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Yeh un dinon ki baat hain- Totally fallen for you!!! Episode 4.

Hello samaina fans. I am very happy that you all liked my way of writing. My hearty thanks to all the readers who have commented on my articles, my TU friends who have encouraged me to write and thanks to the silent readers too. As all of you are excited for my 4th episode, so here it goes…..

Naina takes the newspaper from swati and goes to her father to show her results.
Naina: Papa, I want to show you something!
Rakesh: I also want to talk to you about something…
Sameer’s voiceover: Rakesh agarwal, father of naina and arjun. He is working as junior lecturer in the same college where naina is studying. He is very short tempered. To say frankly, I have never feared on any person but for the first time, I don’t know that I will afraid of my partner’s father. Even today, I fear him a little but not totally!!! But why should I be afraid of him? To know that, you guys have to wait…..

Rakesh closes the door behind him angrily. Watching his father’s angry, naina goes towards him to ask.
Naina: What happened papa? You are looking so angry. What happened???
Rakesh: (in a angry tone)Don’t you know the reason for my angry?
Naina: How could I know that papa?
Rakesh looks very angrily towards naina without talking anything….
Arjun: Papa, please tell what’s wrong???
Rakesh: You only ask your lovely sister!
Arjun goes to naina and asks her.
Arjun: Naina, what happened? Did you did anything wrong?
Naina: No no bhaiya. I didn’t did anything!
Rakesh: Just shut up naina!!!
Naina becomes silent and starts worrying.
Rakesh: If you don’t remember, I will remind you. While coming home, you pushed a flower vendor, right?
Naina then remembers it…..
Rakesh: You have spoiled all the flowers of his! And penalty has been paid by me….. I have to pay Rs2000 to him as you have spoiled his flowers…. This loss is because of you! Do you know how hard it is to earn money and save it! Can’t you see the road and walk properly???
Preeti: But tau ji!!!
Rakesh: Just shut up preeti!!! You are no less to naina. You are too running on road after naina like mad girl na…. Don’t you feel shame like doing like that?
Swati: But uncle, once please listen to us!
Rakesh: Swati, being their best friend you need to stop them na….But no, you are also behaving like them . This is not fair on your part.
Swati: But uncle…..
Rakesh: You better stay away from this swati. It’s not your problem….
And turns towards naina….
Rakesh: What is this naina! Are you planning to spoil the name of ours? Agarwals are having very good name in the society but you are spoiling that. Who gave you the right to do so??? See naina. This is a warning to you! Don’t ever do such things again! Or else….
Saying so, he leaves from there before anyone could say anything….
Naina becomes so sad that she was not able to say anything. Arjun comes towards naina…
Arjun: Naina…..
Naina turns towards arjun, gives him a fake smile and runs away from there.
Preeti and swati: Naina!!!
Arjun: Let her be alone for sometime….
Preeti: But arjun bhai!!!
Arjun: Yes preeti. I know about naina well. When we give her some lone time, she will become alright!!! Then we all will go and talk to her. Ok???
Preeti:Alright bhaiya…
Swati: Ok then preeti. I will leave now.
Arjun: Swati, stay for some more time….
Swati: Thanks bhaiya!!! But I need to leave now. My relatives are waiting for me. I need to go!!! Preeti, take care of naina. I will visit her later.
Preeti: Sure swati. Bye!
Swati: Bye preeti. Bye arjun bhaiya.
Preeti and arjun: Bye!!!
Swati leaves from there…. and preeti feels sad for naina.
Rakesh: Arjun, once come here. I think I am getting headache. Please do massage my head..
Arjun goes from there to his father’s room.
Preeti: Really amazing! I don’t know that headache creating person will also get headache! Saying so, she leaves from there.
Sameer’s voiceover: Really too much na…. Even I felt the same. Naina’s father is always like that. I never thought that I will collide with such kind of person who treats his daughter as if this is 16th century! Not only with her, he feels that every daughter should be treated like that. I mean should not be educated too much, should be married early, should not encourage them to do whatever they want to do and more and more….
I am having a father who always discourage me and same is the situation with naina’s father too. But soon, an incident happened that changed both of our lives. Don’t worry! Nothing happened with us but it did us a great favour. Want to know it? Then you have to wait!!!

At night,naina is in her room, upset and thinking about the incident happened. She was very happy till a few minutes, but suddenly everything changed. The happiness turned into a sad situation. She is not able to understand how to react to the situation. But she is really very upset. Arjun comes to her room. He sees her upset and plans to do something. And he comes and sits behind her. Naina notices her brother.
Naina: Bhaiya, aap?
Arjun: Naina, I am sorry.
Naina: But why bhaiya? You hadn’t done anything….
Arjun: I know it naina. Papa shouldn’t have done like that.
Naina bends her head down, sadly!
Arjun: I am saying sorry on behalf of papa!!!
Naina: No bhaiya. Please don’t say like that. I know about papa from childhood. Even though, it’s my mistake! I shouldn’t have spoiled the flowers. Because of me, papa lost his money na…
Arjun: But naina…..
Naina: It’s ok bhaiya. I thought that papa would be happy by seeing my photo in the newspaper but it was me who spoiled the occasion!
Arjun:(taking naina’s hands) My sister is too innocent!!! Please smile dear. I can’t see you upset. Please please…. Smile!!!(keeping a crazy expression)
Naina laughs seeing his face. Arjun feels happy!!! Arjun: Ufff! Finally, you smiled…
Preeti: Am I allowed inside???
They both turn and see preeti standing at the door.
Naina: Come in na preeti!
Preeti: I am happy to see you like this naina. See what I brought for you….
Naina: What? What did you brought for me?
Preeti gives her a box.
Preeti: This is for you naina. As you have topped the college, I thought of giving you something. Please take it.
Naina: Thanks a lot preeti.
Saying so, she opens the box.
Naina: (shouting loudly) Aaaaaa!!!
Preeti:(in a low tone) Did you like my present naina???
Naina: You preeti!!!
Saying so, naina starts running after preeti.
Arjun: Arey leave her naina. (Laughing loudly)
Naina:(looking towards arjun) Bhaiya, even you are also laughing!!!
Arjun: Actually, that gift idea was mine!
Naina: (opening her mouth in shock) Today I will not leave you guys!
Saying so, she starts chasing both of them….
Sameer’s voiceover: Hahaha ????. I know it’s too funny. But you guys are confused na. Wait, I will explain you. That gift box has a lizard in it!!! ???? Naina is very afraid of lizards from her childhood. That’s why she is chasing them like that!!! Fearful naina…. This is the name that I kept to her but when? I will reveal it later. Remind me guys!!!
Arjun and preeti: (breathing heavily) Enough naina. We can’t run more!
Naina: Me too bhaiya. Even I can’t run more…
Arjun: Anyway naina, get ready! I will take you to my favorite place for your mood change!!!
Naina:(with broad smile) Really bhaiya. You will take me there!
Arjun: Of course naina. But we should come back soon. If papa finds out, then we all would be at risk!
Preeti: Arjun bhaiya, will you take me too with you?
Arjun: Sure preeti. Get ready soon. Ok???
Naina and preeti: (loudly) Ok bhaiya!!!
Arjun: Shooo!!! (Looking side ways) Please don’t shout. Papa is sleeping!
Naina and preeti: Ok ok….
Saying so, he leaves to get ready. Naina and preeti also go to get ready….

Here, at sameer’s home—
Everyone are having dinner. Sameer is not seen there.
Lata: Servant!
Servant: Yes mam.
Lata: Call sameer for dinner! It’s already too late…
Servant:But mam, sameer babu has already completed having his dinner!
Lata:(getting up from her chair) What? When did he had dinner? And you haven’t informed me about that?
Viswa: What? But why did he ate before us? And you have to inform us when he was eating na…
Servant: I am sorry sir. But it was sameer babu’s order that I shouldn’t tell anyone about it…
Vishal: But what’s there to hide in it?
Sameer: Nothing much vishal!!!
Everyone turns towards their back and finds sameer with his bike keys.
Lata: What do you mean sameer???
Sameer: Nothing mom. I just need to go out early so I thought of having dinner early. That’s it.
Vishal: Ohoo! If that’s the case, why did you said servant to not to reveal it to anyone….
Sameer looking towards the servant- “Even though, he revealed it to all of you na…”
Servant, on hearing that and seeing sameer’s expression leaves from there.
Viswa: But you could have informed us na…
Sameer: Why? From now, should I eat with your permission or what?
Lata: But sameer! You are father didn’t mean like that….
Sameer: Not father. He is my step father!!!
Lata: Sameer!!! What are you talking? Have you lost your mind or what?
Sameer: I am in my senses perfectly! Anyways, I need to leave now. Bye!!!
Lata: Sameer!!! But….
Sameer leaves without looking back or uttering any word.
Viswa: This is going out of control!!!
Saying so, he leaves from there and vishal also leaves from, leaving lata alone.
Naina and preeti get ready to go out.
Naina: How am I looking yar?
Preeti: Awesome naina. I think someone will surely fall for you today.
Naina: Shut up yar…. You always tell like that. Ok fine let’s go. Bhaiya is waiting for us.
Arjun: Come on fast. We have to go and return quickly…..
Naina: Ok. Lets go….
Saying so, they leave for arjun’s favorite spot..

Sameer starts his bike and goes to his favorite hangout spot. The relly race spot where many bike races takes place everyday but many people don’t come to see them as they take place at midnight. Sameer reaches there with his bike. Munna and pandit: Hey sameer!
Sameer: Hai friends. Wow! What a wonder. Today you both came early!
Munna: You know what sameer! We have started from our home at 9:30pm itself!!!
Sameer: (looking at his watch) But what’s the need to come so early??? We can be here by 11:30pm na….
Munna: We know the time but pandit’s cycle don’t know that na….
Sameer:(with a confused expression and looking towards both of them) What do you mean munna?
Munna: You know about pandit’s cycle na…. We have started from our home at 9:30pm and reached here by 11pm. Once imagine, if we have started at 11pm, then we would have come by the time when everyone leaves!!!
Sameer starts laughing….
Pandit: Munna chup!!! Don’t forget that I gave you lift till here….
Munna: Oh really! If I would have came by walk, I would have reached even earlier!!!
Pandit: How dare you to say that….
Sameer: Guys guys. What are you both doing? We came here to enjoy, not to fight. Understood!!!
Pandit: Ok! Sameer is saying. So I will leave you munna for today!
Munna: ????
Sameer: Munna!!!
Munna: Ok ok!!!
Sameer: Let’s go and see what races are there today!!!
Munna and pandit: Chalo all of us together!!!
Sameer, munna and pandit are going towards the counter to know what’s special that night. While going the three of them notice a fight going on….
Sameer: See friends, some body is fighting there. Let’s go and help them.
The three go there and sees some goons leaving from there. They find a old person and his son (probably, older than sameer!) with injuries all over their body.
Sameer: Oh no!!! What happened uncle? Munna, pandit help them get up.
They lift the persons and make them sit on a bench near by…
Sameer: What happened uncle? What’s all this?
The old man: Beta, he is my son (showing his son who is beaten harshly than him) He is a racer….
Sameer:Oh wow!!! I think I have seen him somewhere.
And then remembers….
Munna: Sameer, is this the person who is on the top 5 racers of above all the categories???
Sameer: Oh yes. Now I remembered…. Yes, even I saw on the list!!! Nice meeting you sir….
Saying so, he shakes his hand with that person but…..
Uncle: Ouch!!!
Sameer: I am sorry uncle. I have forgotten that you are injured….
Uncle: It’s ok.
Pandit: But uncle, what happened to you? Why are you injured?
Old man: Actually, half an hour ago!!! A race has happened and we are in need of money, so we thought of winning a big amount and came here to race. And enrolled your uncle’s name in it…Some rich goons have also participated in the race and my son won the race!!!
Pandit: What’s the price money uncle???
Uncle: It’s Rs 2lakhs.
Munna: Oh my god!!! Really two lakhs…. I couldn’t believe myself….
Pandit: Really big amount!!!
Sameer: Then what happened?
Old man: Those goons didn’t like my son winning and came to take the money back. We said we are in need of money. Even though, they didn’t listen to us and beat us very hard and took away all the money we won and spoiled our bike also!!! And he shows their bike. It was totally spoiled….
Munna: Then we should inform the police about this?
Sameer: We can’t do that munna…..
Pandit: But why sameer???
Sameer: Have you guys forgot that this is an illegal game? We can’t complain on anyone.
Munna: Yes, you are right!!! But can’t we help them out?
Sameer: Yes we can. By winning another race!!!
Pandit: But why sameer, you could give them money na???
Sameer: I can but what should I say to mom and my step father? If I ask them money, they will start interrogating me….So, I can’t ask them and the only way to help them is to win a race with those goons….And I will win it at any cost!!! Munna and pandit, please take care of uncle and old man. I will go and deal with the goons….
Munna and pandit: Ok sameer!!!
Sameer goes towards the mic and announces
Sameer: Hello guys! Good evening everyone present here. Now a wonderful race is going to start. Who ever wants to participate can participate and win big amount. My bet is Rs 1 lakh….
All the people around get shocked on hearing that amount as the bets there would hardly cross Rs50000 but now the amount has been doubled….
The goons siting at the corner comes towards the stage and gives Rs 1.5 lakhs. Sameer identifies them as the people who have beaten those people. Sameer: But I have a condition for racing!!!
The goons: What is it?
Sameer: How can I believe that you guys will stick to your words?
The goons: You only say what to do!!!
Sameer: If you lose, then you guys have to give your bikes to me, deal???
The goons think a while and then agrees…..
The goons: What if you loses???
Sameer: I will give away my bike….It’s value is Rs 20 lakhs!!!
The goons: Rs 20 lakhs!!!
Munna and pandit: Has he gone mad or what???
The goons: Deal is ok for us…..

The race starts…..Sameer and other goons are excited for the race because if sameer loses, they get a huge profit!!! 3…..2…..1….. Go!
The race starts!!! Every bike is giving a tough competition to sameer but sameer, who is very good at racing is no less to any great racer!!! He is moving like a light year!!! He was about to win the race but suddenly, a bike crosses sameer’s bike at the last moment and sameer including goons have also lost…..
Sameer: Aaaa shit! How is this possible?
Munna and pandit: How is this possible?
The crowd: How is this possible?
Everyone was equally shocked…. sameer goes towards the goons and asks
Sameer: Bhai, do you know that person?
The goons: No brother. Even we don’t know about that person….
That person goes away from there to the counter to collect his fee. The person says that tonight there is an advance new year party. The amount will be given after the party. That person agrees and goes away from there.
Sameer becomes sad and goes towards the old man and uncle. Munna and pandit goes towards sameer.
Munna and pandit: Sameer!!!
Sameer signs them to talk later…. and goes towards uncle and old man and sits beside them.
Sameer: I am really so sorry uncle. I couldn’t win the race.
Uncle: (pampering sameer by his hair) It’s ok beta. You really tried your level best sameer!!! You are truly a great champion….
Sameer: But uncle…..
Uncle: Don’t worry beta. Not every problem in life gets solved easily…. Leave it beta. We will leave now. Saying so, they are about to leave from there.
Sameer: Wait a second uncle. Please i will call the doctor and after getting your injuries bandaged, you can leave. Until then please wait. Uncle: Ok then. We will wait. You are small persons. Go and enjoy your party!!!
Sameer: But uncle, we can’t leave you in this situation!!!
Uncle: Please beta. You have already helped us a lot and you have even called the police! That’s more than enough….. Please go.
Sameer: Please be careful uncle.
Uncle: Ok!!!
The advance new year party has started and was on full swing….Everyone is singing and dancing and enjoying their party. Sameer, munna and pandit are enjoying the party by dancing…. and suddenly, someone has closed sameer eyes with a cloth and took away from there.
And brings him out of the hall and makes him stand in front of a huge tree. She held his both hands.
Unknown: How dare you to touch me like that? What are you thinking of yourself? Do you think that….
Saying so, that person looks at sameer and says….
Unknown: You are tall, fair and handsome so that you could do anything with the girls and we will be silent!!! No way. I am not that type of girl. Understood you idiot???
Sameer: Please mind your language miss….
Unknown: What? You need respect! For that you need to be decent. It is not easy to gain respect, understood?
Sameer: Hello excuse me miss! I think you have mistaken identifying me!!!
Unknown: No. My memory power is very sharp that whatever I select once, I can remember it till the end…..
Sameer: (moving his hands) Please leave me. Munna, pandit!!! Where are you guys???
Unknown: Ohooo!!! It means that you all belong to the same batch….
Sameer: What do you mean by that???
Unknown: I mean that all the members of your gang will behave with girls like that….
Sameer: Stop blaming like that without proper evidence….
Unknown: Evidence? How can I show it?
Sameer: (moving away his hands) Leave me. I won’t do like that ever.
That person comes so close to sameer. She came so close that sameer could hear her heartbeat…. and her hair touched his face. Her hair was so silky. She has maintained her hair well.
Unknown: Hey you. Today I will see your end….
Saying so, she holds his hands tightly!
Sameer: What are you doing???
Meanwhile, another girl and a boy comes there and holds that girl back.
One girl: Leave me yar. What are doing?
The boy: (holding sameer hands) I am really sorry. My sister misunderstood you.

Saying so, he removes the cloth from sameer’s eyes. He opens his eyes and sees a girl standing with her back towards him….
She then turns towards sameer and she is naina!!! Sameer gets totally stunned on seeing her. Under the moonlight, she was looking like an angel in her black dress….And everyone start shouting “Happy new year”. And the rockets are shot into the air….In that lightning, he looked at her. She was not fair but was looking so amazing with her hair floating in the air blowing at that time.
Sameer’s voiceover: She was looking so pretty. I don’t what happened to me but I felt my heartbeat increasing at that time. I have saw many beautiful girls but no one attracted me as naina attracted me….. I never knew that she would soon become my life!!!! Scene ends freezing on sameer’s face.
Coming up: Naina and sameer decides to go to delhi!!!

So guys, this is my article!!! I hope you guys will like it. Please do read it and comment your valuable views on it and suggestions are welcomed. Enjoy reading guys!!!

Ghvpriya

I am from Visakhapatnam in india. I am at present pursuing my MBA. Yeh un dinon ki baat hai--- just realized that it became a part of my life ❤

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