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Home»Fan Fiction»I wish u to be mine …episode 1
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I wish u to be mine …episode 1

HaridhraBy HaridhraApril 25, 201746 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys I’m back … I’m overwhelmed by ur response guys n one thing I would like to mention is that don’t worry guys I wouldn’t make it a teenage love story.. There is suspense u guys will get knw abt that as the story proceeds. Now enough of my bakbak …

One fine sunny morng two lil cute children r getting ready for their first day at sckll ( pre kg) off course their parents r going mad at them for their funny cute antics … They screen is separated into two one side a girl of age 4 yrs with a lot of attitude n cuteness ,not to mention her eyes honey brown orbs ..

On the other side a boy of same age with full tashan n tadi is getting ready,but one seeing his bluish green orbs anybody believe he is a cute n innocent boy…At last these two cutiepies landed up into their class.. N as expected they started fighting n it landed by shiv breaking his box n ani throwing water on his ( offu in childhood itself has..). The pity class teacher she has been trying to came them for last 1 hour..so here is their punishment that is by saying sry n making frnds .. V all only knw how this shiv gonna apologize to her.

Last but not the least they bonded together so well with their own tadi .They have last become they the best buddies of their class. Then years passed the classes were shuffled hence their frndship broke ,but not their bond n understanding .They waited for coming in the same as the other n luckily the came when they were in 5 th std like 10 yrs .But unfortunately they were not able to regain their frndship as something or the other stops them. Hence that year also passed. Destiny always unites them in every possible way.Again they were in the same class in the 9 th std n tis time no shuffling due to pre board exams.

So here starts our new phrase that is the childhood frndship turning into a cute lil crush story. N guys that’s all for today. N plz bear me for tis .Actually I thought of giving a whole epi for their childhood. But u guys asked me to finish childhood track fast so I ended up writing this one. Actually I didn’t like the way I presented .So plz if u guys don’t like it say it I will try again something new ..I tnk this time chapals n chamelis will be in huge amount.
Even healthy criticism is accepted.

With love
Hari
Bye

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    46 Comments

    1. Anaya on April 25, 2017 9:04 am

      nice

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 11:45 am

        Tnq .

    2. saidha on April 25, 2017 9:18 am

      wow i was expecting this one and it came thanks fr postingg and post next asap and its a good story line keep writin my frnd

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 11:47 am

        Sure yaar, tnq so much.

    3. Haridhra on April 25, 2017 9:28 am

      Ohh my god I’m really sry guys there r lots of typo errors n grammatical mistakes …. Offu its a lil embarrassing.. Plz bear with that.

      • saidha on April 25, 2017 9:49 am

        its ok haridhra it happens

      • SamSun on April 25, 2017 10:14 am

        it is completely fine. every author makes these mistakes. we understand.

    4. Arpita on April 25, 2017 9:56 am

      No champa and chameli.ok.it is nice.

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 11:56 am

        Tnq so much Arpita di :yum:

    5. SamSun on April 25, 2017 10:15 am

      such a cute story, I am eagerly waiting to see the cute crush story turn into a beautiful love story!!!!

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 11:59 am

        Tnq so much Samsun…Ur comments r motivating me lot ..N I like ur ff pyaar ki dastan so much yaar ..

      • SamSun on April 25, 2017 1:35 pm

        thank u ☺☺??

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 6:44 pm

        Ur wlcm ..

    6. CrazygirlS.P on April 25, 2017 10:53 am

      Awesome

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 11:59 am

        Tnq ..

    7. Arthi on April 25, 2017 11:03 am

      Wow dr superb dr waiting for the next crush part dr……….Update soon…..

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 12:00 pm

        sure arthi Dr I would try to update it soon ..N tnq so much Dr ..

    8. sumitha on April 25, 2017 1:17 pm

      Really like ur ff post next eagerly waiting???☺☺☺☺☺???

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 6:31 pm

        Sure sumi ..Tnq so much ur comments mean a lot ..

    9. thedreamsoul on April 25, 2017 1:38 pm

      Awesome one dear , it is so cute !

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 6:32 pm

        Tnq sana Dr … I’m waiting for u ff eagerly yaar..

    10. Lilly on April 25, 2017 2:08 pm

      Nice epi dear…update soon…

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 6:33 pm

        Tnq so much Lilly ..

    11. nikitajai on April 25, 2017 3:18 pm

      It is nice

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 6:33 pm

        Tnq Nikita di …

    12. Vivikhta on April 25, 2017 4:40 pm

      Very nice update dear. Don’t worry about the typos and all….Ithappens with every author.Update sSOO!n!

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 6:36 pm

        Ohh so sweet of u vivi di ( can I call u so ).. Tnq so much for u motivations .. On seeing ur comments I get my energy to write next one ..

    13. pooja26 on April 25, 2017 5:03 pm

      superb dear…..
      post asap…..
      tc…

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 6:36 pm

        Tnq so much ..sure I will try to post it..

    14. alekhika20 on April 25, 2017 8:23 pm

      Nice

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 9:28 pm

        Tnq .. (:

    15. AditiB on April 25, 2017 9:12 pm

      Cutam cute…super duper super se bhi ooper…..love your ff and the cuteness in every line makes me believe again and again that no one’s more cute than my ShivIka in your ff…

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 10:11 pm

        Ohh Tnq so much Aditi di …ur comments mean a lot to me di…I’m super excited .tnq so so much …

    16. RainRose6263 on April 25, 2017 10:21 pm

      So good. Please continue

      • Haridhra on April 25, 2017 11:16 pm

        Tnq so much yaar..If I’m ain’t wrong u r the author of oberoi memories.. I’m super excited u have commented on my ff .. I’m a follower of ur ff..but I have rarely commented ..I’m sorry abt that.

      • RainRose6263 on April 26, 2017 10:26 pm

        I am so happy that you follow on my fan fiction. Now I feel really guilty for not updating sooner. I really enjoyed your style of writing.It’s brill

      • Haridhra on April 27, 2017 9:43 am

        Ohh my god Tnq 4 the complement yaar..

    17. Ankita on April 25, 2017 11:18 pm

      Awesome

      • Haridhra on April 26, 2017 8:11 am

        Tnq

    18. Banita on April 26, 2017 1:01 am

      Super duper excited 4 nxt…..

      • Haridhra on April 26, 2017 8:12 am

        Tnq ..

    19. Haridhra on April 26, 2017 5:43 pm

      Ohh tnq so much eve .. It means a lot to me ,I’m overwhelmed by ur comments,also elated to knw u find originality / novelty in my ff.. Tnq so so much yaar.

    20. Neha-17 on April 26, 2017 11:55 pm

      Obviously no chappals and chameli dont say this next time…It was a cute description..aweesomeee…Waiting for grown up ones!

      • Haridhra on April 27, 2017 9:41 am

        Tnq so much di .. U r so sweet ..

    21. Jerry_36 on April 27, 2017 11:08 pm

      Really adorable. Loved it Haridhra☺

    22. Haridhra on April 28, 2017 9:04 am

      Ohh .. Tnq so much Jerry ..Keep Reading..??

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