 2017 7:57 pm

      awesome yaar

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:56 am

        Thank you vani!!! ? ?

    15. avika on May 10, 2017 8:17 pm

      Superr

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:56 am

        Thank you avika!!! ? ?

    16. Rakhi on May 10, 2017 8:42 pm

      Awesome dear…finally their misunderstanding got cleared.. Waiting for next update

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:57 am

        Thank you so much di!!! ? ?

    17. Ammy on May 10, 2017 9:09 pm

      amazing

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:57 am

        Thank you ammy!!! ? ?

    18. Rehna on May 10, 2017 10:05 pm

      Finally everything cleared, superb episode dear

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:58 am

        Thank you rehna dear?!!! ? ?

    19. Adreen18 on May 10, 2017 11:11 pm

      Fabulous dii….I am really happy that finally RagSan misunderstanding got clear…that ulp dialogue was nice….update soon

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 11:59 am

        Thank you so much adree!!!! ? ?

    20. mahima on May 10, 2017 11:14 pm

      awesome!!!!!

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:00 pm

        Thanks mahima!! ?

    21. spark on May 10, 2017 11:41 pm

      superb !!! loved it. ….

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:01 pm

        Thank you spark!! ? ?

    22. ? on May 10, 2017 11:42 pm

      ?????

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:01 pm

        ??

    23. keerthi on May 10, 2017 11:42 pm

      fabulous

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:02 pm

        Thank you keerthi!!! ?

    24. ? on May 10, 2017 11:43 pm

      update soon dear. ….

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:02 pm

        I’ll post soon dear!

    25. love on May 10, 2017 11:44 pm

      ragsan are so cute !! loved it. ….

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:02 pm

        Thank you love!! ? ?

    26. nive on May 10, 2017 11:44 pm

      awesome

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:04 pm

        Thank you nive!!! ? ?

    27. surbhi on May 10, 2017 11:45 pm

      im so happy they r together…… loved it !!!

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:04 pm

        Thank you surbhi!! ? ?

    28. Asw on May 11, 2017 9:42 am

      Amazing keep going

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:05 pm

        Thank you asw!! ? ?

    29. Niriha on May 11, 2017 10:14 am

      Awesome ????loved it

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:05 pm

        Thank you niriha!! ? ?

    30. sanam on May 11, 2017 11:07 am

      Bingo!!!!!! ?? awesome yaar loved his proposal and the dance…..

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:06 pm

        Thank you sanam!! ?

    31. Egde Black on May 11, 2017 12:11 pm

      superb episode…

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:07 pm

        Thank you dear!! ?

    32. Anisha on May 11, 2017 1:09 pm

      Lolll Sansku’s dream was hilarious 😛
      Loved RagSan scenes.Finally RagSan r together again.Waiting for his surprise 🙂

      • Richa19 on May 12, 2017 12:08 pm

        Thank you so much anisha!!!! ? ?

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