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Yeh Vaada Raha – Karvi – Episode 11

Hi guys thank you Neha, Sanjana, Fatarajo, Karvi, Jannat, Amy and Saasha for your lovely comments so with out any further ado let’s start the story

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Scene 1:SRIKANTHS HOUSE
Srikanth:Survi tomorrow when they will come with the proposal just say no to. It ok
Survi:but…why..I don’t want to go on a date with that loser Kishan
Kartik laughs
Survi looks at him angrily
Kartik stops laughing
Kartik:sorry!
Srikanth:Survi..please
Survi sighs
Survi:ok
Srikanth smiles
Srikanth:good!
Srikanth goes to his room
Survi looks at Kartik angrily she sits on the sofa
Kartik holdes his ears
Kartik:sorry
Survi smiles
Survi:fine
Kartik puts his arms out at Survi to show that he wants a hug
Survi:what
Kartik:hug
Survi:Ohh
Survi gets up hugs him tightly and lovingly

Scene 2:OUTSIDE
Simmi is with her friends
Simmi:ok kushi, SARA bye I will see you tomorrow
Simmi’s phone starts ringing
Simmi:who is this at this time
She picks up the phone
Simmi:hello maa
Simmi’s mom:where are you
Simmi:I am outside the house
Simmi’a mom:just come inside and see what Kartik and Survi are doing
Simmi’s mom:they are hugging
Simmi:what
Simmi knocks on the house door
Simmi:Survi, Survi open the door

Scene 3:INSIDE
Survi:OMG!!..Simmi’s knocking the door
Kartik:I don’t care, please 5 more minutes, I want to hug you forever
Survi smiles
Survi:fine Mr ziddi dil, baba will open the door
They both gout side through the back door
Survi:Kartik what is wrong with you
Kartik smiles
Kartik:do you know, who ever that Kishan Vishan is I’m gonna kill him
Survi:why
Kartik:because he’s owing on a date with you yaar
Survi smiles
Survi:something’s burning
Kartik:what
Survi sticks her tongue out and runs
Kartik runs behind her
Kartik:Oy
Survi quickly runs back inside the house
They both laugh
Survi:Mr.Kartik Barve the most famous business man, who millions of people are jealous of is scared of a common man
Survi laughs
Kartik gets angry
Kartik:very funny, do you know this Mr.Kartik Barve that you are talking about yeah is soon going to have a Mrs.Barve, which is you
Survi shuts the door
Kartik:oh man
Kartik smiles when he sees Survi’s call, he picks up the call
Kartik:Survi!
Survi:what
Kartik:nothing bye
Survi:wait
Kartik:what
Survi:Don’t forget!, tomorrow when I’m going to go one a date with that Kishan Vishan KA baacha you come to the restaurant as well
Kartik:okay but on one condition
Survi:what is the condition
Kartik:right after the date I need a kiss
Survi:fine
Kartik:okay, bye
Survi:bye

Scene 4:MORNING
Survi wakes up and smiles
She looks at her phone and sees Kartiks message
Kartik’s message:good morning
Survi’s message:good morning <3
Kartik sees the message and gets happy
Kartik's message:wow a heart, why a heart?
Survi's message:because I love you
Kartik's message:I love you too
Survi's message:I found out which restaurant Kishan is taking me to
Kartik's message:what restaurant?
Survi's message:couples dine restaurant
Kartik's message:what the hel, couples dine you're not even a couple
Survi's message:I know, I couldn't stop laughing when baba told me the restaurant name
Kartik laughs

Precap:Shanti shouts SURVI IS YOUR GIRLFRIEND everyone gets shocked

Sorry guys for not posting frequently my internet connection is really bad these days?so it's hard to post..also I live in England so the timings are different

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