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Home»Fan Fiction»If you’re with me, I would stay alive (shot 1)
Fan Fiction Kumkum Bhagya

If you’re with me, I would stay alive (shot 1)

SowjiBy SowjiJanuary 24, 201725 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi guys this is sowji…this is my another ff…whatever reviews comment me frankly…lets move to love ff…this no. is 1…the ff begin with Screenshift to mall….one boy talking in phone said if u never fullfill my wishes…I will cancel your concert…..suddenly some of girls are see his face…one girl screamed abiiiiiiii… all the girls surrounding him within the fraction of second…..all girls are taking selfie with him… suddenly his security guards entered safeguard to him…abi would come out from the mall..he goes to his car..he said to security guards….I will go alone in my car…don’t follow me…his security guards(SG) said sir it’s not your safety…abi said do as I say…I am not requested you…I just ordered you.SG said k sir….abi driving his car towards taj hotel…he parked his car at parking area..after he entered inside hotel said…he goes towards receptionist…he asked the room no 810 key..receptionist give key to abi…that hotel is one of big hotel in that city….most secure hotel….abi move towards the lift….that 810 room is last floor of this hotel…he reached the last floor by using the lift…He used to spare key entered the room…one girl look at him…abi..your are always late..immediately that girl hugged him very tightly…that girl said I miss you alot…abi break the hug look at her eyes,her nose,her lips….now her face is clearly visible…that is our pragya…abi also said I was thinking about you only….my hearts has restless without seeing your face…pragya look at his eyes said if your are with me I would stay alive???immediately abi nuzzled her neck…pragya would clutched his shirt very tightly…pragya can smell his shirt…abi was busy in his romance with pragya…abi moaned her name pragya..pragya…meri beauty…meri pyaar..meri dil….meri breath…abi hold her waist….nuzzling around her neck…pragya was smelling his body….his body is wholely perspiration smell… but pragya was continuously smelling his body…she think that smell as redolent smell….abi and pragya are loving eachother….they can’t live without eachother…abi removed her duptta…he touched her bareskin in her back side…pragya said I always want you….abi kissing her spinal…said how pretty you are…pragya touched his shirt…removed the shirt from his body….

Precap:sarala said pragya..we have to go to attend our cousin marriage in Delhi…pragya said maa..I have a exams…how will I come to there…sarala said u never want to attend the exam…pragya was shocked…screenshift to abi home…dadi said we have to go to our uncle daughter marriage in Delhi…abi said dadi I have a important meeting…how will I come to there….dadi said cancel the meeting…abi was clueless…

Frankly comment me….whatever u reviews comment me…if u don’t like my ff frankly say….i am waiting for your reviews…this is my another ff…suddenly I got some idea that’s y I write this story….

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    25 Comments

    1. Nithyashreeraman on January 24, 2017 10:33 pm

      Nice start pls continue ur ff di☺

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:14 pm

        Thank u nithyashreeraman

    2. di on January 24, 2017 10:39 pm

      nice pls conti yaaaaa

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:15 pm

        Thank u di

    3. Princesskrisha on January 24, 2017 11:19 pm

      Awesome sowji di superb start waiting fr next part

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:36 pm

        Thank u princesskrisha..

    4. lopez on January 25, 2017 12:46 am

      simply fantastic proceed dear

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:38 pm

        Thank u lopez

    5. Akshaya on January 25, 2017 1:11 am

      Nice start sowji….really enjoyable…abhigya romance is so cute…. precap is interesting…. pls post the next one soon…

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:42 pm

        Sure akshaya..thank u for your comment

    6. b.k.maha on January 25, 2017 6:04 am

      Superrrrrrrrrrr……. But give long episode…… Waiting for it…..

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:43 pm

        Sure B.K.maha…thank u for your comment..

    7. priyanka on January 25, 2017 6:48 am

      Good start dear..please continue. ..

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:44 pm

        Thank u priyanka

    8. Prabhi on January 25, 2017 7:04 am

      Nice one love it continue

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:45 pm

        Thank u prabhi…

    9. HARITHA on January 25, 2017 8:46 am

      Nice start ..eaiting for nore

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:46 pm

        Thank u haritha

    10. Sugan on January 25, 2017 9:05 am

      Awesome yaa…. Pls continue….

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:47 pm

        Thank u sugan

    11. Minu on January 25, 2017 1:40 pm

      Nice start sis waiting for the next episode

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:47 pm

        Thank u minu

    12. sangi on January 25, 2017 2:53 pm

      Nice start…

      • Sowji on January 25, 2017 4:48 pm

        Thank u sangi

    13. Prathi on January 25, 2017 8:47 pm

      Superb start… Waiting for the next epi dear

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