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Home»Fan Fiction»YOU’RE MINE (Part 2)
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YOU’RE MINE (Part 2)

RidzieeBy RidzieeJune 24, 2017Updated:June 24, 20179 Comments5 Mins Read
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I woke up on a comfortable bed and looked around.Woah!!! Where am I? and why my head is hurting like hell? As far as I remember I didn’t drink last night. All of a sudden I remember what happened and my eyes shoot open. The bed was so comfy that I could lay on this bed for the rest of my life but last night’s event started flashing before my eyes. I tried to get down but I was pushed back down.Wth!!! I looked back to see my hands were tied to the bed.My tears started to fall down as the realization sets in.I….I have been kidnapped.But why?? I have to find out.But how?

I was thinking of how to escape this place when my eyes traveled to take a look at the room and I was shocked was an understatement.The room was amazing.It was the most gorgeous room I have ever seen. Since when kidnappers started affording such an expensive place? The room was just amazing.Sunlight was streaming in from the window.Wait! A window? This room has a f**king window??? My kidnapper must be stupid to let me stay in this room. Whatever! Now I just have to think of a way to untie me and then… I’ll be free.

I was in my own world thinking about a way to untie myself when the door suddenly bursted open and a tall, strong and masculine guy enters in the room.He stares at me quite sometime making me uncomfortable.Then finally he opens his mouth to speak something.

“Boss wants to see you” What?? His boss wants to see me ??? What am I? a toy? I gave him an unbelievable look but he decides to ignore me and comes towards the bed .He then untied my hands careful of not hurting me in the process.I instantly get off the bed and stand there looking everywhere else but at him.

He opened the door and signalled me to follow him which off course I didn’t listen.If they think just because I am kidnapped and defenseless I would do as they say then they are wrong.This is so not going to happen.

When he realized I am not gonna follow him he turned towards me and asked if I don’t want answers as why I am kidnapped. Off course I wanted to see who his boss is and what the hell he wants.So I follow him. Once we exited the room in which I was earlier, there was a long hallway which was connected to every room.He went past many rooms and I followed him. Eventually , with no warning, he came to stop in front of a door and as I was looking down, I bumped into him from behind, practically knocking him down.

Giving me a death glare,he knock on the door . woah boy, calm down. It wasn’t my fault that you decided to stop suddenly without even telling me.

“Come in” someone,may be his boss replied from inside the room in husky tone. I mentally slapped myself for thinking like this.

That guy once again look at me and told me not to do any drama and follow him. My hands were shaking now.With sweaty palms I turned the knob and pushing the door I entered inside.

There he was, that boss who has kidnapped me.But he wasn’t looking like a kidnapper or mafia.He was sitting in his chair busy in some file.He was engrossed in his work that he hadn’t noticed us yet.I looked around the room only to find out it wasn’t a bedroom.I haven’t noticed it. Now as I looked at it , it looks more like a study than a room with all the books,files arranged neatly in the cupboard.

That guy from earlier coughed to get his attention and he looked up at him.He told his boss that I am here and when he looked at me I was shocked is an understatement.He….how could he find out was the only thing that came to my mind.

And there he was, Neil Malhotra, sitting comfortably in his chair, looking handsome as ever, smirking at me.

He told that guy to leave us alone and that guy left the study leaving me alone with this devil.

I Think My Life Is Officially Screwed Now!!!!!

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Heyaa peeps, it’s Ridziee here, hope you all remember me.So as usual I am late?. But vo khte hai na der aae durust aae??
Anyways how r u all? I hope you guys missed me.So finally the beauty and the beast have a face off.what will happen next?? uske liye toh u have to wait for sometime?
Tysm to all those who commented on promo.so I have decided to continue this off for all those who wanted to read it.Love you guys❤❤❤❤
Good Bye.
Take care.
N don’t forget to comment? Your comments really means a lot to me.?

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    9 Comments

    1. Ridziee on June 24, 2017 10:12 pm

      Guys it is 3rd part….I don’t know how it got posted as 2nd one….telly updates this is 3 rd part…I have already posted 2nd part of this ff… please correct it?

    2. Naymaz on June 24, 2017 11:50 pm

      U know i am so happy that there is finally a neil sam ff others are always aradhika……..kudos

      • Ridziee on July 2, 2017 1:01 pm

        I know dear….there isn’t any nesam ff….that’s why I decided to write a ff on them.

    3. Angle on June 25, 2017 12:01 am

      Its very intresting.thanks for the updates.i hope next will be soon.

      • Ridziee on July 2, 2017 1:02 pm

        Thanks angle ….glad that you liked it.

    4. abi on June 26, 2017 12:19 am

      thank u for this ridzee…. i m waiting for the nxt??

      • Ridziee on July 2, 2017 1:03 pm

        Tysm abi… will post next part as soon as possible

    5. Indira on July 1, 2017 2:38 pm

      Please post next part soon,I’m waiting

      • Ridziee on July 2, 2017 1:03 pm

        Sure dear

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