Pratap : Ajabde You don’t want to see me again, why you are saying like this Ajabde ?
Ajabde : Rajkumar Pratap ji We can’t cross limits . Please try to understand the truth . You are prince of Chitodh and I am the daughter of Senapati Udham who is the Chieftan of your father Maharaj Uday Singh’s army . A captain of army can never take place of a king in the same way a daughter of chieftan can never take place of a princess .
Ajabde : I am sorry Your Highness Prince Pratap Ji.
Pratap : Look at my eyes and say you never loved me ,you never had a dream of leading a life with me !!! Look at my eyes Ajabde.
Ajabde : I am sorry , I can’t lie before your eyes . That’s why I have bow down my head. Please Rajkumar ji this time our country needs you more. You should svae our country and that’s important .
Ajabde turned away from Pratap
Pratap : I feel so proud that I loved a girl who always wishes for the welfare of our country . Ajabde I admire your patriotism and respect your decision. I am going from here forever
Ajabde gets shocked
Pratap : I am giving you a promise that I will meet you in this birth as a winner only after defeating the enemies who have grabbed our country . And if I failed then you will never find me again in this birth.
Ajabde : Rajkumar Pratap Ji !!
Pratap ; Rajkumar Pratap Singh can also sacrifice his feelings Ajabde …. Bye
Pratap leaves and Ajabde cries bitterly.
After two centuries in a company
Raunak : So Muskan now you should accept that Raunak ko harana aasan nahi hein. You have failed in debate . Whatever points you raised they didn’t worked at all. Accept your failure Muskan.
Muskan didn’t says anything and goes from there.
Raunak thought : Did she really got hurt ? Debate hi toh hein..
Raunak finds Muskan alone sitting in a corner
Raunak :Muskan relax yaar. Debate hi toh hein , Itna bhi kya feel kar rahi ho ?
Muskan : Raunak just leave me please . I am already upset and you …
Raunak : Muskan why are you crying ? You are looking so upset . Just because of the debate or anything else which is bothering you ?
Muskan : Please just leave
Raunak : Muskan your name resembles sweet smile and you are crying like a kid which doesn’t suits you . Please wipe your tears and smile.
Muskan : Apne kaam se kaam rakho Raunak .
Raunak : Muskan what’s the matter ?
Muskan : Raunak I am not interested in talking with you.
Raunak : So now you don’t want to talk with your friend. Too bad yaar .
Raunak make puppy faces .
Muskan : Raunak aisi baat nahin hein. Kuch baatein aisi hein joh mein share nahin kar sakti.
Raunak : Kisi ne dil tod diya kya ?
Muskan : Kisi ne dil diya hi nahin mujhe toh kaise toot jaata dil ?
Raunak : Ghar mein kuch huwa kya ?
Muskan : Ghar mein sab keh rahe hein meri shaadi kisi rajkumar se hogi . Aisa ek astrologer ne kaha ..
Raunak : You should be happy on this.
Muskan : Listen to me please. He told me that at my previous birth I was committed to a prince and I sacrificied my love for the sake of nation . He went away and we never met again . But he tells that the prince has also took rebirth and ultimately my marriage will happen with that prince only. I asked him who is he and how he looks in this birth ….
Raunak starts laughing louder
Muskan : I am serious . Don’t laugh like these Raunak
Raunak : Are you crazy Muskan ? Who believes in these kind of things ?
Muskan ; First I also ignored these things. You know what my parents already find 5 grooms for me but at the last moment something will happen and they are leaving one by one. I want to have an arranged marriage because I feels the alliance fixed by my parents will be the best for me . That astrologer is saying destiny will make me to meet with that prince who has took rebirth. Whatever attempts If I took to find some one else they will never work for me. Now 5 proposals are gone and I have started believing his words. But sad thing is my mom is always worried for me. She feels sad that her daughter’s marriage is not happening. Whenever relatives and friends enquire about me my mom becames silent . And today morning my Maasi came and told that I am a bad omen and that’s why my parents are not getting happiness .
Raunak : So you have literally taken your Maasi’s harsh words into your heart. And without knowing you are these much sad at office our colleagues arranged debate competetion and you was not focused in giving valid points and I won it. I am sorry Muskan.
Muskan : Raunak please don’t say sorry. Debate mein kisi ek ki jeet and kisi ek hi haar toh chalta hi rehta hein
Raunak : Muskan don’t worry . Aaj nahin toh kal tumhein accha sa ladka mil hi jaayenge .
Muskan ; You really think so ?
Raunak : Yes Muskan . Your heart is so beautiful and you always respect your parents and friends . Aisi ladki ke liye toh bahut saare rajkumar aayenge …Mein khud Rajkumaron ko leke awunga aur agar tum permission dogi toh uss line mein ek bankar khada ho jawunga , Rajkumar Raunak..
Muskan : Kuch bhi Raunak !!
Muskan started smiling and seeing her sweet smile Raunak also started smiling
To be continued …..
5 Comments
I am so surprised that you wrote a ff on this jodi.i am excited as I have never read any ff on this jodi.i have not seen this show.have you seen it?
Pratap ajabde conversation was painful.sad that they sacrificed their love.surprising that they took rebirth as Raunaq and muskaan. Raunaq trying to manofy muskaan was cute.surprising that they are close friends and the astrologer told muskaan about rebirth and her union with the Prince. Sad that her maasi called her a bad omen.raunaq consoling her was nice.without knowing that he is that Prince he is saying that he will find a guy for her.superb pics.
When will you start updating your old ffs?
Thank you so much. I have finished this three shots. Once I finsih the Dabangi FF I will restart on old FFs as I need to look back the stories. So it will take some time. Muskan serial is so wonderful and episodes are good . I have watched that serial twice because everything is so good in that one. Thanks a lot for always reading and supporting .
That’s very nice.how many parts ff is dabang?Will you be writing any other short stories along with the dabang ff like you posted the muskaan ff?
Do you remember the ff which I started on your request based on a telugu serial?can you please read it and post your comment here?
https://www.tellyupdates.com/kareeb-ke-rishtey-shivisidashironakshiarjakshmi-ss-part-1/
I haven’ t planned the exact number of parts for Dabangi. Dabangi FF is an attempt to show story of Eklavya and Arya which was not shown properly in show and the mysteries were not solved well in episodes. All of a suddenit ended and I am trying to show the perspectives of leads which we missed in show. Please do wait for updates. I will surely write on my old FFs. And other short stories if I feels to write for any pair I iwll write for them mostly Three shots or four shots . Yeah I do remember Pedamathi Sandhya Ragam serial which has ended in channel now and thanks for writing . I will surely read them and comment when I gets free time.
I have read the first part. It’s really good start. You bought Shiva and Raavi here which are good choices. So happy to see Shraddha Arya as Lakshmi who is my favourite from Tumhari Pakhi. Please do post next parts when you get free time.