Hlo this is my first ff and I am not as good as the other writers are. After reading many articles I couldn’t stop myself from writing this here I start
Characters
Sanskar
Swara
Ragini
Laksh
Plot
A girl wearing shades checked in in a 5 star hotels with a stern attitude in the room she had earphone in her ears and a bottle of shampoo in her hand she seemed to be a rock star and was singing o my god look at that face you look lyk my next mistake the girl was insane abt living life abt loving life
8 years later
A small girl entered a dark room and she said ola listen to this song u will feel lyk dancing
The person whom the girl was talking was the girl shown 8 years before she said f9 play the music
The music: NYC to meet u whe….
The song stopped and the phone was lying broken on the phone she threw the phone she broke it
This was all thought by a man he had regret in his eyes and even pain but heartless people can suppress it he did the same by giving an evil smile and his eyes projected revenge..
That is all as the intro hope u lyk it pls do comment
Who is the small girl
Who is the lady
Who is the man
What happened in these 8 years
How was the plot
Shall I discontinue writing this ff
Plz plz plz do comment and the pairs won’t be disclosed now
14 Comments
Yup continue Dr. … lyked the plot…. but plz revise the chapter before publishing. … as having difficulty due to typo error
Thnx sujata I would surely remember that fact in mind hope I do not diss appoint u
nice
Thnx kriya I hope I don’t dissappoint u
Very nice but please don’t mind keep ragsan as a pair
Don’t worry dr ur wish my command I would try my best not to dissappoint any Ragsan Swalak swasan or raglak fan thnx for ur comment
Love the plot… Please do update fast and regularly
Thnx sree for reading n commenting I will try my best to upload the series as fast as possible
Please please please make it Swasan its amazing. I usually don’t comment but i couldn’t resist myself from commenting. this story is looking very good yaar please make it Swasan
Thnx ria do not worry abt the pairs trust me I won’t disappoint any swasan Swalak Ragsan or raglak fan n thnx again for ur comment
Nice one cntnue
Thnx s Priya hope I do not disappoint u
I think the girl is Swara’s daughter.. Anyway I don’t want to James Bond here.. So leave it.. BTW nice plot .. Post soon..!
Thnx Shreya well I won’t say anything abt ur guess u will cum 2 know abt it in the next few updates